Unit 1 - Unit 3 期中综合测试卷 2026-2027学年沪教版五四学制英语九年级上册

听力部分a listen . to the sentence . and choose the correct picture。Each sentence will be red twice. 第一题。听句子。从三幅图片中选择一幅与你听到的句子相符合的图片，每个句子读两遍。One, a school councillor is giving helpful advice to students who meet all kinds of daily troubles. A school counsellor is giving helpful advice to students who meet all kinds of daily troubles. Two teenagers . are usually . troubled by the physical changes, like pimples on their faces. Teenagers are usually troubled by the physical changes. like pimples on their faces. Three years ago, a skilled weaver made great pieces of cloth with his own hands. Years ago, a skilled we've had made great pieces of cloth with his own hands. For some Young girls are practicing bali hard in the dance room for the next month's performance. Some Young girls are practicing ballet hard in the dance room for the next month's performance. Five, many families often get together and enjoy nice gifts at the Christmas celebration. Many families often get together and enjoy nice gifts at the Christmas celebration. Be, listen to the short dialogues and choose the best answer to the question you hear. Each dialogue will be read twice. 第二题听短对话，选出恰当的答案。每段对话读两遍。Six, hey. so fear, I heard you gave up your volleyball training recently. What made you change your plan? Well. volleyball is still my favorite sport, but my chemistry has fAllen behind, so I decide to spend more time on IT after school. Question, what will sofia spend more time on after school? Hey, so fear, I heard you gave up your volleyball training recently. What made you change your plan? Well, volleyball is still my favorite sport, but my chemistry has fAllen behind, so I decide to spend more time on IT after school. Question, what will sofia spend more time on after school? Seven, hi mark, you look tired. Did you stay up late again last night? Yes, I plan to finish my geography report before ten. However, my desk may called me and we talked about the coming speech competition for nearly forty minutes. I finally finish the reporter eleven. twenty. No wonder you can hardly keep your eyes open in class question, when did mark finish his geography report . last night? Hi mark, you look tired. Did you stay up late again last night? Yes, I plan to finish my geography report before ten. However, my desk mate called me and we talked about the coming speech competition for nearly forty minutes. I finally finished the report at . eleven twenty. No wonder you can hardly keep your eyes open in class question, when did mark finish his geography report last night? Eight. Kevin, how was . your volunteer work at the old people's home last sunday? At first, I felt extremely nervous. I feared I would have nothing to talk about with the elders, but later we shared stories and play games together. I learned a lot from this . special experience. Wow, that's amazing question. How did Kevin feel about his volunteer work in the end? Kevin, how was your volunteer work at the old people's home last sunday? At first, I felt extremely nervous. I feared I would have nothing to talk about with the elders, but later we shared stories and play games together. I learned a lot from this special experience. Wow, that's amazing question. How did Kevin feel about his volunteer work in the end? Nine, tom, i've gone through your book report. You chose the live story of a great inventor, right? Did you enjoy reading IT? To be honest, some parts were a little dough. The inventor didn't become famous overnight. He went through plenty of failures and doubts from people around him. I used to believe talent alone could bring success. Now I hold a totally different opinion. Would you like to share your ideas with the class tomorrow? I'd love to . question which is true . about the book. According to the dialogue, tom, i've gone through your book report, you chose the live story of a great inventor. right? Did you enjoy reading IT? To be honest, some parts were a little dough. The inventor didn't become famous overnight. He went through plenty of failures and doubts from people around him. I used to believe talent alone could bring success. Now I hold a totally different opinion. Would you like to share your ideas with the class tomorrow? I'd love to question . which is true about the book according to the dialogue. Ten, nowadays, many teenagers feel stressed, some worry about their school grades, while others have trouble getting along with their family members. Exactly actually doing outdoor activities or keeping diaries are both useful ways to deal with these feelings. I agree, we shouldn't keep all our worries . deep inside question. what are the two speakers mainly talking about nowadays? Many teenagers feel stressed. Some worry about their school grades, while others have trouble getting along with their family members. Exactly actually doing outdoor activities or keeping diaries are both useful ways to deal with these feelings. I agree, we shouldn't keep all our worries deep inside. Question, what are the two speakers mainly talking about? See, listen to the long conversation and choose the best answer. The conversation will be read twice. 