模板05 推荐信(答题模板与解题技巧)(全国通用)2027年高考英语二轮复习讲练测
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模板05 推荐信
01 题型解读
02 答题模板构建
03 满分词汇模板
04 满分句型模板
05 满分作文模板
06 知识迁移强化
【读者注意】
这份讲义按“识题—立骨—备料—造句—避坑—成篇—示范—技法—实战”的顺序编排,九个部分各自独立,又构成一条完整的备考链条。若时间充裕,建议按顺序通读一遍,把第二部分的框架与第四部分的句型抄成一页纸带在身边;若临近考试,可直接跳到第二部分、第五部分与第九部分,用最短的路径完成“会写、写对、写快”。
下表给出各部分的功能与建议投入时间,可作为一轮复习的进度表使用。
部分
功能定位
关键产出
建议投入
一、识高考
明确考什么、怎么评分
命题特点与评分维度对照表
40 分钟通读
二、善总结
建立三段式写作框架
每段的功能与写作动作
60 分钟精读并抄框架
三、满分词汇
积累主题语料
500 词 + 300 短语
分五天,每天记两组
四、满分句型
积累可迁移句式
开篇 20 + 中间 20 + 结尾 20
分三天,每天一组并仿写
五、避错清单
清除高频硬伤
50 条错误对照
两天,每天 25 条并自测
六、满分模板
获得可填空骨架
一套通用模板
30 分钟,填三遍
七、模板示例
看见模板的落地效果
一篇完整范文与拆解
30 分钟,逐段对照
八、技巧总结
把方法固化为习惯
七条可执行技巧
20 分钟
九、实战训练
限时成文
15 题及答案
每两天一题,限时 20 分钟
推荐信是高考英语书面表达(应用文写作)中出场频率最高的体裁之一。它在题干中往往以“假定你是李华,你的英国朋友/外教/校学生会需要……请写一封推荐信”的形式出现,看似只是“夸人”,实则是把“人际评价”压缩进 80—120 词的严格框架内。本部分先解决“考什么、怎么考”,为后续模板提供判断依据。
(一)考查定位与题型分布
1. 出场频率:应用文中的“常驻题型”。从近十年全国卷及各省市自主命题卷看,书面表达的应用文部分稳定覆盖书信、通知、演讲稿、报道、倡议书五类,推荐信则常与“申请信”“邀请信”交替出现,几乎每隔一两年就会以“推荐同学参加夏令营”“推荐朋友做交换生”“推荐学弟参加比赛”等形式回归。它与申请信的区别在于:申请信是“我为我自己说话”,推荐信是“我替别人说话”,因此人称、语气、可信度来源完全不同。
2. 篇幅与分值:80—120 词的“高密度写作”。绝大多数卷区要求 80 词左右,部分卷区(如新高考部分省份)要求 100—120 词。在如此短的篇幅内要完成“点明目的—给出理由—表达期望”三件事,意味着每一句都必须承担功能,任何一句纯客套或纯重复都是失分点。这也决定了推荐信只能采用三段式,不能铺陈。
(二) 命题特点
推荐信的命题呈现出五个稳定特征,理解这五点,才能判断“哪些内容必须写、哪些内容写了也没用”。
第一,情境真实,交际对象明确。题干几乎都会交代三层关系:推荐人与被推荐人是什么关系(同学、学生、朋友、同事)、推荐去向是什么(夏令营、大学、社团、比赛、志愿者项目)、收信人是谁(招生官、外教、组委会、社区负责人)。这三层关系决定了称呼语的选择:写给陌生机构用 Dear Sir or Madam,写给熟悉的老师用 Dear Mr. Smith,写给朋友用 Dear Peter。称呼误判是格式分最先失守的地方。
第二,要点限定,三块式结构固定。题目通常给出三条中文提示,例如“说明推荐理由”“介绍被推荐人的相关经历或特长”“表达你的期望”。这三条提示与三段式一一对应:第一条对应首段目的,第二条对应主体段理由,第三条对应末段收束。评分时按要点给分,漏掉一条即扣内容分,因此动笔前的圈要点比追求辞藻更重要。
第三,重证据,轻抒情。命题的真正考点不是“你会不会夸人”,而是“你的推荐是否可信”。阅卷中,He is very good and I like him 这类空泛评价几乎不得分;而带有具体事例与结果的理由,如 he organized a reading festival that attracted over 500 students,能明显拉开档次。换言之,题目有意引导考生把形容词换成事实。这一导向也解释了为什么推荐理由常被要求写满三条:三条理由恰好覆盖能力、品质与匹配度三个
个维度,避免考生只写一条而靠堆词凑数。
第四,语言分层清晰,结构决定档次。同一道题,基础层考生写出三句正确的简单句即可拿到及格分;提高层则依靠非谓语动词、定语从句、强调句与倒装句体现语言能力。命题并不考查生僻词汇,而是考查常用结构在真实语境中是否用得准、用得稳。反过来,若所有理由都停留在 He is good at 的水平,即便没有语法错误,也很难越过及格档,因为语言能力的证据不足。
第五,身份意识与格式完整。称呼、正文、结束语、签名四要素必须齐全;推荐人口吻要与身份相符——教师推荐学生宜客观、有权威感,同学推荐朋友宜真诚、有温度,切忌用第三人称夸自己,也切忌把推荐信写成自我介绍。另有一条易被忽略:“你的期望”常被误读为“希望他被录取”,更稳妥的写法是“希望对方给予考虑、安排面试或提供进一步信息”,这类可执行的动作更符合真实书信习惯。
综上,推荐信的命题本质是“用具体证据完成一次可信的人际推荐”。备考重心应落在三处:审题圈要点、理由具体化、句式有变化。训练材料宜以真题为底本,按同一情境换一种身份改写,以体会教师、同学、朋友三种口吻在称呼与语气上的差别。
(三)评分维度与得分点分布
高考应用文评分通常按“内容要点、语言表达、篇章结构与连贯、格式与语域”四个维度综合定档。下表把四个维度拆成推荐信可直接对照的得分动作,便于讲评时逐项核对。
评分维度
考查什么
推荐信中的具体得分动作
常见失分
内容要点
三条中文提示是否落实
首段点明推荐目的与对象;主体段给出 2—3 条理由;末段表达期望
漏写“期望”;理由少于两条
语言表达
词汇与句式的准确、丰富
每段至少一处高级结构;使用主题词(diligent、responsible、organize)
全篇 He is…;时态混用;搭配错误
篇章结构
三段式与衔接
To begin with / What is more / Therefore 明确分层
一段到底;理由堆叠无层次
格式与语域
书信要素与语气
称呼、结束语、签名齐全;正式场合用书面语
缺签名;用 Hi 开头;口语化缩写
推荐信的骨架极其稳定:三段,每段一个功能。真正决定分数的是每一段内部的“写作动作”是否到位。下面先给出总框架,再逐段拆解,最后给出落笔前的六条硬性注意事项。
【三段式结构总览】
把 80—120 词按功能切成三块,是最省时也最保险的分配方式。下表给出字数、功能与必含成分的对应关系。
段落
功能
建议字数
必含成分
开头句式
第一段
点明写信目的、推出被推荐人、给一句总体定位
25—35 词
写信目的 + 被推荐人姓名与身份 + 总体评价
I am writing to recommend…
第二段
给出 2—3 条推荐理由,每条都要有证据
40—55 词
理由句 + 具体事例/细节 + 产生的结果或影响
To begin with… / What is more…
第三段
重申推荐、表达期望、礼貌收束
20—30 词
重申结论 + 希望考虑 + 联系方式或祝语
Therefore… / I would appreciate it if…
【第一段怎么写】
第一段只做三件事,顺序不能乱:交代写信目的、推出被推荐人、给出总体定位。三件事压在一到两句里,句子才不会拖沓。三段式的首段最忌“先寒暄两句再进入正题”——在 80 词的篇幅里,寒暄等于把宝贵字数花在了不得分的地方。
动作一:用一句话点明目的。常用句式是 I am writing to recommend somebody for something,其中 for 后面必须落到具体去向(the summer camp、the position、your university),不能只写 recommend him。若要更正式,可用 It is my great pleasure to recommend…;若要回应对方来信,可用 I am writing in response to your request for a reference letter concerning…。
动作二:用同位语或定语从句补出身份。把“他是谁、和我是什么关系、认识多久”压缩进一个短语,例如 Li Hua, one of the most outstanding students in our class, whom I have taught for three years。这一短语既是信息,也是可信度的来源——阅卷老师由此判断推荐人是否有资格推荐。
动作三:给一句总体定位,为后文定调。定位句要“有边界”,即指出被推荐人在哪一方面突出,而不是笼统地说 he is excellent。可用 a student of great promise(很有前途)、an ideal candidate for the position(理想人选)、a young man of rare talent(才华罕见)。
把三个动作连起来,首段就成形了:I am writing to recommend Li Hua, one of the most outstanding students in our class, for the summer camp you offer. Having taught him for three years, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate. 两句 40 词左右,目的、对象、定位齐备,还顺带用了一个分词短语。
【第二段怎么写】
第二段是得分主战场,也是最能拉开差距的地方。它的内部结构应当是“理由—证据—效果”的三连:先说一条品质或能力(理由),再给一件能证明它的事(证据),最后说明这件事带来了什么结果(效果)。三者缺一,理由就会退化成空泛的形容词堆砌。
第一条理由通常写学业或核心能力,因为它与“能否胜任”直接相关;第二条理由写品质或团队协作,因为它回答“是否好相处”;若篇幅允许,第三条写一项与推荐去向高度匹配的特长,例如推荐参加英语夏令营就写英语演讲获奖,推荐做志愿者就写长期参与社区服务。三条理由之间必须用显性衔接词分层:To begin with / What is more / Besides,让阅卷老师在扫读时一眼看到层次。
证据要具体到“可核查”的程度。方法有三种:一是给数字(attracted over 500 students;won first prize in the provincial contest);二是给场景(whenever our class faces a tight deadline,he is the first to stay behind);三是给转变(thanks to his arrangements, the charity sale raised twice as much as we had expected)。三种方法任选其一,理由立刻从“评价”变成“事实”。
句式上,本段至少安排一处高级结构:用 Not only does he… but he also… 做递进倒装,用 It is his strong sense of responsibility that… 做强调,用 What sets him apart is… 做差异化表述,用 A case in point is… 引出例证。注意一处即可,堆三处反而显得刻意,且容易出错。
一个可直接套用的主体段骨架:To begin with, his academic performance is second to none in our grade, which lays a solid foundation for further study. What is more, he is a responsible organizer: last term he planned the campus reading festival, which attracted over 500 participants. Besides, his fluency in English enables him to communicate with foreign teachers without difficulty. 三句 60 词,三条理由各有落点,层次清楚。
【第三段怎么写】
第三段的功能是“收口”,只做三件事:重申推荐结论、表达期望、礼貌收束。它不需要新信息,更不能再起一条理由——那会让文章显得没有终点。
重申要用结论性副词开路:Therefore / In a word / All things considered,然后回扣首段的定位词,形成首尾呼应。例如 Therefore, I recommend him without reservation。
表达期望要落到“希望对方怎么做”,常用 I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration;若要更主动,可加一句替被推荐人作出的保证:Rest assured that he will spare no effort to meet your expectations once admitted。这一句能显著提升推荐的说服力,因为它把“我喜欢他”升级为“我为他担保”。
礼貌收束是格式分的一部分:Thank you for your time and consideration 与 I look forward to your early reply 几乎是标配;若信件需要附材料,用 Enclosed is his resume for your reference 交代附件。最后另起一行写 Yours sincerely, 并署名 Li Hua,四要素才算齐全。
【落笔前必须处理的六件事】
人称与视角。全篇站在推荐人立场说话,被推荐人一律用第三人称 he/she。最常见的错位是写成自我介绍(I am good at English),一旦出现,内容分与语域分同时受损。
时态。推荐是当下的行为,主句用一般现在时;被推荐人的经历用一般过去时;“认识多久”“一直表现优异”用现在完成时。三个时态各管一段,不能混。
称呼与落款。称呼顶格,逗号结尾;结束语另起一行,签名再另起一行。写给机构用 Dear Sir or Madam,写给具体人用 Dear Mr./Ms. + 姓,写给朋友用 Dear + 名。
字数。严格控制在要求区间(通常 80—120 词)。超词先删客套句与重复形容词,不要删理由证据——那是得分点。
忌绝对化。避免 the best、the most diligent student I have ever seen 这类无依据的最高级,改用 one of the most… 更可信,也更符合英语评价习惯。
忌空泛。每一条理由后面必须能回答“凭什么这么说”。如果一条理由找不出证据,就换一条能找出证据的,而不是硬加形容词。
【满分词汇模板】
本部分收 500 个单词与 300 个短语,全部围绕推荐信的“评价、证据、书信套语”三类表达组织,按主题分组,每组 50 词或 30 短语。记忆时不要求全背,先保证每组前十个能主动用出来,再由被动词汇逐步转为主动词汇。
(一)单词 500(英—汉对照)
1. 第 1—50 词
序号
英文
中文
1
recommend
推荐
2
recommendation
推荐;推荐信
3
nominate
提名
4
nomination
提名
5
endorse
认可;支持
6
endorsement
背书;支持
7
commend
表扬;称赞
8
commendation
赞扬
9
candidate
候选人;人选
10
applicant
申请人
11
qualify
使具备资格
12
qualified
合格的
13
eligibility
资格
14
worthy
值得的
15
outstanding
杰出的
16
excellent
优秀的
17
exceptional
出类拔萃的
18
remarkable
非凡的
19
distinguished
卓越的
20
superb
极好的
21
admirable
令人钦佩的
22
impressive
令人印象深刻的
23
extraordinary
非凡的
24
prominent
杰出的
25
brilliant
才华出众的
26
reliable
可靠的
27
trustworthy
值得信赖的
28
dependable
靠得住的
29
responsible
有责任心的
30
committed
尽心投入的
31
dedicated
专注奉献的
32
devoted
忠诚投入的
33
diligent
勤奋的
34
industrious
勤勉的
35
hardworking
努力工作的
36
conscientious
认真尽责的
37
meticulous
一丝不苟的
38
thorough
周密的
39
efficient
高效的
40
competent
有能力的
41
capable
有才干的
42
proficient
精通的
43
skillful
熟练的
44
versatile
多才多艺的
45
talented
有天赋的
46
gifted
有天分的
47
potential
潜力
48
promising
有前途的
49
merit
优点;价值
50
excellence
卓越
2. 第 51—100 词
序号
英文
中文
51
academic
学业的
52
achievement
成就
53
accomplishment
造诣;成就
54
progress
进步
55
improvement
提高
56
mastery
精通
57
comprehension
理解力
58
understanding
理解
59
knowledge
知识
60
literacy
素养
61
logic
逻辑
62
logical
有逻辑的
63
analytical
善于分析的
64
critical
批判性的
65
creative
有创造力的
66
creativity
创造力
67
innovation
创新
68
innovative
有创新精神的
69
curiosity
好奇心
70
curious
好奇的
71
initiative
主动性
72
motivation
动力
73
motivated
有干劲的
74
enthusiasm
热情
75
enthusiastic
热情的
76
passion
热爱
77
passionate
充满热情的
78
interest
兴趣
79
eager
渴望的
80
attentiveness
专注
81
concentration
专心
82
diligence
勤勉
83
persistence
坚持不懈
84
perseverance
毅力
85
endurance
耐力
86
patience
耐心
87
stamina
持久力
88
discipline
自律
89
self-discipline
自我约束
90
independence
独立性
91
independent
独立的
92
confidence
信心
93
confident
自信的
94
resilience
韧性
95
adaptability
适应能力
96
flexibility
灵活性
97
insight
洞察力
98
wisdom
智慧
99
intelligence
智力
100
honest
诚实的
3. 第 101—150 词
序号
英文
中文
101
honesty
诚实
102
integrity
正直
103
sincere
真诚的
104
sincerity
真诚
105
generous
慷慨的
106
generosity
慷慨
107
kind
善良的
108
kindness
善意
109
warm-hearted
热心的
110
considerate
体贴的
111
thoughtful
考虑周到的
112
helpful
乐于助人的
113
cooperative
善于合作的
114
cooperation
合作
115
collaboration
协作
116
teamwork
团队合作
117
supportive
给予支持的
118
tolerant
宽容的
119
tolerance
宽容
120
humble
谦逊的
121
humility
谦逊
122
modest
谦虚的
123
modesty
谦和
124
optimistic
乐观的
125
optimism
乐观
126
positive
积极的
127
cheerful
开朗的
128
outgoing
外向的
129
sociable
合群的
130
friendly
友好的
131
approachable
平易近人的
132
patient
有耐心的
133
calm
沉着的
134
steady
稳重的
135
mature
成熟的
136
maturity
成熟
137
sensible
明智的
138
rational
理性的
139
fair
公平的
140
just
公正的
141
courage
勇气
142
brave
勇敢的
143
determination
决心
144
determined
坚定的
145
willpower
意志力
146
ambition
抱负
147
ambitious
有抱负的
148
energetic
精力充沛的
149
vigorous
朝气蓬勃的
150
campus
校园
4. 第 151—200 词
序号
英文
中文
151
principal
校长
152
faculty
全体教师;院系
153
tutor
导师
154
mentor
指导老师
155
classmate
同学
156
alumnus
校友
157
monitor
班长
158
president
主席;会长
159
member
成员
160
membership
会员身份
161
club
社团
162
society
社团;协会
163
association
协会
164
committee
委员会
165
organize
组织
166
organization
组织
167
organizer
组织者
168
participate
参加
169
participation
参与
170
participant
参与者
171
volunteer
志愿者
172
voluntary
自愿的
173
activity
活动
174
event
活动;赛事
175
campaign
活动;运动
176
project
项目
177
program
项目;节目
178
competition
比赛
179
contest
竞赛
180
championship
锦标赛
181
tournament
联赛
182
exhibition
展览
183
performance
表演
184
concert
音乐会
185
rehearsal
排练
186
stage
舞台
187
audience
观众
188
judge
评委
189
award
奖项
190
prize
奖品
191
medal
奖牌
192
certificate
证书
193
honor
荣誉
194
scholarship
奖学金
195
semester
学期
196
curriculum
课程体系
197
syllabus
教学大纲
198
lecture
讲座
199
hobby
业余爱好
200
pastime
消遣
5. 第 201—250 词
序号
英文
中文
201
talent
才能
202
skill
技能
203
ability
能力
204
competence
胜任力
205
expertise
专业素养
206
specialty
专长
207
strength
长处
208
weakness
短处
209
advantage
优势
210
disadvantage
不足
211
feature
特点
212
quality
品质
213
characteristic
特征
214
character
品格
215
personality
个性
216
virtue
美德
217
trait
特质
218
gift
天赋
219
musical
音乐的
220
instrument
乐器
221
piano
钢琴
222
guitar
吉他
223
violin
小提琴
224
painting
绘画作品
225
drawing
素描
226
photography
摄影
227
dancing
舞蹈
228
singing
歌唱
229
drama
戏剧
230
acting
表演
231
speech
演讲
232
debate
辩论
233
recitation
朗诵
234
calligraphy
书法
235
writing
写作
236
literature
文学
237
poem
诗歌
238
novel
小说
239
sports
体育运动
240
basketball
篮球
241
football
足球
242
volleyball
排球
243
swimming
游泳
244
running
跑步
245
athlete
运动员
246
coach
教练
247
training
训练
248
fitness
体质;健身
249
experience
经历
250
practice
实践
6. 第 251—300 词
序号
英文
中文
251
practical
实用的
252
internship
实习
253
employment
就业
254
career
职业生涯
255
profession
专业职业
256
position
职位
257
role
角色
258
duty
职责
259
responsibility
责任
260
task
任务
261
assignment
作业;任务
262
workload
工作量
263
schedule
日程安排
264
deadline
截止时间
265
punctual
守时的
266
commitment
投入;承诺
267
accountable
负责任
268
leadership
领导力
269
leader
领导者
270
coordinate
协调
271
coordination
协调
272
communicate
沟通
273
communication
沟通
274
negotiate
协商
275
negotiation
协商
276
solution
解决办法
277
handle
处理
278
manage
管理
279
management
管理
280
strategy
策略
281
approach
方法;途径
282
method
方法
283
efficiency
效率
284
productivity
生产率
285
standard
标准
286
requirement
要求
287
criterion
评判标准
288
outcome
结果
289
result
结果
290
effect
效果
291
impact
影响
292
influence
影响力
293
contribution
贡献
294
contribute
贡献
295
benefit
益处
296
resource
资源
297
platform
平台
298
success
成功
299
successful
成功的
300
succeed
取得成功
7. 第 301—350 词
序号
英文
中文
301
failure
失败
302
effort
努力
303
strive
奋斗
304
attempt
尝试
305
challenge
挑战
306
overcome
克服
307
conquer
战胜
308
obstacle
障碍
309
difficulty
困难
310
hardship
艰辛
311
pressure
压力
312
stress
紧张压力
313
burden
负担
314
expectation
期待
315
expect
期望
316
goal
目标
317
target
指标;目标
318
aim
目的
319
objective
目的;目标
320
dream
梦想
321
vision
愿景
322
future
未来
323
prospect
前景
324
opportunity
机会
325
chance
机缘
326
assistance
帮助
327
guidance
指导
328
instruction
指导;指示
329
advice
建议
330
suggestion
建议
331
feedback
反馈
332
evaluation
评价
333
assessment
评估
334
judgment
判断
335
recognition
认可
336
appreciate
欣赏;感激
337
appreciation
感激;赏识
338
gratitude
感激之情
339
grateful
感激的
340
respect
尊重
341
admire
钦佩
342
admiration
钦佩
343
trust
信任
344
belief
信念
345
believe
相信
346
hope
希望
347
inspire
激励;启发
348
inspiration
启迪
349
motivate
激发动力
350
persist
坚持
8. 第 351—400 词
序号
英文
中文
351
cooperate
配合
352
assess
评定
353
wish
祝愿
354
anticipate
期待
355
anticipation
期盼
356
welcome
