35分写作规范练（四）-2020高考英语【试吧大考卷】二轮复习专项分层特训卷

35分写作规范练(四) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·临川联考]In order to encourage the seniors to take exercise and relax them, we are going to organize a mountain­climbing activity in April 10. We were to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m. by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m. We'll climb Huangshan Mountain in the morning, on which top we'll have a picnic at the noon. In the afternoon we'll be divided into group and have a free time. Remember take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held late at our school. Besides, taking your lunch and drinking water with you. Unless you want to join, please come to Students' Union and sign up before April 5. 答案与解析： In order to encourage the seniors to take exercise and relax o( top we'll have a picnic at to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 a．m. by bus and get back at 7：00 p．m. We'll climb Huangshan Mountain in the morning, on April 10. We , we are going to organize a mountain­climbing activity ,\s\do10(⑤)) noon. In the afternoon we'll be divided into you want to join, please come to Students' Union and sign up before April 5. your lunch and drinking water with you. at our school. Besides, take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held and have a free time. Remember ①them改为themselves　此处relax的动作发出者，即其逻辑主语the seniors与其宾语为同一对象，应用反身代词作relax的宾语，故将them改为themselves。 ②in改为on　具体某一天前用介词on，故将in改为on。 ③were改为are　全文主体时态为一般时态，因此此处应用一般现在时表示将来意义，故将were改为are。④which改为whose　此处为非限制性定语从句，引导词作top的定语，表示所属关系，应用whose，故将which改为whose。 ⑤删除第二个the　at noon为固定短语，意为“在正午”，中间不用定冠词，故删除第二个the。 ⑥group改为groups　根据语境可知，此处表示“我们被分成几个组”，group为可数名词，此处应用复数形式，故将group改为groups。 ⑦在Remember后加to　remember to do sth.为固定用法，意为“记得要做某事”，故在Remember后加to。 ⑧late改为la