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模块同步写作指导 模块写作目标 如何写好以健康生活为话题的书面表达 本模块的话题是健康生活,该话题贴近学生生 活,是学生比较感兴趣的话题,而且该话题也是中考 经常出现的话题,学生在写作时要注意条理清晰,层 次分明,观点正确,最后呼吁健康的生活方式。 【亮点素材】 )词汇 get up late 2. used to eat lots of junk food 3. such as 4. as a result 5. be worried about 6. the importance of the healthy food 7. be good for health (二)句子 1.I often got up late and seldom had breakfast 2.I used to eat lots of junk food and drink drinks like cola 3.i didn't like fruit and vegetables 4.i studied some knowledge about healthy food 5. eating many kinds of fruit and vegetables is good for our hea 6.I often run in the morning for an hour 7. And I exercise twice a week. Now I am healthier than efore 8. Eat the right food and keep healthy 写作模板 I often 2.I used to 3 i didnt like 4.As a result, i was 5.i got to know the importance of 6. Eating many kinds of fruit and vegetables is 7.I often run 8. And i exercise 典例剖析】 亲爱的同学,健康饮食对每个人都是非常重要 的,请你以“ My healthy food and drink”为题写一篇英 语短文 内容包括:1.以前我有不好的饮食习惯(如:不吃 早餐、爱吃垃圾食品等)。后来学习了健康饮食知识 认识到健康饮食的重要性;2.现在我坚持健康饮食 保持身体健康。 注意:1.语句连贯,表达准确,词数:80-100 2.文中不得出现个人真实信息。 )范文展示 My healthy food and drink Two years ago, I often got up late and seldom had breakfast.I used to eat lots of junk food such as fried chicken and hamburgers and drink drinks like cola. I didnt like fruit and vegetables. As a result. I was often ill. My parents were worried about me Later i studied some knowledge about healthy food. I got to know the importance of the healthy food. Eating many kinds of fruit and vegetables is good for our health often run in the morning for an hour exercise twice a week. now i am healthier than before I always remember Eat the right food and keep health (二)名师点评 本文描写了作者过去不好的饮食习惯及导致的 后果和现在健康的饮食和生活习惯及带来的影响。 短文准确地运用了一般过去时和一般现在时两种时 态。内容完整,表达清晰。用 used to说明作者过去的 生活习惯;用 lots of说明自已食用垃圾食品数量多。 运用 as a result和 be worried about说明作者过去的行 为所产生的后果。用副词 later与以前的行为形成对 比。用 got to know说明自己的认识是一个逐渐的过 程。用动名词形式作主语并恰当地运用了动词第三 人称单数形式。用 twice a week说明自己现在的锻炼 情况。 写作训练】 (2018·连云港中考)积极锻炼是非常重要的,为 此,某英文报开展了一次有关初中生锻炼情况的调查