内容正文:
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rise
attend (to) the wounded
performance
retirement
declaration
competitor
competition
competitive
defense/ce
talented
motivation
appointment
considerate
打电话(给)
拳击台
金色的戒指
铁路轨道
记录;与……保持联系
平均
普通人
平均为
艰苦的生活
崎岖的道路
硬汉
袭击
一夜成名/网红
attend school/a meeting
in the history of
have an advantage over
struggle/jump to one’s feet
consideration
✔
✔
✔
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—— Francis Bacon
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Possible version:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I couldn’t be more delighted to share my unforgettable experience as a volunteer for City Marathon in our city with you.
To begin with, it was on March 23rd that City Marathon was held. All the runners were well-prepared and the audience present were so passionate that they jumped to their feet to cheer for those participants. What impressed me most was the performance of a disabled runner and what the tough man taught me was that the most significant thing in life is not the victory but the struggle. In addition, nothing was more meaningful than to see a Chinese competitor win the championship.
As a consequence, there is no doubt that this inspiring experience would always be kept in my mind.
Yours,
Li Hua
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