第三题，听对话，选出恰当的答案。对话读两遍。Hi leo, you look upset. What's troubling you? My parents keep pushing me to take piano lessons after school. Don't you enjoy playing the piano? I remember you once loved IT . I used to, but now they expect me to enter the city level piano competition. They think winning the prize will be good for my future high school application. However, I really want to spend my spare time on science projects. Have you told them your real . thoughts? I tried several times, but they said I was too Young to make such important decisions. They think joining the science club will take too much of my time. That must hurt your feelings. Last week, I failed . a small piano test. My parents were so disappointed that they hardly talk to me for two days. IT sounds like pressure from your family is driving you crazy. That's just how I feel. Then what . are you planning to do next? I'm thinking of asking my class teacher for help. Maybe he can communicate with my parents for me, I hope they can understand my true interest one day. Hi leo, you look upset. What's troubling you? My parents keep pushing me to take piano lessons after school. Don't you enjoy playing the piano? I remember you once loved IT . I used to, but now they expect me to enter the city level piano competition. They think winning the prize will be good for my future high school application. However, I really want to spend my spare time on science projects. Have you told them your . real thoughts? I tried several times, but they said I was too Young to make such important decisions. They think joining the science club will take too much of my time. That must hurt your feelings. Last week. I failed a small piano test. My parents were so disappointed that they hardly talk to me for two days. IT sounds like pressure from your family is driving you crazy. That's just how I feel. Then what . are you planning to do next? I'm thinking of asking my class teacher for help. Maybe he can communicate with my parents. For me, I hope they can understand my true interest one day. D listen to the passage and complete the table. Each blank should be filled with no more than three words. The passage will be read twice. 第四题。听短文，填写表格，每空不超过三个词，短文读。两遍。Hello, boys and girls. Today i'd like to share a true story with you. IT was about a letter a boy received during his teenage years. At that time, he was about fourteen years old and full of worries. A sudden blow in his life made him lose confidence. His parents got divorced and neither of them could take care of him, so he had to move to a new school and live in a tiny and poor apartment with his grandparents. He could not afford new clothes. This poverty made him feel different from his classroom mates, and he grew even more lonely and sad every day. Besides, he became very worried about his appearance and thought he looked ugly. His skin was darker and his hair was earlier. He felt some classmates were always staring at him and judging him. He even avoided looking at himself in the mirror. He couldn't focus on his study anymore, and his grades continued dropping. One day, his best friend sent him a tiny gift, a small letter with encouraging words. IT said, you are special and clever. That small letter touched his heart deeply. From that moment, he decided to work hard on his studies and never gave up again. Now he is a top student in his class and believes that every difficulty can be overcome. Hello, boys and girls, today i'd like to share a true story with you. IT was about a letter a boy received during his teenage years. At that time, he was about fourteen years old and full of worries. A sudden blow in his life made him lose confidence. His parents got divorced and neither of them could take care of him. So he had to move to a new school and living a tiny and poor apartment with his grandparents. He could not afford new crothers. This poverty made him feel different from his classroom mates, and he grew even more lonely and sad every day. Besides, he became very worried about his appearance and thought he looked ugly. His skin was darker and his hair was earlier. He felt some classroom mates were always staring at him and judging him. He even avoided looking at himself in the mirror. He couldn't focus on his study anymore, and his grades continued dropping. One day, his best friend sent him a tiny gift, a small letter with encouraging words. IT said, you are special and clever. That small letter touched his heart deeply. From that moment, he decided to work hard on his studies and never gave up again. Now he is a top student in his class and believes that every difficulty can be overcome. 