2011-2017年上海高考英语作文及参考范文

2017 高考英语作文： 你是××中学的××，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点： 1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方； 2. 需要改进的原因。 主题 发现上海 时间 5月1日（周日）下午3点 路线 从人民广场经过南京路到外滩（the Bund），全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m really excited to heat that a hiking activity is going to be held near the Bund on the Labor Day holiday. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out. First of all, the hike needs to be planned in more detail as the information released online appears to be too general. As participants, we need to know how long the hike will last. Also, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. After all, the scheme should be comprehensive and thoughtful enough to ensure the success of the activity. Only by clarifying these details, are you likely to attract more attention from the students. What’s more, I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme “Discover S