【配套PPT课件】专题05 书面表达（二）打包-【步步高】2019高考大二轮专题复习与增分策略英语（江苏版）

七、图表类作文 专题五　第二节　分类突破 考题研析 解题必备 内容索引 随堂限时练 考题研析 典例 满分作文 阅卷老师点评 典例 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。 参考词汇：banner横幅；stump树桩 你的作文应包括以下内容： 1.简要描述两幅图的内容； 2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解； 3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意： 1.可参照图片适当发挥； 2.作文词数150 左右； 3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Actions Speak Louder than Words ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ 满分作文 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain， while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate actions should be taken like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment. Actions are important in other fields，too.Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at the red light rather than complaining about the traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. 阅卷老师点评 本文内容充实、语言规范、句子连贯、用词贴切。段落层次分明。第一段：描述两幅图的内容；第二段：概述对两幅图中不同做法的理解；第三段：发表启示：举例说明图画给的启示。 1.过渡自然 本篇习作中使用的过渡词不多，但是整个段落安排井然有序。People celebrate Earth Day differently...；The message conveyed here is clear...；Actions are important in other fields，too...使得作者娓娓道来。 2.高级词汇和丰富句式的使用 习作中使用了高级词汇如put up a banner，suffer severe damage，take practical measures，better the environment，donate books，follow traffic rules；高级句式如Only引导的倒装句：Only when we....can we...。 解题必备 图表式书面表达包括图画和图表式两类，主要是以图画(图表)为载体，附带少量文字提示或说明，要求考生从观察入手，通过对图画(图表)所含的