内容正文:
How to polish writing
Tips in the video
_____________ your readers and what they want
________ your writing
Organize your ideas into paragraphs, with _______ idea each paragraph
Cut ____________ words and sentences
Plan
one
unnecessary
Understand
2
structure
several parts
topic sentence
all points covered
words
phrases
sentences
variation
richness
A good writing
content
language
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tip 1
1. We need to realize the importance to deal with this problem more than ever before.
Low frequency words
1. We need to wake up to the urgency to address this issue more than ever before.
tip 1
Low frequency words
1.“表明,论证”→用 demonstrate 替换 show/indicate
“他真正热爱这份工作” 表明了他对工作的投入同样还有对祖国的忠诚。
(扬州2017一模作文)
“He really loves his job”demonstrates not only his devotion to his duties but his loyalty to our country as well.
【秒杀】
tip 1
Low frequency words
2、“阻止某人做某事”→用 hold sb. back from 替换 prevent sb. from
不要让对于失败的恐惧阻止你追求你的梦想。
(苏锡常镇2017三模作文)
Don’t let the fear of failure hold