Unit5 Section 3-Writing课件 2026-2027学年沪教版英语九年级上册
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主题范畴:人与自我
Unit 5 My time, my joy
Writing
How can you make use of your leisure time?
Key question
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Share with us!
Do you like watching films?
What is your favourite film?
Writing—Writing a film review
Warm up
Do you know what these films are?
It is a groundbreaking Chinese science fiction film set in the future, when the Sun is dying. To save humanity, people decide to move the Earth out of the solar system. A dangerous but courageous journey then begins.
The Wandering Earth
Do you know what these films are?
It is one of the most successful animated films of the 21st century. The film tells the story of a brave rabbit in the city of Zootopia who dreams of becoming a police officer. When animals suddenly start disappearing, she teams up with a fox to solve the mystery!
Zootopia
Today we are going to learn how to write an article about a film review.
What is a film review?
A film review is your personal opinion about a film. It tells readers whether you recommend the film and explains why.
What information would you include in a film review?
Step 1: Pre-writing
What is the name of the film?
When was it released? Who is the director? Who plays the main role?
Who are the main characters and what are they like? What is the story about?
What did you think of the film? What did you like about it?
Would you recommend it? Why or why not?
What kind of film is it?
How do we organize the information in the film review?
Title
Background
Genre
Plot and characters
My opinion
Conclusion
General introduction
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 4
Step 2: While-writing
Note down the key information in the mind map.
General introduction
... is a(n) ... film directed by ...
The film stars ...
It was released in ...
Plot and characters
The film tells about ...
The main character is a(n) ... who ...
At the start of the story, ...
Useful expressions
Your opinion
I like this film because ...
My favourite part was when ....
The actors all did a great job.
I was deeply touched by ...
Recommendation
I strongly recommend this film to anyone who ...
It is suitable for ...
If you’re a(n) ..., you won’t regret watching it!
Ne Zha Ⅱ
released in 2025; directed by Jiaozi; became a huge box office success in China
This heartwarming fantasy film was both funny and exciting, with lots of unforgettable characters.
a must-see film for film-lovers of all ages
an animated fantasy film
The legendary Chinese hero Ne Zha and his friend Ao Bing discover a terrible secret and work together to fight against evil.
Example:
Put the paragraphs about the film Ne Zha Ⅱ in the correct order.
Ne Zha Ⅱ
A I think Ne Zha II was an excellent film. The story was exciting and full of surprises. I especially liked the amazing action scenes and the character design. There were also many touching scenes that show the importance of friendship, love and kindness.
B Ne Zha II is an animated fantasy film directed by Jiaozi. It is the sequel to the hit film Ne Zha from 2019. Ne Zha II was released in January 2025, and quickly became the most successful animated Chinese film of all time.
C All in all, Ne Zha II is a wonderful film, and I highly recommend it to moviegoers of all ages. If you’re a fan of fantasy films, it’s a must-see!
D The story continues from the first Ne Zha film. When his friend Ao Bing is in great danger, Ne Zha does everything he can to save him. They end up going on a dangerous journey and discover a terrible secret. Together, they fight against evil to save the world.
Ne Zha II
Ne Zha II is an animated fantasy film directed by Jiaozi. It is the sequel to the hit film Ne Zha from 2019. Ne Zha II was released in January 2025, and quickly became the most successful animated Chinese film of all time.
The story continues from the first Ne Zha film. When his friend Ao Bing is in great danger, Ne Zha does everything he can to save him. They end up going on a dangerous journey and discover a terrible secret. Together, they fight against evil to save the world.
I think Ne Zha II was an excellent film. The story was exciting and full of surprises. I especially liked the amazing action scenes and the character design. There were also many touching scenes that show the importance of friendship, love and kindness.
All in all, Ne Zha II is a wonderful film, and I highly recommend it to moviegoers of all ages. If you’re a fan of fantasy films, it’s a must-see!
I provided key information about the film, such as the title, genre and plot, and shared my opinion about it.
I put all the information in a clear and logical order.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Step 3: Post-writing
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More exercise
写作任务
假如你是李华,你最近观看了一部热门电影,学校英文报正在征集影评稿件,请你根据提示内容写一篇英语影评投稿。内容需包含:电影基本信息、剧情与人物介绍、电影类型、你的个人评价以及推荐理由。要求:80 词左右,可适当发挥。
人与社会——文学、艺术与体育
文体:应用文
人称:________________________________
时态:以________________________为主
Step 1: 题干细审
第一、二和三人称均有涉及
一般现在时
Title
02
01
03
Step 2: 谋篇布局
1
A film review
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05
06
Genre
Background
Plot and characters
My opinion
Recommendation
Step 2: 谋篇布局
Title The Wandering Earth II
Genre A science fiction movie
Background The film is set in the future when the Earth is (1) ____________ (处于……危险中). People from all over the world work together (2) ____________ (为了) save our planet.
in danger
in order to
Step 2: 谋篇布局
Plot and
characters The characters are (3) _____________ (普通人), but they are brave and selfless. They are willing (4) ____________________ (致力于) the future of mankind.
My opinion I think the film is (5) _____________ (值得观看). It shows us the importance of unity and devotion.
Recomm-endation I (6) _________________ (强烈推荐) this film. It will make you (7) __________ (为……而自豪) being human.
ordinary people
to devote themselves to
worth watching
highly recommend
proud of
★ 常用连接词:
1. 不但……而且…… _____________________
★ 高分表达:
2. 献身;致力 _____________________
3. 值得做 _____________________
4. 就我而言 _____________________
Step 3: 句子提升
not only ... but also ...
devote ... to ...
worth doing
as far as I’m concerned
基础版范文
Step 4: 扩充成文
The Wandering Earth II: A Film Review
Recently, I watched a fantastic science fiction film called The Wandering Earth II. It is one of the best Chinese sci-fi films that I have ever seen.
The film is set in the future when the Earth is in danger. In order to save our planet, people from all over the world work together. Although they face many life-and-death moments and some even lose their lives, they never give up hope. The characters are ordinary people, but they are brave and selfless. They are willing to devote themselves to the future of mankind.
基础版范文
Step 4: 扩充成文
In my opinion, the film is worth watching. It has amazing visual effects and shows us the importance of unity and devotion. It makes me proud of being human and teaches us that we should take care of our home together.
I highly recommend this film to all of you. I am sure you will be impressed by its wonderful scenes and deep meaning.
进阶版范文
The Wandering Earth II: A Film Review
Recently, I watched a fantastic science fiction film called The Wandering Earth II, which is considered one of the best Chinese sci-fi films.
The film is set in the future when the Earth is at risk of being destroyed. In order to save our planet, people from all over the world work together. Although they face many life-and-death moments and some even lose their lives, they never give up hope. What touches me most is that the characters are ordinary people who choose to be heroes when duty calls.
进阶版范文
As far as I am concerned, the film is well worth watching. Not only does it have amazing visual effects, but it also shows the power of unity and devotion. It makes me proud of being human and teaches us that we should take care of our home together.
I highly recommend this film to all of you. I’m confident that you will be impressed by its wonderful scenes and deep meaning.
Share your article with your classmates.
“双减”背景下,作业如何合理分层
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⭐可参考作业布置如下:
Samples:
Homework
个人作业(可选) 小组作业(可选)
1. 背诵本篇作文,将其抄入作文集锦中。 1. 互评作文。
2. 完成范文挑战部分。
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