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龙胜中学2026秋高三10月月考
英语学科试卷
满分,150分
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第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)
第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
听下面5段对话.每段对话后有一个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项.听完每
段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题.每段对话读两遍.
1.What are the speakers talking about?
A.A horse show.
B.A travel experience.
C.Wetland protection.
2.What encouraged the man during the race?
A.His strong willpower.
B.The prize for winners.
C.The cheers from classmates.
3.How does the woman feel about the woodworking class?
A.Demanding.
B.Rewarding
C.Frustrating.
4.What will the man do for the Mid-Autumn Festival?
A.Make moon-cakes.
B.Visit a local bakery.
C.Eat out with his family.
5.Why does the man call Ms.Chen?
A.To inquire about a program.
B.To invite her to join his team.
C.To promote his new
app.
第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)
听下面5段对话或独白,每段对话或独白后有几个小题,从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳
选项,听完每段对话或独白前,你将有时间阅读各个小题,每小题5秒钟;听完后各小题将给出5秒钟
的作答时间.每段对话或独白读两遍,
听第6段材料,回答第6、7题.
6.What is the woman's daily work?
A.Clearing unwanted plants.
B.Observing the sunrise
C.Feeding birds.
7.What makes the woman invite the man to join?
A.The need for more helpers.
B.The impressive coastal scenery.
C.The team's friendly atmosphere.
听第7段材料,回答第8至10题.
8.What do we know about the performance?
A.It is greatly shortened.
B.It is partly modernized.
C.It is completely original.
9.Why does the woman suggest buying tickets early?
A.They are cheaper in advance.
B.They may not be available later.
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C.They come with a free program.
10.What does the woman mean at the end of the conversation?
A.She wants to go alone.B.She has bought two tickets.
C.She is expecting the invitation.
听第8段材料,回答第11至13题.
11.Where does the conversation probably take place?
A.At an art classroom.
B.At a construction site.
C.At an architecture show.
12.What does the man say about the National Stadium design?
A.It is inspired by a bird's nest.
B.It is mainly for practical use
C.It combines tradition with modem art.
13.What will the speakers do next Saturday?
A.Make a guided tour.
B.Attend an art lecture.
C.Visit an art museum.
听第9段材料,回答第14至16题.
14.What did the Mars explorer discover?
A.New types of rocks.
B.Signs of ancient water.
C.Evidence of living things
15.What is the next goal of China's Tianwen program?
A.To send astronauts to Mars.
B.To bring back samples from Mars.
C.To build a research base on Mars.
16.What does the man advise the woman to do?
A.Watch more space news.
B.Study more about Mars.
C.Apply for a summer program.
听第10段材料,回答第17至20题.
17.Which waves are faster but less harmful?
A.P-waves.
B.S-waves.
C.T-waves.
18.How does the waming system work?
A.It predicts when a quake will hit.
B.It detects P-waves and sends warnings.
C.It measures the damage after a quake.
19.What should you do if you are driving when an alert comes?
A.Get off immediately.
B.Drive to an open area.
C.Stop and remain inside.
20.Where are early warning systems already in use?
A.In Mexico.
B.In the UK
C.In China.
第二部分阅读(共两节,满分50分)
第-节供15小题;每小题2.5分,满分37.5分》
阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出最佳选项,
A
All over the world,there are celebrations that are so strange and unique.However,they are often rooted
in deep cultural meanings.So,if you're into traveling and culture,here are some of the world's most unusual
festivals.
Night of the Radishes,Oaxaca,Mexico
Celebrated annually on December 23,this festival turns ordinary radishes (into artistic works.
Dating back to colonial times,local farmers carved radish sculptures to draw market shoppers.Now it has
developed into a grand contest with awards,drawing numerous visitors to appreciate creative radish carvings.
Treated with special materials for durability,these carved radishes are works of art rather than edible food.
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Monkey Buffet Fertival,Lopburl,Thalland
Bach November,locals hold a fruit buffet exclusively for monkeys to express gratitude.Regarded as
symbols of good fortune,monkeys attract masses of tourists to the city.Nevertheless,tourists ought to watch
over their personal possessions carefully,for monkeys tend to take people's belongings without hesitation.