欢迎
357
invite
邀请
358
invitation
邀请
359
apply
申请
360
application
申请书
361
enclose
随信附上
362
enclosure
附件
363
attach
附上
364
attachment
附件
365
contact
联系
366
reply
回复
367
respond
回应
368
response
答复
369
inform
告知
370
notice
通知
371
announce
宣布
372
announcement
公告
373
introduce
介绍
374
introduction
介绍
375
express
表达
376
expression
表达;措辞
377
convey
传达
378
explain
解释
379
explanation
说明
380
describe
描述
381
description
描述
382
mention
提及
383
state
陈述
384
declare
声明
385
emphasize
强调
386
highlight
突出
387
confirm
确认
388
assure
使确信
389
promise
承诺
390
loyal
忠诚的
391
loyalty
忠诚
392
privilege
荣幸
393
pleasure
愉快
394
faithful
忠实的
395
willingness
意愿
396
willing
愿意的
397
available
可获得的;有空的
398
convenient
方便的
399
prompt
及时的
400
timely
适时的
9. 第 401—450 词
序号
英文
中文
401
further
进一步的
402
however
然而
403
therefore
因此
404
moreover
而且
405
furthermore
此外
406
besides
除此之外
407
additionally
另外
408
consequently
结果是
409
thus
因而
410
otherwise
否则
411
meanwhile
与此同时
412
whereas
而(对比)
413
nevertheless
尽管如此
414
instead
反而
415
similarly
同样地
416
likewise
同样
417
particularly
尤其
418
especially
特别
419
specifically
具体来说
420
generally
一般而言
421
overall
总体而言
422
eventually
最终
423
finally
最后
424
firstly
首先
425
secondly
其次
426
thirdly
第三
427
initially
起初
428
subsequently
随后
429
previously
此前
430
currently
目前
431
recently
最近
432
gradually
逐渐地
433
increasingly
日益
434
extremely
极其
435
highly
高度地
436
deeply
深切地
437
truly
真正地
438
indeed
确实
439
apparently
显然
440
obviously
明显地
441
clearly
清楚地
442
relatively
相对地
443
absolutely
绝对地
444
precisely
精确地
445
roughly
大约
446
approximately
约略
447
merely
仅仅
448
simply
不过
449
barely
几乎不能
450
hardly
几乎不
10. 第 451—500 词
序号
英文
中文
451
nearly
几乎
452
valuable
宝贵的
453
invaluable
极珍贵的
454
worthwhile
值得做的
455
beneficial
有益的
456
constructive
有建设性的
457
meaningful
有意义的
458
significant
重要的
459
essential
必不可少的
460
vital
至关重要的
461
crucial
关键的
462
fundamental
根本的
463
necessary
必要的
464
important
重要的
465
useful
有用的
466
effective
有效的
467
valid
有说服力的
468
appropriate
恰当的
469
suitable
合适的
470
proper
得体的
471
adequate
足够的
472
sufficient
充分的
473
abundant
丰富的
474
various
多种多样的
475
diverse
多样的
476
comprehensive
全面的
477
complete
完整的
478
detailed
详尽的
479
specific
具体的
480
concrete
确凿的
481
accurate
准确的
482
precise
精密的
483
impartial
不偏不倚的
484
reasonable
合乎情理的
485
sound
合理的;扎实的
486
convincing
令人信服的
487
persuasive
有说服力的
488
striking
显著的
489
attractive
有吸引力的
490
appealing
吸引人的
491
unusual
不寻常的
492
unique
独一无二的
493
typical
典型的
494
representative
有代表性的
495
genuine
真实的;真挚的
496
authentic
可信的
497
realistic
切合实际的
498
encouraging
令人鼓舞的
499
satisfactory
令人满意的
500
perfect
完美的
(二)短语 300(英—汉对照)
1. 第 1—30 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
1
I am writing to recommend
我写信是为了推荐
2
I am writing to you to recommend
写信给贵方推荐
3
I would like to recommend
我想推荐
4
It is my great pleasure to recommend
我很荣幸推荐
5
I am more than willing to recommend
我非常愿意推荐
6
take great pleasure in recommending
很高兴推荐
7
in response to your request
应您的请求
8
at the request of
应……的请求
9
with great enthusiasm
满怀热情地
10
without reservation
毫无保留地
11
with full confidence
充满信心地
12
give my strongest recommendation
给予我最强烈的推荐
13
recommend somebody without hesitation
毫不犹豫地推荐某人
14
speak highly of
高度评价
15
think highly of
看重
16
sing high praise for
大力称赞
17
have a high opinion of
对……评价很高
18
be worthy of recommendation
值得推荐
19
be well qualified for
完全胜任
20
be a perfect candidate for
是……的理想人选
21
be an ideal choice for
是……的理想选择
22
prove to be
证明是
23
turn out to be
结果是
24
rank among the best
位居最优秀之列
25
stand out from
从……中脱颖而出
26
leave a deep impression on
给……留下深刻印象
27
make a lasting impression on
给……留下持久印象
28
win widespread recognition
赢得广泛认可
29
gain the trust of
获得……的信任
30
enjoy great popularity
广受欢迎
2. 第 31—60 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
31
one of the most outstanding students
最出色的学生之一
32
a student of great promise
很有前途的学生
33
a young man of rare talent
才华罕见的青年
34
a person of strong character
性格坚强的人
35
a model student
模范学生
36
a top student in our class
班里的尖子生
37
a leading figure in
……中的领军人物
38
an active member of
……的活跃成员
39
a faithful supporter of
……的坚定支持者
40
a driving force behind
……背后的推动力
41
be second to none
首屈一指
42
be beyond comparison
无与伦比
43
be hard to match
难以匹敌
44
be highly thought of by teachers
深受老师好评
45
be widely praised by classmates
广受同学称赞
46
be spoken well of by all
人人称道
47
in every respect
在各方面
48
in all aspects
在各个方面
49
from every point of view
从各个角度看
50
all things considered
综合考虑
51
as far as I am concerned
就我而言
52
to my knowledge
据我所知
53
in my judgment
依我判断
54
on the basis of my observation
根据我的观察
55
during the past three years
在过去三年里
56
over the years
多年来
57
since he joined us
自从他加入我们
58
from the very beginning
从一开始
59
time and again
一次又一次
60
more often than not
往往
3. 第 61—90 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
61
rank first in the class
在班里排名第一
62
rank among the top three
位列前三名
63
make steady progress
稳步进步
64
make remarkable progress in
在……方面进步显著
65
make rapid progress
进步神速
66
achieve outstanding results
取得优异成绩
67
achieve excellent academic results
学业成绩优异
68
get high marks in
在……中取得高分
69
score high in the exam
考试得分很高
70
maintain high grades
保持高分
71
keep a good academic record
保持良好学业记录
72
have a solid foundation in
在……方面基础扎实
73
lay a solid foundation for
为……打下坚实基础
74
have a good command of
熟练掌握
75
have a thorough grasp of
透彻掌握
76
master the basics of
掌握……的基本知识
77
be well grounded in
在……方面根基扎实
78
grasp new knowledge quickly
迅速掌握新知识
79
learn independently
独立学习
80
think critically
批判性思考
81
think out of the box
跳出框架思考
82
solve problems on his own
独立解决问题
83
work out solutions
想出解决办法
84
put forward new ideas
提出新想法
85
raise thoughtful questions
提出有深度的问题
86
go beyond the textbook
超出课本范围
87
read widely
广泛阅读
88
take detailed notes
记详尽的笔记
89
stay focused in class
课堂上保持专注
90
take an active part in class discussion
积极参与课堂讨论
4. 第 91—120 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
91
have a strong sense of responsibility
有强烈的责任感
92
have a strong sense of duty
有强烈的职责意识
93
have a good sense of humor
很有幽默感
94
show great interest in
对……表现出浓厚兴趣
95
show a talent for
显示出……的天赋
96
have a gift for
有……的天赋
97
be gifted in
在……方面有天赋
98
be skilled at
擅长
99
be expert at
精于
100
be good at communicating
善于沟通
101
be capable of
有能力做
102
be able to cope with
能应对
103
deal with pressure calmly
从容应对压力
104
rise to the challenge
迎难而上
105
take the initiative to
主动去做
106
take responsibility for
对……负责
107
shoulder heavy responsibilities
肩负重任
108
keep his word
信守承诺
109
stick to his principles
坚守原则
110
never let others down
从不让人失望
111
never give up easily
从不轻易放弃
112
work tirelessly
不知疲倦地工作
113
spare no effort to
不遗余力地
114
go all out to
全力以赴
115
put his heart into
全身心投入
116
devote himself to
致力于
117
be committed to
尽心于
118
be dedicated to
专注于
119
be devoted to
献身于
120
concentrate on
专注于
5. 第 121—150 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
121
organize an activity
组织活动
122
take charge of
负责
123
be in charge of
主管
124
play a leading role in
在……中起主导作用
125
play an active part in
积极参与
126
make a positive contribution to
为……做出积极贡献
127
lend a helping hand to
向……伸出援手
128
offer timely help
及时提供帮助
129
work closely with
与……密切合作
130
cooperate with others
与他人配合
131
get along well with
与……相处融洽
132
build team spirit
培养团队精神
133
bring out the best in others
激发他人最好的一面
134
set a good example for
为……树立榜样
135
serve as a bridge between
充当……之间的桥梁
136
smooth over differences
化解分歧
137
reach an agreement
达成一致
138
carry out a plan
执行计划
139
put a plan into practice
把计划付诸实施
140
make full preparations for
为……做充分准备
141
make careful arrangements
做周密安排
142
cope with emergencies
应对突发情况
143
handle unexpected situations
处理意外情况
144
keep everything in order
使一切井然有序
145
manage time wisely
合理安排时间
146
meet the deadline
按时完成
147
work under great pressure
在巨大压力下工作
148
adapt to new surroundings
适应新环境
149
fit in with the team
融入团队
150
win the support of
赢得……的支持
6. 第 151—180 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
151
win first prize
获得一等奖
152
take first place
夺得第一名
153
be awarded the title of
被授予……称号
154
be honored as
被授予……荣誉
155
receive an award for
因……获奖
156
be selected as
被选为
157
be chosen out of hundreds of applicants
从数百名申请者中选出
158
break the school record
打破校纪录
159
set a new record
创造新纪录
160
achieve great success
取得巨大成功
161
make outstanding achievements
取得杰出成就
162
reach the top
登顶
163
win the championship
夺得冠军
164
defeat strong rivals
战胜强劲对手
165
attract wide attention
引起广泛关注
166
gain wide recognition
获得广泛认可
167
earn high praise from
赢得……的高度赞扬
168
be praised by the judges
受到评委称赞
169
receive favorable comments
受到好评
170
be well received by
受到……欢迎
171
make a deep impression
留下深刻印象
172
live up to expectations
不负众望
173
exceed all expectations
超出所有预期
174
go from strength to strength
不断壮大
175
make a difference to
对……产生影响
176
bring benefits to
给……带来益处
177
open up new possibilities
开辟新的可能
178
lay a good foundation for
为……奠定良好基础
179
pave the way for
为……铺平道路
180
contribute greatly to
对……贡献巨大
7. 第 181—210 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
181
be honest and trustworthy
诚实守信
182
be warm-hearted and helpful
热心助人
183
be patient with others
对人耐心
184
be strict with himself
严于律己
185
be modest about his achievements
对自己的成就很谦虚
186
remain humble
保持谦逊
187
stay calm under pressure
压力下保持沉着
188
keep an optimistic attitude
保持乐观态度
189
face difficulties bravely
勇敢面对困难
190
stand up to challenges
勇敢迎接挑战
191
take things seriously
认真对待事情
192
pay attention to details
注重细节
193
be true to his word
言而有信
194
be ready to help at any time
随时乐于助人
195
be willing to share
乐于分享
196
be open to advice
乐于接受建议
197
accept criticism gracefully
坦然接受批评
198
learn from mistakes
从错误中学习
199
look on the bright side
看到光明的一面
200
keep a positive outlook
保持积极心态
201
be full of energy
精力充沛
202
be full of enthusiasm
热情洋溢
203
be curious about the world
对世界充满好奇
204
be eager to learn
渴望学习
205
be thirsty for knowledge
渴求知识
206
be devoted to his studies
专心于学业
207
be strict in his work
工作上严格
208
be careful with everything he does
做事认真仔细
209
treat others with respect
尊重他人
210
be considerate of others
体贴他人
8. 第 211—240 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
211
Dear Sir or Madam
尊敬的先生或女士
212
To whom it may concern
敬启者
213
I am writing to apply for
我写信申请
214
Thank you for your consideration
感谢您的考虑
215
I would appreciate it if
如果……我将不胜感激
216
I would be grateful if you could
如果您能……我将十分感激
217
Your early reply would be highly appreciated
如蒙早复,不胜感激
218
Looking forward to your reply
期待您的回复
219
I look forward to hearing from you soon
期待尽快收到您的回信
220
Please feel free to contact me
请随时与我联系
221
Should you need further information
若您需要更多信息
222
do not hesitate to contact me
请随时联系我
223
at your earliest convenience
在您方便时尽早
224
Enclosed please find
随信附上
225
Please find enclosed
请查收随信所附
226
for further details
了解详情
227
as follows
如下
228
in the attachment
在附件中
229
Yours sincerely
您诚挚的
230
Yours faithfully
您忠实的
231
Best regards
致以问候
232
With best wishes
顺致良好祝愿
233
Thank you in advance
先行致谢
234
I hope this letter finds you well
祝您一切安好
235
I am pleased to write to you
很高兴写信给您
236
It is a privilege to write to you
很荣幸写信给您
237
I take this opportunity to
我借此机会
238
on behalf of
代表
239
in the name of
以……的名义
240
as requested
按要求
9. 第 241—270 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
241
first of all
首先
242
to begin with
首先
243
above all
最重要的是
244
in the first place
首先
245
what is more
而且
246
in addition
此外
247
apart from that
除此之外
248
on top of that
更有甚者
249
in particular
尤其
250
for instance
例如
251
for one thing
一方面
252
for another
另一方面
253
on the one hand
一方面
254
on the other hand
另一方面
255
in contrast
相比之下
256
by comparison
比较而言
257
as a result
结果
258
as a consequence
因此
259
in consequence
结果
260
owing to
由于
261
thanks to
多亏
262
due to
由于
263
because of
因为
264
in terms of
在……方面
265
with regard to
关于
266
as for
至于
267
in this sense
在这个意义上
268
to sum up
总之
269
in short
简言之
270
in conclusion
最后
10. 第 271—300 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
271
to a great extent
在很大程度上
272
to some extent
某种程度上
273
in large measure
在很大程度上
274
far beyond
远远超出
275
by no means
决不
276
in no way
绝不
277
not in the least
一点也不
278
more than ever
比以往更
279
as never before
前所未有地
280
little by little
一点一点地
281
step by step
逐步地
282
one after another
一个接一个
283
day after day
日复一日
284
year after year
年复一年
285
now and then
不时
286
from time to time
间或
287
once in a while
偶尔
288
in the long run
从长远看
289
in the short term
短期内
290
sooner or later
迟早
291
at present
目前
292
at the moment
此刻
293
in the near future
不久的将来
294
over a long period
长期
295
within a short time
短期内
296
around the clock
全天候
297
all the year round
一年到头
298
in every way
在各方面
299
at all times
始终
300
under no circumstances
在任何情况下都不
【满分句型模板】
60 组句型按“凤头—猪肚—豹尾”三分配置:开篇 20 句解决“怎么起笔”,中间 20 句解决“怎么把理由写实”,结尾 20 句解决“怎么收得住”。每组附中文释义与用法提示,提示里写的是“这句话什么时候用、用了起什么作用”,仿写时应先看提示再造句。
开篇亮“凤头”
序号
句型(英文+中文释义)
用法提示
1
I am writing to recommend Li Hua, one of the most outstanding students in our school, for the exchange programme you offer.