九年级第一学期英语综合练习2(140分) Part I Listening 第一部分 听力(30分) I. Choose the best answer. A. Listen and choose the right picture. (5分) B. Listen to the short conversation and choose the best answer.(5分) ( )6. A. Volleyball training. B. Her chemistry study. C. Her favourite sports. ( )7. A. Before ten. B. At 10:40. C. At 11:20. ( )8. A. Nervous. B. Meaningful. C. Boring. ( )9. A. Tom thinks most parts of the book are dull. B. The inventor in the book succeeded very easily. C. The book changed Tom’s opinion about success. ( )10. A. Teenagers’ problems and ways to solve them. B. How to improve students’ school grades. C. How to get along with family members. C. Listen to the dialogue and choose the best answer. (10分) ( )11. Why is Leo upset recently? A. He failed an important piano competition. B. He faces great pressure from his parents. C. He can’t get along well with his science teacher. ( )12. According to Leo, what do his parents believe? A. Leo is old enough to choose his own hobbies. B. Joining the science club will improve his study. C. Winning a piano prize helps his high school application. ( )13. What did Leo’s parents do after he failed the piano test? A. They seldom spoke to him for two days. B. They encouraged him to take more practice. C. They allowed him to try the science project. ( )14. What suggestion does Leo come up with at last? A. He will stop piano lessons right away. B. He will ask his class teacher for help. C. He will give up his science project. ( )15. What is the main idea of the conversation? A. Different ways to develop different hobbies. B. How to prepare for a piano competition. C. A teenager’s trouble with his parents about hobbies. D. Listen to the dialogue and complete the table. No more than three words for each blank. (10分) A Life-changing letter Introduction The speaker shares a story of a boy during his teenage years. Problems His parents’ divorce—16 in his life made him lose confidence. The 17 of his family made him feel different from other students. He became very worried about his 18 and thought he looked ugly. His grades 19. Turning Point His best friend gave him 20— a small letter with encouraging words. Result He decided to work hard on his studies and never gave up again. Part II Grammar and vocabulary 第二部分 语法和词汇(30分) II. Choose the best answer. (10分) The Spring Festival has been added to the UNESCO list of Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity(联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产名录). People across China and in Chinese communities around the world are celebrating this honor with pride. The decision was made at a UNESCO meeting in December 2024. The organization praised the festival for its colorful traditions, its focus on family, and the way 21 we spend time with our family. The festival shows people's hopes for a better life and their love for both their family and country. The Spring Festival is the 22 holiday for Chinese people. It has a history of over 4,000 years. Today, it is still a joyful time for family reunions, enjoying festive meals, giving red envelopes, and lighting fireworks. Traditional art forms such as dragon dances, paper cutting, and lantern shows continue 23 the season. The news spread quickly online. On the social media, a hashtag(话题标签)about UNESCO's decision drew more than 400 million views. Many users suggested calling the festival by its Chinese name, Chunjie. This is like how more people now use "loong" 24 "dragon" to highlight the unique character of the Chinese creature. 