内容正文:
第14讲 议论文的写作
一、陈述观点类
近来,中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议。假设你是李华,一名国际旅行社的导游,就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。
1.列举不文明行为;
2.指出其影响;
3.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。此类议论文一般采用“三段式”写法:
第一段:开头——提出一种现象或某个观点作为议论的话题。
第二段:主体——全文的主要部分,对提出的问题进行分析,运用材料对观点进行论述,列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由。
第三段:结尾——对主体部分进行概括,用一两句话来阐明自己的观点,构成“总——分——总”结构。
本题要求考生以李华的身份就“中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议”这种现象发表自己的观点。可以分为三段:
第一段:提出问题——作为导游,对中国游客在海外的不文明行为感到羞愧。
第二段:列举这些不文明行为的具体表现,说明其恶劣影响。
第三段:表明自己的观点,提出解决问题的方法——教育游客,出台有关法律文件进行约束。
修订提升
As a tour guide of an international travel agency,I find that it is so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.(改为简单句:1.I find it so embarrassing to see
many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.)
They speak loudly in public places,carve characters on tourist attractions,throw rubbish,spit everywhere,and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights.Such bad behavior overseas has harmed(用含有damage的短语替换:2.caused/done damage to) the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop this.First,tourists should be trained to obey social and public orders.Besides,laws should be made to punish badly-behaved people in public places.(用含有定语从句的复合句改写:3.Besides,laws should be made to punish those who behave badly
in public places.) I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.
即时训练
下面的漫画反映了北京的雾霾情况。请你根据这幅漫画写一篇英语短文,谈一下你对这个问题的看法。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
参考范文
It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
As is shown in the picture,the smog is so heavy that people can hardly recognize each other when they meet in the street.People suffered a lot because of the smog.On the road people drove slowly because they could not see clearly.Peop