我写信是为了向贵方推荐李华——我校最优秀的学生之一——参加你们提供的交流项目。
最稳的开篇:目的+对象+总体定位,一句话同时交代三件事,阅卷老师第一眼就能看到写信意图。
2
It is my great pleasure to recommend Zhang Wei, a student of rare talent and strong character, as a candidate for the position.
我很荣幸推荐张伟——才华罕见、品格坚强的学生——作为这一职位的人选。
正式书面语,适合写给陌生机构或上级;great pleasure 比 happy 更得体。
3
I am more than willing to write this letter in support of Wang Ming's application for your summer camp.
我非常愿意写这封信支持王明申请你们的夏令营。
in support of 是比 recommend 更书面的替换,可避免全文重复 recommend。
4
With full confidence, I recommend Chen Yu to you without any hesitation.
我满怀信心、毫不犹豫地向您推荐陈宇。
with full confidence 前置状语,态度鲜明,适合需要强调可信度的场合。
5
I consider it a great privilege to recommend my classmate Liu Yang for the scholarship you are offering.
能推荐我的同学刘洋申请贵方奖学金,我深感荣幸。
consider it a privilege to do 是高级结构,正式且不失温度。
6
I am writing to you to recommend Zhao Min, whom I have known well for three years, as a volunteer for your organization.
我写信向您推荐赵敏作为贵机构的志愿者——我已与她熟识三年。
whom I have known well for three years 用定语从句补足可信度,一句双用。
7
It is a real pleasure for me to recommend Sun Lei, who is widely regarded as a model student in our school.
推荐孙磊让我由衷高兴——他在全校被公认为模范学生。
who is widely regarded as 引用集体评价,比自己夸更有分量。
8
I am delighted to have this opportunity to recommend Han Xue for admission to your university.
我很高兴有此机会推荐韩雪进入贵校学习。
delighted to have this opportunity to 是礼貌的书面起笔。
9
Having taught Li Ming for three years, I feel fully qualified to recommend him for the competition.
教了李明三年,我完全有资格推荐他参加这项比赛。
现在分词短语开头,交代推荐人与被推荐人的关系,增强说服力。
10
As his head teacher, I am writing to give my strongest recommendation for Tang Rui's participation in the programme.
作为他的班主任,我写信全力推荐唐锐参加该项目。
As his head teacher 明确身份,这是推荐信最需要交代的前提。
11
Nothing would please me more than to recommend Feng Lin, an outstanding organizer and a warm-hearted friend.
没有什么比推荐冯林更让我高兴的了——他既是出色的组织者,也是热心的朋友。
Nothing would please me more than to do 正式且富有情感,适合开篇定调。
12
I am writing in response to your request for a reference letter concerning my student Guo Jing.
我写信回应您关于为我的学生郭静出具推荐信的请求。
in response to your request 显出来信有来由,文体逻辑更完整。
13
It gives me great pleasure to introduce Xu Ming, a young man whose diligence and talent have impressed everyone here.
介绍徐明让我十分愉快——这位年轻人的勤勉与才华深深打动了这里所有人。
whose 引导定语从句合并两个信息点,句子紧凑有力。
14
I have no hesitation in recommending Ma Lin as the ideal candidate for the post you advertised.
我毫不犹豫地推荐马林作为贵方所招聘职位的理想人选。
have no hesitation in doing 语气笃定,适合正式场合的强力推荐。
15
On behalf of our school, I am writing to recommend Zhou Xin for the national writing contest.
我代表全校写信推荐周欣参加全国写作大赛。
On behalf of 明确推荐主体,适合集体推荐或机构署名。
16
Should you be looking for a reliable and capable assistant, I would recommend Wei Fang without reservation.
若您正在寻找一位可靠能干的助手,我将毫无保留地推荐魏芳。
Should you be looking for 为倒装条件句,语气礼貌,适合求职类推荐。
17
I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for Qian Peng, whose performance in my class has been consistently excellent.
很高兴为钱鹏写这封推荐信——他在我课堂上的表现始终优异。
consistently excellent 强调长期稳定,比单纯的 excellent 更可信。
18
There is no one I would rather recommend for this position than my colleague Shen Yi.
这个职位上,没有人比我的同事沈怡更值得我推荐。
There is no one I would rather... than 是强调式比较结构,语气强烈。
19
I am honoured to recommend He Ping, a student who has never failed to impress me with her creativity.
我很荣幸推荐何萍——她的创造力从未让我失望。
never failed to impress 用双重否定表强调,语言地道。
20
It is with great enthusiasm that I recommend Deng Hao for the exchange programme starting next spring.
我满怀热情推荐邓浩参加明年春季开始的交流项目。
It is with great enthusiasm that 强调句型,把态度放在句首,节奏感强。
中间有“猪肚”
序号
句型(英文+中文释义)
用法提示
1
To begin with, his academic performance is second to none in our grade, which lays a solid foundation for further study.
首先,他的学业成绩在全年级首屈一指,这为后续学习打下坚实基础。
理由一开头句:观点(second to none)+影响(lays a solid foundation),一句完成论证。
2
What impresses me most is his ability to think critically and to raise thoughtful questions in class.
最打动我的是他批判性思考的能力,以及他在课堂上提出有深度问题的能力。
What impresses me most is 是最常用的理由引出方式,避免每段都写 He is...。
3
Not only does she excel academically, but she also takes an active part in community service.
她不仅学业出色,还积极参与社区服务。
Not only 置句首引起部分倒装,语法分与内容分同时拿到。
4
It is his strong sense of responsibility that makes him stand out from his peers.
正是强烈的责任感让他在同龄人中脱颖而出。
强调句型 It is... that 精准聚焦某一品质,比平铺直叙更有力。
5
Equally important is his willingness to help others, which has won him widespread recognition among classmates.
同样重要的是他乐于助人的意愿,这为他赢得了同学的广泛认可。
Equally important is 完全倒装,用于第二个理由的并列衔接。
6
A case in point is the campus reading festival he organized last term, which attracted over 500 participants.
一个典型例子是他上学期组织的校园读书节,吸引了五百多人参加。
A case in point is+具体事例+非限制性定语从句,是把空泛理由变具体的核心手法。
7
Whenever our class faces a tight deadline, he is the first to stay behind and work things out.
每当班级面临紧迫的截止时间,他总是第一个留下来把事情做好。
Whenever 引导时间状语从句,用“高频场景”证明品质,比形容词更有说服力。
8
His diligence is beyond doubt: he arrives at the library at seven every morning and never leaves before ten.
他的勤奋毋庸置疑:他每天七点到图书馆,从不在十点前离开。
冒号后直接给证据,用具体时间与行为替代形容词堆砌。
9
Moreover, his fluency in English enables him to communicate with foreign teachers without the slightest difficulty.
此外,他流利的英语使他能与外教毫无障碍地交流。
Moreover 承接第二重理由;enable somebody to do 表达“能力—结果”的因果链。
10
What sets him apart from other applicants is his remarkable teamwork spirit.
使他与其他申请者区别开来的是他非凡的团队精神。
What sets somebody apart from 是差异化表达的固定高级句型。
11
As the monitor of our class, he has proved himself capable of coordinating different opinions and reaching an agreement.
作为班长,他已证明自己能够协调不同意见并达成一致。
As+身份,用职务作证据背书;prove oneself capable of 表示“已被验证的能力”。
12
Thanks to his careful arrangements, the charity sale raised twice as much money as we had expected.
多亏他周密的安排,义卖筹到的钱是我们预期的两倍。
Thanks to 交代因果;twice as much as 用倍数结构量化成果。
13
Another quality that deserves mention is his perseverance in the face of setbacks.
另一点值得提及的品质是他面对挫折时的坚韧。
deserves mention 是书面语得体表达,避免 another is 的单调。
14
He never gives up easily; instead, he treats every failure as a chance to learn and improve.
他从不轻易放弃;相反,他把每次失败都当作学习与提升的机会。
分号+instead 构成正反对比,一句话写出态度与方法。
15
It should also be noted that he is unusually good at managing his time, which allows him to balance study and activities.
还应指出,他极善于管理时间,这使他能兼顾学业与活动。
It should also be noted that 适合补充第三重理由,语气客观。
16
Judging from his performance in the speech contest, he is fully capable of expressing ideas clearly under pressure.
从他在演讲比赛中的表现看,他完全能在压力下清晰表达观点。
Judging from 引出依据,是评估型理由的常用开头。
17
Not surprisingly, his efforts have borne fruit: he won first prize in the provincial English competition last year.
不出所料,他的努力结出了果实:去年他获得省级英语竞赛一等奖。
bear fruit 比喻“结出成果”;Not surprisingly 表示结果符合预期。
18
What is more, his optimistic attitude tends to lift the spirits of everyone around him.
而且,他乐观的态度往往能鼓舞身边每一个人。
What is more 递进;tend to 语气缓和,避免绝对化。
19
In terms of personal qualities, he is honest, modest and always true to his word.
就个人品质而言,他诚实、谦逊,且总是言而有信。
In terms of 明确论述维度,三个形容词并列收束,节奏干净。
20
Were he given this opportunity, he would undoubtedly make full use of it and live up to your expectations.
如果给他这个机会,他无疑会充分利用并不负您的期望。
Were he given 为虚拟条件句倒装,常用于主体段末尾,向结尾自然过渡。
结尾有“豹尾”
序号
句型(英文+中文释义)
用法提示
1
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation and sincerely hope you will give his application favourable consideration.
因此,我毫无保留地推荐他,并真心希望您能优先考虑他的申请。
Therefore+重申+希望,是最标准的结尾三分结构(结论—重复—请求)。
2
I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
如果您能将我的推荐纳入考虑,我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it if 是最礼貌的请求句式,比 Please consider 更得体。
3
I am fully convinced that he will prove to be a valuable member of your team.
我深信他会成为贵团队中宝贵的一员。
prove to be 表示“最终被证明”,比 will be 更有分寸。
4
Should you require further information about him, please feel free to contact me at any time.
若您需要关于他的更多信息,请随时与我联系。
Should you require 倒装+please feel free to,礼貌且留出沟通空间。
5
I am confident that your decision to accept him will turn out to be a wise one.
我相信您接收他的决定最终会被证明是明智的。
把“选择他”转化为“您的决定是明智的”,间接而有力的收束。
6
Thank you for your time and consideration, and I look forward to your early reply.
感谢您的时间与考虑,期待您的早日回复。
Thank you for your time and consideration 是英文推荐信的必备客套。
7
I sincerely hope my recommendation will be of some help to your decision-making.
我真心希望我的推荐对您的决策有所助益。
be of some help 是“有所帮助”的书面表达,比 help you 更委婉。
8
No one is better qualified than he is, and I am sure you will not regret choosing him.
没有人比他更合格,我相信您不会为选择他而后悔。
比较级表最高级+双重保证,语气强而不失分寸。
9
With his diligence and talent, he will undoubtedly bring fresh energy to your programme.
以他的勤勉与才华,他无疑会为贵项目注入新的活力。
With+名词短语前置,交代条件,句尾落点放在“贡献”上。
10
It would be a great honour for me if my words could add weight to his application.
如果我的话能为他的申请增添分量,我将深感荣幸。
add weight to 是“为……增添分量”的地道搭配,适合谦逊型结尾。
11
In a word, he is an ideal candidate, and I recommend him with all my heart.
总之,他是理想人选,我由衷推荐他。
In a word 收束全文,with all my heart 表达真诚。
12
I have every reason to believe that he deserves this opportunity more than anyone else.
我完全有理由相信,他比任何人都更值得这个机会。
have every reason to believe 语气笃定,比 I think 更有分量。
13
Please accept my sincere recommendation, and I wish him every success in the selection.
请接受我诚挚的推荐,并祝愿他在选拔中一切顺利。
wish somebody every success 是标准祝语,适合选拔类场景。
14
I hope you will find this letter helpful and give his application your favourable consideration.
希望这封信对您有所帮助,并请您优先考虑他的申请。
favourable consideration 是英文推荐信中的固定礼貌措辞。
15
Rest assured that he will spare no effort to meet your expectations once admitted.
请放心,一旦被录取,他会不遗余力地达到您的期望。
Rest assured that 表示“请放心”,用于替被推荐人作出保证。
16
Thank you again for your patience, and I am always at your service for further details.
再次感谢您的耐心,如需更多细节,我随时为您效劳。
at your service 是书信体礼貌收尾,适合正式推荐。
17
I am sure that whoever reads this letter will share my confidence in him.
我相信任何读到这封信的人都会与我一样对他有信心。
whoever 引导主语从句,从“我个人判断”扩展到“普遍共识”。
18
Looking back, recommending him is one of the easiest decisions I have ever made.
回头看来,推荐他是我做过的最轻松的决定之一。
one of the easiest decisions I have ever made 用最高级+现在完成时,情感真实。
19
I do hope this letter will receive your favourable consideration, and I wish you all the best.
衷心希望这封信能得到您的优先考虑,并祝您一切顺利。
I do hope 用 do 强调语气;wish you all the best 收尾得体。
20
Enclosed is his resume for your reference, and I remain at your disposal for any questions.
随信附上他的简历供您参考,如有任何问题,我随时听候您的安排。
Enclosed is 为倒装结构,用于交代附件;remain at your disposal 表示“听候安排”。
【高频避错清单】
下列 50 条来自真实作文中的高频错误,按“错误表达—正确表达—错因”三栏(连序号共四列)列出。错因一栏标注了类别(搭配、时态、非谓语、中式英语、格式等),便于归类记忆。建议两天过一遍,每天 25 条,先遮住右两栏自测,再对照订正。
序号
错误表达
正确表达
错因归类与说明
1
I very recommend him to you.
I strongly recommend him to you.
副词误用|very 不能修饰动词,程度副词应换 strongly / highly。
2
I am write to recommend Li Hua.
I am writing to recommend Li Hua.
时态结构|am 后必须接现在分词,be + doing 才构成进行时。
3
I recommend him as the monitor of our class last year.
I recommend him as…(推荐现在)/ He served as the monitor last year.
时间冲突|推荐是当下的行为,不能与过去时间状语连用。
4
He is one of the most outstanding student in our class.
He is one of the most outstanding students in our class.
名词数|one of the + 最高级 + 复数名词,student 必须加 s。
5
He very likes helping others.
He likes helping others very much.
语序|very 不能直接修饰动词,应放句末 very much 或改用 greatly。
6
I have known him since three years.
I have known him for three years.
介词|since 接时间点,for 接时间段。
7
He is good in English and maths.
He is good at English and maths.
搭配|be good at 是固定搭配,表示“擅长”。
8
He always takes part in many activities actively.
He takes an active part in various activities.
搭配与冗余|take part in 不与 actively 叠加,规范表达为 take an active part in。
9
I write this letter for recommend him.
I am writing this letter to recommend him.
非谓语|介词 for 后不能直接接动词原形,目的用不定式 to do。
10
He has a lot of abilities and qualities.
He has many strengths and fine qualities.
搭配|ability 与 quality 不宜用 a lot of 修饰,且 abilities 多指具体技能。
11
He is a person who is full of responsibility.
He is a person with a strong sense of responsibility.
搭配|“有责任感”固定表达为 have a sense of responsibility。
12
He can solve the problem very easy.
He can solve the problem very easily.
词性|修饰动词须用副词 easily,不能用形容词 easy。
13
His English is very excellent.
His English is excellent.
程度重复|excellent 本身含“极好”,不再加 very。
14
He is more taller than any other student.
He is taller than any other student.
比较级|more 与 -er 不能同时使用,双重比较级错误。
15
He doesn't afraid of difficulties.
He isn't afraid of difficulties.
助动词|afraid 是形容词,否定需用 be 动词,不用 doesn't。
16
He is used to get up early.
He is used to getting up early.
非谓语|be used to 后接动名词,表示“习惯于”。
17
I suggest him to join the club.
I suggest that he (should) join the club.
句型|suggest 不接 sb to do,须用 that 从句或 suggest doing。
18
He spent three years to learn English.
He spent three years learning English.
句型|spend time (in) doing sth,不用 to do。
19
The reason why I recommend him is because he is diligent.
The reason why I recommend him is that he is diligent.
关联词|the reason is that…,reason 与 because 不能重复。
20
He is an outstanding student with many achievements in study.
He is an outstanding student with many academic achievements.
搭配|“学业成就”用 academic achievements,不用 in study。
21
I am looking forward to hear from you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
非谓语|look forward to 中 to 是介词,后接动名词。
22
I would appreciate if you could consider my recommendation.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
形式宾语|appreciate 后必须带形式宾语 it。
23
Please contact with me if necessary.
Please contact me if necessary.
搭配|contact 作及物动词时不加 with。
24
He has joined the army for two years.
He has been in the army for two years.
延续性动词|join 是短暂动词,不能与 for 时间段连用。
25
He is the person whom I think is most suitable.
He is the person who I think is most suitable.
关系代词|从句中作主语须用 who,不用 whom。
26
It is him who helped me a lot.
It is he who helped me a lot.
强调句|强调主语时用主格 he。
27
He always helps others without ask for return.
He always helps others without asking for anything in return.
非谓语与搭配|介词 without 后接动名词;in return 为固定搭配。
28
I can assure you that he will not let you down, isn't it?
I can assure you that he will not let you down, won't he?
反义疑问|主句为 he will…,附加问句须用 won't he。
29
His performance is better than anyone in the class.