25 UNESCO's official recognition, the festival is seen as a cultural treasure for all — one that brings joy, hope and togetherness to people everywhere. ( )21. A. who B. that C. what ( )22. A. important B. more important C. most important ( )23. A. to brighten B. to brightening C. brighten ( )24. A. as well B. instead of C. without ( )25. A. Although B. Due to C. Because Chua Lam,(蔡澜) a famous food critic(评论家)in the Chinese-speaking world, died at 83 in 2025. Known as one of Hong Kong's "four great talents," Chua was a popular movie producer, a writer and a host of food and travel shows. Here's an 26 with him in 2016. Host: Why did you turn from movies to food writing? Chua: When I was a film producer, I had to travel around the world to find film locations. Other team members focused on the scenery27 I focused more on food, which I am always interested in. I was invited to write a column(专栏)and the publishers let me write anything I liked. So, I wrote a lot about food and restaurants. Now, people see 28 as a food critic. Host: What is good food? Chua: A good meal is more than just the taste. It is related to your memory and preference. Many people think the food cooked by their mother is the best. Many migrants love the food of the countries where they come from. I was born in Singapore and I like many Singaporean dishes. But now I think the lifestyle has changed so much in Singapore that the taste is 29 when I was young. Host: Who is the cook at home, you or your wife? Chua: I am the cook at home. I can cook 30 different types of noodles in a month, one dish for each day. I believe one should eat whatever they enjoy and keep 30 all the time. A happy person will also be a healthy person. ( )26. A. interview B. survey C. program ( )27. A. because B. while C. so ( )28. A. me B. myself C. mine ( )29. A. the same as B. similar to C. different from ( )30. A. smile B. smiling C. to smile III. Complete the following passage with the words or phrases in the box.(10分) A. emergency B. equipment C. interior D. quickly E. slowly F. patient A firefighter is a hero in our community. He must be 31 with frightened people when carrying out rescues. Before every mission, he carefully checks his fire-fighting 32 to make sure everything works properly. When a(n) 33 happens, he will react 34 and rush to the scene. When he enters the 35 part of a burning building, he moves carefully and watches out for possible dangers. The work is full of risks. It teaches us that people in such jobs stick to their duties and protect others with courage. A. organize B. standard C. period D. background E. fix F. scientific Mr Li is a community researcher. He has a strong educational 36 and rich working experience. He will 37 a survey on teenagers' after-school lives. During this 38 of time, he will set a high 39 for all collected data. He will use 40 methods to study the information. He hopes to find out what troubles young people most. He will talk with students and their parents. He believes the results can help schools understand teenagers better and offer proper support. IV. Complete the dialogue(10分) Charlie is asking his teacher Rachel for some information about the election for Sports Minister of the Student Union tomorrow. Rachel: Hi, Charlie. You look a little nervous. What's wrong? Charlie: Good morning, Ms Rachel. I'm worried about the election for Sports Minister of the Student Union tomorrow. Rachel: Don't worry. You should believe in yourself. You would make a good leader. Charlie: Thanks. But I still have some questions about it. Rachel: Of course. Feel free to ask me anything. Charlie: First, (41) ?(询问时间) I need to get there on time. Rachel: It will start at 2 p.m. Don't be late. Charlie: Got it. And (42) ?(根据下文提问) Rachel: You need to prepare a 3-minute speech and a poster about yourself. Charlie: OK. I have prepared both of them. By the way, (43) ?(一般疑问句) I heard it was going to be moved to the gym last week. Rachel: No, it isn't. It's still going to be held in the school hall on the second floor. Charlie: Could you please tell me (44) ?(询问时长) I need to take a maths exam at 4 p.m. Rachel: I think it will only take one and a half hours in total. Charlie: Thank you so much for telling me that. I'm a little afraid of speaking in front of many people. Rachel: Take it easy. Just speak confidently and clearly. Charlie: I will. (45) .(作出恰当回应) Rachel: You're welcome! Good luck tomorrow! Part III Reading and writing 第三部分 读写 V. Reading Comprehension A. Read the passage and complete the task.(12分) Our concerns Tom: I feel shy when meeting new people. During breaks, I often stay by myself, even though I really wish I could join others. I just don't know how to start a conversation. Mia: Sometimes I speak too quickly without thinking and end up hurting others' feelings. I always regret it later but find it really hard to say sorry properly. Alex: I've been getting more pimples recently, and it really bothers me. I feel like everyone is staring at my face, and I've even started avoiding photos and social gatherings because of it. Daniel: Whenever I have a big test, I get so nervous that my mind goes blank or my heart races. I know the material when I study, but during the exam, I just panic (惊慌) and forget everything. Emma: My