Unit 2 单元写作专题(Word)-【勤径学升】2026-2027学年九年级上册英语同步练测(人教版·新教材)
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单元写作专题
话题概述
本单元以“激励人心的人物”为话题,要求学生学会运用“It + be + 形容词 + for/of sb + 动词不定式”结构表达对某人做事的看法和态度,并体现出对该人物对自身的影响和鼓舞。
主题范畴:人与自我
主题群:社会生活与学习
子主题:认识具有激励作用的名人及其带来的积极影响
句型荟萃
[开头句]
【1题答案】
【答案】Let’s learn about a famous person whose invention brought us light.
【解析】
【详解】“让我们了解一位名人,他的发明给我们带来了光亮。”译为Let’s learn about a famous person whose invention brought us light.,“让我们”用Let’s表示,“了解”用learn about表示,“一位名人”用a famous person表示,whose引导定语从句修饰先行词a famous person,“他的发明”用whose invention表示,“给我们带来了光亮”用brought us light表示。
【2题答案】
【答案】His experience inspires a lot of people in the world.
【解析】
【详解】“他的经历激励着世界上许多人。” 译为His experience inspires a lot of people in the world.,“他的”用His表示,“经历”用experience表示,“激励着”用inspires表示,“世界上许多人”用a lot of people in the world表示。
[中间句]
【3题答案】
【答案】He was born on 4th December 1980.
【解析】
【详解】“他出生在1980年12月4日。”译为He was born on 4th December 1980.“他”译为He,是句子的主语;“出生在”需用固定搭配be born,主语He为第三人称单数,且出生是过去的动作,故be动词用was;“1980年12月4日”是具体日期,译为4th December 1980,具体日期前用介词on,“on 4th December 1980”在句中作时间状语。
【4题答案】
【答案】He began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams.
【解析】
【详解】“他开始环游世界给年轻人做关于人生和梦想的演讲。”译为“He began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams.”,“开始”表达为begin,描述过去发生的动作需用一般过去时,故译为began,其后接不定式作宾语;“环游世界”表达为 travel around the world;“给年轻人做关于人生和梦想的演讲”表达为to give young people speeches on life and dreams,此处用动词不定式表目的。
[结尾句]
【5题答案】
【答案】From his experience, we learn that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard.
【解析】
【详解】“通过他的经历,我们学习到了只要努力没有什么是不可能的。”译为“From his experience, we learn that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard.”。“通过他的经历”用“From his experience”表示,作状语;“我们学习到”用“we learn”作主句,后面接that引导的宾语从句;“只要”用“as long as”引导条件状语从句;句子表达客观道理,应用一般现在时,nothing作宾语从句主语,is impossible作表语;as long as引导的条件状语从句主语为we,work hard作谓语。
【6题答案】
【答案】From his story, we have learnt that we should never give up no matter when facing difficulties in our life.
【解析】
【详解】根据汉语意思可知,本句时态为现在完成时。“通过他的故事”英文为“From his story”,介词短语作状语;“我们认识到了”英文为“we have learnt”,使用现在完成时;that引导宾语从句;“我们都应该永不放弃”翻译为“we should never give up”,“should never give up”表示“永不放弃”;“no matter when” 意为“无论什么时候”,引导让步状语从句,这里用了省略结构no matter when (we are) facing difficulties;“遇到困难”英文为“facing difficulties”;“在我们的人生中”英文为“in our life”,介词短语作状语。
[佳句积累]
1. Inspiring people show us the way forward. 鼓舞人心的人为我们指引前进的道路。
2. If I am walking with two other men, each of them will serve as my teacher. I will pick out the good points of the one and imitate them, and the bad points of the other and correct them in myself. 三人行,必有我师焉。择其善者而从之,其不善者而改之。
例题展示
【7题答案】
【答案】例文
Nick Vujicic is a world-famous speaker.
He was born in Australia on 4th December 1982. He was born without arms or legs, but he learnt to swim, get dressed, use a computer and so on. At 21, Nick graduated from university. Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams. He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far. In 2008, he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake. He has visited China five times.
From his story, I have learnt that we should not give up no matter when facing difficulties in our life.
【解析】
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般过去时为主
明确要点:基本信息、主要事迹、感悟
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)和第三人称
注意事项:包含写作提示中的所有信息,不得泄露个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:介绍Nick Vujicic的基本信息
主体段:详述主要事迹
结尾段:表达个人感悟
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:基本信息
was born in Australia on 4th December 1982/without arms or legs/was born on December 4, 1982, in Australia/no arms or legs at birth等
要点二:主要事迹
learnt to swim, get dressed, use a computer and so on/graduated from university/began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams/has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people/visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake/has visited China five times/graduated at 21/traveled the world/gave speeches on life and dreams等
要点三:感悟
should not give up/learn to be strong等
审题立意
谋篇布局
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰,开篇点题。主体用一般过去时介绍人物出生和主要事迹,用现在完成时表达贡献,结尾用现在完成时谈及感触。要点全面,时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
③句式it was very hard for him to do all the things为本单元新学重点知识,用在这里恰到好处,体现了学以致用。
①④⑤Unfortunately、then、from his story等过渡词语运用得当。
②even though引导的让步状语从句,表达出主人公行动的艰难。
⑥结尾的现在完成时,表达了作者的心得和收获。
实战演练
【8题答案】
【答案】例文:
Dear Simon,
I’m so happy to hear that you are quite interested in China’s long history. Now I’d like to share with you the story of one of the wise persons that I most admire in our history.