His performance is better than that of anyone else in the class.
比较对象不一致|比较成绩须用 that of,且排除自身用 anyone else。
30
There are many informations in his resume.
There is much information in his resume.
不可数名词|information 不可数,无复数形式,谓语用 is。
31
He gave me many advices on my study.
He gave me much advice on my study.
不可数名词|advice 不可数,可数化应说 some pieces of advice。
32
I am writing to recommend you Li Hua.
I am writing to recommend Li Hua to you.
语序|recommend sb to sb,被推荐人是直接宾语。
33
He is very worth recommending.
He is well worth recommending.
搭配|worth 前用 well 修饰,不用 very;也可用 worthy of recommendation。
34
He is a student of our school, and he is study hard.
He is a student of our school and studies hard.
词性与句子结构|study 是动词,不能再加 is;并列句可合并。
35
In my opinion, I think he is the best choice.
In my opinion, he is the best choice.
语义重复|In my opinion 与 I think 择一即可。
36
He has a good command in English.
He has a good command of English.
搭配|have a good command of 为固定搭配,介词用 of。
37
He is familiar to the school rules.
He is familiar with the school rules.
搭配|人作主语用 be familiar with,物作主语才用 be familiar to。
38
Because he is diligent, so he succeeds.
Because he is diligent, he succeeds.
关联词重复|because 与 so 不能同句并用。
39
Although he is young, but he is mature.
Although he is young, he is mature.
关联词重复|although 与 but 不能同句并用。
40
He majors in English and he good at it.
He majors in English and is good at it.
谓语缺失|并列谓语第二个分句缺 be 动词。
41
I hope you can considerate my recommendation.
I hope you can consider my recommendation.
词性|情态动词后接动词原形,considerate 是形容词。
42
He is the most diligent student I have ever seen in my life.
He is one of the most diligent students I have ever seen.
逻辑绝对化|推荐信忌“史上最”,改为 one of the most 更可信。
43
He is very diligent, very honest, very kind, very helpful.
He is diligent, honest, kind and helpful.
表达单调|连续 very 堆砌显得词汇贫乏,并列形容词语序也需按“短—长”排列。
44
I recommend him because he is good.
I recommend him because he has a strong sense of responsibility.
内容空泛|理由必须具体可验证,good 属于无效评价。
45
He is a boy. He is 17. He is tall. He is diligent.
He is a diligent seventeen-year-old boy of medium height.
句式单一|短句罗列须合并,避免流水账。
46
I am writing to you for the purpose of recommending him to you.
I am writing to recommend him to you.
冗余|for the purpose of 与 to 重复,直接删去。
47
As we all know that he is an excellent student.
As we all know, he is an excellent student.
句式杂糅|as we all know 后不能接 that 从句。
48
Yours sincerely, Li Hua. Dear Mr. Smith, ...
Dear Mr. Smith, ... Yours sincerely, Li Hua.
书信格式|称呼在前、正文居中、结束语与签名在后,顺序不可颠倒。
49
He is a boy who I have known him for three years.
He is a boy whom I have known for three years.
关系代词冗余|从句中已有宾语 him,须删去,关系词用 whom。
50
He is not only good at English but also good at maths.
He is good at both English and maths.
结构冗余|重复 good at 显得笨重,改用 both... and... 更简洁。
【满分作文模板】
下面的模板不是让人照抄,而是给出一个“填空骨架”:每一处空格都标注了该填什么、有哪几种替换。考试时先按骨架把要点填满,再回头替换其中一两处句式,20 分钟内即可成文。
(一)通用填空模板
1. 称呼 Dear ______,
填写提示:写给机构:Dear Sir or Madam,;写给个人:Dear Mr./Ms. ______,;写给朋友:Dear ______,
2. 首段第一句 I am writing to recommend ______, ______(身份或同位语), for ______(推荐去向).
填写提示:推荐去向必须具体:the summer camp / the position / your university / the volunteer programme
3. 首段第二句 Having known him/her for ______, I am fully convinced that he/she is ______(总体定位).
填写提示:定位词:an ideal candidate / a student of great promise / a young man of rare talent
4. 主体段第一句 To begin with, ______(理由一:能力或学业), which ______(带来的结果).
填写提示:理由一建议写与推荐去向最匹配的能力,句末用 which 从句交代结果
5. 主体段第二句 A case in point is ______(具体事例), which ______(效果或影响).
填写提示:事例要给数字、场景或转变,如 attracted over 500 participants
6. 主体段第三句 What is more, ______(理由二:品质或协作), and he/she ______(证据).
填写提示:理由二写责任感、团队精神、乐于助人等可验证品质
7. 主体段第四句 Besides, ______(理由三:与去向匹配的特长), which makes him/her ______(差异化优势).
填写提示:篇幅紧张时可省,但需保证理由不少于两条
8. 末段第一句 Therefore, I recommend him/her without reservation and sincerely hope ______.
填写提示:回扣首段定位词,形成首尾呼应
9. 末段第二句 I would appreciate it if you could ______.
填写提示:take my recommendation into consideration / give his application favourable consideration
10. 末段第三句 Should you need further information, please ______.
填写提示:feel free to contact me at any time / do not hesitate to write to me
11. 结束语与签名 Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
填写提示:结束语与签名各占一行;给朋友可用 Best regards
(二)使用注意
模板只解决“结构”,不解决“内容”。空格里必须填具体信息,尤其是主体段的“事例”,否则模板会写成一篇空话连篇的推荐信,分数反而低于自由发挥。
同一篇里高级结构不超过三处,位置建议:首段一处分词或定语从句,主体段一处倒装或强调句,末段一处条件句或虚拟语气。分布均匀,比集中堆叠更像“自然写出来的”。
背模板要背“功能句”,不要背整段。功能句是 I would appreciate it if you could…,整段背诵一旦题目情境变化就会失效。
【模板示例】
(一)题目
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris 计划来你校参加暑期汉语夏令营,需要一名学生助教。请你写一封推荐信,向夏令营负责人 Mr. Brown 推荐你的同学王明,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍王明的汉语水平与性格优势;3)表达你的期望。词数 100 左右。
(二)范文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to recommend Wang Ming, one of the most responsible students in our class, as a teaching assistant for your summer Chinese camp. Having worked with him on several projects, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate.
To begin with, his Chinese is second to none in our grade: he won first prize in the city writing contest twice, which enables him to explain difficult characters clearly. What is more, he is patient and warm-hearted. Last summer he spent a month helping three British exchange students with their spoken Chinese, and all passed the final test with high marks. Besides, his fluent English allows him to serve as a bridge between the camp and the volunteers.
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation. I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)逐段拆解
段落
写了什么
做对了什么
首段
点明推荐目的(夏令营助教)+被推荐人身份(班里最有责任心的学生之一)+定位(理想人选)
两句话完成三个动作;同位语交代身份;ideal candidate 为全文定调
主体段
理由一:汉语水平(连续两年市级写作一等奖);理由二:耐心热心(整月辅导三名英国交换生,全部高分通过);理由三:英语流利(可充当营地与志愿者的桥梁)
三条理由分别对应“能力—品质—匹配度”;每条都带数字或场景;用 which 从句把证据连接到结果
末段
重申推荐+希望考虑+客套与落款
Therefore 收口,without reservation 表态明确,结句礼貌而不啰嗦
范文约 150 词。若考卷限定 100 词,按此顺序压缩:先删 Besides 一句(约 18 词),再把“三名交换生”缩为“一名交换生”,最后删掉 Thank you for your time and consideration。
值得模仿的三处:首段的现在分词短语(Having worked with him…)、主体段的 which 非限制性定语从句、末段的 I would appreciate it if…。三处分属三段,正好构成“分布均匀”的高级结构。
前面的语料与模板解决“有什么可写”,本部分解决“怎么在考场里稳定地写出来”。七条技巧按时间顺序排列:从审题到成篇,再到卷面与考前训练。
审题三分钟,胜过写作十分钟。拿到题目先做三件事:圈出三条中文提示并编号;写出推荐去向与收信人;判断称呼语。这三步做完,文章的结构其实已经定了。凡是在考场上先动笔后找要点的,几乎都会漏要点。
先写要点,后加修饰。第一遍用最简单的句子把三条要点写全,第二遍再回头替换句式和词汇。顺序反了,容易为了凑一个漂亮句而挤掉一条要点,得不偿失。
一条理由配一件事实。这是提分效率最高的单一动作。任何形容词后面都要追问“有没有事例”,没有就换掉。数字、时间、场景、转变,是最省词也最可信的四种证据。
高级结构“三段各一处”。首段用分词短语或定语从句交代身份,主体段用倒装或强调句突出品质,末段用条件句或虚拟语气收束。三处足够,多了易错,少了平。
控制词数的实用办法。先数句不数词:首段 2 句、主体段 3—4 句、末段 2 句,共 7—8 句,通常落在 90—110 词。写完若超词,优先删客套与重复形容词,保留全部证据句。
卷面与格式的隐形分。称呼顶格加逗号,正文每段首行缩进,结束语与签名各占一行;不使用缩写形式(don't、I'm),不用感叹号堆情绪。格式零失误,是稳拿基础档的前提。
考前七天的训练配比。三天专项:一天背功能句,一天练理由具体化(只写主体段),一天做整篇限时;两天改写:把旧作中的形容词全部换成事实;两天模考:按考试时长完整写三篇不同情境的推荐信,重点复盘漏要点与搭配错误。
15 道题覆盖夏令营、大学申请、交换生、社团主持、辩论赛、志愿服务、才艺比赛、科创大赛、学生会竞选、迎新向导、马拉松志愿、文学社、环保项目、实习岗位、国际支教十五种常见情境,每题的推荐去向、推荐人身份、收信人各不相同。建议按“限时 20 分钟成文—对照参考答案—只改一处”的顺序使用,参考答案均控制在 150 词左右。
题目 1
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校将选派一名学生参加在英国剑桥举办的国际中学生夏令营。请你给夏令营负责人 Mr. Johnson 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学张伟,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的英语水平与组织能力;3)表达你的期望。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to recommend Zhang Wei, one of the most outstanding students in our school, for your summer camp in Cambridge. Having taught him for three years, I am fully convinced that he is an ideal candidate.
To begin with, his English is second to none in our grade. Last year he won first prize in the provincial English speech contest, which shows that he can express complex ideas clearly and confidently. What is more, he is a natural organizer. As monitor, he planned our school's English Week, which attracted over 600 participants and twelve foreign teachers. Besides, he is curious about other cultures and always eager to learn, so he will benefit most from an international environment.
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation. I would appreciate it if you could consider his application, and I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:三条理由分别落在英语水平、组织能力、文化好奇心,与“国际夏令营”这一去向高度匹配;理由一用竞赛奖项,理由二用数字,理由三用性格描述,证据类型不重复。
题目 2
写作任务:假定你是你校英语教师李华,你的学生陈宇申请了国外某大学的工程专业。请你给该校招生委员会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明你与他的关系及推荐目的;2)介绍他的学业表现与科研兴趣;3)表达你对他被录取的信心。词数 120 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Admissions Committee,
I am writing to recommend Chen Yu for admission to your undergraduate programme in engineering. As his physics teacher for three years, I have watched him grow into one of the most promising students I have ever taught.
Academically, he ranks among the top three in our grade and has maintained an average of ninety-five in mathematics and physics. What sets him apart, however, is his genuine passion for research. Last term he designed a solar-powered model car for the school science fair and explained its energy system to visiting professors with remarkable clarity. A case in point is his science report, which was selected as a model paper for the whole grade. Besides, he works well in a team: his project group finished first in the city innovation contest.
I am confident that he will prove to be a valuable member of your community. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:写给招生委员会必须更正式、更权威:开篇明确师生关系与年限,主体段用分数与项目双重证据,结尾用 prove to be a valuable member 的承诺式表达。
题目 3
写作任务:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter 想来你校做一学期的交换生,需要一名本校学生作为他的学习伙伴。请你给该校国际部负责人 Ms. Green 写一封推荐信,推荐你的好友王芳。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍王芳的性格与帮助他人的经历;3)说明她为什么适合这一角色。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Ms. Green,
I am writing to recommend Wang Fang as a study partner for the exchange student from Britain next term. I have known her since we entered this school, and I cannot think of anyone more suitable for this role.
To begin with, she is patient and warm-hearted. Last year she spent two months helping a newcomer from Sichuan get used to our school life, and the girl soon became one of the most active members in her class. What is more, her English is fluent enough for daily communication: she has acted as a volunteer guide for three international conferences held in our city. Besides, she is curious about other cultures and never short of topics to talk about, which makes it easy for a foreign student to feel at home.
Therefore, I recommend her without reservation. I would be grateful if you could take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:本题的“角色”是学习伙伴,因此理由必须围绕“能否让交换生安心”:耐心、英语沟通、文化好奇心三点缺一不可。
题目 4
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校英语角正在招募新一期主持人,要求申请者英语口语流利、有活动组织经验。请你给英语角负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学李雷。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的口语水平与主持经历;3)表达你对他胜任该工作的信心。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to recommend Li Lei for the position of host of our English Corner. Having worked with him in the club for two years, I am sure he is the right person for this job.
First of all, his spoken English is excellent. He has hosted the weekly discussion for eight months, and attendance has risen from about thirty to over eighty students, which speaks volumes for his ability to hold an audience. What is more, he is quick-minded and humorous: whenever a discussion falls flat, he raises a thought-provoking question and gets everyone talking again. Besides, he is responsible and always arrives half an hour early to test the equipment and prepare materials.
I am fully convinced that he will do an excellent job. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:主持人类推荐的证据最好是“可量化的效果”,如参与人数从 30 涨到 80,一句 speaks volumes 就把数字变成了评价。
题目 5
写作任务:假定你是李华,你班同学赵敏将代表学校参加市中学生辩论赛。请你以班主任的身份给大赛组委会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的逻辑思维与临场应变能力;3)说明她为此做的准备。词数 120 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Organizing Committee,
As head teacher of Class Three, I am writing to recommend Zhao Min as our school's representative for the city debating competition.
To begin with, her logical thinking is remarkable. In last term's school debate, she dismantled the opposing team's three main arguments within four minutes, which won her the title of Best Debater. What is more, she stays calm under pressure. When our team lost the first round, she reorganized our strategy overnight and led us to victory in the following two rounds. Besides, her preparation has been thorough: over the past month she has read more than twenty articles on the topic and written sixty pages of notes, and she practises speaking for an hour every evening.
I have every reason to believe that she will do our school proud. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:以班主任身份推荐,语气应客观而权威:用“四分钟内拆解三个论点”“六十页笔记”这类量化细节,比任何形容词都更能说明实力。
题目 6
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校与社区敬老院合作开展志愿服务,需要一名学生负责人。请你给社区服务中心的负责人 Ms. Wang 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学孙浩。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他与老人相处的经历;3)说明他的组织与协调能力。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Ms. Wang,
I am writing to recommend Sun Hao as the student leader for the volunteer programme at your nursing home. I have worked with him in our school's volunteer team for two years.
To begin with, he is patient and gentle with elderly people. Every Saturday morning he visits Room 302 to read newspapers and chat with an eighty-year-old man who has few visitors, and the old man now calls him “my young friend”. What is more, he is good at organizing. Last winter he arranged a New Year party for forty residents, coordinating thirty volunteers, gifts and transport, and everything went smoothly. Besides, he keeps records of every visit carefully, which helps our team plan better. He is also the person teachers turn to when a schedule needs reorganizing.
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:写“与老人相处”的理由,最好的证据是一个具体的人和一句原话(“my young friend”),细节比概括更动人。
题目 7
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校将举办校园歌手大赛,你希望推荐你的同学周悦参赛。请你给大赛组委会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的演唱水平与舞台表现;3)说明她的参赛态度。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Organizing Committee,
I am writing to recommend Zhou Yue, a classmate of mine, for the singing contest to be held next month. I have listened to her sing for three years, and I believe she deserves a place on your stage.
To begin with, her voice is truly remarkable. She has taken formal singing lessons for six years and won second prize in the district youth competition last year. What is more, she performs confidently on stage: in the school art festival she sang a folk song in front of more than a thousand people, and the audience sang along with her. Besides, she takes the contest seriously. She practises for two hours every day and has already chosen a song that fits the theme of this year's event.
I sincerely hope you will give her this opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:才艺类推荐要写“训练年限+比赛成绩+现场反应”三层,其中“观众跟着唱”是最有画面感的一句。
题目 8
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校高二学生林川参加了青少年科技创新大赛。请你以指导老师的身份给大赛组委会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的作品与创新点;3)说明他在研究过程中的表现。词数 120 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to recommend Lin Chuan's project for the Youth Science and Technology Innovation Contest. As his instructor for the past year, I have followed every stage of his work.
His project, a low-cost sensor that warns farmers of soil drought, grew out of a real problem he observed in his grandfather's field. What makes it stand out is its practicality: the device costs less than thirty yuan and has been tested in three villages, where it helped farmers save water for two consecutive seasons. During the research he showed remarkable perseverance. When the first version failed, he spent two months learning programming by himself and rebuilt the whole system. Besides, he recorded every experiment carefully in a notebook of over a hundred pages.
I strongly recommend his work for your contest. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:科创类推荐的关键是“从真实问题出发+可验证的测试结果”,成本与受益农户数量就是最硬的证据。
题目 9
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校学生会即将换届,你希望推荐你的同学郑凯竞选学生会主席。请你给学生会指导老师 Mr. Chen 写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的领导与协调能力;3)介绍他为同学做的实事。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Chen,
I am writing to recommend Zheng Kai as a candidate for the president of our Student Union. Having served with him on the committee for two years, I know his work better than anyone else.
To begin with, he has strong leadership skills. As vice president, he led a team of twenty students to reorganize the school library, and the new shelving system cut borrowing time by half. What is more, he is good at listening. Before every decision he collects opinions through an online survey, which last term drew over four hundred responses. Besides, he focuses on practical matters: he persuaded the school to add ten water dispensers and to extend the canteen's opening hours by one hour.
I am confident that he will serve our students well. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:竞选类推荐必须落到“为同学做了什么实事”,十台饮水机、食堂延长一小时,比“他有领导力”有力得多。
题目 10
写作任务:假定你是李华,下学期将有一批英国中学生来你校交流,学校需要招募新生迎新志愿者。请你给学校学生处的张老师写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学马莉。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的沟通能力与服务经历;3)表达你的期望。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am writing to recommend Ma Li as a volunteer guide for the British students who will visit our school next term. I have known her for three years and have no hesitation in recommending her.
