35分写作规范练（六）-2020高考英语【试吧大考卷】二轮复习专项分层特训卷

35分写作规范练(六) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·安徽六校第二次联考] There is an old man live next to my door. He lives alone. Occasional his children will come to visit to him. When we asked him the reason for which he didn't move to live with his children, he said he didn't want to trouble them because their different lifestyles. The man likes to sit in front of the shop, that people chat excitedly every day. Once he helped the woman carry heavy food home. Besides, whenever someone ask for informations, he knows everything. He is surely a good person. And we were willing to look on her as our friend. 答案与解析：There is an old man o( his children will come to visit next to my door. He lives alone. ,\s\do10(③)) him. When we asked him the reason for which he didn't move to live with his children, he said he didn't want to trouble them because as our friend. willing to look on , he knows everything. He is surely a good person. And we for woman carry heavy food home. Besides, whenever someone people chat excitedly every day. Once he helped their different lifestyles. The man likes to sit in front of the shop, ①live改为living　分析句子结构可知，本句已有系动词is，此处应用非谓语动词。live与其逻辑主语an old man之间是逻辑上的主动关系，所以用现在分词living，充当an old man的后置定语，故将live改为living。 ②Occasional改为Occasionally　句意为：偶尔他的孩子会来看望他。此处修饰整个句子，应用副词，故将Occasional改为Occasionally。 ③删除第二个to　此句中visit意为“拜访；探望”，为及物动词，直接跟宾语，故删除第二个to。④在because后加of　句意为：他说他不想因为不同的生活方式麻烦他们。because单独使用时为连词，其后应接从句，但此处their different lifestyles为名词短语，故只能用because of，其意为“因为；由于”，故在because后加of。 ⑤that改为where　分析句子结构可知，逗号后为非限制性定语从句，the shop为先行词，关系词在定语从句中作地点状语，故将that改为where。 ⑥the改为a　根据语境可知，他曾经帮助过一位女士把重物搬回家。此处第一次提到这位女士，故将the改为a。 ⑦ask改为asks　本句是一般现在时，动词ask的主语为someone，动词应用第三人称单数形式，故将ask改为asks。 ⑧informations改为information　information意为“信息；消息”，是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将in