期中考试Unit1-3 话题作文分层训练 2026-2027学年外研版英语八年级上册

外研版英语八年级上册　期中考试　Unit 1—3

话题作文分层训练（2026—2027 学年）

【分层依据】本册期中范围是 Unit 1—Unit 3（This is me / Getting along / Make it happen!），语法主线是现在完成时（一）（二）与动词不定式、动名词作宾语。三层按词数、任务、思维三条线区分：基础巩固 70 词上下，照教材原任务仿写，要求要点完整、时态正确；能力提升 80 词上下，同任务换情境，补入细节与心理；拓展拔高 90 词上下，跨板块整合并写出评价，向期中书面表达的常见体裁靠拢。

【使用方式】先读【题目要求】确认教材出处与限制，再按【写作训练】列提纲、定句式；独立成文后对照【参考范文】【亮点词句】修改，最后用【给分点】自评互评。建议每单元从基础层做起，过关后再做提升层与拓展层；第四部分留到期中前限时使用。

第一部分　Unit 1　This is me

（一）基础巩固｜A speech about myself

【题目要求】教材 Unit 1 Presenting ideas（第 16 页）的写作任务是“Make a speech about yourself”，并给出 Introduction / Body / Conclusion 三段句式。请写一篇介绍自己的演讲稿，谈外貌、喜好、能力与变化；词数 70 左右；以一般现在时为主，用现在完成时写变化；不得出现真实姓名和校名。

【写作训练】三段照教材提纲走：开头用 I'd like to share with you my true self. 点题；主体按“外貌—喜好—变化”三句铺开，用 I have got... / I like... about myself. / I used to..., but now I can...；结尾用 I have learnt that I am what I am. 收束。变化处必须用现在完成时或 used to，这是本单元的语法得分点。

【参考范文】

Hello, everyone. I'd like to share with you my true self.

My name is Li Hua. I have got short black hair and a big smile. I like reading and playing basketball. I used to be shy, but now I can talk with new classmates. I have learnt to accept my mistakes, because they help me grow.

I have learnt that I am what I am. Thank you.

【亮点词句】高频短语（教材原句）：I'd like to share with you my true self.、I have got...、I used to..., but now I can...、I've learnt to accept...、I have learnt that I am what I am.；加分句型：I used to be shy, but now I can talk with new classmates.（used to 与 now 对照，一句写出变化）

【给分点】内容要点（4 分）：外貌、喜好、能力、变化四点齐全；语言表达（4 分）：现在完成时与 used to 使用正确；篇章结构（2 分）：引言—主体—结语三段完整，有称呼与致谢。

（二）能力提升｜A successful person I admire

【题目要求】教材 Unit 1 Developing ideas 板块 Reading for writing（第 15 页）的写作任务是“Write about a successful person”，提纲为挑战（doubts or fears）／如何克服／取得什么成就／你的评价。请按四栏写一位你敬佩的成功人士；词数 80 左右；叙事用一般过去时，评价用现在完成时与一般现在时；不得出现真实姓名和校名。

【写作训练】四栏各一段落要点：先写他面对的困难与怀疑（Many people doubted him...），再写他怎么做（He spent years... and failed many times.），接着写成就（Finally, he...），最后写评价（He has taught me that...）。困难要具体，成就用数字或事实支撑，评价句用现在完成时收束，体现“他影响了我”。

【参考范文】

The person I admire most is Yuan Longping.

When he was young, people in China often went hungry. He had a dream: rice plants as tall as trees. Many people doubted him, and some even laughed at him. But he did not give up. He spent years in the field and failed many times.

Finally, he developed hybrid rice and helped feed millions of people. I think he is a real hero. He has taught me that hard work can change the world.

【亮点词句】高频短语（教材原句）：face challenges、overcome、achieve、give up、learn from；加分句型：Many people doubted him, and some even laughed at him. But he did not give up.（正反对比 + but 转折，突出坚持）

【给分点】内容要点（4 分）：困难、做法、成就、评价四栏齐全；语言表达（4 分）：过去时叙事准确，评价句用现在完成时；篇章结构（2 分）：四段递进，末段点明对自己的影响。

（三）拓展拔高｜How I have changed

【题目要求】综合教材 Unit 1 Reading for writing（第 15 页）与 Presenting ideas（第 16 页），以“How I have changed”为题写一篇短文，写自己的一处变化及其原因；词数 90 左右；用现在完成时与 used to；不得出现真实姓名和校名。

【写作训练】按“过去—转折—现在—感悟”推进：开头用 Looking back, I have changed a lot. 总起；第二段写过去的状态（I used to be afraid of...）；第三段写转折事件（Last term, I joined...）与现在的样子（I have practised... / Now I can...）；结尾用 Changes are not easy, but they are worth the effort. 收束。全篇至少三处现在完成时。

【参考范文】

Looking back, I have changed a lot.

I used to be afraid of speaking in class. When the teacher asked a question, I looked down and said nothing. Last term, I joined the English club. I have practised speaking for half a year, and I have made three speeches in front of my class.

Now I can stand in front of the class and share my ideas. My parents say I have become more confident. I think so too. Changes are not easy, but they are worth the effort.

【亮点词句】高频短语（教材原句）：used to...、I've... for the first time、become more confident、worth the effort；加分句型：I have practised speaking for half a year, and I have made three speeches.（for + 时间段与现在完成时搭配）

【给分点】内容要点（4 分）：过去状态、转折事件、现在变化、感悟齐全；语言表达（4 分）：现在完成时与 used to 准确，for 与 since 区分清楚；篇章结构（2 分）：四层推进，首尾呼应。