内容正文:
2019中考英语考前冲刺作文指导分析课件
学生作文分析:
好段落的三个标准:
段落的统一性:围绕一个中心
段落的完整性:有主题句,有发展句。发展句均要围绕着主体展开。写出的文章才会显得内容丰富。
段落的连贯性:形连,使用过渡词过渡句;意连,内容上的连贯。
优秀作文赏析
作文题目:目前所有的学校都在开展各种各样的体育活动。你们每天是如何开展体育活动的?通过参与这样的活动你有何感受或变化?又有何想法?
提示词语: all the schools, have all kinds of, sport activities, take exercise,
play football, go running, become healthier
提示:本文写作应分为三层:
开篇点题,引入话题;
重点应放在 “你们每天是如何开展体育活动的”
谈谈自己
建议:本文采用三段式比较好。即:开头段,中间段,结尾段。采用一段式容易写偏题。
Example -1
As we all know, many schools are carrying out the plan for students to do more exercise. And now, all the schools have all kinds of sport activities for students. As for our school, things are even better.
We have various kinds of sports activities after school every day, such as basketball, football, running and so on. Hundreds of students come to the field, some enjoy going running, and others love playing football. And basketball lovers crowded the basketball field. Sometimes there are so many students that you see nothing but students exercisi