（课件）演讲稿向大国工匠学习写作-Unit6 Carrying Forward Craftsmanship-《英语 拓展模块》（高教版第三版）【单元写作精讲】

An Introduction to a Person learning objectives 1. Master speech‑related vocabulary, phrases and sentence patterns for speech writing. 2. Learn the format and features of an English speech. 3. Write a 80‑120‑word speech with complete points, proper tone and reasonable logic. Lead‑in Group Discussion： 1. Who are some great national craftsmen you know? 2. What key information should we include when we write a speech? What is a Speech ● 定义：A speech is a kind of practical writing. We use it to express opinions, share feelings and call on listeners in public. ● 核心写作逻辑： Greeting → Speech topic → Introduction to great national craftsmen & their spirits → Personal understanding → Appeal & call‑for‑action → Closing thanks What is a Speech 和议论文的区别 A speech focuses on emotional expression and calls on people to take action；an argumentative essay mainly aims to prove opinions with logic. 链接高考 ● 考情解读：Speech is a high‑frequency practical writing test type. It often appears in theme‑based examinations, word‑count requirement:80‑120 words，10 points. ● 命题场景：speech under the national flag, class meeting, speech contest；finish writing according to given Chinese tips. ● 高考采分点： 链接高考 ①文体区分：Tell speech apart from argumentative essays. A speech needs greetings and closing thanks, and it should be encouraging. ②人称：First‑person “we” is preferred. Language should be oral and suitable for reading aloud. ③采分四要素：greetings & topic; craftsmen & spirits; personal thoughts; appeal & closing thanks. Points missing will lead to direct score loss. Basic Vocabulary craftsman n. 工匠 spirit n. 精神 devotion n. 奉献 effort n. 努力 example n. 榜样 duty n. 责任 skill n. 技艺 practice v. 磨炼；练习 Advanced Vocabulary excellence n. 卓越 perseverance n. 坚持不懈 dedication n. 爱岗敬业 pursue v. 追求 inherit v. 传承 overcome v. 攻克（困难） besides adv. 此外 therefore adv. 因此 Useful Phrases 🔹Opening‑Greeting & Topic（开场问候与主题） Today my topic is… 今天我演讲的主题是…… set good examples for us 为我们树立好榜样 learn from great national craftsmen 向大国工匠学习 Useful Phrases 🔹Body‑Examples & Feelings（主体事例感悟） work for decades 数十年如一日 strive for excellence 追求精益求精 overcome difficulties 克服困难 do ordinary work perfectly 将平凡工作做到极致 Useful Phrases 🔹Ending‑Appeal & Closing（结尾倡议与结束语） follow their example 以他们为榜样 start with small things 从小事做起 take on our times’ duty 担负时代使命 That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 我的演讲完毕，谢谢大家！ Sentence Patterns Opening（开篇：问候 + 点明演讲主题） Basic：Dear teachers and fellow students. Good morning! Today my topic is Learn from Great National Craftsmen. Body‑1（主体 1：介绍大国工匠与工匠精神） Basic：Great national craftsmen are our role models. They show the spirit of craftsmen through their hard work. Sentence Patterns Body‑2（主体 2：联系自身谈感悟） Basic：As teenagers in the new age, we should learn from them. In our study and daily life, we need to… Ending（结尾：发出倡议 + 结束语） Basic：Let’s learn from these craftsmen and make progress step by step. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! Writing Focus 1. Person：Use first‑person “we” to get close to listeners. 2. Tone：Simple oral English, fit for reading aloud. Avoid complex difficult sentences. 3. Writing logic：Greetings → Topic → Craftsmen & spirits → Personal ideas → Appeal → Thanks 4. Linking words：firstly, besides, therefore, let’s… Common Mistakes （1）文体混淆，写成议论文 ❌ Wrong：Write long logical arguments directly without greetings or closing thanks. ✅ Right：Keep greetings and closing. Use encouraging and calling‑on language. Common Mistakes （2）要点缺失 ❌ Wrong：Only tell craftsmen’s stories without teenagers’ reflection or action suggestions. ✅ Right：Four parts are necessary: greetings; topic & examples; personal understanding; appeal & thanks. Common Mistakes （3）Sentences too complicated for oral speech ❌ Wrong：Use long complex sentences hard to read. ✅ Right：Use short clear sentences for public speaking. Four Key Points 1. Greeting & Topic：Greet audience and show your speech topic (opening) 2. Theme & Examples：Introduce great national craftsmen and their spirits (main body) 3. Personal Understanding：Share your thoughts as teenagers 4. Appeal & Closing：Call on actions and give closing thanks (ending) Writing Template Dear teachers and fellow students, Good morning! Today my topic is Learn from Great National Craftsmen. Great national craftsmen are ________. They ________ and show us the valuable craftsman spirit. Writing Template As teenagers of the new age, we should learn from them. Firstly, we need to ________. Besides, we should ________ in our daily study. Let’s follow their examples and keep moving forward. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! Writing Task Write an English speech (80‑120 words): Learn from Great National Craftsmen 提示要点： 1. Occasion: speech under the national flag 场合：国旗下讲话 2. Audience: teachers and all school students 听众：全校师生 3. Theme: Learn from Great National Craftsmen 主题：向大国工匠学习 Writing Task 4. Main points: ‑大国工匠是我们的榜样，追求卓越，坚守岗位 ‑作为青少年，学习他们认真、坚持的精神 ‑倡议：在学习中脚踏实地，做好每件小事 Steps for Writing Dear teachers and fellow students, Good morning! Today my topic is Learn from Great National Craftsmen. Great national craftsmen are our role models. They stick to their jobs and strive for excellence with hard work. Their spirit of perseverance is well worth learning. Model Essay As teenagers of the new age, we should learn from them. Firstly, we ought to take our study seriously. Besides, we need to keep trying when we meet difficulties. Let’s start from small things and make steady progress. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! Summary 1. Words & phrases：master speech‑related words and useful expressions 2. Sentences：opening sentences, body sentences and closing sentences for a speech 3. Structure：four‑point writing structure（greeting‑theme&examples‑personal‑appeal‑thanks） 4. Rules：Use first‑person “we”; distinguish speech from argumentative essay; use proper linking words. Homework 1. Basic：Recite the template and key sentences, copy the model essay. 2. Advanced：Write another short speech about learning from role models around us. Thank You！ $