内容正文:
读写类书面表达首段指导
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Jiangyin Qingyang High School
Gao Yufeng
高三写作微技能训练
Writing for 2016:
要点类(Points)
图表类(Charts)
漫画类(Cartoons)
任务类 (Tasks)
Which part do you think is the most difficult in task-based writing?
Common problems we may come across:
Use the first and second person instead of the third person没有使用第三人称
Use too many original words or sentences from the passage 直接或过多引用原文
Express opinions too early过早表达观点
Use too many specific details instead of general words 过多细节而非概括性语言
第五部分:书面表达(满分25分)
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇30词
左右的summary。
A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it.
“It is true that you cannot sing;” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!”
“Oh, but what good is all this beauty;” cried
the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!”
“Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale(夜莺) has his song; and the owl(猫头鹰) has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can’t you just be happy about what you have already got?”
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Use too many specific details instead of general words
Use the first and second person instead of the third person
Use too many original words or sentences from the passage
Express opinions too early
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Use too many specific details instead of general words
Use the first and second person instead of the third person
Use too many original words or sentences from the passage
Express opinions too early
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Use too many specific details instead of general words
Use the first and second person instead of the third person
Use too many original words or sentences from the passage
Express opinions too early
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Use too many specific details instead of general words
Use the first and second person instead of the third person
Use too many original words or sentences from the passage
Express o