山东省济南新东方优能中学2018届新九年级暑假英语写作复习教材（教师版+学生版）:中考记叙文 （4份打包）

第二次课 中考记叙文 文体概述： 记叙文是通过记叙人的言行和事情的过程，表达一定的中心思想的一种文体。通常以记人、叙事、状物为主要内容，达方式以叙述与描写为主。记叙文通常包括 what, who, when, where, why, how这几个要素。 2015中考 （周晓菲） Write at least 60 words on the topic “I want to invent _____ ”(以“我想要发明________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) （注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考) It can be used to… It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to… 审题分析： 1、 2015年上海中考写作是一篇典型的叙事类半命题作文，首先从题目来看，文章要我们写的内容非常简单，想要发明什么，生活中非常平凡的一个点，学生的思维应尽可能的拓展开来，不要局限于校园生活，可以多多思考日常生活领域，休闲娱乐领域，医学领域，航空科技领域等。 2、 学生应在文章开头处开门见山描述出自己想要发明的某样东西，并且用1-2句话概括它的作用（大到对生活，对社会，对国家，对世界，对人类，小到对家人，对朋友，对病人，对老人等等）；接下来可以从2-3个方面介绍它的作用，可以适当给予事例解释，这一部分注意详略得当；最后对自己想要发明的东西做一个总结。 3、 文章难度不大，考生需要思考好自己想要发明的东西，并且了解它的作用，从各个方面去介绍即可，当然可以用上题目给的参考句型，语言通俗易懂，文章逻辑要清晰，适当运用描述性形容词和连接词串联起文章，再加入1-2句从句为自己的作文加分。 写作诊断： 15年中考 I want to invent a machine I want to invent a machine which can take me to any place i want to go in a moment. I can’t find the correct way by myself. Although i was familiar with this place. That’s the reason why i want to invent this machine. Firstly,if i manage to invent it . People needn’t bear the traffic jams any longer. More importantly people will on longer have the problem of being late for work or school. In brief, i want to invent a machine what can take people to any place in a moment.it is quite useful! 范文点评： I Want to Invent a Family Doctor Robot I want to invent a family doctor robot, which we can use to cure the illness without going out. As far as I’m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons. First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations. Furthermore, hospitals today are always crowded with patients, so that not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctors one on one whenever you want. In short, family doctor robots can