内容正文:
第13讲 说明文的写作
一、说明事物类
假定你是李华,你的朋友李芳向你询问你校新开设的iPad课程(iPad class)。请你给她写封回信,向她介绍iPad课程很受学生欢迎的原因,要点如下:
1.资源丰富;
2.促进交流;
3.利于环保。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇说明文。此类文章一般采用三段式:第一段:主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的;第二段:说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤;第三段:进行总结概括。时态通常用一般现在时。
本题要求考生以李华的身份写信向朋友李芳介绍学校新开设的iPad课程,可分为三段:
第一段:说明写信的目的——介绍学校新开设的很受学生欢迎的iPad课程;
第二段:介绍iPad课程受欢迎的原因——资源丰富、促进交流、利于环保等;
第三段:表达期盼——希望李芳能来参加。
修订提升
Dear Li Fang,
I’m very glad to receive your last letter.In your letter you enquired about our newly opened iPad classes.(改为定语从句:1.I’m very glad to receive your last letter,in which you enquired about our newly opened iPad classes.) The class is very popular among the students,and the reasons are as follows.
To begin with,everyone learns in a respective way.Students can refer to their iPads for materials that suit their level and learning style to meet their different needs.(添加过渡性词语:2.Moreover/What’s more/Besides/In addition),when connected to the Internet,students can communicate with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently,which will contribute to their progress.Lastly,we also consider that it is environmentally friendly to open iPad classes(改为简单句:3.Lastly,we also consider it environmentally friendly to open iPad
classes),for paper is no longer a necessity.
Looking forward to your attending our iPad classes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
即时训练
假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom在北京学习中文不久。他想从下列两份汉语报纸中选订一份来帮助他学习,并写信征求你的意见。请根据下列要点向他推荐一份合适的报纸并说明原因。
项目
《学汉语》
《中国日报》
内容
精选文章,方法介绍
内容全面,信息丰富
价格
1元/期
2元/期
版面
8版
24版
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:(报刊的)期issue;《学汉语》Chinese Learning;《中国日报》China Daily
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you are learning Chinese in Beijing.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know that you are learning Chinese in Beijing.As for the two pieces of newspaper you want to subscribe to,I recommend Ch