2027届高考英语 读后续写专项导学案草莓实验 · 耐寒草莓培育

读后续写专项导学案草莓实验 · 耐寒草莓培育 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “106!” The cry of disappointment breaks the silence of the peaceful night. In darkness, he stands still there, with tears dropping continuously from his eyes. He is a 5th-year Ph.D. student majoring in biology. This is his 106th attempt to cultivate strawberries which could bear extreme climates. In his 105th experiment, he did all the precautions that he knew could lead him closer to his goal. Every generation of the strawberry seemed to bring him closer to success, but every time the result was alike—failure, failure, failure. He has literally got used to it. But this time, he can hardly help feeling frustrated and angry. “Who stole my experimental strawberry!” Last night, when he got to the field, he was thrilled. Although most of the plants were obviously dying, one plant stood vigorously in the middle of the experimental field. The plant was labeled “Plant No. 106”. What a coincidence! In his 106th attempt, the 106th plant was finally mutating (变异) in its ideal way—the spark of hope, to him. Last night,Plant No.106’s fruit started to turn red. He was never so close to success. What he needed to do was wait for several days to harvest that pink, shiny and attractive fruit. But this night, the fruit disappears. So does his hope. “3 years’ effort! 1,096  days’ struggling! 13,152 hours’ DNA editing and experiment! ALL GONE!” he murmurs to himself. He regrets that he didn’t get a small sample of the stolen strawberry last night. Now he is using his fingers to dig the ground. He doesn’t know why he is doing so. He is well aware that the results of the past 106 attempts are all wasted because of the incident and his not taking the sample in time. He has no seeds left. At the present, he seems to have only two choices: to start from the very beginning, or to give up. 注意:续写词数应为 150个左右。 Paragraph 1: He uses his fingers to dig the soil of that inch of field which used to contain his hope.   Paragraph 2: He is so excited that he bursts into tears.  Part 1 原文&范文精读｜好词好句积累 重点单词&短语 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.cultivate v. 培育，栽培 5.withstand v. 经受，承受 9.precaution n. 预防措施 2.frustrated adj. 沮丧的 6.out of the blue 突然，出乎意料 3.sprout v. 发芽 7.vigorous adj. 茁壮的；vigour n.活力 4.extraordinary adj. 非同寻常的 8.perseverance n. 毅力坚持不懈 10.give in 屈服，放弃 ✅ 范文原句 + 仿写练习 1.No matter what the result is, he wants to bring some soil back as a memory for his 3-year effort. 【句型】No matter what 引导让步状语从句 仿写（中文）：无论前路多么艰难，他都不想放弃自己的实验。 2.It is obvious that this slowly-growing plant will bring out an even better experimental result. 【句型】It is obvious that… 形式主语从句 仿写（中文）：很明显，坚持会给我们带来惊喜。 3.Sometimes, we may find ourselves in darkness, feeling helpless and desperate.【S+V..., doing 】 仿写（中文）：她站在原地，对这个意外的消息感到震惊。 Part 2 解题思路（情节+情感双线） 原文主线：生物博士生第106次培育耐极端气候草莓，好不容易出现变异植株，果实失窃，陷入绝望，徒手挖土。 情感线：愤怒、难过 → 绝望迷茫 → 意外惊喜 → 重获希望 Part3 翻译训练 Paragraph 1 翻译练习(情节走向：他挖土，本来只想带走泥土当作三年努力的纪念；意外摸到不一样的东西，发现一颗已经发芽的种子，它在严苛环境下长势更强。) 1.无论结果如何，他都想带走一些泥土，纪念三年的付出。【no matter what 无论；as a memory for 作为…的纪念；effort n.努力｜句型：No matter what引导让步状语从句】 2.突然，他摸到了一个触感不一样的东西。【out of the blue 突然；touch v.触摸】 3.那是一颗已经发芽的种子！【sprout v.发芽；seed n.种子｜句型：It is…】 4.它碰巧长在变异植株旁边。【accidentally adv.意外地；close to 靠近｜It was accidentally planted…】 5.在更严酷的环境下，它看起来比106号植株还要茁壮。【rigid adj.严苛的；vigorous adj.茁壮的】 6.很明显，这株幼苗会带来更好的实验结果。【It is obvious that…很明显】 7.他给这颗新植株命名为106-1号。