To begin with, she communicates easily with strangers. Last summer she worked as a guide at the city museum, where she explained local history to over fifty foreign visitors and received favorable comments in the visitors' book. What is more, she is thoughtful about details: when a guest once felt unwell, she found a quiet room and stayed with him until the doctor arrived. Besides, her English is fluent, and she has read widely about British culture, so she can answer questions about our school and city confidently.
I hope you will give her this chance. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:“志愿服务+跨文化沟通”题最忌只写“英语好”,应补一件具体服务事例(博物馆讲解、照顾不适的客人)证明可靠。
题目 11
写作任务:假定你是李华,你市将举办国际马拉松赛,需要招募志愿者。请你给赛事组委会写一封推荐信,推荐你的好友邓超。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的体能与志愿经历;3)说明他能胜任的工作。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to recommend Deng Chao as a volunteer for the international marathon to be held in our city this October.
To begin with, he is in excellent physical condition. He runs five kilometres every morning and finished last year's city half marathon in one hour and fifty minutes, so he can easily handle long hours of standing and walking. What is more, he has rich volunteer experience: for two years he has worked at the water station of a local cycling race, where he handed out bottles to more than three hundred riders without a single complaint. Besides, he speaks simple English and is always calm in a crowd, which makes him suitable for the guidance points near the start line.
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:赛事类推荐的核心是“体能+经验+可胜任岗位”,末尾主动指明适合的岗位(起点引导),会让推荐更专业。
题目 12
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校文学社即将改选社长,你希望推荐你的同学冯洁。请你给文学社指导老师 Ms. Liu 写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的阅读与写作水平;3)介绍她的社团工作经历。词数 120 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Ms. Liu,
I am writing to recommend Feng Jie as the next president of our Literature Club. Having been her partner on the editorial board for a year, I am convinced that she is the best choice.
To begin with, she reads and writes remarkably well. She has published four essays in the city youth magazine and won second prize in the provincial writing contest last spring. What is more, she is an experienced organizer. As editor of our club journal, she redesigned the layout and introduced a column for students' letters, and the readership doubled within one term. Besides, she is patient with new members: every Friday she stays behind to read their drafts and mark them sentence by sentence, and three of them have since had their work published.
I sincerely hope she will be given this opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:社团负责人推荐要兼顾“专业水平+组织成果+带人能力”,最后一点常被忽略,却是社长最核心的素质。
题目 13
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校将组织学生参加“保护母亲河”环保公益项目。请你给项目负责人 Ms. Taylor 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学许诺。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的环保经历与相关知识;3)说明她的团队协作能力。词数 100 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Ms. Taylor,
I am writing to recommend Xu Nuo as a member of your “Protect Our River” programme. She is one of the few students in our school who has turned concern for the environment into action.
To begin with, she has real experience. For two years she has joined the monthly river cleanup in our district, and she has collected data on plastic waste for a school report that was shown to all classes. What is more, she knows the science behind the problem: she has read several books on water pollution and can explain how micro-plastics enter the food chain in simple words. Besides, she works well with others. Last spring she organized forty classmates to plant trees along the riverbank, arranging tools, transport and safety in advance.
Therefore, I recommend her without reservation. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:环保类推荐要有“行动+知识”两条腿:只有热情没有数据,容易流于口号;能解释微塑料进入食物链,才显得可信。
题目 14
写作任务:假定你是李华,你所在的公司正在招聘暑期实习生。请你给公司人事部经理 Mr. Wang 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学顾晨。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的专业能力与实习经历;3)说明他的工作态度。词数 120 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to recommend Gu Chen for the summer internship in your marketing department. We studied together at university and later worked on the same student project, so I know his abilities at first hand.
Professionally, he has a solid foundation. He majored in marketing and graduated among the top ten of his class, and he is skilled at data analysis: last term he built a simple model that predicted ticket sales for our campus concert with an error of less than five percent. What is more, he has relevant experience. During last winter vacation he worked for a small advertising firm, where he wrote eight social media posts and two of them were adopted for a real campaign. Besides, his attitude is admirable: he is punctual, meticulous with details and never leaves a task half done.
I would appreciate it if you could consider his application. Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:职场类推荐语域最正式:用“误差小于百分之五”“八篇文案两篇被采用”这类可核验成果,避免“他很好学”式评价。
题目 15
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校与国外一所中学合作开展国际志愿者项目,需要选派学生赴当地支教两周。请你给项目办公室写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学唐诗。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的教学经验与跨文化沟通能力;3)说明她应对困难的能力。词数 120 左右。
参考答案:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to recommend Tang Shi for the two-week teaching programme in your partner school. As her class teacher, I have seen how she turns ideas into action.
To begin with, she has real teaching experience. For a year she has tutored two primary school children in English every weekend, and both moved up more than ten places in their class. What is more, she communicates across cultures with ease: she has hosted four video exchanges with our partner school abroad, and the foreign students described her as “the friendliest host we have met”. Besides, she handles difficulties calmly. When a planned activity once fell through at the last minute, she redesigned the whole lesson in one evening and the children enjoyed it even more.
I recommend her without hesitation. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评:国际项目推荐要回应“离家两周能否适应”的潜在顾虑,因此“应对突发”的一条不能省,且要给出具体应变实例。
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模板05 推荐信
01 题型解读
02 答题模板构建
03 满分词汇模板
04 满分句型模板
05 满分作文模板
06 知识迁移强化
【读者注意】
这份讲义按“识题—立骨—备料—造句—避坑—成篇—示范—技法—实战”的顺序编排,九个部分各自独立,又构成一条完整的备考链条。若时间充裕,建议按顺序通读一遍,把第二部分的框架与第四部分的句型抄成一页纸带在身边;若临近考试,可直接跳到第二部分、第五部分与第九部分,用最短的路径完成“会写、写对、写快”。
下表给出各部分的功能与建议投入时间,可作为一轮复习的进度表使用。
部分
功能定位
关键产出
建议投入
一、识高考
明确考什么、怎么评分
命题特点与评分维度对照表
40 分钟通读
二、善总结
建立三段式写作框架
每段的功能与写作动作
60 分钟精读并抄框架
三、满分词汇
积累主题语料
500 词 + 300 短语
分五天,每天记两组
四、满分句型
积累可迁移句式
开篇 20 + 中间 20 + 结尾 20
分三天,每天一组并仿写
五、避错清单
清除高频硬伤
50 条错误对照
两天,每天 25 条并自测
六、满分模板
获得可填空骨架
一套通用模板
30 分钟,填三遍
七、模板示例
看见模板的落地效果
一篇完整范文与拆解
30 分钟,逐段对照
八、技巧总结
把方法固化为习惯
七条可执行技巧
20 分钟
九、实战训练
限时成文
15 题及答案
每两天一题,限时 20 分钟
推荐信是高考英语书面表达(应用文写作)中出场频率最高的体裁之一。它在题干中往往以“假定你是李华,你的英国朋友/外教/校学生会需要……请写一封推荐信”的形式出现,看似只是“夸人”,实则是把“人际评价”压缩进 80—120 词的严格框架内。本部分先解决“考什么、怎么考”,为后续模板提供判断依据。
(一)考查定位与题型分布
1. 出场频率:应用文中的“常驻题型”。从近十年全国卷及各省市自主命题卷看,书面表达的应用文部分稳定覆盖书信、通知、演讲稿、报道、倡议书五类,推荐信则常与“申请信”“邀请信”交替出现,几乎每隔一两年就会以“推荐同学参加夏令营”“推荐朋友做交换生”“推荐学弟参加比赛”等形式回归。它与申请信的区别在于:申请信是“我为我自己说话”,推荐信是“我替别人说话”,因此人称、语气、可信度来源完全不同。
2. 篇幅与分值:80—120 词的“高密度写作”。绝大多数卷区要求 80 词左右,部分卷区(如新高考部分省份)要求 100—120 词。在如此短的篇幅内要完成“点明目的—给出理由—表达期望”三件事,意味着每一句都必须承担功能,任何一句纯客套或纯重复都是失分点。这也决定了推荐信只能采用三段式,不能铺陈。
(二) 命题特点
推荐信的命题呈现出五个稳定特征,理解这五点,才能判断“哪些内容必须写、哪些内容写了也没用”。
第一,情境真实,交际对象明确。题干几乎都会交代三层关系:推荐人与被推荐人是什么关系(同学、学生、朋友、同事)、推荐去向是什么(夏令营、大学、社团、比赛、志愿者项目)、收信人是谁(招生官、外教、组委会、社区负责人)。这三层关系决定了称呼语的选择:写给陌生机构用 Dear Sir or Madam,写给熟悉的老师用 Dear Mr. Smith,写给朋友用 Dear Peter。称呼误判是格式分最先失守的地方。
第二,要点限定,三块式结构固定。题目通常给出三条中文提示,例如“说明推荐理由”“介绍被推荐人的相关经历或特长”“表达你的期望”。这三条提示与三段式一一对应:第一条对应首段目的,第二条对应主体段理由,第三条对应末段收束。评分时按要点给分,漏掉一条即扣内容分,因此动笔前的圈要点比追求辞藻更重要。
第三,重证据,轻抒情。命题的真正考点不是“你会不会夸人”,而是“你的推荐是否可信”。阅卷中,He is very good and I like him 这类空泛评价几乎不得分;而带有具体事例与结果的理由,如 he organized a reading festival that attracted over 500 students,能明显拉开档次。换言之,题目有意引导考生把形容词换成事实。这一导向也解释了为什么推荐理由常被要求写满三条:三条理由恰好覆盖能力、品质与匹配度三个
个维度,避免考生只写一条而靠堆词凑数。
第四,语言分层清晰,结构决定档次。同一道题,基础层考生写出三句正确的简单句即可拿到及格分;提高层则依靠非谓语动词、定语从句、强调句与倒装句体现语言能力。命题并不考查生僻词汇,而是考查常用结构在真实语境中是否用得准、用得稳。反过来,若所有理由都停留在 He is good at 的水平,即便没有语法错误,也很难越过及格档,因为语言能力的证据不足。
第五,身份意识与格式完整。称呼、正文、结束语、签名四要素必须齐全;推荐人口吻要与身份相符——教师推荐学生宜客观、有权威感,同学推荐朋友宜真诚、有温度,切忌用第三人称夸自己,也切忌把推荐信写成自我介绍。另有一条易被忽略:“你的期望”常被误读为“希望他被录取”,更稳妥的写法是“希望对方给予考虑、安排面试或提供进一步信息”,这类可执行的动作更符合真实书信习惯。
综上,推荐信的命题本质是“用具体证据完成一次可信的人际推荐”。备考重心应落在三处:审题圈要点、理由具体化、句式有变化。训练材料宜以真题为底本,按同一情境换一种身份改写,以体会教师、同学、朋友三种口吻在称呼与语气上的差别。
(三)评分维度与得分点分布
高考应用文评分通常按“内容要点、语言表达、篇章结构与连贯、格式与语域”四个维度综合定档。下表把四个维度拆成推荐信可直接对照的得分动作,便于讲评时逐项核对。
评分维度
考查什么
推荐信中的具体得分动作
常见失分
内容要点
三条中文提示是否落实
首段点明推荐目的与对象;主体段给出 2—3 条理由;末段表达期望
漏写“期望”;理由少于两条
语言表达
词汇与句式的准确、丰富
每段至少一处高级结构;使用主题词(diligent、responsible、organize)
全篇 He is…;时态混用;搭配错误
篇章结构
三段式与衔接
To begin with / What is more / Therefore 明确分层
一段到底;理由堆叠无层次
格式与语域
书信要素与语气
称呼、结束语、签名齐全;正式场合用书面语
缺签名;用 Hi 开头;口语化缩写
推荐信的骨架极其稳定:三段,每段一个功能。真正决定分数的是每一段内部的“写作动作”是否到位。下面先给出总框架,再逐段拆解,最后给出落笔前的六条硬性注意事项。
【三段式结构总览】
把 80—120 词按功能切成三块,是最省时也最保险的分配方式。下表给出字数、功能与必含成分的对应关系。
段落
功能
建议字数
必含成分
开头句式
第一段
点明写信目的、推出被推荐人、给一句总体定位
25—35 词
写信目的 + 被推荐人姓名与身份 + 总体评价
I am writing to recommend…
第二段
给出 2—3 条推荐理由,每条都要有证据
40—55 词
理由句 + 具体事例/细节 + 产生的结果或影响
To begin with… / What is more…
第三段
重申推荐、表达期望、礼貌收束
20—30 词
重申结论 + 希望考虑 + 联系方式或祝语
Therefore… / I would appreciate it if…
【第一段怎么写】
第一段只做三件事,顺序不能乱:交代写信目的、推出被推荐人、给出总体定位。三件事压在一到两句里,句子才不会拖沓。三段式的首段最忌“先寒暄两句再进入正题”——在 80 词的篇幅里,寒暄等于把宝贵字数花在了不得分的地方。
动作一:用一句话点明目的。常用句式是 I am writing to recommend somebody for something,其中 for 后面必须落到具体去向(the summer camp、the position、your university),不能只写 recommend him。若要更正式,可用 It is my great pleasure to recommend…;若要回应对方来信,可用 I am writing in response to your request for a reference letter concerning…。
动作二:用同位语或定语从句补出身份。把“他是谁、和我是什么关系、认识多久”压缩进一个短语,例如 Li Hua, one of the most outstanding students in our class, whom I have taught for three years。这一短语既是信息,也是可信度的来源——阅卷老师由此判断推荐人是否有资格推荐。
动作三:给一句总体定位,为后文定调。定位句要“有边界”,即指出被推荐人在哪一方面突出,而不是笼统地说 he is excellent。可用 a student of great promise(很有前途)、an ideal candidate for the position(理想人选)、a young man of rare talent(才华罕见)。
把三个动作连起来,首段就成形了:I am writing to recommend Li Hua, one of the most outstanding students in our class, for the summer camp you offer. Having taught him for three years, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate. 两句 40 词左右,目的、对象、定位齐备,还顺带用了一个分词短语。
【第二段怎么写】
第二段是得分主战场,也是最能拉开差距的地方。它的内部结构应当是“理由—证据—效果”的三连:先说一条品质或能力(理由),再给一件能证明它的事(证据),最后说明这件事带来了什么结果(效果)。三者缺一,理由就会退化成空泛的形容词堆砌。
第一条理由通常写学业或核心能力,因为它与“能否胜任”直接相关;第二条理由写品质或团队协作,因为它回答“是否好相处”;若篇幅允许,第三条写一项与推荐去向高度匹配的特长,例如推荐参加英语夏令营就写英语演讲获奖,推荐做志愿者就写长期参与社区服务。三条理由之间必须用显性衔接词分层:To begin with / What is more / Besides,让阅卷老师在扫读时一眼看到层次。
证据要具体到“可核查”的程度。方法有三种:一是给数字(attracted over 500 students;won first prize in the provincial contest);二是给场景(whenever our class faces a tight deadline,he is the first to stay behind);三是给转变(thanks to his arrangements, the charity sale raised twice as much as we had expected)。三种方法任选其一,理由立刻从“评价”变成“事实”。
句式上,本段至少安排一处高级结构:用 Not only does he… but he also… 做递进倒装,用 It is his strong sense of responsibility that… 做强调,用 What sets him apart is… 做差异化表述,用 A case in point is… 引出例证。注意一处即可,堆三处反而显得刻意,且容易出错。
一个可直接套用的主体段骨架:To begin with, his academic performance is second to none in our grade, which lays a solid foundation for further study. What is more, he is a responsible organizer: last term he planned the campus reading festival, which attracted over 500 participants. Besides, his fluency in English enables him to communicate with foreign teachers without difficulty. 三句 60 词,三条理由各有落点,层次清楚。
【第三段怎么写】
第三段的功能是“收口”,只做三件事:重申推荐结论、表达期望、礼貌收束。它不需要新信息,更不能再起一条理由——那会让文章显得没有终点。
重申要用结论性副词开路:Therefore / In a word / All things considered,然后回扣首段的定位词,形成首尾呼应。例如 Therefore, I recommend him without reservation。
表达期望要落到“希望对方怎么做”,常用 I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration;若要更主动,可加一句替被推荐人作出的保证:Rest assured that he will spare no effort to meet your expectations once admitted。这一句能显著提升推荐的说服力,因为它把“我喜欢他”升级为“我为他担保”。
礼貌收束是格式分的一部分:Thank you for your time and consideration 与 I look forward to your early reply 几乎是标配;若信件需要附材料,用 Enclosed is his resume for your reference 交代附件。最后另起一行写 Yours sincerely, 并署名 Li Hua,四要素才算齐全。
【落笔前必须处理的六件事】
人称与视角。全篇站在推荐人立场说话,被推荐人一律用第三人称 he/she。最常见的错位是写成自我介绍(I am good at English),一旦出现,内容分与语域分同时受损。
时态。推荐是当下的行为,主句用一般现在时;被推荐人的经历用一般过去时;“认识多久”“一直表现优异”用现在完成时。三个时态各管一段,不能混。
称呼与落款。称呼顶格,逗号结尾;结束语另起一行,签名再另起一行。写给机构用 Dear Sir or Madam,写给具体人用 Dear Mr./Ms. + 姓,写给朋友用 Dear + 名。
字数。严格控制在要求区间(通常 80—120 词)。超词先删客套句与重复形容词,不要删理由证据——那是得分点。
忌绝对化。避免 the best、the most diligent student I have ever seen 这类无依据的最高级,改用 one of the most… 更可信,也更符合英语评价习惯。
忌空泛。每一条理由后面必须能回答“凭什么这么说”。如果一条理由找不出证据,就换一条能找出证据的,而不是硬加形容词。
【满分词汇模板】
本部分收 500 个单词与 300 个短语,全部围绕推荐信的“评价、证据、书信套语”三类表达组织,按主题分组,每组 50 词或 30 短语。记忆时不要求全背,先保证每组前十个能主动用出来,再由被动词汇逐步转为主动词汇。
(一)单词 500(英—汉对照)
1. 第 1—50 词
序号
英文
中文
1
recommend
推荐
2
recommendation
推荐;推荐信
3
nominate
提名
4
nomination
提名
5
endorse
认可;支持
6
endorsement
背书;支持
7
commend
表扬;称赞
8
commendation
赞扬
9
candidate
候选人;人选
10
applicant
申请人
11
qualify
使具备资格
12
qualified
合格的
13
eligibility
资格
14
worthy
值得的
15
outstanding
杰出的
16
excellent
优秀的
17
exceptional
出类拔萃的
18
remarkable
非凡的
19
distinguished
卓越的
20
superb
极好的
21
admirable
令人钦佩的
22
impressive
令人印象深刻的
23
extraordinary
非凡的
24
prominent
杰出的
25
brilliant
才华出众的
26
reliable
可靠的
27
trustworthy
值得信赖的
28
dependable
靠得住的
29
responsible
有责任心的
30
committed
尽心投入的
31
dedicated
专注奉献的
32
devoted
忠诚投入的
33
diligent
勤奋的
34
industrious
勤勉的
35
hardworking
努力工作的
36
conscientious
认真尽责的
37
meticulous
一丝不苟的
38
thorough
周密的
39
efficient
高效的
40
competent
有能力的
41
capable
有才干的
42
proficient
精通的
43
skillful
熟练的
44
versatile
多才多艺的
45
talented
有天赋的
46
gifted
有天分的
47
potential
潜力