Boryeong Mud Festival,Sonth Korea
Held every July,the festival originated to advertise the town's nutrient-packed mud.Gradually,it has
evolved into a lively event featuring mud wrestling and mud-based skincare services.Participants can enjoy
carefree fun and will end up totally covered in mud.
Snall Racing Championshlp,Congham,England
This one's exaclly what it sounds like:people racing snails.Every summer,snail enthusiasts from around
the world gather in Congham to see whose snail is the fastest.Competitors place their snails in the center of a
circular track,and the first one to make it to the outer edge wins.It's slow but surprisingly entertaining.
21.What was the original purpose of carving radishes in Mexico?
A.To attract customers to farmers'market stands.
B.To host a grand contest of creative radish carvings
C.To keep radishes fresh enough in the whole winter
D.To compete for prizes of radishes in artistic contests.
22.What warning is given to tourists visiting the Thai monkey festival?
A.Do not feed monkeys fruits casually.
B.Never touch the wild monkeys closely.
C.Leam local lucky culture before visiting.
D.Take good care of their personal belongings.
23.What is the common characteristic of the four festivals?
A.They were initially created for commercial profits.
B.They are all seasonal events with cultural meanings.
C.They are all held in warm summer months every year.
D.Competitive races are the main activity of each festival.
B
The Turquoise Coast is one of Turkey's natural wonders.But in recent years,the area has become
severely damaged due to overfisbing.An effort to restore the arca is in progress,thanks to Zafer Kizilkaya,
president and founder of the Mediterranean Conservation Society.He successfully persuaded the Turkish
government to build a network of marine protected areas (MPA)covering more than 300 miles along the
Mediterranean coast.
Kizilkaya's mission began in 2007,following a diving adventure in Gokova Bay,a 62-mile-long gulf in
the center of the Turquoise Coast.He had returned to his native Turkey after several years working as a
researcher and underwater photographer in Indonesia and was shocked by the marine degradation.
According to the UN's Food and Agriculture Organization,the Mediterranean is the world's most
overfished sea.Realizing the seriousness of the problem,he decided to take action at once and try to persuade
local fishers.Getting the support of fishers was the biggest challenge,but because of the dire situation,some
started to listen.In 2012,Kizilkaya established Turkey's first community-managed MPA in Go kova Bay.
He trained local fishers as marine rangers who could monitor the waters for illegal fishing and send alerts
to the Turkish Coast Guard.Thanks to his work,G o kova Bay's marine ecosystem has made a great
comeback.According to the ocean protection charity Blue Marine Foundation,the number of fish per square
meter has increased ten times since 2012 and incomes for local fishers have increased 400%.
"Gokova Bay became a great example for protecting the ocean,"says Kizilkaya.His success helped him
persuade the Turkish government to spread the MPA network southeastward along 310 miles of Turkish
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coastline."I'd like to see MPAs established across Turkey and the entire Mediterrancan,and I hope my work
has opened people's eyes to the crisis underwater and what we can do to solve it,"Kizilkaya adds.
24.What can we know about the Turquoise Coast?
A.Its ecosystem has been damaged.
B.The coast is too large to be protected.
C.The water in that area is seriously polluted.
D.It is the most famous tourist attraction in Turkey.
25.What does the underlined word"dire"in paragraph 3 mean?
A.Controllable.
B.Impressive.
C.Terrible
D.Influential.
26.How did Kizilkaya protect the Go kova Bay?
A.Working with the local fishers.
B.Helping the coast guard catch bad people.
C.Monitoring the illegal fishing in person.
D.Increasing the incomes of local fishers.
27.Which of the following best describes Kizilkaya?
A.Humorous and warm-hearted.
B.Determined and eco-conscious.
C.Independent and long-sighted.
D.Persevering and open-minded.