【name v.命名｜句型：S+V+O+宾补】 8.一丝微弱的希望重新在他心底升起。【spark n.火花，一丝希望｜句型：A spark of hope rises…】 Paragraph 2 翻译练习(情节走向：他感慨，如果没有这次失窃、没有这次挖土，就会错过这颗珍贵种子；感悟黑暗只是暂时的，坚持终有回报) 1.如果草莓没有被偷走，如果他失败后没有挖土，他就会错过这颗种子。【steal v.偷 句式：If sb. hadn’t done,sb. would have done如果某人没有...,就会... 】 2.一切重新充满希望，甚至比之前更好。【hopeful adj.充满希望的】 3.有时候我们会身处黑暗，感到无助绝望。【helpless adj.无助的；desperate adj.绝望的;sb found..., doing】 4.但是我们永远不要屈服。黑暗只是暂时的【give in 屈服；temporary adj.暂时的】 5.我们要有耐心，守住坚持不懈的品质。【patience n.耐心；perseverance n.毅力hold the virtue of守住...品质】 6.当下的困境，也许只是我们正在被“栽种”。【virtue n.品质；plant v.栽种｜句型：表语从句】 7.这次意外教会他：挫折里藏着新的机遇。【setback n.挫折；opportunity n.机遇｜句型：S+V+宾语从句】 Part4 合成段落写作区 Paragraph 1 He uses his fingers to dig the soil of that inch of field which used to contain his hope. Paragraph 2 He is so excited that he bursts into tears. 续写答案 ✅ 仿写句子参考答案 1. No matter how hard the road ahead is, he won’t give up his experiment. 1. It is obvious that perseverance will bring us surprises. 1. She stood there, feeling shocked at the unexpected news. ✅ 翻译参考答案 Paragraph1 1. No matter what the result is, he wants to bring some soil back as a memory for his three-year effort. 2.Out of the blue, he touches something that feels different. 3.It is a sprouting seed! 1. It was accidentally planted close to the mutated plant. 1. It looks even more vigorous than Plant No.106 in this more rigid environment. 1. It is obvious that this young plant will bring out a better experimental result. 1. He names this new plant Plant No.106-1. 1. A weak spark of hope rises again in his heart. Paragraph2 1.If someone hadn’t stolen the strawberry and he hadn’t dug the soil after failure, he would have missed this seed. 2.Everything is hopeful again, and it becomes even better. 3.Sometimes we may find ourselves in darkness, feeling helpless and desperate. 4.But we should never give in.Darkness may be temporary. 5.We should be patient and hold the virtue of perseverance. 6.Maybe we are just being planted in this hard time. 7.This accident teaches him that new chances lie in setbacks. ✅ 参考范文（总词数146，符合150词左右要求） He uses his fingers to dig the soil of that inch of field which used to contain his hope. No matter what the result is, he wants to bring some soil back as a memory for his 3-year effort. Out of the blue, he touches something that feels different. It is a sprouting seed! It was accidentally planted close to the mutated plant. It looks even more vigorous than Plant No.106 in this more rigid environment. It is obvious that this slowly-growing plant will bring out an even better experimental result. He names it Plant No.106-1. He is so excited that he bursts into tears. If someone hadn’t stolen Plant No.106, if he hadn’t dug the soil after he thought he failed, he would have missed this extraordinarily special seed. Everything is not only hopeful again, but becoming even better. Sometimes, we may find ourselves in darkness, feeling helpless and desperate, just like Plant No.106-1. But never give in, for darkness may be temporary. Please be patient and hold your virtue of perseverance, for maybe we are just being planted. 应用文答案 ✅句型仿写参考答案 1.I’m delighted to hear that we will go on a study trip next week, which will leave us wonderful memories. 2.Featuring all kinds of fresh flowers, the garden attracts many visitors. 3.There is an experience field on the farm where visitors can harvest fresh vegetables by themselves. 4.Not only did we enjoy the countryside scenery, but we also learned much knowledge about farming. 