48
promising
有前途的
49
merit
优点;价值
50
excellence
卓越
2. 第 51—100 词
序号
英文
中文
51
academic
学业的
52
achievement
成就
53
accomplishment
造诣;成就
54
progress
进步
55
improvement
提高
56
mastery
精通
57
comprehension
理解力
58
understanding
理解
59
knowledge
知识
60
literacy
素养
61
logic
逻辑
62
logical
有逻辑的
63
analytical
善于分析的
64
critical
批判性的
65
creative
有创造力的
66
creativity
创造力
67
innovation
创新
68
innovative
有创新精神的
69
curiosity
好奇心
70
curious
好奇的
71
initiative
主动性
72
motivation
动力
73
motivated
有干劲的
74
enthusiasm
热情
75
enthusiastic
热情的
76
passion
热爱
77
passionate
充满热情的
78
interest
兴趣
79
eager
渴望的
80
attentiveness
专注
81
concentration
专心
82
diligence
勤勉
83
persistence
坚持不懈
84
perseverance
毅力
85
endurance
耐力
86
patience
耐心
87
stamina
持久力
88
discipline
自律
89
self-discipline
自我约束
90
independence
独立性
91
independent
独立的
92
confidence
信心
93
confident
自信的
94
resilience
韧性
95
adaptability
适应能力
96
flexibility
灵活性
97
insight
洞察力
98
wisdom
智慧
99
intelligence
智力
100
honest
诚实的
3. 第 101—150 词
序号
英文
中文
101
honesty
诚实
102
integrity
正直
103
sincere
真诚的
104
sincerity
真诚
105
generous
慷慨的
106
generosity
慷慨
107
kind
善良的
108
kindness
善意
109
warm-hearted
热心的
110
considerate
体贴的
111
thoughtful
考虑周到的
112
helpful
乐于助人的
113
cooperative
善于合作的
114
cooperation
合作
115
collaboration
协作
116
teamwork
团队合作
117
supportive
给予支持的
118
tolerant
宽容的
119
tolerance
宽容
120
humble
谦逊的
121
humility
谦逊
122
modest
谦虚的
123
modesty
谦和
124
optimistic
乐观的
125
optimism
乐观
126
positive
积极的
127
cheerful
开朗的
128
outgoing
外向的
129
sociable
合群的
130
friendly
友好的
131
approachable
平易近人的
132
patient
有耐心的
133
calm
沉着的
134
steady
稳重的
135
mature
成熟的
136
maturity
成熟
137
sensible
明智的
138
rational
理性的
139
fair
公平的
140
just
公正的
141
courage
勇气
142
brave
勇敢的
143
determination
决心
144
determined
坚定的
145
willpower
意志力
146
ambition
抱负
147
ambitious
有抱负的
148
energetic
精力充沛的
149
vigorous
朝气蓬勃的
150
campus
校园
4. 第 151—200 词
序号
英文
中文
151
principal
校长
152
faculty
全体教师;院系
153
tutor
导师
154
mentor
指导老师
155
classmate
同学
156
alumnus
校友
157
monitor
班长
158
president
主席;会长
159
member
成员
160
membership
会员身份
161
club
社团
162
society
社团;协会
163
association
协会
164
committee
委员会
165
organize
组织
166
organization
组织
167
organizer
组织者
168
participate
参加
169
participation
参与
170
participant
参与者
171
volunteer
志愿者
172
voluntary
自愿的
173
activity
活动
174
event
活动;赛事
175
campaign
活动;运动
176
project
项目
177
program
项目;节目
178
competition
比赛
179
contest
竞赛
180
championship
锦标赛
181
tournament
联赛
182
exhibition
展览
183
performance
表演
184
concert
音乐会
185
rehearsal
排练
186
stage
舞台
187
audience
观众
188
judge
评委
189
award
奖项
190
prize
奖品
191
medal
奖牌
192
certificate
证书
193
honor
荣誉
194
scholarship
奖学金
195
semester
学期
196
curriculum
课程体系
197
syllabus
教学大纲
198
lecture
讲座
199
hobby
业余爱好
200
pastime
消遣
5. 第 201—250 词
序号
英文
中文
201
talent
才能
202
skill
技能
203
ability
能力
204
competence
胜任力
205
expertise
专业素养
206
specialty
专长
207
strength
长处
208
weakness
短处
209
advantage
优势
210
disadvantage
不足
211
feature
特点
212
quality
品质
213
characteristic
特征
214
character
品格
215
personality
个性
216
virtue
美德
217
trait
特质
218
gift
天赋
219
musical
音乐的
220
instrument
乐器
221
piano
钢琴
222
guitar
吉他
223
violin
小提琴
224
painting
绘画作品
225
drawing
素描
226
photography
摄影
227
dancing
舞蹈
228
singing
歌唱
229
drama
戏剧
230
acting
表演
231
speech
演讲
232
debate
辩论
233
recitation
朗诵
234
calligraphy
书法
235
writing
写作
236
literature
文学
237
poem
诗歌
238
novel
小说
239
sports
体育运动
240
basketball
篮球
241
football
足球
242
volleyball
排球
243
swimming
游泳
244
running
跑步
245
athlete
运动员
246
coach
教练
247
training
训练
248
fitness
体质;健身
249
experience
经历
250
practice
实践
6. 第 251—300 词
序号
英文
中文
251
practical
实用的
252
internship
实习
253
employment
就业
254
career
职业生涯
255
profession
专业职业
256
position
职位
257
role
角色
258
duty
职责
259
responsibility
责任
260
task
任务
261
assignment
作业;任务
262
workload
工作量
263
schedule
日程安排
264
deadline
截止时间
265
punctual
守时的
266
commitment
投入;承诺
267
accountable
负责任
268
leadership
领导力
269
leader
领导者
270
coordinate
协调
271
coordination
协调
272
communicate
沟通
273
communication
沟通
274
negotiate
协商
275
negotiation
协商
276
solution
解决办法
277
handle
处理
278
manage
管理
279
management
管理
280
strategy
策略
281
approach
方法;途径
282
method
方法
283
efficiency
效率
284
productivity
生产率
285
standard
标准
286
requirement
要求
287
criterion
评判标准
288
outcome
结果
289
result
结果
290
effect
效果
291
impact
影响
292
influence
影响力
293
contribution
贡献
294
contribute
贡献
295
benefit
益处
296
resource
资源
297
platform
平台
298
success
成功
299
successful
成功的
300
succeed
取得成功
7. 第 301—350 词
序号
英文
中文
301
failure
失败
302
effort
努力
303
strive
奋斗
304
attempt
尝试
305
challenge
挑战
306
overcome
克服
307
conquer
战胜
308
obstacle
障碍
309
difficulty
困难
310
hardship
艰辛
311
pressure
压力
312
stress
紧张压力
313
burden
负担
314
expectation
期待
315
expect
期望
316
goal
目标
317
target
指标;目标
318
aim
目的
319
objective
目的;目标
320
dream
梦想
321
vision
愿景
322
future
未来
323
prospect
前景
324
opportunity
机会
325
chance
机缘
326
assistance
帮助
327
guidance
指导
328
instruction
指导;指示
329
advice
建议
330
suggestion
建议
331
feedback
反馈
332
evaluation
评价
333
assessment
评估
334
judgment
判断
335
recognition
认可
336
appreciate
欣赏;感激
337
appreciation
感激;赏识
338
gratitude
感激之情
339
grateful
感激的
340
respect
尊重
341
admire
钦佩
342
admiration
钦佩
343
trust
信任
344
belief
信念
345
believe
相信
346
hope
希望
347
inspire
激励;启发
348
inspiration
启迪
349
motivate
激发动力
350
persist
坚持
8. 第 351—400 词
序号
英文
中文
351
cooperate
配合
352
assess
评定
353
wish
祝愿
354
anticipate
期待
355
anticipation
期盼
356
welcome
欢迎
357
invite
邀请
358
invitation
邀请
359
apply
申请
360
application
申请书
361
enclose
随信附上
362
enclosure
附件
363
attach
附上
364
attachment
附件
365
contact
联系
366
reply
回复
367
respond
回应
368
response
答复
369
inform
告知
370
notice
通知
371
announce
宣布
372
announcement
公告
373
introduce
介绍
374
introduction
介绍
375
express
表达
376
expression
表达;措辞
377
convey
传达
378
explain
解释
379
explanation
说明
380
describe
描述
381
description
描述
382
mention
提及
383
state
陈述
384
declare
声明
385
emphasize
强调
386
highlight
突出
387
confirm
确认
388
assure
使确信
389
promise
承诺
390
loyal
忠诚的
391
loyalty
忠诚
392
privilege
荣幸
393
pleasure
愉快
394
faithful
忠实的
395
willingness
意愿
396
willing
愿意的
397
available
可获得的;有空的
398
convenient
方便的
399
prompt
及时的
400
timely
适时的
9. 第 401—450 词
序号
英文
中文
401
further
进一步的
402
however
然而
403
therefore
因此
404
moreover
而且
405
furthermore
此外
406
besides
除此之外
407
additionally
另外
408
consequently
结果是
409
thus
因而
410
otherwise
否则
411
meanwhile
与此同时
412
whereas
而(对比)
413
nevertheless
尽管如此
414
instead
反而
415
similarly
同样地
416
likewise
同样
417
particularly
尤其
418
especially
特别
419
specifically
具体来说
420
generally
一般而言
421
overall
总体而言
422
eventually
最终
423
finally
最后
424
firstly
首先
425
secondly
其次
426
thirdly
第三
427
initially
起初
428
subsequently
随后
429
previously
此前
430
currently
目前
431
recently
最近
432
gradually
逐渐地
433
increasingly
日益
434
extremely
极其
435
highly
高度地
436
deeply
深切地
437
truly
真正地
438
indeed
确实
439
apparently
显然
440
obviously
明显地
441
clearly
清楚地
442
relatively
相对地
443
absolutely
绝对地
444
precisely
精确地
445
roughly
大约
446
approximately
约略
447
merely
仅仅
448
simply
不过
449
barely
几乎不能
450
hardly
几乎不
10. 第 451—500 词
序号
英文
中文
451
nearly
几乎
452
valuable
宝贵的
453
invaluable
极珍贵的
454
worthwhile
值得做的
455
beneficial
有益的
456
constructive
有建设性的
457
meaningful
有意义的
458
significant
重要的
459
essential
必不可少的
460
vital
至关重要的
461
crucial
关键的
462
fundamental
根本的
463
necessary
必要的
464
important
重要的
465
useful
有用的
466
effective
有效的
467
valid
有说服力的
468
appropriate
恰当的
469
suitable
合适的
470
proper
得体的
471
adequate
足够的
472
sufficient
充分的
473
abundant
丰富的
474
various
多种多样的
475
diverse
多样的
476
comprehensive
全面的
477
complete
完整的
478
detailed
详尽的
479
specific
具体的
480
concrete
确凿的
481
accurate
准确的
482
precise
精密的
483
impartial
不偏不倚的
484
reasonable
合乎情理的
485
sound
合理的;扎实的
486
convincing
令人信服的
487
persuasive
有说服力的
488
striking
显著的
489
attractive
有吸引力的
490
appealing
吸引人的
491
unusual
不寻常的
492
unique
独一无二的
493
typical
典型的
494
representative
有代表性的
495
genuine
真实的;真挚的
496
authentic
可信的
497
realistic
切合实际的
498
encouraging
令人鼓舞的
499
satisfactory
令人满意的
500
perfect
完美的
(二)短语 300(英—汉对照)
1. 第 1—30 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
1
I am writing to recommend
我写信是为了推荐
2
I am writing to you to recommend
写信给贵方推荐
3
I would like to recommend
我想推荐
4
It is my great pleasure to recommend
我很荣幸推荐
5
I am more than willing to recommend
我非常愿意推荐
6
take great pleasure in recommending
很高兴推荐
7
in response to your request
应您的请求
8
at the request of
应……的请求
9
with great enthusiasm
满怀热情地
10
without reservation
毫无保留地
11
with full confidence
充满信心地
12
give my strongest recommendation
给予我最强烈的推荐
13
recommend somebody without hesitation
毫不犹豫地推荐某人
14
speak highly of
高度评价
15
think highly of
看重
16
sing high praise for
大力称赞
17
have a high opinion of
对……评价很高
18
be worthy of recommendation
值得推荐
19
be well qualified for
完全胜任
20
be a perfect candidate for
是……的理想人选
21
be an ideal choice for
是……的理想选择
22
prove to be
证明是
23
turn out to be
结果是
24
rank among the best
位居最优秀之列
25
stand out from
从……中脱颖而出
26
leave a deep impression on
给……留下深刻印象
27
make a lasting impression on
给……留下持久印象
28
win widespread recognition
赢得广泛认可
29
gain the trust of
获得……的信任
30
enjoy great popularity
广受欢迎
2. 第 31—60 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
31
one of the most outstanding students
最出色的学生之一
32
a student of great promise
很有前途的学生
33
a young man of rare talent
才华罕见的青年
34
a person of strong character
性格坚强的人
35
a model student
模范学生
36
a top student in our class
班里的尖子生
37
a leading figure in
……中的领军人物
38
an active member of
……的活跃成员
39
a faithful supporter of
……的坚定支持者
40
a driving force behind
……背后的推动力
41
be second to none
首屈一指
42
be beyond comparison
无与伦比
43
be hard to match
难以匹敌
44
be highly thought of by teachers
深受老师好评
45
be widely praised by classmates
广受同学称赞
46
be spoken well of by all
人人称道
47
in every respect
在各方面
48
in all aspects
在各个方面
49
from every point of view
从各个角度看
50
all things considered
综合考虑
51
as far as I am concerned
就我而言
52
to my knowledge
据我所知
53
in my judgment
依我判断
54
on the basis of my observation
根据我的观察
55
during the past three years
在过去三年里
56
over the years
多年来
57
since he joined us
自从他加入我们
58
from the very beginning
从一开始
59
time and again
一次又一次
60
more often than not
往往
3. 第 61—90 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
61
rank first in the class
在班里排名第一
62
rank among the top three
位列前三名
63
make steady progress
稳步进步
64
make remarkable progress in
在……方面进步显著
65
make rapid progress
进步神速
66
achieve outstanding results
取得优异成绩
67
achieve excellent academic results
学业成绩优异
68
get high marks in
在……中取得高分
69
score high in the exam
考试得分很高
70
maintain high grades
保持高分
71
keep a good academic record
保持良好学业记录
72
have a solid foundation in
在……方面基础扎实
73
lay a solid foundation for
为……打下坚实基础
74
have a good command of
熟练掌握
75
have a thorough grasp of
透彻掌握
76
master the basics of
掌握……的基本知识
77
be well grounded in
在……方面根基扎实
78
grasp new knowledge quickly
迅速掌握新知识
79
learn independently
独立学习
80
think critically
批判性思考
81
think out of the box
跳出框架思考
82
solve problems on his own
独立解决问题
83
work out solutions
想出解决办法
84
put forward new ideas
提出新想法
85
raise thoughtful questions
提出有深度的问题
86
go beyond the textbook
超出课本范围
87
read widely
广泛阅读
88
take detailed notes
记详尽的笔记
89
stay focused in class
课堂上保持专注
90
take an active part in class discussion
积极参与课堂讨论
4. 第 91—120 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
91
have a strong sense of responsibility
有强烈的责任感
92
have a strong sense of duty
有强烈的职责意识
93
have a good sense of humor
很有幽默感
94
show great interest in
对……表现出浓厚兴趣
95
show a talent for
显示出……的天赋
96
have a gift for
有……的天赋
97
be gifted in
在……方面有天赋
98
be skilled at
擅长
99
be expert at
精于
100
be good at communicating
善于沟通
101
be capable of
有能力做
102
be able to cope with
能应对
103
deal with pressure calmly
从容应对压力
104
rise to the challenge
迎难而上
105
take the initiative to
主动去做
106
take responsibility for
对……负责
107
shoulder heavy responsibilities
肩负重任
108
keep his word
信守承诺
109
stick to his principles
坚守原则
110
never let others down
从不让人失望
111
never give up easily
从不轻易放弃
112
work tirelessly
不知疲倦地工作
113
spare no effort to
不遗余力地
114
go all out to
全力以赴
115
put his heart into
全身心投入
116
devote himself to
致力于
117
be committed to
尽心于
118
be dedicated to
专注于
119
be devoted to
献身于
120
concentrate on
专注于
5. 第 121—150 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
121
organize an activity
组织活动
122
take charge of
负责
123
be in charge of
主管
124
play a leading role in
在……中起主导作用
125
play an active part in
积极参与
126
make a positive contribution to
为……做出积极贡献
127
lend a helping hand to
向……伸出援手
128
offer timely help
及时提供帮助
129
work closely with
与……密切合作
130
cooperate with others
与他人配合
131
get along well with
与……相处融洽
132
build team spirit
培养团队精神
133
bring out the best in others
激发他人最好的一面
134
set a good example for
为……树立榜样
135
serve as a bridge between
充当……之间的桥梁
136
smooth over differences
化解分歧
137
reach an agreement
达成一致
138
carry out a plan
执行计划
139
put a plan into practice
把计划付诸实施
140
make full preparations for
为……做充分准备
141
make careful arrangements
做周密安排
142
cope with emergencies
应对突发情况
143
handle unexpected situations
处理意外情况
144
keep everything in order
使一切井然有序
145
manage time wisely
合理安排时间
146
meet the deadline
按时完成
147
work under great pressure
在巨大压力下工作
148
adapt to new surroundings
适应新环境
149
fit in with the team
融入团队
150
win the support of
赢得……的支持
6. 第 151—180 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
151
win first prize
获得一等奖
152
take first place
夺得第一名
153
be awarded the title of
被授予……称号
154
be honored as
被授予……荣誉
155
receive an award for
因……获奖
156
be selected as
被选为
157
be chosen out of hundreds of applicants
从数百名申请者中选出
158
break the school record
打破校纪录
159
set a new record
创造新纪录
160
achieve great success
取得巨大成功
161
make outstanding achievements
取得杰出成就
162
reach the top
登顶
163
win the championship
夺得冠军
164
defeat strong rivals
战胜强劲对手
165
attract wide attention
引起广泛关注
166
gain wide recognition
获得广泛认可
167
earn high praise from
赢得……的高度赞扬
168
be praised by the judges
受到评委称赞
169