C
There's little doubt that participating in sports brings many health benefits for kids.According to a recent
study,boys who play sports during their early childhood are less likely to experience emotional stress,
including signs of depression and anxiety,later in life compared to boys who didn't participate in sports
Marie-losee Harbec did the research for the study as a doctoral student.Along with her professor,she
analyzed data taken from a Quebec group of 690 boys and 748 girls who were born in 1997 and 1998.The
information they looked at was reported by parents of the children and included the kids'physical activity at
5-year old and 12-year old.They also reviewed reports from the children's teachers about signs of emotional
stress seen in the kids from ages 6 to 10 years.
The researchers discovered that participating in sports in preschool might help boys develop life skills,
such as joining in teamwork,practicing self-control and building supportive relationships.Besides,they
discovered that joining in sports helps boys with their emotional health,and that emotionally well boys join
more often in physical activity.
However,the researchers didn't find any obvious relationship between girls'participation in sports and
their emotional health.Harbec points to one explanation being that girls are more likely than boys to look for
help from and share their emotional stress with family,friends,or healthcare providers.
While the researchers didn't measure whether the kids they analyzed were good at the sport they joined in,
they did measure their physical fitness at age 12.They discovered that bays who had lower levels of
depressive and anxiety signs between ages 6 to 10 years were the ones who were the most physically fit at age
12."We could say that physically active kids probably have better physical fitness,"says Harbec.
Harbec believes schools should provide different after-class team sports and physical activities beginning
in kindergarten.She says:"Parents also should join in promoting physical activity and sport participation
among youth by acting as role models and taking part in their children's activities."
28.Why does the author mention the children's parents and teachers in Paragraph 2?
A.To show the only way to get data.
B.To show the support for the research
C.To show the collected data were reliable.
D.To show the information was hard to get.
29.Why do girls fail to get obvious mental health benefits from sports?
A.They are much emotionally stronger than boys.
B.They are better at getting psychological support.
C.They have a larger and better social circle in life.
D.They are used to emotional stress earlier than boys.
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30.What is Harbec's advice for parents?
A.Spend more time with children.
B.Look for a role model for children
C.Force children to exercise regularly.
D.Keep physically active with their children.
31.What is the main idea of the passage?
A.Girls benefit more from regular exercise than boys
B.Exercise frequency influences children's mental health.
C.Sports competence is connected with less depression risk.
D.Boys'childhood sports may reduce anxiety and depression
D
Using artificial intelligence to create artworks increases artists'productivity and generates more positive
reactions,according to a study involving submissions to a popular art-sharing website by more than 50,000
users.But generative AI works are more likely to display stereotypical themes,reducing the novelty of an
artist's work.
The researchers tracked 4 million works published on the website by the artists.The artists self-divided
into two groups:those who continued to work using traditional methods-a sort of control group,and those
who adopted AI.The latter group,numbering about 5,800,were identified by the use of tags (on their
work,such as "AI-generated"or the names of the AI tools.Works posted into AI art communities on the site
were also included.
Artists who adopted Al tools saw their productivity measured by the number of works posted increase by
25 percent over the study period.They also saw a 50 percent rise in the number of "favorites"their work
received over six months.But novelty,measured by the subject matter and specific details of the work,
decreased for the AI-using group.
"The study completely tracks with my own experience with these tools and spaces,"says Andres
Guadamuz at the University of Sussex,UK."At first,it felt that you could do anything,bring anything in your
bead into existence,but the more I used them,the more I kept coming back to themes I liked."
Guadamuz points out that he isn't judging the quality of the images produced by generative AI nor their
originality,nor the creativity involved in the process.All these things are often hotly contested,with some
artists saying that generative al is using their works as training data and limiting their ability to be recognized
as creatives.
Zhou at Boston University is also considering these questions.He says,"The generative technology
accelerates the ability to produce.But it raises other issues:Are we giving up the process of understanding
what goes into being creative and producing something meaningful,in favour of just being able to force our
way with technology?
32.What do we know about the artworks created by AI according to paragraph 1?
A.They are abundant but less creative.
B.They are generative but less popular.
C.They balance popularity with artistic depth.
