内容正文:
一、专项练习(每句话均含一处错误)
1.Verb(动词注意时态和语态)
1. So far, he made a living by picking up wastes.
2. You are not permit to take them out.
3. Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.
4. Seeing from the top of the mountain, the city looks beautiful.
2.Noun (名词注意单复数)
1.Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.
2. When you fail, you should never lose hearts.
3. adj &adv (形容词和副词)
1.The bad news made us feel sadly.
2.The children learn to read and write, they play games as good.
3. I remember my grandfather very much.
4. Pronoun (代词)
1. Knowing is one thing; doing is other.
2. I also enjoyed the days when we spent together.
3. On the first day of Camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.
5. Preposition (介词)
1.Don’t get into the habit at smoking.
2.The film star is very popular with the mainland.
6. Article & conjunction (冠词连词)
1. At a very beginning, I choose a play and actors.
2. On one hand the dress is expensive; on an other hand, it is of poor quality.
1. Though it was cold, but he went out without a hat.
2. He likes sports, but I like music.
3. Hurry up, and you’ll be late for school.
二、 做题技巧篇 (三四五六)
1,三步法 2,四不改 3, 五改动 4, 六句诀
六句诀详解: 动词形,名词数。还要注意形和副。代词格,细领悟。介词短语常常出,习惯用法要记住。冠词连词常关顾。
三、课堂练习 短文改错
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.
四﹑课堂反思,你这节课学到了什么?What have you learnt from this class?
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Why can’t the bear go through the revolving door?
The Revolving Door
Proof Reading
Sang Lin
2017-4-11
Teaching Objectives
1)To obtain the ability of identifying errors in an essay and revising the discouse.(语篇)
识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力
2)To acquire the comprehe