receive favorable comments
受到好评
170
be well received by
受到……欢迎
171
make a deep impression
留下深刻印象
172
live up to expectations
不负众望
173
exceed all expectations
超出所有预期
174
go from strength to strength
不断壮大
175
make a difference to
对……产生影响
176
bring benefits to
给……带来益处
177
open up new possibilities
开辟新的可能
178
lay a good foundation for
为……奠定良好基础
179
pave the way for
为……铺平道路
180
contribute greatly to
对……贡献巨大
7. 第 181—210 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
181
be honest and trustworthy
诚实守信
182
be warm-hearted and helpful
热心助人
183
be patient with others
对人耐心
184
be strict with himself
严于律己
185
be modest about his achievements
对自己的成就很谦虚
186
remain humble
保持谦逊
187
stay calm under pressure
压力下保持沉着
188
keep an optimistic attitude
保持乐观态度
189
face difficulties bravely
勇敢面对困难
190
stand up to challenges
勇敢迎接挑战
191
take things seriously
认真对待事情
192
pay attention to details
注重细节
193
be true to his word
言而有信
194
be ready to help at any time
随时乐于助人
195
be willing to share
乐于分享
196
be open to advice
乐于接受建议
197
accept criticism gracefully
坦然接受批评
198
learn from mistakes
从错误中学习
199
look on the bright side
看到光明的一面
200
keep a positive outlook
保持积极心态
201
be full of energy
精力充沛
202
be full of enthusiasm
热情洋溢
203
be curious about the world
对世界充满好奇
204
be eager to learn
渴望学习
205
be thirsty for knowledge
渴求知识
206
be devoted to his studies
专心于学业
207
be strict in his work
工作上严格
208
be careful with everything he does
做事认真仔细
209
treat others with respect
尊重他人
210
be considerate of others
体贴他人
8. 第 211—240 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
211
Dear Sir or Madam
尊敬的先生或女士
212
To whom it may concern
敬启者
213
I am writing to apply for
我写信申请
214
Thank you for your consideration
感谢您的考虑
215
I would appreciate it if
如果……我将不胜感激
216
I would be grateful if you could
如果您能……我将十分感激
217
Your early reply would be highly appreciated
如蒙早复,不胜感激
218
Looking forward to your reply
期待您的回复
219
I look forward to hearing from you soon
期待尽快收到您的回信
220
Please feel free to contact me
请随时与我联系
221
Should you need further information
若您需要更多信息
222
do not hesitate to contact me
请随时联系我
223
at your earliest convenience
在您方便时尽早
224
Enclosed please find
随信附上
225
Please find enclosed
请查收随信所附
226
for further details
了解详情
227
as follows
如下
228
in the attachment
在附件中
229
Yours sincerely
您诚挚的
230
Yours faithfully
您忠实的
231
Best regards
致以问候
232
With best wishes
顺致良好祝愿
233
Thank you in advance
先行致谢
234
I hope this letter finds you well
祝您一切安好
235
I am pleased to write to you
很高兴写信给您
236
It is a privilege to write to you
很荣幸写信给您
237
I take this opportunity to
我借此机会
238
on behalf of
代表
239
in the name of
以……的名义
240
as requested
按要求
9. 第 241—270 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
241
first of all
首先
242
to begin with
首先
243
above all
最重要的是
244
in the first place
首先
245
what is more
而且
246
in addition
此外
247
apart from that
除此之外
248
on top of that
更有甚者
249
in particular
尤其
250
for instance
例如
251
for one thing
一方面
252
for another
另一方面
253
on the one hand
一方面
254
on the other hand
另一方面
255
in contrast
相比之下
256
by comparison
比较而言
257
as a result
结果
258
as a consequence
因此
259
in consequence
结果
260
owing to
由于
261
thanks to
多亏
262
due to
由于
263
because of
因为
264
in terms of
在……方面
265
with regard to
关于
266
as for
至于
267
in this sense
在这个意义上
268
to sum up
总之
269
in short
简言之
270
in conclusion
最后
10. 第 271—300 短语
序号
英文短语
中文
271
to a great extent
在很大程度上
272
to some extent
某种程度上
273
in large measure
在很大程度上
274
far beyond
远远超出
275
by no means
决不
276
in no way
绝不
277
not in the least
一点也不
278
more than ever
比以往更
279
as never before
前所未有地
280
little by little
一点一点地
281
step by step
逐步地
282
one after another
一个接一个
283
day after day
日复一日
284
year after year
年复一年
285
now and then
不时
286
from time to time
间或
287
once in a while
偶尔
288
in the long run
从长远看
289
in the short term
短期内
290
sooner or later
迟早
291
at present
目前
292
at the moment
此刻
293
in the near future
不久的将来
294
over a long period
长期
295
within a short time
短期内
296
around the clock
全天候
297
all the year round
一年到头
298
in every way
在各方面
299
at all times
始终
300
under no circumstances
在任何情况下都不
【满分句型模板】
60 组句型按“凤头—猪肚—豹尾”三分配置:开篇 20 句解决“怎么起笔”,中间 20 句解决“怎么把理由写实”,结尾 20 句解决“怎么收得住”。每组附中文释义与用法提示,提示里写的是“这句话什么时候用、用了起什么作用”,仿写时应先看提示再造句。
开篇亮“凤头”
序号
句型(英文+中文释义)
用法提示
1
I am writing to recommend Li Hua, one of the most outstanding students in our school, for the exchange programme you offer.
我写信是为了向贵方推荐李华——我校最优秀的学生之一——参加你们提供的交流项目。
最稳的开篇:目的+对象+总体定位,一句话同时交代三件事,阅卷老师第一眼就能看到写信意图。
2
It is my great pleasure to recommend Zhang Wei, a student of rare talent and strong character, as a candidate for the position.
我很荣幸推荐张伟——才华罕见、品格坚强的学生——作为这一职位的人选。
正式书面语,适合写给陌生机构或上级;great pleasure 比 happy 更得体。
3
I am more than willing to write this letter in support of Wang Ming's application for your summer camp.
我非常愿意写这封信支持王明申请你们的夏令营。
in support of 是比 recommend 更书面的替换,可避免全文重复 recommend。
4
With full confidence, I recommend Chen Yu to you without any hesitation.
我满怀信心、毫不犹豫地向您推荐陈宇。
with full confidence 前置状语,态度鲜明,适合需要强调可信度的场合。
5
I consider it a great privilege to recommend my classmate Liu Yang for the scholarship you are offering.
能推荐我的同学刘洋申请贵方奖学金,我深感荣幸。
consider it a privilege to do 是高级结构,正式且不失温度。
6
I am writing to you to recommend Zhao Min, whom I have known well for three years, as a volunteer for your organization.
我写信向您推荐赵敏作为贵机构的志愿者——我已与她熟识三年。
whom I have known well for three years 用定语从句补足可信度,一句双用。
7
It is a real pleasure for me to recommend Sun Lei, who is widely regarded as a model student in our school.
推荐孙磊让我由衷高兴——他在全校被公认为模范学生。
who is widely regarded as 引用集体评价,比自己夸更有分量。
8
I am delighted to have this opportunity to recommend Han Xue for admission to your university.
我很高兴有此机会推荐韩雪进入贵校学习。
delighted to have this opportunity to 是礼貌的书面起笔。
9
Having taught Li Ming for three years, I feel fully qualified to recommend him for the competition.
教了李明三年,我完全有资格推荐他参加这项比赛。
现在分词短语开头,交代推荐人与被推荐人的关系,增强说服力。
10
As his head teacher, I am writing to give my strongest recommendation for Tang Rui's participation in the programme.
作为他的班主任,我写信全力推荐唐锐参加该项目。
As his head teacher 明确身份,这是推荐信最需要交代的前提。
11
Nothing would please me more than to recommend Feng Lin, an outstanding organizer and a warm-hearted friend.
没有什么比推荐冯林更让我高兴的了——他既是出色的组织者,也是热心的朋友。
Nothing would please me more than to do 正式且富有情感,适合开篇定调。
12
I am writing in response to your request for a reference letter concerning my student Guo Jing.
我写信回应您关于为我的学生郭静出具推荐信的请求。
in response to your request 显出来信有来由,文体逻辑更完整。
13
It gives me great pleasure to introduce Xu Ming, a young man whose diligence and talent have impressed everyone here.
介绍徐明让我十分愉快——这位年轻人的勤勉与才华深深打动了这里所有人。
whose 引导定语从句合并两个信息点,句子紧凑有力。
14
I have no hesitation in recommending Ma Lin as the ideal candidate for the post you advertised.
我毫不犹豫地推荐马林作为贵方所招聘职位的理想人选。
have no hesitation in doing 语气笃定,适合正式场合的强力推荐。
15
On behalf of our school, I am writing to recommend Zhou Xin for the national writing contest.
我代表全校写信推荐周欣参加全国写作大赛。
On behalf of 明确推荐主体,适合集体推荐或机构署名。
16
Should you be looking for a reliable and capable assistant, I would recommend Wei Fang without reservation.
若您正在寻找一位可靠能干的助手,我将毫无保留地推荐魏芳。
Should you be looking for 为倒装条件句,语气礼貌,适合求职类推荐。
17
I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for Qian Peng, whose performance in my class has been consistently excellent.
很高兴为钱鹏写这封推荐信——他在我课堂上的表现始终优异。
consistently excellent 强调长期稳定,比单纯的 excellent 更可信。
18
There is no one I would rather recommend for this position than my colleague Shen Yi.
这个职位上,没有人比我的同事沈怡更值得我推荐。
There is no one I would rather... than 是强调式比较结构,语气强烈。
19
I am honoured to recommend He Ping, a student who has never failed to impress me with her creativity.
我很荣幸推荐何萍——她的创造力从未让我失望。
never failed to impress 用双重否定表强调,语言地道。
20
It is with great enthusiasm that I recommend Deng Hao for the exchange programme starting next spring.
我满怀热情推荐邓浩参加明年春季开始的交流项目。
It is with great enthusiasm that 强调句型,把态度放在句首,节奏感强。
中间有“猪肚”
序号
句型(英文+中文释义)
用法提示
1
To begin with, his academic performance is second to none in our grade, which lays a solid foundation for further study.
首先,他的学业成绩在全年级首屈一指,这为后续学习打下坚实基础。
理由一开头句:观点(second to none)+影响(lays a solid foundation),一句完成论证。
2
What impresses me most is his ability to think critically and to raise thoughtful questions in class.
最打动我的是他批判性思考的能力,以及他在课堂上提出有深度问题的能力。
What impresses me most is 是最常用的理由引出方式,避免每段都写 He is...。
3
Not only does she excel academically, but she also takes an active part in community service.
她不仅学业出色,还积极参与社区服务。
Not only 置句首引起部分倒装,语法分与内容分同时拿到。
4
It is his strong sense of responsibility that makes him stand out from his peers.
正是强烈的责任感让他在同龄人中脱颖而出。
强调句型 It is... that 精准聚焦某一品质,比平铺直叙更有力。
5
Equally important is his willingness to help others, which has won him widespread recognition among classmates.
同样重要的是他乐于助人的意愿,这为他赢得了同学的广泛认可。
Equally important is 完全倒装,用于第二个理由的并列衔接。
6
A case in point is the campus reading festival he organized last term, which attracted over 500 participants.
一个典型例子是他上学期组织的校园读书节,吸引了五百多人参加。
A case in point is+具体事例+非限制性定语从句,是把空泛理由变具体的核心手法。
7
Whenever our class faces a tight deadline, he is the first to stay behind and work things out.
每当班级面临紧迫的截止时间,他总是第一个留下来把事情做好。
Whenever 引导时间状语从句,用“高频场景”证明品质,比形容词更有说服力。
8
His diligence is beyond doubt: he arrives at the library at seven every morning and never leaves before ten.
他的勤奋毋庸置疑:他每天七点到图书馆,从不在十点前离开。
冒号后直接给证据,用具体时间与行为替代形容词堆砌。
9
Moreover, his fluency in English enables him to communicate with foreign teachers without the slightest difficulty.
此外,他流利的英语使他能与外教毫无障碍地交流。
Moreover 承接第二重理由;enable somebody to do 表达“能力—结果”的因果链。
10
What sets him apart from other applicants is his remarkable teamwork spirit.
使他与其他申请者区别开来的是他非凡的团队精神。
What sets somebody apart from 是差异化表达的固定高级句型。
11
As the monitor of our class, he has proved himself capable of coordinating different opinions and reaching an agreement.
作为班长,他已证明自己能够协调不同意见并达成一致。
As+身份,用职务作证据背书;prove oneself capable of 表示“已被验证的能力”。
12
Thanks to his careful arrangements, the charity sale raised twice as much money as we had expected.
多亏他周密的安排,义卖筹到的钱是我们预期的两倍。
Thanks to 交代因果;twice as much as 用倍数结构量化成果。
13
Another quality that deserves mention is his perseverance in the face of setbacks.
另一点值得提及的品质是他面对挫折时的坚韧。
deserves mention 是书面语得体表达,避免 another is 的单调。
14
He never gives up easily; instead, he treats every failure as a chance to learn and improve.
他从不轻易放弃;相反,他把每次失败都当作学习与提升的机会。
分号+instead 构成正反对比,一句话写出态度与方法。
15
It should also be noted that he is unusually good at managing his time, which allows him to balance study and activities.
还应指出,他极善于管理时间,这使他能兼顾学业与活动。
It should also be noted that 适合补充第三重理由,语气客观。
16
Judging from his performance in the speech contest, he is fully capable of expressing ideas clearly under pressure.
从他在演讲比赛中的表现看,他完全能在压力下清晰表达观点。
Judging from 引出依据,是评估型理由的常用开头。
17
Not surprisingly, his efforts have borne fruit: he won first prize in the provincial English competition last year.
不出所料,他的努力结出了果实:去年他获得省级英语竞赛一等奖。
bear fruit 比喻“结出成果”;Not surprisingly 表示结果符合预期。
18
What is more, his optimistic attitude tends to lift the spirits of everyone around him.
而且,他乐观的态度往往能鼓舞身边每一个人。
What is more 递进;tend to 语气缓和,避免绝对化。
19
In terms of personal qualities, he is honest, modest and always true to his word.
就个人品质而言,他诚实、谦逊,且总是言而有信。
In terms of 明确论述维度,三个形容词并列收束,节奏干净。
20
Were he given this opportunity, he would undoubtedly make full use of it and live up to your expectations.
如果给他这个机会,他无疑会充分利用并不负您的期望。
Were he given 为虚拟条件句倒装,常用于主体段末尾,向结尾自然过渡。
结尾有“豹尾”
序号
句型(英文+中文释义)
用法提示
1
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation and sincerely hope you will give his application favourable consideration.
因此,我毫无保留地推荐他,并真心希望您能优先考虑他的申请。
Therefore+重申+希望,是最标准的结尾三分结构(结论—重复—请求)。
2
I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
如果您能将我的推荐纳入考虑,我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it if 是最礼貌的请求句式,比 Please consider 更得体。
3
I am fully convinced that he will prove to be a valuable member of your team.
我深信他会成为贵团队中宝贵的一员。
prove to be 表示“最终被证明”,比 will be 更有分寸。
4
Should you require further information about him, please feel free to contact me at any time.
若您需要关于他的更多信息,请随时与我联系。
Should you require 倒装+please feel free to,礼貌且留出沟通空间。
5
I am confident that your decision to accept him will turn out to be a wise one.
我相信您接收他的决定最终会被证明是明智的。
把“选择他”转化为“您的决定是明智的”,间接而有力的收束。
6
Thank you for your time and consideration, and I look forward to your early reply.
感谢您的时间与考虑,期待您的早日回复。
Thank you for your time and consideration 是英文推荐信的必备客套。
7
I sincerely hope my recommendation will be of some help to your decision-making.
我真心希望我的推荐对您的决策有所助益。
be of some help 是“有所帮助”的书面表达,比 help you 更委婉。
8
No one is better qualified than he is, and I am sure you will not regret choosing him.
没有人比他更合格,我相信您不会为选择他而后悔。
比较级表最高级+双重保证,语气强而不失分寸。
9
With his diligence and talent, he will undoubtedly bring fresh energy to your programme.
以他的勤勉与才华,他无疑会为贵项目注入新的活力。
With+名词短语前置,交代条件,句尾落点放在“贡献”上。
10
It would be a great honour for me if my words could add weight to his application.
如果我的话能为他的申请增添分量,我将深感荣幸。
add weight to 是“为……增添分量”的地道搭配,适合谦逊型结尾。
11
In a word, he is an ideal candidate, and I recommend him with all my heart.
总之,他是理想人选,我由衷推荐他。
In a word 收束全文,with all my heart 表达真诚。
12
I have every reason to believe that he deserves this opportunity more than anyone else.
我完全有理由相信,他比任何人都更值得这个机会。
have every reason to believe 语气笃定,比 I think 更有分量。
13
Please accept my sincere recommendation, and I wish him every success in the selection.
请接受我诚挚的推荐,并祝愿他在选拔中一切顺利。
wish somebody every success 是标准祝语,适合选拔类场景。
14
I hope you will find this letter helpful and give his application your favourable consideration.
希望这封信对您有所帮助,并请您优先考虑他的申请。
favourable consideration 是英文推荐信中的固定礼貌措辞。
15
Rest assured that he will spare no effort to meet your expectations once admitted.
请放心,一旦被录取,他会不遗余力地达到您的期望。
Rest assured that 表示“请放心”,用于替被推荐人作出保证。
16
Thank you again for your patience, and I am always at your service for further details.