D.They attract viewers with the trendy subjects.
33.How was the study conducted?
A.By surveying artists'opinions on AI tools using.
B.By analyzing suggestions on generative AI works.
C.By comparing AI-assisted artworks with traditional ones.
D.By observing the process of Al-assisted artistic creation.
34.What can be inferred from Guadamuz's statement?
A.AI tools help artists explore new creative styles.
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B.AI users receive more recognition for their creativity.
C.Artists believe AI improves the quality of their artworks.
D.Artists may repeat themes they like when using AI tools.
35.What is the best title for the text?
A.The Unstoppable Rise of AI Artworks.
B.The Double-Edged Sword of AI in Artworks
C.The Role of AI in Artistic Productivity.
D.The Breakthrough of Al in Artistic Creation
第二节供5小题;每小题2.5分,满分12.5分)
根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填人空白处的最佳选项.选项中有两项为多余选项。
As summer travel begins,many people are preparing for trips in places where temperatures may be
unusually high.36 It can lead to heat exhaustion and even heat stroke.However,with careful
planning,you can still enjoy your trip.
Before leaving,check the weather forecast,including both daytime and nighttime temperatures and the
heat index.37Choose cooler places,such as coastal areas or higher ground,and arrange outdoor
activities for the early morning or late evening.During the hottest part of the day,indoor activities such as
visiting a museum may be a better choice.Travelers should also make sure their hotels have air conditioning
and know where cooling centers and medical services are.
38Older adults,young children,babies and pregnant women may be more easily affected by
extreme heat.People with certain health problems or those taking some medicines may also have difficulty
keeping cool.Adjust your plans when necessary to protect them.
For road trips,check the car before setting off,especially its cooling system and battery.Carry enough
water and snacks,and take regular breaks.39 If the car breaks down in extreme heat,stay in or
near the car and call for help instead of walking along a hot road.
Finally,travelers should know the waring signs of heat illness.Dizziness,nausea,muscle cramps and
unusual sweating are signs that someone may need to cool down and drink water.40The best way
to stay safe is to listen to your body and change your plans when necessary.
A.If symptoms become severe,seek medical help at once.
B.Extreme heat is more than an uncomfortable part of a holiday.
C.It is also important to take into account the people traveling with you.
D.Carrying extra batteries and a portable fan can help you stay cool indoors.
E.Remember that sunburn can also increase the risk of heat-related health issues.
F.Never leave kids or older adults alone in a parked car,even for a short time.
G.If the weather is expected to be extremely hot,consider changing your plans.
第三部分语言运用(共两节,满分30分)
第一节(供15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)
阅读下面短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
My relationship with tai chi has been a journey of patience and self-discovery.
In the 1980s,I first 41 tai chi in Dundonald Park.I watched people move in loose formation at an
unhurried pace.The
42 of their movements was like a water lily opening in slow motion.
I found tai chi 43,but I couldn't see its point.I defined fitness as
44 and strength
Moving slowly did not tone muscles,so I chose to 45 myself from the practice.Still,the
46
stayed with me,a seed planted.
After retirement,with a doctor's 47,I returned to that park,no longer a watcher but inside the
group,awkwardly moving toward the growth once seeded long ago.My early attempts were 48.I
joined one class,then left;joined another,and 49,failing to complete the routines.I assumed that
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mastering tai chi meant memorizing all the 50.But I soon leamned otherwise:What needed
mastering were my own habits-impatience,resistance to correction.
Everything changed in my first expert-led class.Surrounded by advanced 51
,I felt like a
beginner when the instructor 52singled me out for instruction.Embarrassed,I listened intently,
watched closely and willed my body to move by copying him.Ultimately,this focus helped 53 my
embarrassment.
In that instant,my emotion 54,from embarrassment to empowerment.I learned not just a move,
but a patient and open way of being.I became that lily unfolding,awakened not by force,but by this55
martial art.
