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As science and technology develops , advertisements become more and more important in our daily life.
Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Companies can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public.
Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat customers. They make us upset.
I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from advertisements, we can easily make a much better choice.
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1.As science and technology develops , advertisements become more and more important in our daily life.
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