内容正文:
Unit 2
Wildlife Protection
高中英语人教版必修第二册
Reading for Writing 2
以读促写
Contents
1. Lead in
2. Reading
3. Text Analysis
4. Language Building
5. Mini-writing
6. Writing Task
7. Self-assessment
8. Homework
01. Lead in
Lead in
What do you know about the Tibetan antelope ?
Height: ______________
Weight: ______________
Main Habitat:_________
________________________
________________________
80 cm
45-60 kg
Tibet,Western Qinghai, the Changtang National Nature Reserve.
02. Reading
Lead-in
Reading
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on Tibetan antelope protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
The lecture is scheduled for this Saturday evening, from 7:00 to 9:00, on Tencent Meeting. A wildlife expert will share the current situation of Tibetan antelopes in Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, followed by a documentary showing their living conditions and the threats they face. What's more, there will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other animal lovers.
This event is not just about knowledge; it's a chance for us to realize the importance of protecting endangered species and take action together.
We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
03.
Text Analysis
Text Analysis
可迁移写作要素:邀请信(应用文)
步骤 功能 文中对应
① 寒暄引入 礼貌问候,引出正题 I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on Tibetan antelope protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
② 事件说明 时间/平台/活动内容(三项) scheduled for this Saturday evening, from 7:00 to 9:00, on Tencent Meeting. A wildlife expert will share..., followed by a documentary..., What's more, there will be an interactive Q&A session...
③ 意义升华 说明活动价值,吸引对方 This event is not just about knowledge; it's a chance for us to realize the importance of protecting endangered species and take action together.
④ 邀请期待 发出邀请,期盼回复 We would be delighted if you could join us. Looking forward to your reply.
(1)结构框架(邀请信四步法)
Text Analysis
(2)读写对应逻辑
读 学 写
读完一篇完整的邀请信范文 提炼结构、句型和话题词块 迁移到同类"邀请信"写作中
可迁移的应用文场景:
类别 具体场景 可迁移的核心句式
文化类邀请 邀请参加文化展览/艺术节/非遗活动 I'm writing to invite you to... / It will showcase A, B, as well as C.
校园活动类邀请 邀请参加运动会/讲座/义卖/社团活动 The event is scheduled for... / This event is a chance for us to...
节日庆祝类邀请 邀请参加春节/中秋/端午庆祝活动 We would be delighted if you could join us. / It's a chance to experience the richness of...
04.
Language Building
Language Building
(1)话题词汇积累("藏羚羊保护"类写作素材)
中文 英文 适用场景
藏羚羊 Tibetan antelope 主题词,必须掌握
野生动物保护 wildlife protection 活动主题
线上讲座 online lecture 活动形式
青藏高原 Qinghai-Tibet Plateau 藏羚羊栖息地
濒危物种 endangered species 核心话题词
纪录片 documentary 活动内容形式
互动问答环节 interactive Q&A session 活动形式,体现参与感
Language Building
(2)高频实用句型
段落 核心句型(必背) 升级表达(高分)
开头 I'm writing to invite you to... I'm thrilled to inform you that...
时间地点 It will be held on...in... ...is scheduled for...on...
内容列举 It will showcase A, B and C. It will showcase A, B, as well as C.
内容衔接 We will also watch... ..., followed by...
内容递进 After that, we can... What's more, there will be...
意义升华 It is meaningful. This event is not just about A; it's a chance for us to do B.
邀请表达 We hope you can join us. We would be delighted if you could join us.
结尾期待 Please write back soon. Looking forward to your early reply.
05.
Mini-writing
Mini-writing
1. 活动邀请开头仿写
原文原句:
I'm writing to invite you to an online lecture on Tibetan antelope protection, which will be hosted by our Green Love Union.
我写信邀请你参加一场由我们“绿美”联盟主办的藏羚羊保护线上讲座。
原句解析:
邀请目的 + 活动主题 + 主办方(非限制性定语从句补充信息)
仿写句1(野生动物讲座邀请):
英: I'm writing to invite you to an online talk on wildlife conservation, which will be organized by our school's Environment Club.
中: 我写信邀请你参加一场由我们学校环保社团组织的野生动物保护线上讲座。
仿写句2(海洋保护活动邀请):
英: I'm writing to invite you to a volunteer activity on ocean protection, which will be held by our Green Love Union.
中: 我写信邀请你参加一场由我们“绿美”联盟举办的海洋保护志愿活动。
Mini-writing
2. 活动内容列举仿写
原文原句:
A wildlife expert will share the current situation of Tibetan antelopes in Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, followed by a documentary showing their living conditions and the threats they face. What's more, there will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other animal lovers.
一位野生动物专家将分享青藏高原藏羚羊的现状,随后播放一部展示它们生活条件和面临威胁的纪录片。更重要的是,还将有一个互动问答环节,你可以提出问题并与其他动物爱好者交流想法。
原句解析:
内容1(专家分享)+ followed by 内容2(纪录片展示)+ What's more 内容3(互动问答+where定语从句)
仿写句1(森林保护讲座):
英: A biologist will talk about the importance of forest ecosystems, followed by a short film showing the effects of deforestation. What's more, there will be a group discussion where you can share your opinions with other nature lovers.
中: 一位生物学家将谈论森林生态系统的重要性,随后播放一部展示森林砍伐影响的短片。更重要的是,还将有一个小组讨论,你可以与其他自然爱好者分享观点。
Mini-writing
2. 活动内容列举仿写
原文原句:
A wildlife expert will share the current situation of Tibetan antelopes in Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, followed by a documentary showing their living conditions and the threats they face. What's more, there will be an interactive Q&A session where you can raise questions and exchange ideas with other animal lovers.