41.A.encountered
B.approached
C.sought
D.attended
42.A.order
B.power
C.grace
D.precision
43.A.reliable
B.fascinating
C.familiar
D.strange
44.A.flexibility
B.tolerance
C.balance
D.speed
45.A.distance
B.protect
C.excuse
D.free
46.A.answer
B.response
C.presence
D.image
47.A.treatment
B.encouragement
C.assessment
D.announcement
48.A.inspiring
B.boring
C.discouraging
D.promising
49.A.struggled
B.hesitated
C.panicked
D.followed
50.A.positions
B.settings
C.rules
D.moves
51.A.instructors
B.learners
C.athletes
D.performers
52.A.personally
B.casually
C.unexpectedly
D.briefly
53.A.hide away
B.bring about
C.build up
D.drive away
54.A.settled
B.shifted
C.progressed
D.softened
55.A.traditional
B.demanding
C.gentle
D.complex
第二节(供10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
阅读下面短文,在空白处填人1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式:
China has made a major breakthrough in space technology by successfully recovering the first stage of a
rocket after launch.
On July 10th,a new Long March rocket56(launch)from Hainan Island in southern China.After
separating from the second stage,the rocket's first stage retumed safely 57a platform at sea.It was
the first time that China had successfully recovered the first stage of a rocket,58(mark)an important
step forward in the country's space program.
The reusable rocket can carry up to 16,000 kilograms of 59(supply)into what is called low
Earth orbit.By reusing rocket stages instead of throwing them away after launch,Chinese space companies
can greatly reduce the cost of space missions,60 in tumn makes space travel more efficient and
sustainable in the long run.
The US company Spacex 61(be)a leader in reusable rocket technology for years,having
successfully landed its rocket boosters hundreds of times.Now,China has joined the growing group of
countries and companies working 62(recover)rockets.
China's successful recovery of the Long March-10B rocket is more than 63 single successful
launch.It also shows China's growing ability in space technology and its64(determine)to develop
more advanced and cost-effective space systems.It is expected to provide valuable experience for future space
missions and further 65 (strength)China's position in the world's space industry.
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第四部分写作(共两节,潮分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
66.假定你是学生会主席李华。为践行“健康第一”的教育理念,学校英语社团组织主题为Hea山First
的英语演讲比赛,请你撰写一篇演讲稿参加比赛,内容包括:
1.简述学生健康现状;
2.提出行动建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and classmates,
第二节(满分25分)
67.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband's company promoted him and relocated us to New York City.We found a safe,affordable
place to live.Once we got settled in,I was determined to find employment.After a few days of searching and
applying,I was fortunate to find a job as an administrative assistant with Young Rubicam,a famous
advertising agency.I wasn't thrilled about the job because I had graduated with a degree to teach English,but
the pay was good,and the extra money was a blessing.
The job was rather dull,though,mainly typing letters,answering phones,setting up for conferences,
filing,scheduling meetings,arranging travel for the copywriters(),etc.I felt that what I was doing was
insignificant.As letters or travel brochures would come across my desk to be typed,I would read over them.
Often,there were grammatical errors or the spelling was not always accurate,but since it wasn't my job to
correct them,I typed them as they were given to me.
One day,I was talking to my grandmother,LouOlive Graham.Anyone not related to her called her Lou.
Everybody else,including all twelve of her children and fifteen grandchildren,called her"Muh".Muh was a
wise woman lady.Her children adored and admired her.There was nothing better than to spend a day with
Muh,which meant you were going to hear fascinating stories about her growing up,while savoring her tea and
cakes.
Over tea,I said,"Muh,you should see the things that come across my desk-letters,memos,and
brochures with crazy grammar,poor spelling,and awkward sentences.But I guess it's not my job to correct
them."Then,I added that I only did what they paid me to do.
Muh listened attentively,as she always did,and after I finished,she said very calmly,"Honey,don't just
do enough to get by.Always do your best work.Whatever your hand finds to do,do it with all your might.
You may find more enjoyment in the job if you do your best.Plus,it never hurts you to let people know that
you can do more than what they hired you to do."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:I thought long and hard about what she said.
Paragraph 2:The next year,a position became available for an assistant copywriter.