5.What this activity brings me is pure joy, as well as a chance to get close to the land. ✅翻译练习答案 1.Last weekend, as scheduled, I went to a remarkable modern farm named Green Grow with several classmates, which has impressed us deeply. 2. Featuring green pollution-free fruit and vegetables, it is a brilliant high-tech farm covering an area of 2,000 acres. 3. Besides, there is a fascinating experience garden on the farm where people are intended to pick green food by themselves. 4. After the instruction of the staff, we began our picking. Not only did we collect fruit and vegetables directly from plants, but we also ate some fresh strawberries on the spot. 5. What this activity has given me is a kind of unique pleasure, as well as a great opportunity to get close to nature. ✅原题标准参考范文 Last weekend, as scheduled, I went to a remarkable modern farm named Green Grow with several classmates, which has impressed and inspired all of us. Featuring green pollution-free fruit and vegetables, Green Grow boasts a brilliant high-tech farm covering an area of 2,000 acres, where advanced technologies and equipment are used for efficient farming. Additionally, there is a fascinating experience garden particularly intended for individuals to pick green food by themselves. After the instruction of the staff, we started our adventure. Not only did we collect fruit and vegetables directly from plants, but we also ate some fresh strawberries on the spot. What this activity has given me is a kind of unique pleasure, as well as a great opportunity to get close to nature. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $—— 聚焦核心素养 · 强化逻辑思维 · 提升写作表达 —— 读后续写专项训练 草莓实验 · 耐寒草莓培育 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “106!” The cry of disappointment breaks the silence of the peaceful night. In darkness, he stands still there, with tears dropping continuously from his eyes. He is a 5th-year Ph.D. student majoring in biology. This is his 106th attempt to cultivate strawberries which could bear extreme climates. In his 105th experiment, he did all the precautions that he knew could lead him closer to his goal. Every generation of the strawberry seemed to bring him closer to success, but every time the result was alike—failure, failure, failure. He has literally got used to it. But this time, he can hardly help feeling frustrated and angry. “Who stole my experimental strawberry!” Last night, when he got to the field, he was thrilled. Although most of the plants were obviously dying, one plant stood vigorously in the middle of the experimental field. The plant was labeled “Plant No. 106”. What a coincidence! In his 106th attempt, the 106th plant was finally mutating (变异) in its ideal way—the spark of hope, to him. Last night,Plant No.106’s fruit started to turn red. He was never so close to success. What he needed to do was wait for several days to harvest that pink, shiny and attractive fruit. But this night, the fruit disappears. So does his hope. “3 years’ effort! 1,096  days’ struggling! 13,152 hours’ DNA editing and experiment! ALL GONE!” he murmurs to himself. He regrets that he didn’t get a small sample of the stolen strawberry last night. Now he is using his fingers to dig the ground. He doesn’t know why he is doing so. He is well aware that the results of the past 106 attempts are all wasted because of the incident and his not taking the sample in time. He has no seeds left. At the present, he seems to have only two choices: to start from the very beginning, or to give up. 