高中英语新高考-英语创新作文大赛：关于人生仪式 写作指导与解读

高中英语新高考-英语创新作文大赛：关于人生仪式 写作指导与解读 参赛作文题目： 我的下水文： 写之前，一定要认真审题，注意三点： rituals you have observed; describe the details; explain the meaning 这样看，就是夹叙夹议，夹杂一些说明。如果按照我们江苏作文特点，就容易跑题。我开始就这样的，后来才意识到问题。慎之！ Rituals easily come across as grand ceremonies, like presidential inauguration, wedding ceremony and so on. However, rituals can be seen and felt everywhere in our daily life. They, just like thecatalyst, serve the purpose of removing gaps and lubricatingmutual communication, thus bringing people closer together. 写作思路： 通过对比法（普遍看法和实际情形）来突出人生礼仪的作用。最后一句是为了论证 rituals can be seen and felt everywhere in our daily life. 修辞手法： 英语是讲究隐喻特色，因此我用了催化剂和润滑油，通俗易懂，容易被读者理解。 词语： come across as...给人什么印象 catalyst催化剂 lubricate加……润滑油（此处是比喻） serve the purpose of...起……的作用 remove the gaps of...消除隔阂 bring...closer together让……更紧密 Chinese are keen on traditional festivals which provide a golden chance for family members to get together. For many reasons, we young nowadays have to pursue our dreams in every corner ofthe world,