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英语参考答案
听力1-5 BCBAA6-10 ACBBC11-15 CCABB16-20 CABCA
阅读理解21-23ADB24-27ACAB28-31CBDD
32-35ACDB 36-40 BGCFA
完形41.A42.C43.B44.D45.A46.D47.B48.C49.A50.D51.B52.C53.D54.B55.C
语法56.was launched57.to
58.marking
59.supplies
60.which
61.has been
62.to recover
63.a
64.determination
65.strengthen
应用文范文
Dear teachers and classmates,
It is a great privilege to speak here on the topic "Health First."
Nowadays,many students are troubled by poor health.So absorbed are they in screens that they often stay up late,and what
worries us most is that some even suffer from anxiety,which affects their study and daily life.To change this,I'd like to offer
some practical suggestions.To begin with,it would be a good idea if we could exercise daily,which will help us build up our
bodies.In addition,I suggest that we should keep a balanced diet and get enough sleep,because they contribute greatly to good
health.
Health is the foundation of everything.Only by taking care of ourselves can we build a brighter future.Let's start today!
应用文评分标准
一、结构:作文结构完整。(2分)
解析:具有演讲稿的文体特征,有开头一问候并点明演讲主题;有主体—简述学生健康现状并提出行动建议;有
结尾一呼吁行动、升华主题。
二、内容:覆盖所有内容要点。(共7分)
要点一:交代背景(主题、目的)。(2分)
It is a great privilege to speak here on the topic"Health First."
交代演讲主题为Health First,.符合“践行健康第一教育理念”的活动背景。
要点二:介绍学生健康现状(至少2项)。(3分)
Nowadays,many students are troubled by poor health.So absorbed are they in screens that they often stay up late,and what
worries us most is that some even suffer from anxiety,which affects their study and daily life.
问题一:沉迷屏幕、熬夜。
问题二:焦虑,并写出影响一影响学习和日常生活。
要点三:提出行动建议(至少2项)。(2分)
To change this,I'd like to offer some practical suggestions.To begin with,it would be a good idea if we could exercise daily,
which will help us build up our bodies.In addition,I suggest that we should keep a balanced diet and get enough sleep,because
they contribute greatly to good health.
建议一:每天锻炼。
建议二:均衡饮食、充足睡眠。
三、语言(共6分)
(1)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,语言运用得体、丰富,能够准确阐述主题及相关内容。(4分)
解析:强调多种语法结构、表达方式的呈现,强调用词的丰富性。文中长难句、复合句与简单句结合使用,倒装结构
主语从句、表语从句、定语从句、宾语从句、原因状语从句、Oy+状语倒装等结构的合理运用;强调高级词汇的运用。
语法结构
范文例句
倒装句
So absorbed are they in screens that they often stay up late.
主语从句
What worries us most is that some even suffer from anxiety...
表语从句
...is that some even suffer from anxiety...
定语从句
...which affects their study and daily life.
目的状语
To change this,I'd like to offer some practical suggestions.
宾语从句
I suggest that we should keep a balanced diet and get enough sleep...
原因状语从句
...because they contribute greatly to good health.
Only+状语倒装
Only by taking care of ourselves can we build a brighter future.
高级词汇:
(1)be troubled by(受…困扰)(2)be absorbed in(沉迷于)(3)stay up late(熬夜)
(I)suffer from anxiety(遭受焦虑)(5)contribute greatly to(对…大有贡献)
(⑥the foundation of everything(一切的基础)
(2)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。(2分)
解析:强调衔接过渡语的合理有效运用,使行文连贯流畅。
英文写作连接成分及作用表
连接成分
作用
Nowadays
引出背景
To change this
过渡到建议
To begin with
第一条建议
In addition
第二条建议
Only by...can we...