teacher seems very serious and busy all the time. I'm worried that if I ask for help, I might bother him. So, I usually stay quiet even when I don't understand something in class. Our suggestions A. Before you speak, try taking a moment to think. If you do hurt someone, a sincere and specific apology like "I'm sorry I said " or "that was thoughtless of me" can make a big difference. B. Skin issues are very common during teenage years. Instead of avoiding social situations, try following a healthy skincare routine and remind yourself that people focus far less on your skin than on who you are. C. Joining a study group or a club is a great way to make friends and learn from others. You are likely to find students with common interests there. D. Practise deep breathing exercises before the test to calm your nerves. Also, keep in mind that it's ok to skip a question and come back to it later. E. Teachers are usually happy to help students who show they want to learn. Try asking your question after class, starting with, "Could I please ask for a quick explanation of ?" This shows you value their time. F. Start small. You don't need a long conversation. Just a "hello," or a simple question like "Did you enjoy today's activity?" can be a great first step. Task 1: Match the suggestions with the concerns. 46.Tom: 47.Mia: 48.Alex: 49.Daniel: 50.Emma: Task 2: Choose the best answer. ( )51. Which section of the school newspaper is this content most likely from? A. Campus News & Events B. Sports & Competitions C. Counsellor's Corner D. Learning Zone B. Read the passage and choose the best answer (共14分) When you think of a job related to video games, you might picture endless fun and playtime—but for a video game tester, the reality is far from that. While it sounds like a dream to get paid to play games, the routine work involves repetition, intense focus and long hours—something few people expect. Game testers don’t play games from start to finish like you do at home. Instead, their job is to hunt for “bugs”—small problems or mistakes in the game. They might spend hours testing the same 10 seconds of a game again and again, testing a single button on a controller, or checking that a children’s game functions as it’s supposed to, even if it bores them to tears. As one tester puts it, “We sit and look at a screen all day, but it’s not like playing a game at home.” The work also demands stamina. It’s not just boring—it’s physically and mentally tiring to repeat the same small tasks for 8 to 10 hours a day. Many testers work late into the night, drinking coffee to keep their eyes open and their minds focused on spotting bugs. The work is already hard, and the low pay only makes matters worse. So most people quit within a few months. Yet young people still line up for the job, thinking it will be all fun and games. This gap between expectation and reality mirrors the world of professional gaming. Pro gamers also work very hard. They train for many hours every day, often focusing on just one game. They play in teams, practise together, and compete in big tournaments with large prize money. To be good, they need discipline and a lot of practice, not just talent. Whether testing games or competing professionally, the gaming industry proves that jobs tied to play are still jobs. So the next time you pick up a controller, remember: behind every smooth-running game, there are people working hard to make it good. It is not all fun and games after all. ( )52. What does the underlined word “that” in Paragraph 1 refer to? A. Endless fun and playtime B. The job of a video game tester C. The reality of the work D. A dream job with high pay ( )53. What is the main job of a video game tester? A. Playing games from start to finish for fun. B. Finding small problems in the game. C. Designing new buttons for game controllers. D. Competing in video game tournaments. ( )54. What does the underlined word “stamina” in Paragraph 3 probably mean? A. Ability. B. Patience. C. Confidence. D. Memory. ( )55. Why do most game testers quit within a few months? A. The work is easy but they have to work long hours. B. They get high pay but have no free time for rest. C. The work is tiring and they get very low pay. D. They can’t choose which video games to test. ( )56. What does it take to be a good pro gamer based on the passage? ①Ability to work in a team ②Good communication skills ③Talent for playing video games ④Strong discipline and much practice A. ①②③ B. ②③④ C. ①③④ D. ①②④ ( )57. What does the author mean by saying “… jobs tied to play are still jobs”? A. People can easily get jobs in the gaming industry. B. People can make a living