再次感谢您的耐心,如需更多细节,我随时为您效劳。
at your service 是书信体礼貌收尾,适合正式推荐。
17
I am sure that whoever reads this letter will share my confidence in him.
我相信任何读到这封信的人都会与我一样对他有信心。
whoever 引导主语从句,从“我个人判断”扩展到“普遍共识”。
18
Looking back, recommending him is one of the easiest decisions I have ever made.
回头看来,推荐他是我做过的最轻松的决定之一。
one of the easiest decisions I have ever made 用最高级+现在完成时,情感真实。
19
I do hope this letter will receive your favourable consideration, and I wish you all the best.
衷心希望这封信能得到您的优先考虑,并祝您一切顺利。
I do hope 用 do 强调语气;wish you all the best 收尾得体。
20
Enclosed is his resume for your reference, and I remain at your disposal for any questions.
随信附上他的简历供您参考,如有任何问题,我随时听候您的安排。
Enclosed is 为倒装结构,用于交代附件;remain at your disposal 表示“听候安排”。
【高频避错清单】
下列 50 条来自真实作文中的高频错误,按“错误表达—正确表达—错因”三栏(连序号共四列)列出。错因一栏标注了类别(搭配、时态、非谓语、中式英语、格式等),便于归类记忆。建议两天过一遍,每天 25 条,先遮住右两栏自测,再对照订正。
序号
错误表达
正确表达
错因归类与说明
1
I very recommend him to you.
I strongly recommend him to you.
副词误用|very 不能修饰动词,程度副词应换 strongly / highly。
2
I am write to recommend Li Hua.
I am writing to recommend Li Hua.
时态结构|am 后必须接现在分词,be + doing 才构成进行时。
3
I recommend him as the monitor of our class last year.
I recommend him as…(推荐现在)/ He served as the monitor last year.
时间冲突|推荐是当下的行为,不能与过去时间状语连用。
4
He is one of the most outstanding student in our class.
He is one of the most outstanding students in our class.
名词数|one of the + 最高级 + 复数名词,student 必须加 s。
5
He very likes helping others.
He likes helping others very much.
语序|very 不能直接修饰动词,应放句末 very much 或改用 greatly。
6
I have known him since three years.
I have known him for three years.
介词|since 接时间点,for 接时间段。
7
He is good in English and maths.
He is good at English and maths.
搭配|be good at 是固定搭配,表示“擅长”。
8
He always takes part in many activities actively.
He takes an active part in various activities.
搭配与冗余|take part in 不与 actively 叠加,规范表达为 take an active part in。
9
I write this letter for recommend him.
I am writing this letter to recommend him.
非谓语|介词 for 后不能直接接动词原形,目的用不定式 to do。
10
He has a lot of abilities and qualities.
He has many strengths and fine qualities.
搭配|ability 与 quality 不宜用 a lot of 修饰,且 abilities 多指具体技能。
11
He is a person who is full of responsibility.
He is a person with a strong sense of responsibility.
搭配|“有责任感”固定表达为 have a sense of responsibility。
12
He can solve the problem very easy.
He can solve the problem very easily.
词性|修饰动词须用副词 easily,不能用形容词 easy。
13
His English is very excellent.
His English is excellent.
程度重复|excellent 本身含“极好”,不再加 very。
14
He is more taller than any other student.
He is taller than any other student.
比较级|more 与 -er 不能同时使用,双重比较级错误。
15
He doesn't afraid of difficulties.
He isn't afraid of difficulties.
助动词|afraid 是形容词,否定需用 be 动词,不用 doesn't。
16
He is used to get up early.
He is used to getting up early.
非谓语|be used to 后接动名词,表示“习惯于”。
17
I suggest him to join the club.
I suggest that he (should) join the club.
句型|suggest 不接 sb to do,须用 that 从句或 suggest doing。
18
He spent three years to learn English.
He spent three years learning English.
句型|spend time (in) doing sth,不用 to do。
19
The reason why I recommend him is because he is diligent.
The reason why I recommend him is that he is diligent.
关联词|the reason is that…,reason 与 because 不能重复。
20
He is an outstanding student with many achievements in study.
He is an outstanding student with many academic achievements.
搭配|“学业成就”用 academic achievements,不用 in study。
21
I am looking forward to hear from you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
非谓语|look forward to 中 to 是介词,后接动名词。
22
I would appreciate if you could consider my recommendation.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
形式宾语|appreciate 后必须带形式宾语 it。
23
Please contact with me if necessary.
Please contact me if necessary.
搭配|contact 作及物动词时不加 with。
24
He has joined the army for two years.
He has been in the army for two years.
延续性动词|join 是短暂动词,不能与 for 时间段连用。
25
He is the person whom I think is most suitable.
He is the person who I think is most suitable.
关系代词|从句中作主语须用 who,不用 whom。
26
It is him who helped me a lot.
It is he who helped me a lot.
强调句|强调主语时用主格 he。
27
He always helps others without ask for return.
He always helps others without asking for anything in return.
非谓语与搭配|介词 without 后接动名词;in return 为固定搭配。
28
I can assure you that he will not let you down, isn't it?
I can assure you that he will not let you down, won't he?
反义疑问|主句为 he will…,附加问句须用 won't he。
29
His performance is better than anyone in the class.
His performance is better than that of anyone else in the class.
比较对象不一致|比较成绩须用 that of,且排除自身用 anyone else。
30
There are many informations in his resume.
There is much information in his resume.
不可数名词|information 不可数,无复数形式,谓语用 is。
31
He gave me many advices on my study.
He gave me much advice on my study.
不可数名词|advice 不可数,可数化应说 some pieces of advice。
32
I am writing to recommend you Li Hua.
I am writing to recommend Li Hua to you.
语序|recommend sb to sb,被推荐人是直接宾语。
33
He is very worth recommending.
He is well worth recommending.
搭配|worth 前用 well 修饰,不用 very;也可用 worthy of recommendation。
34
He is a student of our school, and he is study hard.
He is a student of our school and studies hard.
词性与句子结构|study 是动词,不能再加 is;并列句可合并。
35
In my opinion, I think he is the best choice.
In my opinion, he is the best choice.
语义重复|In my opinion 与 I think 择一即可。
36
He has a good command in English.
He has a good command of English.
搭配|have a good command of 为固定搭配,介词用 of。
37
He is familiar to the school rules.
He is familiar with the school rules.
搭配|人作主语用 be familiar with,物作主语才用 be familiar to。
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Because he is diligent, so he succeeds.
Because he is diligent, he succeeds.
关联词重复|because 与 so 不能同句并用。
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Although he is young, but he is mature.
Although he is young, he is mature.
关联词重复|although 与 but 不能同句并用。
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He majors in English and he good at it.
He majors in English and is good at it.
谓语缺失|并列谓语第二个分句缺 be 动词。
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I hope you can considerate my recommendation.
I hope you can consider my recommendation.
词性|情态动词后接动词原形,considerate 是形容词。
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He is the most diligent student I have ever seen in my life.
He is one of the most diligent students I have ever seen.
逻辑绝对化|推荐信忌“史上最”,改为 one of the most 更可信。
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He is very diligent, very honest, very kind, very helpful.
He is diligent, honest, kind and helpful.
表达单调|连续 very 堆砌显得词汇贫乏,并列形容词语序也需按“短—长”排列。
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I recommend him because he is good.
I recommend him because he has a strong sense of responsibility.
内容空泛|理由必须具体可验证,good 属于无效评价。
45
He is a boy. He is 17. He is tall. He is diligent.
He is a diligent seventeen-year-old boy of medium height.
句式单一|短句罗列须合并,避免流水账。
46
I am writing to you for the purpose of recommending him to you.
I am writing to recommend him to you.
冗余|for the purpose of 与 to 重复,直接删去。
47
As we all know that he is an excellent student.
As we all know, he is an excellent student.
句式杂糅|as we all know 后不能接 that 从句。
48
Yours sincerely, Li Hua. Dear Mr. Smith, ...
Dear Mr. Smith, ... Yours sincerely, Li Hua.
书信格式|称呼在前、正文居中、结束语与签名在后,顺序不可颠倒。
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He is a boy who I have known him for three years.
He is a boy whom I have known for three years.
关系代词冗余|从句中已有宾语 him,须删去,关系词用 whom。
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He is not only good at English but also good at maths.
He is good at both English and maths.
结构冗余|重复 good at 显得笨重,改用 both... and... 更简洁。
【满分作文模板】
下面的模板不是让人照抄,而是给出一个“填空骨架”:每一处空格都标注了该填什么、有哪几种替换。考试时先按骨架把要点填满,再回头替换其中一两处句式,20 分钟内即可成文。
(一)通用填空模板
1. 称呼 Dear ______,
填写提示:写给机构:Dear Sir or Madam,;写给个人:Dear Mr./Ms. ______,;写给朋友:Dear ______,
2. 首段第一句 I am writing to recommend ______, ______(身份或同位语), for ______(推荐去向).
填写提示:推荐去向必须具体:the summer camp / the position / your university / the volunteer programme
3. 首段第二句 Having known him/her for ______, I am fully convinced that he/she is ______(总体定位).
填写提示:定位词:an ideal candidate / a student of great promise / a young man of rare talent
4. 主体段第一句 To begin with, ______(理由一:能力或学业), which ______(带来的结果).
填写提示:理由一建议写与推荐去向最匹配的能力,句末用 which 从句交代结果
5. 主体段第二句 A case in point is ______(具体事例), which ______(效果或影响).
填写提示:事例要给数字、场景或转变,如 attracted over 500 participants
6. 主体段第三句 What is more, ______(理由二:品质或协作), and he/she ______(证据).
填写提示:理由二写责任感、团队精神、乐于助人等可验证品质
7. 主体段第四句 Besides, ______(理由三:与去向匹配的特长), which makes him/her ______(差异化优势).
填写提示:篇幅紧张时可省,但需保证理由不少于两条
8. 末段第一句 Therefore, I recommend him/her without reservation and sincerely hope ______.
填写提示:回扣首段定位词,形成首尾呼应
9. 末段第二句 I would appreciate it if you could ______.
填写提示:take my recommendation into consideration / give his application favourable consideration
10. 末段第三句 Should you need further information, please ______.
填写提示:feel free to contact me at any time / do not hesitate to write to me
11. 结束语与签名 Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
填写提示:结束语与签名各占一行;给朋友可用 Best regards
(二)使用注意
模板只解决“结构”,不解决“内容”。空格里必须填具体信息,尤其是主体段的“事例”,否则模板会写成一篇空话连篇的推荐信,分数反而低于自由发挥。
同一篇里高级结构不超过三处,位置建议:首段一处分词或定语从句,主体段一处倒装或强调句,末段一处条件句或虚拟语气。分布均匀,比集中堆叠更像“自然写出来的”。
背模板要背“功能句”,不要背整段。功能句是 I would appreciate it if you could…,整段背诵一旦题目情境变化就会失效。
【模板示例】
(一)题目
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris 计划来你校参加暑期汉语夏令营,需要一名学生助教。请你写一封推荐信,向夏令营负责人 Mr. Brown 推荐你的同学王明,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍王明的汉语水平与性格优势;3)表达你的期望。词数 100 左右。
(二)范文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to recommend Wang Ming, one of the most responsible students in our class, as a teaching assistant for your summer Chinese camp. Having worked with him on several projects, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate.
To begin with, his Chinese is second to none in our grade: he won first prize in the city writing contest twice, which enables him to explain difficult characters clearly. What is more, he is patient and warm-hearted. Last summer he spent a month helping three British exchange students with their spoken Chinese, and all passed the final test with high marks. Besides, his fluent English allows him to serve as a bridge between the camp and the volunteers.
Therefore, I recommend him without reservation. I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)逐段拆解
段落
写了什么
做对了什么
首段
点明推荐目的(夏令营助教)+被推荐人身份(班里最有责任心的学生之一)+定位(理想人选)
两句话完成三个动作;同位语交代身份;ideal candidate 为全文定调
主体段
理由一:汉语水平(连续两年市级写作一等奖);理由二:耐心热心(整月辅导三名英国交换生,全部高分通过);理由三:英语流利(可充当营地与志愿者的桥梁)
三条理由分别对应“能力—品质—匹配度”;每条都带数字或场景;用 which 从句把证据连接到结果
末段
重申推荐+希望考虑+客套与落款
Therefore 收口,without reservation 表态明确,结句礼貌而不啰嗦
范文约 150 词。若考卷限定 100 词,按此顺序压缩:先删 Besides 一句(约 18 词),再把“三名交换生”缩为“一名交换生”,最后删掉 Thank you for your time and consideration。
值得模仿的三处:首段的现在分词短语(Having worked with him…)、主体段的 which 非限制性定语从句、末段的 I would appreciate it if…。三处分属三段,正好构成“分布均匀”的高级结构。
前面的语料与模板解决“有什么可写”,本部分解决“怎么在考场里稳定地写出来”。七条技巧按时间顺序排列:从审题到成篇,再到卷面与考前训练。
审题三分钟,胜过写作十分钟。拿到题目先做三件事:圈出三条中文提示并编号;写出推荐去向与收信人;判断称呼语。这三步做完,文章的结构其实已经定了。凡是在考场上先动笔后找要点的,几乎都会漏要点。
先写要点,后加修饰。第一遍用最简单的句子把三条要点写全,第二遍再回头替换句式和词汇。顺序反了,容易为了凑一个漂亮句而挤掉一条要点,得不偿失。
一条理由配一件事实。这是提分效率最高的单一动作。任何形容词后面都要追问“有没有事例”,没有就换掉。数字、时间、场景、转变,是最省词也最可信的四种证据。
高级结构“三段各一处”。首段用分词短语或定语从句交代身份,主体段用倒装或强调句突出品质,末段用条件句或虚拟语气收束。三处足够,多了易错,少了平。
控制词数的实用办法。先数句不数词:首段 2 句、主体段 3—4 句、末段 2 句,共 7—8 句,通常落在 90—110 词。写完若超词,优先删客套与重复形容词,保留全部证据句。
卷面与格式的隐形分。称呼顶格加逗号,正文每段首行缩进,结束语与签名各占一行;不使用缩写形式(don't、I'm),不用感叹号堆情绪。格式零失误,是稳拿基础档的前提。
考前七天的训练配比。三天专项:一天背功能句,一天练理由具体化(只写主体段),一天做整篇限时;两天改写:把旧作中的形容词全部换成事实;两天模考:按考试时长完整写三篇不同情境的推荐信,重点复盘漏要点与搭配错误。
15 道题覆盖夏令营、大学申请、交换生、社团主持、辩论赛、志愿服务、才艺比赛、科创大赛、学生会竞选、迎新向导、马拉松志愿、文学社、环保项目、实习岗位、国际支教十五种常见情境,每题的推荐去向、推荐人身份、收信人各不相同。建议按“限时 20 分钟成文—对照参考答案—只改一处”的顺序使用,参考答案均控制在 150 词左右。
题目 1
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校将选派一名学生参加在英国剑桥举办的国际中学生夏令营。请你给夏令营负责人 Mr. Johnson 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学张伟,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的英语水平与组织能力;3)表达你的期望。词数 100 左右。
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题目 2
写作任务:假定你是你校英语教师李华,你的学生陈宇申请了国外某大学的工程专业。请你给该校招生委员会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明你与他的关系及推荐目的;2)介绍他的学业表现与科研兴趣;3)表达你对他被录取的信心。词数 120 左右。
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题目 3
写作任务:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter 想来你校做一学期的交换生,需要一名本校学生作为他的学习伙伴。请你给该校国际部负责人 Ms. Green 写一封推荐信,推荐你的好友王芳。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍王芳的性格与帮助他人的经历;3)说明她为什么适合这一角色。词数 100 左右。
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题目 4
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校英语角正在招募新一期主持人,要求申请者英语口语流利、有活动组织经验。请你给英语角负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学李雷。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的口语水平与主持经历;3)表达你对他胜任该工作的信心。词数 100 左右。
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题目 5
写作任务:假定你是李华,你班同学赵敏将代表学校参加市中学生辩论赛。请你以班主任的身份给大赛组委会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的逻辑思维与临场应变能力;3)说明她为此做的准备。词数 120 左右。
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题目 6
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校与社区敬老院合作开展志愿服务,需要一名学生负责人。请你给社区服务中心的负责人 Ms. Wang 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学孙浩。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他与老人相处的经历;3)说明他的组织与协调能力。词数 100 左右。
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题目 7
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校将举办校园歌手大赛,你希望推荐你的同学周悦参赛。请你给大赛组委会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的演唱水平与舞台表现;3)说明她的参赛态度。词数 100 左右。
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题目 8
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校高二学生林川参加了青少年科技创新大赛。请你以指导老师的身份给大赛组委会写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的作品与创新点;3)说明他在研究过程中的表现。词数 120 左右。
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题目 9
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校学生会即将换届,你希望推荐你的同学郑凯竞选学生会主席。请你给学生会指导老师 Mr. Chen 写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的领导与协调能力;3)介绍他为同学做的实事。词数 100 左右。
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题目 10
写作任务:假定你是李华,下学期将有一批英国中学生来你校交流,学校需要招募新生迎新志愿者。请你给学校学生处的张老师写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学马莉。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的沟通能力与服务经历;3)表达你的期望。词数 100 左右。
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题目 11
写作任务:假定你是李华,你市将举办国际马拉松赛,需要招募志愿者。请你给赛事组委会写一封推荐信,推荐你的好友邓超。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的体能与志愿经历;3)说明他能胜任的工作。词数 100 左右。
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题目 12
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校文学社即将改选社长,你希望推荐你的同学冯洁。请你给文学社指导老师 Ms. Liu 写一封推荐信,内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的阅读与写作水平;3)介绍她的社团工作经历。词数 120 左右。
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题目 13
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校将组织学生参加“保护母亲河”环保公益项目。请你给项目负责人 Ms. Taylor 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学许诺。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的环保经历与相关知识;3)说明她的团队协作能力。词数 100 左右。
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题目 14
写作任务:假定你是李华,你所在的公司正在招聘暑期实习生。请你给公司人事部经理 Mr. Wang 写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学顾晨。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍他的专业能力与实习经历;3)说明他的工作态度。词数 120 左右。
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题目 15
写作任务:假定你是李华,你校与国外一所中学合作开展国际志愿者项目,需要选派学生赴当地支教两周。请你给项目办公室写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学唐诗。内容包括:1)说明推荐目的;2)介绍她的教学经验与跨文化沟通能力;3)说明她应对困难的能力。词数 120 左右。
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