Unit 1 Happy Holiday 作文讲解My Winter Vacation_课件 (1)2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册

2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册 Unit 1 Happy Holiday 作文讲解 My Winter Vacation —— 北京旅行 · 景点美食 · 收获感受 —— 作文题目 寒假你和家人一起去北京旅游，度过了难忘的假期。请你以“My Winter Vacation”为题，给校英文报写一篇短文，分享这次旅行。 要点提示： 1. 参观故宫，感受古建筑的悠久历史； 2. 登上长城，欣赏沿途美景； 3. 品尝北京烤鸭； 4. 你的收获与感受。 要求：不少于80词，100-120词为宜；不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。 审题与任务分析 写什么 分享寒假北京旅行 四点必须写 故宫 + 长城 + 烤鸭 + 收获感受 时态 旅行用一般过去时 高分句型 First, Then, Also, It is/was + adj. to do 字数 100-120词 头脑风暴 ① 故宫 visited the Palace Museum; felt the long history of old buildings ② 长城 climbed the Great Wall; enjoyed looking at beautiful views ③ 烤鸭 tasted Beijing roast duck; delicious ④ 感受 learned about Chinese history; took many photos; felt proud; unforgettable 连词成句（一）：开头与故宫 这个寒假，我和父母去了北京。那真是一次难忘的旅行。 提示：this winter vacation; go to Beijing with parents; really unforgettable trip This winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was really an unforgettable trip. 首先，我们参观了故宫。我感受到了古建筑的悠久历史。 提示：first; visit the Palace Museum; feel the long history of old buildings First, we visited the Palace Museum. I felt the long history of the old buildings. 连词成句（二）：长城与烤鸭 然后，我们登上了长城。它太壮观了，我们欣赏了沿途的美景。 提示：then; climb the Great Wall; amazing; enjoy looking at the beautiful views Then, we climbed the Great Wall. It was amazing, and we enjoyed looking at the beautiful views along the way. 我们还品尝了北京烤鸭当晚餐，非常美味。 提示：also; taste Beijing roast duck for dinner; delicious We also tasted Beijing roast duck for dinner. It was delicious. 连词成句（三）：收获与感受 这次旅行让我更多地了解了中国历史和文化。我为我们的国家感到骄傲。我拍了很多照片，学到了很多。我永远不会忘记这个美妙的寒假。 提示：this trip taught me; learn about Chinese history and culture; feel proud; took many photos; learned a lot; never forget This trip taught me more about Chinese history and culture. I felt proud of our country. I took many photos and learned a lot. I will never forget this wonderful winter vacation. 范文赏析 　　This winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was really an unforgettable trip. 　　First, we visited the Palace Museum. I felt the long history of the old buildings. Then, we climbed the Great Wall. It was amazing, and we enjoyed looking at the beautiful views along the way. We also tasted Beijing roast duck for dinner. It was delicious. 　　This trip taught me more about Chinese history and culture. I felt proud of our country. I took many photos and learned a lot. I will never forget this wonderful winter vacation. 红色=高级句型 蓝色=重点短语 绿色=亮点表达 文章结构总览 第一段 开头：时间 + 地点 + 总体感受 第二段 故宫 + 长城 + 烤鸭 第三段 收获 + 感受 时态 一般过去时 字数 约95词，符合80-120词要求 语法结构总览 1. First / Then / Also 顺序词 2. It was + adj. 它是……的 3. enjoy doing sth. 喜欢/享受做某事 4. teach sb. about sth. 教某人了解某事 5. feel proud of 为……感到骄傲 语法精讲① First / Then / Also 原句：First, we visited the Palace Museum. Then, we climbed the Great Wall. We also tasted Beijing roast duck. 翻译：首先，我们参观了故宫。然后，我们登上了长城。我们还品尝了北京烤鸭。 仿写（点击显示完整答案）： 1. 首先，我早上6点起床。然后，我吃早餐。 答案：First, I got up at six. Then, I had breakfast. 2. 我还在书店买了一些书。 