内容正文:
Correction 1(2018辽宁沈阳二中一模)
I went on a trip to Thailand during the winter holiday, it was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach and enjoying sunshines, someone strongly advised us to go water skiing. Therefore, I didn’t dare to face the challenge because it seemed danger. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At first, I couldn’t stop scream in fright. Later I enjoyed myself and found it amazingly. From the ex-perience I learnt that we should brave enough to try something new. Only in this way can we find the better self to meet any challenge.
解析
①句意:寒假期间,我去泰国旅游了,因为尝试了以前从未有过的经历,所以这次旅游棒极了。先行词为a trip,故用关系代词which引导非限制性定语并在从句中作主语。也可加并列连词and,连接两个句子。
②根据句子的时态可知此处用过去完成时态,表示“过去的过去”。
③sunshine阳光,为不可数名词。
④上句指出有人建议我们去滑水,本句指出我不敢接受这个挑战,根据语境可知两句之间为转折关系,故用副词However。therefore因此。
⑤seemed后接形容词作表语,dangerous危险的。
⑥join in+某项活动,意为“参加某项活动”;join+sb.,意为“加入某人的行列中”。
⑦句意:一开始,我害怕地不停尖叫。stop doing sth.意为“停止做某事”。
⑧it指