单元作文专项训练2026-2027学年人教版英语九年级上册
九年级上册
英语单元作文专项训练
Unit 1 — Unit 8 写作话题 · 审题思路 · 高分句式 · 范文点评
话题聚焦
本单元话题为“变化中的世界”,涉及家乡变迁、社会发展与个人成长。核心语法是一般过去时与现在完成时的对比(used to do / have done)。中考常考:写 Changes in My Life / My Hometown,或就“变化带来的影响”发表看法。文体以记叙文、说明文为主。
写作任务
写作任务(词数 80—110) |
题目:时光在变,生活在变。请以“Changes in My Life”为题写一篇短文,内容包括: 1. 学校或家庭生活的变化; 2. 学习方面的变化; 3. 一样始终不变的东西及你的感受。 要求:文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 |
审题指导
项目 | 内容 |
体裁 | 记叙 + 说明,第一人称 |
人称 | 第一人称(I / we) |
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项目 | 内容 |
时态 | 过去用一般过去时或 used to,现在用一般现在时或现在完成时 |
段落结构 | 三段:总起点题 → 三个方面的今昔对比 → 不变与感受 |
要点分配 | 每个方面用“过去一句 + 现在一句”成对呈现,最后一组写“不变” |
语料仓库
本单元写作成败在于时态交替:写“过去”用 used to 或一般过去时,写“现在”用一般现在时或现在完成时,两组务必成对出现。
中文 | 英文 |
发生巨大变化 | great changes have taken place |
在过去几年里 | over the last few years |
过去常常做某事 | used to do sth. |
被……覆盖 | be covered with |
变得更加自信 | become more confident |
参加小组讨论 | attend group discussions |
与朋友一起学习 | enjoy studying with friends |
始终不变 | stay the same |
搬进更大的房子 | move to a much larger flat |
取得如此多的成就 | achieve so much |
高分句型
- Great changes have taken place in my life in recent years.(take place 无被动语态)
- I used to walk to school, but now I take a bus every day.(used to 与现在时对照)
- My family has moved to a much larger flat, and my grandma lives with us now.(现在完成时 + much 修饰比较级)
- My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the love of my family.(教材金句收尾)
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范文与译文
范文 Model Essay |
Changes in My Life Now that I am in Grade 9, my life is quite different from what it was in primary school. My school has changed first. My primary school was near my home, so I used to walk there with my parents. Now my school is much farther away, and I take a bus with my friends every day. My home has changed too. We used to live in a small flat, but we have moved to a much larger one, and my grandma lives with us now. My way of studying is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family. (约 125 词) |
名师点评与易错提醒
结构对应教材:三组今昔对比(school / home / study)与课文结构一致,时态交替准确,阅卷易识别要点。
亮点:much larger(much 修饰比较级)、It's amazing how much we have achieved together(感叹式宾语从句)均出自本单元课文句式。
收束升华:结尾直接借用教材金句句式“one thing stays the same”,把变化落到不变的温情上。
- take place 无被动、无进行时,不说 Great changes are taken place。
- used to do 与 be used to doing 意思不同,不能混用。
- over the last few years / so far 与现在完成时连用,不与一般过去时连用。
话题聚焦
本单元话题为“令人崇敬的人物”,教材涉及袁隆平、屠呦呦、张骞、钟扬等榜样人
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