注意:续写词数应为 150个左右。 Paragraph 1: He uses his fingers to dig the soil of that inch of field which used to contain his hope.   Paragraph 2: He is so excited that he bursts into tears.    01 学习目标 梳理情节脉络 理清“失莓→绝望→发现→感悟”的故事线，理解情节转折的内在逻辑与情感变化。 攻克核心句型 掌握让步状语从句、形式主语、虚拟语气及现在分词作伴随状语，提升句式丰富度。 实战续写训练 完成中译英分层练习，学会运用逻辑连接词串联句子，构建连贯、有深度的故事续写。 规避典型错误 重点关注时态统一（一般过去时）、虚拟语气结构完整性及非谓语动词的正确使用场景。 02 解题思路与情节推演 转折：从绝望到新生的契机 关键句：“He uses his fingers to dig the soil...” 推演：用手指挖土既是对三年努力的告别，也是希望的意外降临。指尖触碰到的萌芽种子，被命名为“106-1号”，成为绝望中的一抹亮色，推动情节走向转折。 升华：坚持带来的生命回响 关键句：“He is so excited that he bursts into tears.” 推演：激动落泪不仅是因为种子的存活，更是对“挫折中藏机遇”的深刻感悟。黑暗只是暂时的，唯有坚持才能迎来转机，从而将个人经历升华为普世的人生哲理。 学习目标 & 解题思路 1.7.2013 同学们，今天我们来深入探讨这篇故事的学习目标与解题思路。 首先看左边的学习目标，我们要做到四点：一是理清情节脉络，理解从绝望到希望的转变；二是掌握文中的核心句型，特别是从句和非谓语动词的用法；三是通过实战训练提升写作能力；四是要特别注意避免常见的语法错误，比如时态的统一。 再看右边的解题思路，故事的情节分为两个关键阶段：第一阶段是从绝望到发现新生的转机，通过挖土的动作引出希望的种子；第二阶段是情感的升华，通过激动的泪水，感悟到坚持的意义和挫折背后的机遇。希望大家能通过这两个维度，更好地理解故事的内涵。 ‹#› cultivate v. 培育，栽培 withstand v. 经受，承受 precaution n. 预防措施 frustrated adj. 沮丧的 out of the blue 突然，出乎意料 sprout v. 发芽 vigorous adj. 茁壮的； vigour n.活力 extraordinary adj. 非同寻常的 perseverance n. 毅力坚持不懈 give in 屈服，放弃 Part 1 原文&范文精读｜好词好句积累 01 "No matter what the result is, he wants to bring some soil back as a memory for his 3-year effort." 💡 核心句型：No matter what 引导让步状语从句，强调“无论什么情况”，表达无条件的让步关系。 ✍️ 仿写练习：无论前路多么艰难，他都不想放弃自己的实验。 No matter how hard the road ahead is, he won’t give up his experiment.. 原文好词好句 & 仿写 1.7.2013 这一页我们重点积累三个实用的英文句型。 第一个是由 No matter what 引导的让步状语从句，用来表达无论什么情况都如何，语气坚定。 第二个是经典的形式主语句型 It is obvious that...，这在写作中非常常用，可以让句子结构更高级。 第三个是现在分词作伴随状语，能够生动地补充说明主句动作发生时的状态或情绪，让句子更有画面感。 大家可以尝试模仿这些句型进行造句练习。 ‹#› 02 "It is obvious that this slowly-growing plant will bring out an even better experimental result." 💡 核心句型：It is obvious that... 形式主语结构，it 为形式主语，真正主语为后置的 that 从句，使句子结构更平衡。 ✍️ 仿写练习：很明显，坚持会给我们带来惊喜。 It is obvious that perseverance will bring us surprises. 原文好词好句 & 仿写 1.7.2013 这一页我们重点积累三个实用的英文句型。 第一个是由 No matter what 引导的让步状语从句，用来表达无论什么情况都如何，语气坚定。 第二个是经典的形式主语句型 It is obvious that...，这在写作中非常常用，可以让句子结构更高级。 第三个是现在分词作伴随状语，能够生动地补充说明主句动作发生时的状态或情绪，让句子更有画面感。 大家可以尝试模仿这些句型进行造句练习。 ‹#› 03 "Sometimes, we may find ourselves in darkness, feeling helpless and desperate." ✍️ 仿写练习：她站在原地，对这个意外的消息感到震惊。 She stood there, feeling shocked at the unexpected news. 原文好词好句 & 仿写 1.7.2013 这一页我们重点积累三个实用的英文句型。 第一个是由 No matter what 引导的让步状语从句，用来表达无论什么情况都如何，语气坚定。 第二个是经典的形式主语句型 It is obvious that...，这在写作中非常常用，可以让句子结构更高级。 第三个是现在分词作伴随状语，能够生动地补充说明主句动作发生时的状态或情绪，让句子更有画面感。 大家可以尝试模仿这些句型进行造句练习。 ‹#› Part 2 解题思路（情节+情感双线） 原文主线：生物博士生第106次培育耐极端气候草莓，好不容易出现变异植株，果实失窃，陷入绝望，徒手挖土。 情感线：愤怒、难过 → 绝望迷茫 → 意外惊喜 → 重获希望 He uses his fingers to dig the soil of that inch of field which used to contain his hope. 1. 无论结果如何，他都想带走一些泥土，纪念三年的付出。 No matter what the result is, he wants to bring some soil back as a memory for his three-year effort. 2. 突然，他摸到了一个触感不一样的东西。 Out of the blue, he touches something that feels different. 3. 那是一颗已经发芽的种子！ It is a sprouting seed! 4. 它碰巧长在变异植株旁边。 It was accidentally planted close to the mutated plant. Part3 翻译训练 第一段翻译训练 1.7.2013 各位同学，我们来看第一段的翻译训练。 首先，注意第一句中“无论结果如何”的译法，这里用了“No matter what”引导的让步状语从句，简洁有力。“纪念三年的付出”译为“as a memory for his three-year effort”，准确传达了情感色彩。 第二句中，“突然”译为“Out of the blue”，这是一个非常地道的口语化表达，比简单的“Suddenly”更生动。 第三句的“发芽的种子”，“sprouting”这个词比“germinating”更侧重于视觉上的发芽状态。 