(课件)活动安排的写作-Unit5 New Technologies in Everyday Life-《英语 拓展模块》(高教版第三版)【单元写作精讲】
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An Activity Plan
Learning Objectives
1. Master activity‑related vocabulary, phrases and sentence patterns for activity‑plan writing.
2. Learn the format and features of an activity plan.
3. Write an 80–120‑word activity plan with complete points, correct tense and reasonable arrangements.
Lead—in
Group Dissicussion:
1.What school activities do you take part in?
2.What information do we need when we make an activity plan?
What is an Activity Plan
● 定义:An activity plan is a kind of practical writing. We use it to make arrangements for future school or volunteer activities.
● 核心写作逻辑:
Activity theme → Purpose & significance → Time & place & participants → Detailed arrangements → Preparations & requirements → Expectation
What is an Activity Plan
● 和通知区别:An activity plan focuses on the arrangement of steps;a notice mainly informs people to take part in activities.
链接高考
● 考情解读:活动计划属于职教高考应用文高频变体题型,常和通知、倡议书结合考查,词数要求80‑120 words,分值 10 分。
● 命题场景:校园社团、志愿公益、班级主题活动,题干给出中文要点,要求完整转述信息。
● 高考采分点:
链接高考
① 文体区分:分清活动计划、通知,计划重在流程安排,通知重在告知号召。
② 时态:优先一般将来时,描述目的用一般现在时。
③ 采分四要素:主题目的;时间地点参与者;活动流程;准备与要求。要点缺失直接扣分。
● 失分重灾区:时态混用;要点漏写;把计划写成通知;缺少顺序连接词。
Basic Vocabulary
activity n. 活动
organize v. 组织
purpose n. 目的
participant n. 参与者
time n. 时间
venue n. 地点
prepare v. 准备
arrange v. 安排
require v. 要求
expect v. 期待
Advanced Vocabulary
theme n. 主题
significance n. 意义
schedule n. 日程
enrich v. 丰富
arouse v. 激发
improve v. 提升
besides adv. 此外
finally adv. 最后
Quick quiz
1. We ______(will organize / organized) a movie‑appreciation activity next Saturday.
2. The activity is ______(design / designed) to arouse students’ interest.
will organize
活动计划描述将来的活动,next Saturday用一般将来时
designed
be designed to do 旨在做某事
Useful Phrases
🔹Purpose & theme(主题与目的)
hold a themed activity 举办主题活动
the purpose of … …… 的目的
arouse one’s interest 激发某人兴趣
enrich after‑school life 丰富课余生活
Useful Phrases
🔹Activity arrangements(活动流程安排)
take place 举行
be divided into several parts 分为几个环节
first of all 首先
after that 在那之后
Useful Phrases
🔹Preparations & expectation(准备与期待)
make preparations for 为…… 做准备
follow the rules 遵守规则
meet the requirements 符合要求
gain a lot 收获很多
Sentence Patterns
Opening(开篇:点明活动与目的)
Basic:Our club will hold an activity themed … The purpose of the activity is to…
Body‑1(主体:时间地点参与人员)
Basic:This activity will take place in … at … on … All … are welcome to take part in it.
Sentence Patterns
Body‑2(主体:活动流程)
Basic:The activity will be arranged as follows. First of all, we will… After that, we will… Finally, we will…
Ending(结尾:准备要求与期待)
Basic:Please make some preparations ahead of time. We expect all participants can gain a lot.
Grammar Focus
1. Tense:Simple Future 一般将来时(描述还未开展的活动)
2. Person:First‑person “we / our club”
3. Writing logic:Follow time order to arrange steps
4. Passive structure:be designed to do…
5. Linking words:first of all, after that, next, finally, besides
Common Mistakes
(1)时态误用
❌ We held the themed activity next Saturday.
✅ We will hold the themed activity next Saturday.
说明:活动计划写未来的安排,不能用一般过去时。
Common Mistakes
(2)文体混淆,写成通知
❌ Come and join our activity! We are waiting for you.
✅ The activity will be arranged as follows. Please make preparations ahead of time.
说明:活动计划重点写流程安排,不是号召报名参加。
Common Mistakes
(3)要点缺失
❌ Only write theme and time, without activity steps or requirements.
✅ Theme‑purpose‑time‑place‑arrangements‑preparations are all needed.
说明:活动计划必须写清活动流程以及相关要求。
Four key points
1. Theme & Purpose:写明活动主题以及活动目的(开篇)
2. Basic information:写清活动时间、地点、参与人员
3. Activity arrangements:分步骤介绍活动流程(主体核心)
4. Preparations & Expectation:参与要求以及活动期待(结尾)
Writing Template
Our ______ will hold an activity themed ________.
The purpose of the activity is to ________. Besides, it can enrich our after‑school life.
This activity will take place in ________ at ________ on ________. All ________ are welcome.
Writing Template
The activity will be arranged as follows. First of all, we will ________. After that, we will ________. Finally, we will ________.
Please ________ ahead of time and follow the rules. We expect everyone can gain a lot.
Writing Task
写作任务:写一篇 80‑120 词英文活动计划 An Activity Plan
提示信息:假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人
1. 活动主题:英语经典电影赏析 English Classic Movie Appreciation
2. 目的:激发英语兴趣,提升听力,丰富课余生活
3. 时间:下周六下午 2 点‑4 点
Writing Task
4. 地点:学校报告厅 school lecture hall
5. 参与者:英语社团全体成员
6. 流程:介绍电影背景;观看影片片段;小组讨论分享感受
7. 要求:提前简单了解影片,活动期间保持安静
Steps for writing
第一步:判断体裁 → activity plan,重点使用一般将来时,区分活动计划与通知
第二步:提取四要素(高考审题方法)
Theme & Purpose:movie‑appreciation activity; arouse interest, improve listening
Basic information:lecture hall; 2‑4 p.m. next Saturday; all club members
Steps for writing
Activity arrangements:introduce background; watch movie parts; group discussion
Preparations & Expectation:learn about the movie; keep quiet
第三步:套用填空模板,填充要点;检查时态、要点、单词拼写
Model Essay
An Activity Plan
Our English club will hold an activity themed English Classic Movie Appreciation.
The purpose of the activity is to arouse our interest in English and improve our listening skills. Besides, it can enrich our after‑school life.
Model Essay
This activity will take place in the school lecture hall from 2 p.m. to 4 p.m. next Saturday. All club members are welcome.
The activity will be arranged as follows. First of all, we will introduce the background of the movie. After that, we will watch parts of the film. Finally, we will have group discussions and share our feelings.
Model Essay
Please learn about the movie ahead of time and keep quiet. We expect everyone can gain a lot.
Summary
1. Words & phrases:活动计划相关单词、短语(目的、流程、准备要求)
2. Sentences:开篇主题目的、活动信息、流程、结尾期待句型
3. Structure:four‑point writing structure(主题目的‑基础信息‑活动流程‑准备与期待)【高考采分框架】
4. Rules:Simple Future;区分活动计划与通知;用好顺序连接词
Homework
1.Basic:Recite the template and key sentences, copy the model essay.
2.Advanced:Write another activity plan for a volunteer environmental‑protection activity.
Thank you
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