总结升华
读后续写范文
Paragraph 1:I thought long and hard about what she said.I felt a sense of shame and determination sweeping over me as I
recalled Muth's gentle but piercing words.Sitting at my desk the next morning,I stared at the pile of letters and brochures
waiting to be typed,my fingers resting on the keyboard without moving.Without hesitation,I took a deep breath,then opened
the first document,and finally began not just to type but to correct every error I found.I worked through each page with a red
pen in hand,with my eyes sharper than ever and my heart quietly repeating Muth's advice.The moment my manager noticed the
clean,error-free drafts on his desk,he looked up at me in surprise,which made me realize that doing my best had already begun
to change how others saw me.
Paragraph 2:The next year,a position became available for an assistant copywriter.Excitement gave way to nervousness when I
heard the news,for I knew this was the chance Muth had told me to prepare for.The office was buzzing with quiet speculation
about who would get the role,but I kept my eyes on my work and my mind on the possibility ahead.Fixing my eyes on the
application form,I filled in every blank with careful honesty,leaving a surge of hope passing through my chest.Only at that
moment did I realize that Muth had taught me far more than how to do a job-she had taught me how to believe in my own
worth.That was when it hit me that the best way to honor someone's wisdom is not to thank them with words,but to live it out in
every task we take on.
伏笔呼应分析表
原文伏笔
续写呼应句
呼应类型
Muth的话:“Don't just do enough
第3句:began not just to type but to correct every
error
主题呼应
to get by.Always do your best."
第4句:quietly repeating Muth's advice
原文“I felt that what I was doing
第5句:doing my best had already begun to change
心理呼应
was insignificant'
how others saw me
原文“since it wasn't my job to
第3句:began not just to type but to correct every
correct them,I typed them as they
行为呼应
error
were given to me"
原文“relocated us to New York
第6句:this was the chance Muth had told me to
情节呼应
City"
prepare for
第9句:Muth had taught me how to believe in my
Muth是a wise woman”
主题呼应
own worth
情感变化线
情感节点
对应句
情感词/动作
变化类型
羞愧觉醒
第1句
shame and determination
起点
停顿思考
第2句
fingers resting without moving
过渡
下定决心
第3句
Without hesitation
转折
专注投入
第4句
red pen in hand,eyes sharper
行动
被认可感
第5句
looked up in surprise
反馈
兴奋紧张
第6句
excitement->nervousness
复杂情绪
冷静专注
第7句
kept my eyes on my work
定力
情感节点
对应句
情感词/动作
变化类型
希望与感恩
第8句
surge of hope
期待
深刻领悟
第9句
believe in my own worth
升华
终极收获
第10句
live it out in every task
践行
情感弧线总览:
羞愧觉醒→停顿思考→下定决心→专注投入→被认可感→兴奋紧张→冷静专注→希望与感恩→深刻
领悟→践行智慧
评分细则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分.
2评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后
给分.
3.词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。
4评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:
5.与原文及所给段落开头语衔接的合理性:
6.节的丰富性与逻辑的连贯性;
7词汇和语法结构的准确性、丰富性;
8.语篇的连贯性及语言风格与原文的一致性。
各档次给分范围与要求各档次给分范围与要求
档次
分数
要求
第五
21-25
与原文衔接自然,情节发展合理且丰富;词汇丰富、语法结构多样且准确;语言流
档
分
畅,与原文风格高度一致;情感升华自然、有深度。
第四
16-20
与原文衔接较好,情节合理;词汇和语法结构较为丰富,有少量错误但不影响理解;
档
分
语言较流畅,与原文风格基本一致;有情感升华但深度一般。
第三
11-15
与原文有一定衔接,情节基本合理;词汇和语法结构能满足基本表达,有一些错误
档
分
但不影响整体理解;语言基本通顺;情感升华较浅或缺失。
第二
与原文衔接较差,情节不够合理或明显偏离;词汇和语法结构单一,错误较多,影
6-10分
档
响理解;语言不够通顺。
第一
1-5分
档
与原文脱节,情节混乱;词汇和语法错误严重,难以理解;语言不连贯。
本范文评分预估
评分维度
预估得分
说明
评分维度
预估得分
说明
与原文衔接合理性
5分
首句直接承接,第二段直接响应
情节丰富性与逻辑连贯性
5分
思考→行动→反馈→机会,四步推进
词汇与语法结构
4.5分
十句五定法句式多样,动词精准
语篇连贯性与风格一致性
5分
第一人称、朴素语言,与原文高度一致
情感升华
4.5分
从做好工作到相信自我价值,层次分明
总分预估
24分
属于第五档优秀范文
听力原文:
Text1
M:I just came back from Morocco and was amazed by the Atlas Mountains and coastal wetlands there.