第四句的“碰巧”用“accidentally”，简洁明了，“变异植株”译为“mutated plant”是专业的表达。 最后一句，“严酷的环境”用“rigid environment”，“茁壮”用“vigorous”，这些词汇都能让译文更加地道和生动。 ‹#› 6. 很明显，这株幼苗会带来更好的实验结果。 It is obvious that this young plant will bring out a better experimental result. 7. 他给这颗新植株命名为106-1号。 He names this new plant Plant No.106-1. 8. 一丝微弱的希望重新在他心底升起。 A weak spark of hope rises again in his heart. 5. 在更严酷的环境下，它看起来比106号植株还要茁壮。 It looks even more vigorous than Plant No.106 in this more rigid environment. 第一段翻译训练（续） 1.7.2013 各位同学，我们继续进行第一段的翻译训练。 大家看到的这三个句子，是我们在描述实验进展和人物心理变化时非常典型的句式。 第一句，“很明显...”，我们用了“It is obvious that...”的主语从句结构，这是书面表达中常用的强调方式。 第二句关于命名，注意“命名为”在这里直接用“names...as...”或者直接接双宾语的结构即可。 第三句描述心理活动，“一丝微弱的希望”翻译成“A weak spark of hope”非常形象，“spark”在这里不仅仅是火花，更是希望的闪光点。 接下来我们来看这些句子在段落中的具体应用。 ‹#› He is so excited that he bursts into tears. 1. 如果草莓没有被偷走，如果他失败后没有挖土，他就会错过这颗种子。 If someone hadn't stolen the strawberry and he hadn't dug the soil after failure, he would have missed this seed. 2. 一切重新充满希望，甚至比之前更好。 Everything is hopeful again, and it becomes even better. 3. 有时候我们会身处黑暗，感到无助绝望。 Sometimes we may find ourselves in darkness, feeling helpless and desperate. 4. 但是我们永远不要屈服。 But we should never give in. 黑暗只是暂时的。 Darkness may be temporary. 第二段翻译训练 1.7.2013 这一页我们进行第二段的翻译训练。首先大家看到的段首句是“He is so excited that he bursts into tears.”，意思是“他激动得热泪盈眶”。 接下来我们来看五个关键句子的翻译练习： 第一句，中文表达了一种虚拟语气的假设，对应的英文使用了过去完成时的虚拟结构，强调了“如果没有发生某事，就会导致另一个结果”。 第二句，“一切重新充满希望”，用“Everything is hopeful again”来表达，简洁有力。 第三句，描述身处困境的感受，“in darkness”不仅指黑暗，更象征着困境；“helpless and desperate”精准传达了无助和绝望的情绪。 第四句，“不要屈服”用“never give in”，这是一个非常地道的短语。 最后一句，“黑暗只是暂时的”，用“may be temporary”来表达这种暂时性，语气委婉而坚定。 大家可以注意这些句子中的时态运用和词汇搭配，这对于提升翻译的准确性和地道性非常重要。 ‹#› 6们要有耐心，守住坚持不懈的品质。 We should be patient and hold the virtue of perseverance. 6. 当下的困境，也许只是我们正在被栽种。 Maybe we are just being planted in this hard time. 7. 这次意外教会他：挫折里藏着新的机遇。 This accident teaches him that new chances lie in setbacks. 第二段翻译训练（续） 1.7.2013 这一页我们继续进行第二段的翻译训练，重点关注三个句子的精准表达。 首先看第六句，“我们要有耐心，守住坚持不懈的品质”，这里的“坚持不懈的品质”可以翻译为“the virtue of perseverance”，既准确又地道。 第七句，“当下的困境，也许只是我们正在被栽种”，这句话富有哲理，翻译时要体现出“正在经历”的状态，用“being planted”来表达这种隐喻的含义非常生动。 最后第八句，“这次意外教会他：挫折里藏着新的机遇”，这里的“挫折”是“setbacks”，“藏着”用“lie in”来表达，简洁有力。 大家在续写时，要注意整体字数的把控，第二段正文大约80词，两段合计控制在150词左右为宜。 ‹#› He uses his fingers to dig the soil of that inch of field which used to contain his hope.No matter what the result is, he wants to bring some soil back as a memory for his 3-year effort. Out of the blue, he touches something that feels different. It is a sprouting seed! It was accidentally planted close to the mutated plant. It looks even more vigorous than Plant No.106 in this more rigid environment. It is obvious that this slowly-growing plant will bring out an even better experimental result. He names it Plant No.106-1. He is so excited that he bursts into tears. If someone hadn't stolen Plant No.106, if he hadn't dug the soil after he thought he failed, he would have missed this extraordinarily special seed. Everything is not only hopeful again, but becoming even better. Sometimes, we may find ourselves in darkness, feeling helpless and desperate, just like Plant No.106-1. But never give in, for darkness may be temporary. Please be patient and hold your virtue of perseverance, for maybe we are just being planted. 参考范文 1.7.2013 这一页展示了一篇优秀的英语范文，主要讲述了一个关于希望与坚持的故事。 第一段描述了主人公在经历了失败后，试图保留一点土壤作为纪念，却意外发现了一颗新的种子，这颗种子比之前的实验品更加茁壮。 第二段则升华了主题，讲述了这次意外发现带来的激动心情，并引申出人生哲理：即使身处黑暗，也不要放弃希望，坚持和耐心终将带来转机。 这篇范文不仅情节生动，而且寓意深刻，非常适合作为写作参考。 ‹#› $