by playing games. C. The gaming industry needs people to play games. D. The gaming industry jobs need hard work. ( )58. What message does the author want to tell us? A. Jobs related to video games are not as fun as people think. B. Pro games can win big prize money in competitions. C. Game testers are a popular job in the world. D. Video games are bad for young people’s health. C. Choose the best answer and complete the passage (18分) Sam Oliner was 12 years old when German soldiers, Nazis, swept through his Polish village in 1942. They forced all Jewish families (犹太家庭) to leave their homes and live in a crowded 59 area 10 miles away. Two months later, the Nazis returned at dawn, yelling and banging on doors. Sam's stepmother told him to run away. Still in his pajamas, he hid on the roof and watched soldiers take his family away. The next day, Sam sneaked back to find the only photo of his mom, who had died years ago, but it was gone. He grabbed clothes and began a lonely 60 for survival, wandering alone, sleeping in animal barns and eating wild fruit. After days, he walked to a village where a woman named Balwina lived. She had gone to school with Sam's father. When she opened the door, she 61 recognized him. Balwina said, "You poor boy. I will help. You must live." She took Sam inside, 62 helping Jews meant the Nazis could kill her. Balwina gave Sam a new name, and helped him pretend to be a farm worker. For three years, Sam worked on farms, never daring to _63_ his true identity until the war ended. After the war, Sam moved to America and went to college. Sam always remained 64 to Balwina. He always wondered: Why did Balwina risk her life to save him when others would have 65? To find answers, Sam became a social scientist. With his wife Pearl, he studied people during the Holocaust (大屠杀). He 66 those who helped Jews and those who didn't. The results showed that, with a greater sense of responsibility for the well-being of others, rescuers tended to trust people and care about others, 67 non-rescuers often felt too afraid or unsure. They tended to focus on themselves. Pearl explained, though, they weren't necessarily bad. Sam spent his life teaching that kindness can be taught and developed. He says, "In the midst of evil are rays of hope." In spite of the horror he witnessed as a boy, Sam believes: acts of kindness can give people hope and help create a more caring world. ( )59. A. remote B. quiet C. dirty D. small ( )60. A. life B. adventure C. trip D. struggle ( )61. A. immediately B. suddenly C. directly D. finally ( )62. A. because B. even though C. as if D. so that ( )63. A. admit B. prove C. seek D. hide ( )64. A. careful B. hopeful C. grateful D. faithful ( )65. A. gave him a hand B. cheered him up C. looked down on him D. turned him away ( )66. A. questioned B. judged C. compared D. separated ( )67. A. As a result B. On the other hand C. In addition D. After all D. Read the passage and complete the tasks. (16分.) Conquering the “I’ll Do It Tomorrow” monster Good morning, everyone. Let’s be honest — how many of you have ever told yourselves, “I’ll start this tomorrow,” only to find yourself stressed and rushing the night before it’s due? Yeah, me too. For the longest time, I was the master of procrastination (拖延). “One more video” was my motto, and my to-do lists were forever unfinished. My breaking point came in 10th grade. I had a major history presentation. I had weeks to prepare for it. My plan was beautiful … in my head. In reality, I spent those weeks doing everything but the work. The night before, I was a disaster — cramming, crying, and trying to stay awake. The result was disappointing, and I was exhausted. I knew I needed a real change. My turnaround started with one simple rule: just start. I began with the 5-minute trick: tell yourself you’ll only work on something for five minutes. Starting was often the hardest part, and once I began, I kept going. To make my progress easy to be seen, I began using a simple weekly planner. I broke tasks into tiny, specific steps for each day. Instead of writing “work on essay”, my planner now said: “Write the introduction paragraph (3:00-3:30 PM).” I used a simple red marker to physically cross off each tiny task. Each checkmark in the planner became a small win, and seeing a week planned out took my worries away. I also had to deal with perfectionism (完美主义). I learned that done is better than perfect. Waiting for the ideal moment was just another form of delay. And when I did fall back, I learned to reset without guilt and take the next small step. This wasn’t about becoming a productivity machine. It was about trading last-minute panic for peace of mind. The time will pass either way. Why not spend it feeling in control instead of chasing deadlines? Start small. Try five minutes. Break one task down. You might just find that tomorrow doesn’t have to be so scary. Task1: Answer the questions. 