Zhuge Liang was a wise man in China’s Three Kingdoms period. A leader named Liu Bei visited him three times to ask for help. Zhuge Liang agreed and helped Liu Bei build his kingdom.
He did many smart things. Once, he borrowed 100,000 arrows from enemies using straw boats. He also made simple tools to carry food for soldiers. He was loyal to his country all his life.
I admire him for his wisdom and loyalty. His stories tell us wisdom and loyalty matter.
I hope you can come to China and experience our history and culture together!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:书信类应用文,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点:人物简介(诸葛亮),主要事迹及个人评价(需体现“敬佩”),期待Simon来中国亲身感受历史与文化
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)和第三人称(He)
注意事项:包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,不得泄露个人信息
[第二步:构思布局]
结构:
开头:表达高兴,引出最敬佩的智者
主体:介绍诸葛亮(三国时期),列举事迹(如草船借箭),表达敬佩与评价
结尾:发出邀请,期待Simon来中国亲身体验
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:人物简介(诸葛亮)
a wise man in China’s Three Kingdoms period/helped Liu Bei build his kingdom/a famous strategist in the Three Kingdoms period等
要点二:主要事迹及个人评价
主要事迹:borrowed 100,000 arrows from enemies using straw boats/made simple tools to carry food for soldiers/used straw boats to cleverly collect thousands of arrows from the enemy等
个人评价:loyal to his country all his life/admire him for his wisdom and loyalty/not only smart but also very loyal to his country/his loyalty has been praised for centuries等
要点三:邀请与期待
hope you can come to China and experience our history and culture together/hope you can come to China one day to experience its rich history and culture in person等
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单元写作专题
话题概述
本单元以“激励人心的人物”为话题,要求学生学会运用“It + be + 形容词 + for/of sb + 动词不定式”结构表达对某人做事的看法和态度,并体现出对该人物对自身的影响和鼓舞。
主题范畴:人与自我
主题群:社会生活与学习
子主题:认识具有激励作用的名人及其带来的积极影响
句型荟萃
[开头句]
1. 让我们了解一位名人,他的发明给我们带来了光亮。(learn about)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 他的经历激励着世界上许多人。(inspire)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
[中间句]
3. 他出生在1980年12月4日。(be born on…)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 他开始环游世界给年轻人做关于人生和梦想的演讲。(give sb speeches on...)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
[结尾句]
5. 通过他的经历,我们学习到了只要努力没有什么是不可能的。(as long as)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
6. 通过他的故事,我们认识到了在我们的人生中,无论什么时候遇到困难,我们都应该永不放弃。(no matter when)
____________________________________________________________________________________________
[佳句积累]
1. Inspiring people show us the way forward. 鼓舞人心的人为我们指引前进的道路。
2. If I am walking with two other men, each of them will serve as my teacher. I will pick out the good points of the one and imitate them, and the bad points of the other and correct them in myself. 三人行,必有我师焉。择其善者而从之,其不善者而改之。
例题展示
7. 以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息,请根据这些信息和要求,写一篇英语短文,介绍他的不平凡的事迹,以及你的感触。
项目
信息及要求
生日
1982年12月4日
出生地
澳大利亚
主要事迹
1. 一生下来就没有双臂和双腿,但他学会了游泳、穿衣服、使用电脑等。
2. 21岁大学毕业后周游世界做演讲,与年轻人谈人生和梦想,至今有三百多万人听过他的演讲。
3. 2008年来成都帮助地震中的幸存者 (survivors),到过中国5次。
你从他的故事中学到了什么?
写一点即可。
写作要求:
1. 不少于80词 (所给部分不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Nick Vujicic is a world-famous speaker. ________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
审题立意
谋篇布局
名师点评
[主题评价]文章结构清晰,开篇点题。主体用一般过去时介绍人物出生和主要事迹,用现在完成时表达贡献,结尾用现在完成时谈及感触。要点全面,时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
③句式it was very hard for him to do all the things为本单元新学重点知识,用在这里恰到好处,体现了学以致用。
①④⑤Unfortunately、then、from his story等过渡词语运用得当。
②even though引导的让步状语从句,表达出主人公行动的艰难。
⑥结尾的现在完成时,表达了作者的心得和收获。
实战演练
8. 假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友Simon在来信中表达对中国悠久的历史非常感兴趣,请你写一封回信,介绍你最敬佩的中国历史上的一位智者。
写作提示:
1. 人物简介 (诸葛亮);
2. 主要事迹及你的评价;
3. 期待Simon来中国亲身感受中国历史与文化。
写作要求:
1. 不少于80词 (所给部分不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
参考词汇:三国时期Three Kingdoms period; 箭arrow; 草船straw boats; 忠诚的loyal; 忠诚loyalty; 因为某事敬佩某人admire…for…
Dear Simon,
I’m so happy to hear that you are quite interested in China’s long history. Now I’d like to share with you the story of one of the wise persons that I most admire in our history.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
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