答案：I also bought some books in the bookstore. 语法精讲② enjoy doing 原句：We enjoyed looking at the beautiful views along the way. 翻译：我们欣赏了沿途的美景。 仿写（点击显示完整答案）： 1. 我们在公园里玩得很开心。 答案：We enjoyed playing in the park. 2. 她喜欢读故事书。 答案：She enjoys reading storybooks. 语法精讲③ teach sb. about 原句：This trip taught me more about Chinese history and culture. 翻译：这次旅行让我更多地了解了中国历史和文化。 仿写（点击显示完整答案）： 1. 这本书让我了解了英国。 答案：This book taught me about England. 2. 老师教我们关于环保的知识。 答案：The teacher taught us about environmental protection. 语法精讲④ feel proud of 原句：I felt proud of our country. 翻译：我为我们的国家感到骄傲。 仿写（点击显示完整答案）： 1. 我为我的学校感到骄傲。 答案：I feel proud of my school. 2. 她为她的儿子感到骄傲。 答案：She feels proud of her son. 重点短语必背 1. winter vacation 寒假 2. unforgettable trip 难忘的旅行 3. visit the Palace Museum 参观故宫 4. climb the Great Wall 登长城 5. enjoy the views 欣赏美景 6. taste Beijing roast duck 品尝北京烤鸭 7. learn about 了解 8. feel proud of 为……骄傲 短语闯关 1. 寒假 winter vacation 2. 难忘的旅行 unforgettable trip 3. 参观故宫 visit the Palace Museum 4. 登长城 climb the Great Wall 5. 欣赏美景 enjoy the views 6. 品尝北京烤鸭 taste Beijing roast duck 7. 了解 learn about 8. 为……骄傲 feel proud of 背诵闯关（一） 这个寒假，我和父母去了北京。那真是一次难忘的旅行。 结构提示：this winter vacation; go to Beijing with parents; really unforgettable This winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was really an unforgettable trip. 首先，我们参观了故宫。我感受到了古建筑的悠久历史。 结构提示：first; visit the Palace Museum; feel the long history First, we visited the Palace Museum. I felt the long history of the old buildings. 然后，我们登上了长城。它太壮观了，我们欣赏了沿途的美景。 结构提示：then; climb the Great Wall; enjoy looking at the beautiful views Then, we climbed the Great Wall. It was amazing, and we enjoyed looking at the beautiful views along the way. 背诵闯关（二） 我们还品尝了北京烤鸭当晚餐，非常美味。 结构提示：also; taste Beijing roast duck for dinner; delicious We also tasted Beijing roast duck for dinner. It was delicious. 这次旅行让我更多地了解了中国历史和文化。我为我们的国家感到骄傲。我拍了很多照片，学到了很多。我永远不会忘记这个美妙的寒假。 结构提示：taught me; learn about; feel proud; took photos; learned a lot; never forget This trip taught me more about Chinese history and culture. I felt proud of our country. I took many photos and learned a lot. I will never forget this wonderful winter vacation. 易错提醒 时态 旅行动作用过去时：went, visited, climbed, tasted 顺序词 First/Then/Also 要用上 四点齐全 故宫/长城/烤鸭/感受不能少 enjoy doing enjoyed looking at the views，不能写 enjoyed to look 感受要具体 feel proud, learned a lot, unforgettable 写作技巧总结 三段式 开头—景点美食—感受 顺序词 First, Then, Also 高级句 enjoy doing, teach sb. about, feel proud 细节 美景、美味、历史感 结尾 unforgettable / never forget 全文背诵 This winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents. It was really an unforgettable trip. First, we visited the Palace Museum. I felt the long history of the old buildings. Then, we climbed the Great Wall. It was amazing, and we enjoyed looking at the beautiful views along the way. We also tasted Beijing roast duck for dinner. It was delicious. This trip taught me more about Chinese history and culture. I felt proud of our country. I took many photos and learned a lot. I will never forget this wonderful winter vacation. Keep writing, keep improving. 多读多写，熟能生巧 $