W:Sounds wonderful!Did you watch the local women's horse show by the sea?
Text 2
W:You did a great job in the school track meet today and never gave up until the very end.
M:Thanks!The whole class was cheering me on,which really pushed me hard.
Text 3
M:How's your woodworking class going?
W:It's the most satisfying class I've ever taken.We're making wooden chairs from scratch and I feel a real sense of pride.
Text 4
W:The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming.Any plans?
M:My grandmother is hosting a big family dinner.We'll make mooncakes together using her secret recipe.
Text 5
M:Hello,Ms.Chen?I'm calling about the startup program.My team built an app for exchanging textbooks on campus.
W:It's still open for applications.I'll send you the form
Text 6
M:I heard you joined the wetland conservation project.What exactly do you do out there?
W:We monitor bird populations and remove invasive plants along the coast.It's tough work,but watching the sunrise over the
water makes it all worthwhile.
M:That sounds incredible!Is it open to new volunteers?
W:Absolutely!We welcome extra hands every weekend.You should come along-the team is wonderfully supportive,and the
experience will stay with you long after you leave.
Text 7
M:I see a poster about Shakespeare Festival on the wall.Is that happening on campus?
W:Yes,the drama club is putting on Romeo and Juliet next weekend.They've been rehearsing for nearly two months.
M:Wow,that sounds amazing.Are they performing the original version?
W:Mostly,though they've modernized a few scenes to make it more accessible to today's audience.I've read the play before,
but watching it live must be a completely different experience.
M:I've always wanted to see a Shakespeare play on stage.Do I need to buy tickets in advance?
W:I'd highly recommend it.Student tickets usually sell out fast,and you don't want to miss this opportunity.
M:Then I'll get one right away.Would you like to come with me?
W:I was always hoping you'd ask!I've already got my ticket.
Text 8
M:It's nice to see you in the architecture exhibition,Lisa.What do you think of the National Stadium model?
W:It's absolutely breathtaking!The steel structure weaves together like a bird's nest.
M:Exactly.The architects skillfully combined traditional Chinese ceramic art with modern engineering techniques.To me,it's a
brilliant example of how cultural heritage can breathe life into contemporary design.
W:I never realized architecture could carry such a rich story.Buildings are not just shelters-they're carriers of cultural
identity and historical memory.
M:Well said.Actually,there's a guided tour scheduled for next Saturday.Would you like to join?
W:I'd love to.
Text 9
M:Did you watch the news about the Mars explorer last night?It found new evidence of ancient water on the surface.
W:Yes,and it collected rock samples from an area once believed to be a vast lake.That brings us closer to answering whether
we are alone in the universe.
M:Absolutely.China's Tianwen program is making great progress-the next mission plans to bring back samples from Mars
for further study.
W:I hope one day I can work in space research.It's such an exciting field.
M:You should sign up for the summer program at the space agency.They're taking applications now.
Text 10
W:Today's lecture is about earthquake early warning systems.When an earthquake strikes,two types of waves will be released.
P-waves travel fast but cause little damage.S-waves are slower but far more destructive.Sensors placed along fault lines can
detect P-waves within seconds.They calculate the earthquake's location and magnitude,then send alerts to phones,trains,and
hospitals before the S-waves arrive.The warning time can be just seconds or up to a minute,depending on your distance from
the center.If you receive an alert while indoors,drop,cover,and hold on under a strong table.Stay away from windows and
heavy furniture.If you're driving,pull over and stay inside your vehicle.Japan,Mexico,and parts of the US already have such
systems in place.China is also developing its own early warning network,and with continued investment,we may soon have
nationwide coverage.
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