高中英语复习写作讲评课北师大版《How to make our writing better》 课件 (共35张PPT)

高中英语复习写作讲评课Xiang’an Middle School潘士春How to make our writing betterTopic假定你是李华，你班交换生Amy，这两天因身体不适，未能到校上课，请你给他写一封邮件。要点如下：1.表示安慰；2.询问她是否能参加下周六学校举办的足球比赛。3.邀请她下个月到你家共度端午节。注意：1.词数100字左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAmy,________（2017“合肥三模”）unclear审题不清inaccurate语言不够准确too plain语句过于“平庸”写作中存在的问题Examine the topic again, and solve the problems below after discussion.1. Style:（体裁）_______________2. Person:（人称）______________3. Topic:（话题）______________Task 1.重新审题An e-mailThe first/second personTo show sorrow/invitationparascontentstensepara1para2para3Task 1.重新审题to show your sorrowbest wishesinvitationsthe simplepresent tensethe simplefuture tensethe simplepresent tense童鞋，说好的分段呢？时态是关键Task2.错误纠正单词拼写错误1. Wheather you are convenient or not…2. we can buy what we need at a low prize.3. It can help us save money and alsobenefit our enviroment.whetherpriceenvironmentSome common spelling mistakes?colledgechoiseapearopnionbenifithowervetechnologknowlegeinterstdrogoncollegechoiceappearopinionbenefithowevertechnologyknow