Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 作文讲解Protect Wild Animals课件2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册
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2026-2027学年人教版八年级英语上册
Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals
作文讲解 Protect Wild Animals
—— 濒危现状 · 原因分析 · 保护呼吁 ——
作文题目
许多野生动物正面临灭绝的危险。校学生会将举办以“Protect Wild Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。
要点提示:
1. 野生动物濒危的现状;
2. 造成这一现状的两个主要原因;
3. 我们应该采取的保护措施;
4. 你的呼吁。
要求:不少于80词,100-120词为宜;不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。
审题与任务分析
文体
英语演讲稿
四点必须写
现状 + 两个原因 + 措施 + 呼吁
时态
一般现在时为主
高分句型
in danger, so, should, let's work together
字数
100-120词
头脑风暴
① 现状
many wild animals in danger; some dying out
② 原因1
people cut down forests; losing homes
③ 原因2
some people kill them for money or food
④ 措施与呼吁
make laws; plant trees; stop buying; work together
演讲稿开头与现状
老师们、同学们,今天我想谈谈野生动物。现在许多野生动物正处于危险之中,有些甚至濒临灭绝。
提示:Dear teachers and students; talk about; in danger; dying out
Dear teachers and students, today I want to talk about wild animals. Now many wild animals are in danger, and some of them are even dying out.
连词成句(二):两个原因
有两个主要原因。首先,人们砍伐森林,所以动物正在失去家园。
提示:two main reasons; first; cut down forests; lose homes
There are two main reasons. First, people cut down forests, so animals are losing their homes.
第二,一些人为了钱或食物而猎杀野生动物。
提示:second; kill wild animals for money or food
Second, some people kill wild animals for money or food.
连词成句(三):措施与呼吁
我们应该采取行动。政府应该制定法律来制止猎杀。我们也可以种更多树,告诉人们不要购买野生动物制品。
提示:take action; make laws; stop killing; plant more trees; tell people not to buy
We should take action. The government should make laws to stop killing. We can also plant more trees and tell people not to buy wild animal products.
野生动物是我们的朋友。让我们一起努力保护它们。
提示:wild animals are our friends; let's work together to protect them
Wild animals are our friends. Let's work together to protect them.
范文赏析
Dear teachers and students, today I want to talk about wild animals. Now many wild animals are in danger, and some of them are even dying out.
There are two main reasons. First, people cut down forests, so animals are losing their homes. Second, some people kill wild animals for money or food.
We should take action. The government should make laws to stop killing. We can also plant more trees and tell people not to buy wild animal products. Wild animals are our friends. Let's work together to protect them.
红色=高级句型 蓝色=重点短语 绿色=呼吁亮点
文章结构总览
第一段
称呼 + 现状
第二段
两个原因
第三段
措施 + 呼吁
时态
一般现在时
字数
约100词,符合100-120词要求
语法结构总览
1. be in danger
处于危险中
2. die out
灭绝
3. so 引导结果
所以……
4. should 应该
应该做某事
5. tell sb. not to do sth.
告诉某人不要做某事
语法精讲① in danger / die out
原句:Many wild animals are in danger, and some are even dying out.
翻译:许多野生动物处于危险之中,有些甚至濒临灭绝。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 大熊猫现在也处于危险之中。
答案:Pandas are also in danger now.
2. 如果我们不保护它们,它们很快就会灭绝。
答案:If we don't protect them, they will soon die out.
语法精讲② so
原句:People cut down forests, so animals are losing their homes.
翻译:人们砍伐森林,所以动物正在失去家园。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 下雨了,所以我们待在家里。
答案:It rained, so we stayed at home.
2. 他努力学习,所以考试及格了。
答案:He studied hard, so he passed the exam.
语法精讲③ should
原句:We should take action. The government should make laws to stop killing.
翻译:我们应该采取行动。政府应该制定法律来制止猎杀。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 我们应该种更多树。
答案:We should plant more trees.
2. 学生们应该保持校园干净。
答案:Students should keep the school clean.
语法精讲④ tell sb. not to do
原句:We can tell people not to buy wild animal products.
翻译:我们可以告诉人们不要购买野生动物制品。
仿写(点击显示完整答案):
1. 老师告诉我们不要浪费食物。
答案:The teacher tells us not to waste food.
2. 妈妈告诉我不要在外面玩太晚。
答案:Mom tells me not to play outside too late.
重点短语必背
1. wild animals
野生动物
2. be in danger
处于危险中
3. die out
灭绝
4. cut down forests
砍伐森林
5. lose homes
失去家园
6. take action
采取行动
7. make laws
制定法律
8. work together
一起努力
短语闯关
1. 野生动物
wild animals
2. 处于危险中
be in danger
3. 灭绝
die out
4. 砍伐森林
cut down forests
5. 失去家园
lose homes
6. 采取行动
take action
7. 制定法律
make laws
8. 一起努力
work together
背诵闯关(一)
老师们、同学们,今天我想谈谈野生动物。现在许多野生动物正处于危险之中,有些甚至濒临灭绝。
结构提示:Dear...; talk about; in danger; dying out
Dear teachers and students, today I want to talk about wild animals. Now many wild animals are in danger, and some of them are even dying out.
有两个主要原因。首先,人们砍伐森林,所以动物正在失去家园。第二,一些人为了钱或食物而猎杀野生动物。
结构提示:two main reasons; first; so; second
There are two main reasons. First, people cut down forests, so animals are losing their homes. Second, some people kill wild animals for money or food.
背诵闯关(二)
我们应该采取行动。政府应该制定法律来制止猎杀。我们也可以种更多树,告诉人们不要购买野生动物制品。
结构提示:take action; make laws; plant trees; tell...not to buy
We should take action. The government should make laws to stop killing. We can also plant more trees and tell people not to buy wild animal products.
野生动物是我们的朋友。让我们一起努力保护它们。
结构提示:wild animals are our friends; let's work together to protect them
Wild animals are our friends. Let's work together to protect them.
易错提醒
演讲稿格式
开头 Dear teachers and students,结尾可Thank you
原因要两个
不能只写一个原因
措施要具体
make laws / plant trees / tell people not to buy
呼吁要有力
Let's work together...
时态
一般现在时,不要用过去时
写作技巧总结
三段式
现状—原因—措施呼吁
逻辑词
First, Second, We should
高级句
in danger, so, should, tell...not to
措施具体
至少写两个行动
呼吁
Let's work together
全文背诵
Dear teachers and students, today I want to talk about wild animals. Now many wild animals are in danger, and some of them are even dying out.
There are two main reasons. First, people cut down forests, so animals are losing their homes. Second, some people kill wild animals for money or food.
We should take action. The government should make laws to stop killing. We can also plant more trees and tell people not to buy wild animal products. Wild animals are our friends. Let's work together to protect them.
Keep writing, keep improving.
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