一位野生动物专家将分享青藏高原藏羚羊的现状,随后播放一部展示它们生活条件和面临威胁的纪录片。更重要的是,还将有一个互动问答环节,你可以提出问题并与其他动物爱好者交流想法。
原句解析:
内容1(专家分享)+ followed by 内容2(纪录片展示)+ What's more 内容3(互动问答+where定语从句)
仿写句2(候鸟保护活动):
英: An ornithologist will introduce the migration routes of endangered birds, followed by a photo exhibition showing their habitats. What's more, there will be an online quiz where you can test your knowledge about bird protection.
中: 一位鸟类学家将介绍濒危鸟类的迁徙路线,随后举办一个展示它们栖息地的摄影展。更重要的是,还将有一个在线问答,你可以测试自己对鸟类保护的知识。
Mini-writing
3. 活动意义阐述仿写
原文原句:
This event is not just about knowledge; it's a chance for us to realize the importance of protecting endangered species and take action together.
这个活动不仅仅是关于知识;它对我们来说是一个认识到保护濒危物种重要性并共同采取行动的机会。
原句解析:
not just about A; it's a chance for us to do B and do C — 分号连接对比句,前半让步,后半升华
仿写句1(环保活动):
英: This activity is not just about learning; it's a chance for us to understand the value of nature and make a difference in our daily lives.
中: 这个活动不仅仅是关于学习;它对我们来说是一个理解自然价值并在日常生活中做出改变的机会。
仿写句2(动物保护讲座):
英: This lecture is not just about information; it's a chance for us to develop a sense of responsibility and contribute to animal protection.
中: 这个讲座不仅仅是关于信息;它对我们来说是一个培养责任感并为动物保护做贡献的机会。
Mini-writing
4. 邀请表达仿写
原文原句:
We would be delighted if you could join us.
如果你能加入我们,我们将非常高兴。
原句解析:
We would be delighted if you could... — 虚拟语气,礼貌正式,适用于各类邀请信结尾
仿写句1(邀请参加讲座):
英: We would be honoured if you could attend our lecture.
中: 如果你能参加我们的讲座,我们将非常荣幸。
仿写句2(邀请参加活动):
英: We would be grateful if you could take part in this meaningful event.
中: 如果你能参加这个有意义的活动,我们将非常感激。
06.
Writing Task
Writing Task
(25-26高一上·重庆·期末)
假设你是李华,你校英语社计划举办主题为“关爱流浪动物”的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书发表在英语社刊上。内容包括:
1. 简述现状;
2. 提出措施;
3. 呼吁参与。
注意:1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考提示:stray animals流浪动物
Dear fellow students,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The English Club
07.
Self-assessment
Self-assessment
No. Criterion 3 pts 2 pts 1 pt Score
1 Structure Complete 4 steps Missing 1 step Missing 2+ steps /3
2 Content All key points covered 1–2 key points missing 3+ key points missing /3
3 Language Accuracy No errors 1–2 minor errors 3+ errors /3
4 Vocabulary & Syntax Rich & varied Adequate but limited Simple & repetitive /3
5 Handwriting & Format Neat & correct Legible, minor issues Messy or wrong format /3
Total: ____ / 15
Text Analysis
Article 1:
Dear fellow students,
Many stray animals live tough lives. They face hunger and cold. They also face many dangers. These animals need our help.
We can do something to help them. First, if we want a pet, we can adopt from the street or a shelter. We should not buy pets. Second, we can give them food and water in safe places. Third, we can volunteer at rescue centers to help unadoptable animals. We should also tell our friends and family not to abandon pets.
Small acts of kindness are important. Let's join the "Care for Strays" activity. Together, we can build a warmer and kinder community.
The English Club
Text Analysis
Article 2:
Dear fellow students,
Considering that many stray animals living tough lives not only face hunger and cold but also suffer from ever-presentdangers, these animals desperately need our help.
Only by taking action can we truly make a difference. If considering a pet, adopt from the street or a shelter rather than buy. Moreover, it is a better choice for us to provide food and water in safe areas and volunteering at rescue centers for unadoptableanimals. Equally important is raising awareness among friends and family about not abandoning pets.
Small acts of kindness can have a lasting impact. Let' s unite in the upcoming "Care for Strays" activity to build a warmer,kinder community for all living beings.
The English Club
复杂句式开篇:Considering that...
倒装句表强调
not only...but also... 递进并列
only + 状语 倒装句
非谓语动词作条件状语
过渡衔接词
结尾号召升华
08.
Homework
Homework
(25-26高一上·陕西榆林·期末)近年来,游客投喂野生动物的事件屡屡发生,这对动物的健康造成了威胁。校英语报就此话题征文。请你以“Leave the Wild Animals Alone”为题,给校英语报写一篇投稿。内容包括:
(1)投喂动物的危害;
(2)你的建议和呼吁。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Leave the Wild Animals Alone
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Sample
Leave the Wild Animals Alone
Dear fellow students,
Considering that feeding wild animals not only harms their health but also disrupts their natural living habits, we must say no to this behavior.
Human food is not suitable for wild animalsf, which can cause serious digestive problems and even threaten their lives. What's worse, regular feeding makes animals lose their ability to hunt for food on their own. They may become dependent on humans and forget how to survive in the wild.
Only by keeping a safe distance can we truly protect them. Let's stop feeding wild animals and spread this message to more people. If we truly love them, we should leave them alone and let nature take its course. Small changes in our behavior can make a big difference to their lives.
The English Club
Thank you
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