山东省济南新东方优能中学2018届新九年级暑假英语写作复习教材（教师版+学生版）:中考漫画与应用文 （2份打包）

第四次课 中考漫画与应用文 文体概述（漫画）： 漫画类作文在中考中虽考频不高，但往往是学生的薄弱项。与一般材料作文的唯一区别就是命题者提供的材料是一幅漫画，而不是文字性的材料，有时提示文也较少，需要学生通过看图仔细揣摩画中的主题思想，若对图片内容解读有误，往往学生会出现偏题的严重现象。一般漫画类作文呈现形式可能为多图或者单图的形式出现，若是单图内容可能需要对细节加以一定的想象描写，如人物心理活动等，才能使文章丰满。 2016徐汇一模 Look at the picture below and write it down into your diary to describe what happened and how you felt in at least 60 words．请看下图，写一篇至少60个字的日记描述一下发生的事件和你的感受。（标点符号不占格） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。图片中人物名字请用Tom代替。） 案例分析： Last Saturday, I went to the hospital to see my friend called Tom .He was seriously injured because of a careless driver and he needed to spend all his time lying on the bed. I have a pity on his experience.However,it seems that he didn't care about it.He said that he was lucky enough to avoid death so that he can see the beautiful view out of the window.I was deeply moved by his words.Although his body was unable to move ,his mind could fly to everywhere. I should learn from him.As long as i see a problem from a positive side,i can find something to cheer me up. 范文点评： January 12th Sunny Tom has been in hospital for a week. When I heard this, I decided to visit him and give him a surprise. Yesterday morning, I got up earlier than usual. Soon I arrive at the hospital and stood near the window of his room. Tom didn’t notice me at the beginning, but as soon as he saw the balloon with a smiling face on it out of his window, a big smile appeared on his face. How excited I was when I saw him so happy! After that, we had a long talk together with laughter filled the room. Now, I deeply realize that friends can not only make us happy when we are sad but also be the best medicine for us to struggle with illness. So from now on, I will care for my friends more and do everything I can to help them. 语言进阶： 1. with 的复合结构 with+名词/代词+-ing分词。
此结构强调名词或代词是-ing分词的动作的发出者或某动作、状态正在进行。 · They started working with the machine _________. A. run B. running C. ran D. is running · He soon fell asleep with the light still ________. A. burning