68. Did the writer realize she needed a real change after her disappointing history presentation in 10th grade? 69. What is the “5- minute trick” according to the writer? 70. Which is more likely to be seen in the writer’s weekly planner, “Review for the English test” or “Recite Chapter 5 word bank (4:00-4:40 PM)”? 71. What does the writer mean by saying “done is better than perfect”? 72. According to the passage, what did the writer do when she fell back into her old habits? Task 2: 73.. What does “growth” truly mean according to the writer’s experience? Please give an example from your own life. Write a short paragraph in about 30 words. VI. Writing (20分) 74. Write an English composition in at least 60 words according to the given instructions. 假如你是李华,是学校的同伴辅导员(peer counsellor)。你的同学 Mike 给你发来邮件。进入九年级后,他经历青春期情绪变化:情绪起伏大,容易烦躁,和父母、同学容易发生矛盾,内心感到困惑孤独。请你给他回复邮件,给予安慰和建议。在信中必须: (1)共情理解他的感受; (2)给出 2-3 条建议; (3)给予鼓励。 第 2 页 共4页 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 九年级第一学期英语综合练习2答案（140分） Part I Listening 第一部分 听力（30分） I. Choose the best answer 1-5 ACBBA 6-10 BCBCA 11-15 BCABC 16. a sudden blow 17. poverty 18. appearance 19. continued dropping 20. a tiny gift Part II Grammar and vocabulary 第二部分 语法和词汇（30分） 21-25 BCABB 26-30 ABACB 31-35 FBADC 36- 40 DACBF 41. When/ What time will it (the election) start? 42. What do I need to prepare? 43. Is it going to be held in the gym? 44. How long it will last/ take? 45. Thank you for your help/advice. (表达感谢均可) Part III Reading and writing 第三部分 读写 46-51 FABDEC 52-58 ABBCCDA 59-67 ADABACDCB 68. Yes, she did. 69. To tell yourself you’ll only work on something for five minutes. 70. Recite Chapter 5 word bank (4:00-4:40 PM) 71. Finishing the task is more important than making it perfect. 72. She learned to reset without guilt and take the next small step. 73. Growth means making small progress and trying again after mistakes/ overcoming our bad habits bravely. I used to put off homework, but now I start with 5 minutes and finish it on time. 74. 一、评分标准（总分20分） 评分分三部分：内容8分 + 语言8分 + 组织结构4分。 若文中出现真实人名、校名或其他相关信息，按题目要求不予评分。 项目 分数段 评分描述 内容 7—8分 完整完成三项任务：①共情理解 Mike 的感受；②给出2—3条具体建议；③给予鼓励。内容贴切、充实，建议有简单理由或结果说明。 内容 5—6分 三项任务基本完成，但建议较笼统（如“你要冷静”“你要开心”），或共情部分较空，内容略显单薄。 内容 3—4分 只完成一到两项任务，或部分内容偏离主题，信息不够充分。 内容 0—2分 三项任务均未完成，内容严重偏题、照抄提示或只写零星单词。 项目 分数段 评分描述 语言 7—8分 语法和拼写基本正确，能使用宾语从句、状语从句、不定式等句式；用词恰当，如 normal, calm down, take a deep breath, believe in yourself 等。 语言 5—6分 以简单句为主，有少量语法或拼写错误，但不影响理解。 语言 3—4分 语法错误较多，句子不完整，部分内容影响理解。 语言 0—2分 词汇乱用，语法混乱，基本无法理解。 项目 分数段 评分描述 组织结构 4分 邮件格式正确（称呼、正文、落款）；段落层次清楚：开头共情—中间建议—结尾鼓励；使用 First, Second, Third 等连接词，行文连贯。 组织结构 3分 格式基本正确，分段较清楚，但连接词使用较少。 组织结构 2分 格式不完整，或段落混乱、缺少开头或结尾。 组织结构 0—1分 无邮件格式，无段落，内容零散堆砌。 补充说明：​ 字数不足60词，可酌情扣1—2分；完全照抄题目提示，内容部分记0分。 二、写作步骤解析 第一步：审题，明确任务 这是一封回信邮件，身份是李华（同伴辅导员），收信人是Mike。 信中必须包含三件事： 1. 共情理解他的感受； 2. 给出2—3条建议； 3. 给予鼓励。 第二步：搭框架 建议采用“三段式”结构： · 开头：表达理解与共情。 如：I know how you feel. / I understand that you're confused and lonely. · 中间：给2—3条建议，每条建议后加一句理由或结果。 如：First, take a deep breath before you speak. It can help you calm down. · 结尾：鼓励他，并表示愿意帮助他。 如：You will be fine. Believe in yourself and try your best. 第三步：列关键词和句型 常用表达： · I'm sorry to hear that... · It's normal for teenagers to have strong feelings. · You are not alone. · First / Second / Third... · You can try doing... · Why don't you...? · This can help you feel better. · I believe in you. 第四步：动笔写作 写的时候保持“一句建议 + 一句理由”的模式。 不要只写：“You should be calm.”，可以写：“Take a deep breath before you speak or act, and you will feel calmer.” 第五步：检查语言 重点检查： · 单词拼写：normal, nervous, angry, advice, believe； · 时态：全篇主要用一般现在时； · 邮件格式：有没有写 Dear Mike 和 Yours, Li Hua； · 字数：是否达到60词以上。 第六步：避免常见失分点 · 只写建议，没写共情或鼓励； · 建议写得太空，没有具体做法； · 句子全是 I should... 却没有联系 Mike 的情况； · 忘记写邮件称呼和落款； · 出现真实姓名、校名。 如果能把这三项任务清楚地写进一篇结构分明、语言平实的邮件中，内容8分和结构4分基本都能拿稳，语言分也会在6分以上。 例文： Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you feel upset these days. I understand how you feel. Many students in Grade 9 have the same problems, so you are not alone. Here are some suggestions for you. First, try to talk with your parents or friends. They can help you a lot. Second, do some sports or listen to music when you feel angry. This can make you feel better. Finally, don’t be too hard on yourself. It’s normal to have different feelings. I believe you can deal with these problems. Stay strong and keep smiling. I’m always here for you. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $