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关于My life in 20 years
1.写作步骤:定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务: 本周你校要进行有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛。请以“My life in 20 years”为题,从二十年后你所从事的职业、居住地周围环境、业余活动等方面畅想,写一篇演讲稿为此次比赛做准备。
思路点拨:
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(演讲稿);演讲稿的主体部分为说明文
时态:一般将来时
人称:第一人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲
写句子
我二十年后的生活
职业
(1) I think ____________________(我将会成为一所著名大学的老师).
居住地
周围环境
I’ll live in my dream city — Beijing because there will be more jobs in the big city.
(2) ____________________(我将在大学附近买一个大的公寓套房).
(3) In the neighborhood ____________________(将有更多的树和花) and there will be no pollution.
业余活动
(4) In my free time, ____________________(我将不做家务) because my robot will help me do it.
(5) ____________________(我将和我的学生一起去野营). I’ll travel around the world with my friends in a self-driving car.
(6) ____________________(我将乘坐火箭去月球) for my vacations.
3. 巧衔接
本文要描述自己二十年以后的生活,自然会多次用到句型I will ...,这种平行结构的重复使用可以达到连接上下文的目的。另外,本文是从不同角度畅想未来生活,所以可用and, then, even, what’s more等表示语义增进,以使行文过渡自然、流畅。
4. 成篇章
Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhao Xuan. My life in 20 years will be fantastic and wonderful.
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That’s my life in 20 years. Thank you.
参考答案:
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) I will be a teacher in a famous university
(2) I will buy a big apartment near my university
(3) there will be more trees and flowers
(4) I won’t do the housework
(5) I will go camping with my students
(6) I will fly rockets to the moon
5. 成篇章
Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhao Xuan. My life in 20 years will be fantastic and wonderful. I think I will be a teacher in a famous university. And I will live in my dream city — Beijing because there will be more jobs in the big city. Then I will buy a big apartment near my university. In the neighborhood there will be more trees and flowers and there will be no pollution. In