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2016—2018年高考模拟·综合题组-短文改错专题 Correction 1(2018新疆乌鲁木齐一诊) Dear Jack, I’m very happy to know that you were coming to visit my city by your own. I’m looking Forward to your early arrive!There are a few more well-known places of interesting in my city, so I’d like to show you around when you arrive. If time permit, we can watch some alive Chinese operas and taste some typical Chinese snacks. I suggest you wear some warm clothes, while it’s becoming colder. Remember to tell me the exact time of the flight, I’ll meet you at the airport. Hope you a pleasant journey. Yours, Mike 解析 ①句意:得知你要来独自参观我的城市,我非常高兴。根据语境可知此处应用现在进行时表示 将来,故将were coming改为are coming。 ②on one’s own独自。 ③此处用名词作宾语,故将arrive改为arrival。 ④我市有几个著名的名胜古迹。此处没有比较对象,不需要用比较级形式,故将more删除。 ⑤a place of interest为固定短语,意为“名胜古迹”,故将interesting改为interest。 ⑥If引导条件状语从句,用一般现在时态表示将来的动作,主语time为不可数名词,故将permit改 为permits。 ⑦alive为表语形容词,意为:活着的。live,形容词,意为:现场表演的。此处作定语,意为“现场 表演的”,故将alive改为live。 ⑧句意:我建议你穿些保暖的衣服,因为天在变冷。根据句意可知此处引导原因状语从句,故将 while改为as/because/since。 ⑨句意:记得告诉我航班的具体时间,我将去机场接你。逗号不能连接两个句子,两句间需加连 词。前后两句为顺承关系,故逗号后加and。 ⑩“wish sb. sth.”为固定结构,意为“祝愿某人……”。故将Hope改为Wish。 Correction 2(2018辽宁沈阳二中一模) I went on a trip to Thailand during the winter holiday, it was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach and enjoying sunshines, someone strongly advised us to go water skiing. Therefore, I didn’t dare to face the challenge because it seemed danger. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At first, I couldn’t stop scream in fright. Later I enjoyed myself and found it amazingly. From the ex-perience I learnt that we should brave enough to try something new. Only in this way can we find the better self to meet any challenge. 解析 ①句意:寒假期间,我去泰国旅游了,因为尝试了以前从未有过的经历,所以这次旅游棒极了。 先行词为a trip,故用关系代词which引导非限制性定语并在从句中作主语。也可加并列连词 and,连接两个句子。 ②根据句子的时态可知此处用过去完成时态,表示“过去的过去”。 ③sunshine阳光,为不可数名词。 ④上句指出有人建议我们去滑水,本句指出我不敢接受这个挑战,根据语境可知两句之间为转 折关系,故用副词However。therefore因此。 ⑤seemed后接形容