内容正文:
应用文写作
浙南名校联盟第一次联考
第四部分 写作(共两节,满分40分) . 第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假如你是李华,上周你在海外购物网站Amazon上购买了一个书包,但是寄到后发现存在质量 问题,请你给该网站负责人Smith先生写一封信,内容包括:
1.反应质量问题
2 .你的诉求 注意:1・可以适当补充细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数80左右。
第一节:应用文
Dear Smith, 微信公众号:浙考神墙750
I am Li Hua, a regular customer of Amazon. I’m sorry to trouble you, but I have to make a complaint about the school bag I purchased last week.
When receiving the school bag, I was disappointed to find the color was quite different from what was shown in the advertisement. What also annoyed me was that there were several black spots on the bag, which couldn’t be wiped away. For the reasons above, I strongly demand either the school bag be exchanged or I be compensated with full refund.
Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
应用文评分原则:
1.上文仅为参考范文,学生可用不同的语言表达形式来表述要点。
2.本题总分为15 分,按以下5 个档次给分。评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
第一档:(1—3 分)只能写出一两个要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子正确;
第二档:(4—6 分)能写出部分要点;语言错误多,影响意思表达;
第三档:(7—9 分)能写明基本要点;语言虽有较多错误,但能基本达意;
第四档:(10—12