高三英语一轮复习---提纲高考英语作文特训

第七讲 提纲作文特训（下） 【高分作文的三个特征】 1、内容要简单； 2、结构要清晰； 3、语言要精彩。 【“亮点提纲”法】 方法：脑子里想着要写的内容，提纲中列出能用的“语言亮点”。 作用：（1）内容能写全（2）结构很清晰（3）语言不重复 [2014·湖南卷] Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below. 学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My magic________”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。 内容： 1．说明设计理由； 2．介绍新功能。 注意：1. 词数不少于120；2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【亮点提纲】 My magic desk 1、Today, I would like to…, which will be… 2、From my perspective, there are two main reasons why… （1）For one thing, so common is a desk that… （2）For another, its functions… 3、To make the desk better, a screen will be added to the desk. As for its functions, first and foremost,… Additionally,.. Last but not least,… 4、Hopefully,… I have the confidence that… 【范文】 Today, I would like to design a new kind of desk for our everyday use, which will be not only useful but also entertaining. From my perspective, there are two main reasons why I want to design a new desk. For one thing, so common is a desk that we must use it every day. For another, no one can deny its functions are too simple; as a result, I want to add some new functions to it, so that we can use it (as a better tool) (for our life and study). To make a desk more convenient, a screen will be added to it. As for its functions, firstly, it can show the teachers’ PPT, in order that we can see it more clearly. Besides, we can directly do our homework on the screen and send it to the teacher so as to save paper. Hopefully, my design would be realized soon. I have the confidence that it will make our life better. 万能利 （1）既有意义又有趣It is not only meaningful but also entertaining. （2）培养兴趣开阔视野丰富课余生活It can cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our after school life. （3）有助于身心健康/健康快乐的成长 It can contribute to our physical and mental health. It can contribute to our happy and healthy growth. 万能弊 （1）浪费时间，浪费金钱，浪费精力 It is a great waste of time, money and energy. （2）影响身心健康It may have bad/negative influence on our health. （3）影响学习It may