内容正文:
welcome
Writing
What makes
a good essay?
Ⅰ. Discussion
感知典型范例
感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
clever
→ wise
→ smart
→ bright
→ intelligent
感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
adj. 令人惊奇的
surprising
→amazing
→astonishing
exactly used and advanced words
准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
(not…until) →
He______come here ______yesterday afternoon.
2. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
3. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
感知典型范例
——句型层面1
advanced sentence patterns 使用高级句型
no grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误
He came here yesterday afternoon.
他昨天下午来的。
didn’t until
感知典型范例
——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.
As far as I am concerned, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents howeve