（课件）实习经历日记的写作-Unit2 Sharpening Your Skills-《英语 拓展模块》（高教版第三版）【单元写作精讲】

A Diary about Internship Experience Learning Objectives 1. Master internship‑related vocabulary, phrases and sentence patterns for a diary. 2. Learn the structure and features of a diary. 3. Write an 80–120‑word diary with clear information, correct tense and proper feelings. Lead—in What is the video about? What is a diary ● 定义：A diary is a personal writing. We use it to record what we did, what we saw and our feelings on a certain day. ● 核心写作逻辑：Date & Weather → what you did during internship → what you learned → your feelings ● 和其他应用文的区别：Diary is written in first person. It records personal daily experience and true feelings. Task Analysis 写作情境：你正在企业实习，请写一篇英文日记记录今天的实习经历。假定你是李华。 1. Writing style：diary（personal writing） 2. Word limit：80‑120 words Task Analysis 3. Common topics ① Learn basic working skills ② Work with workmates ③ Difficulties in internship ④ Gains and feelings after work Task Analysis 4.✅ Writing scoring standards ‑ Format：Correct diary form with date and weather ‑ Key points：All required information is complete ‑ Language：Correct words and grammar, proper feelings ‑ Coherence：Use linking words to make the passage smooth Basic Vocabulary internship n. 实习 workmate n. 同事 skill n. 技能 learn v. 学习 practice v. 练习 tired adj. 疲惫的 useful adj. 有用的 help v. 帮助 realize v. 意识到 feeling n. 感受 Advanced Vocabulary practical adj. 实践的 valuable adj. 有价值的 challenge n. 挑战 gain v. 收获 besides 此外 gradually adv. 逐渐地 to one’s surprise 令某人惊讶的是 Quick quiz 1.I ______(learn / learned) many practical skills in my internship yesterday. 2.The experience is very ______(value / valuable). learned yesterday是一般过去时的时间状语 valuable be 动词后面用形容词 Useful Phrases 🔹Work activities（实习工作内容） take an internship 参加实习 learn practical skills 学习实用技能 work with workmates 和同事一起工作 follow one’s instructions 听从某人指导 Useful Phrases 🔹Gains & feelings（收获与感受） meet new challenges 迎接新挑战 gain working experience 收获工作经验 feel tired but happy 累并快乐着 be of great value 很有价值 Sentence Patterns Opening（开篇：日期天气） Basic：October 7th, Wednesday Sunny Body‑1（主体：今日实习内容） Basic：Today I took my internship in… I learned to… My workmates helped me a lot. Sentence Patterns Body‑2（主体：收获与感受） Basic：At first, it was difficult for me to… Gradually, I found… Ending（结尾：感悟总结） Basic：This experience teaches me a lot. I will keep trying. Grammar Focus 1.Tense：Simple Past 一般过去时（记录当天已经发生的实习事件） 2.Person：First person “I” 3.Diary format：Write Date + Weather at the very beginning 4.Adjective usage：linking verb + adj. (be tired /be valuable) 5.Linking words：besides, gradually, at first Common Mistakes （1）时态误用 ❌ I learn many skills today. ✅ I learned many skills today. 说明：日记记录已经做完的事，谓语动词用一般过去时。 Common Mistakes （2）词性错误 ❌ The experience has great value. It is value. ✅ The experience has great value. It is valuable. 说明：value 名词；valuable 形容词，放在 be 动词后。 Common Mistakes （3）格式错误 ❌ No date or weather at the start of the diary. ✅ Write date and weather on the first line. 说明：日记首行必须写日期 + 天气。 Four key points 1. Date & Weather：日记开头写上日期和天气 2. What you did：实习当天做了哪些工作 3. What you learned：实习学到的技能、知识 4. Your feelings：个人感受与感悟 Writing Template __________, __________ __________（日期，星期 天气） Today I ______ my internship in __________. I ______ some basic practical skills. My workmates ______ very kind and ______ me a lot. Writing Template At first, I ______ the work a little difficult. Gradually, I ______ how to do it well. This internship ______ me valuable working experience. I feel ______ but ______. I will keep practicing in the following days. Writing Task 写作任务：写一篇 80‑120 词英文日记 A Diary about Internship Experience 提示信息： 1. 今天在企业参加岗位实习 2. 跟着同事学习基础实操技能，同事给予你很多帮助 3. 一开始工作有点难，慢慢找到了方法 4. 实习收获宝贵经验，虽然累但是很充实 Steps for writing 第一步：判断体裁 → diary，首行写日期 + 天气，多用一般过去时 第二步：提取四要素 Date & Weather：自行填写 What you did：take internship, learn practical skills, work with workmates Steps for writing What you learned：get valuable working experience Your feelings：tired but happy 第三步：套用模板，填充要点；检查时态、格式、单词拼写 Model Essay October 7th, Wednesday Sunny Today I took my internship in a local company. I learned some basic practical skills. My workmates were very patient and helped me a lot when I met problems. Model Essay At first, I found the work a little difficult. Gradually, I found the right way and finished my tasks well. This internship brings me valuable working experience. I feel tired but happy. I will keep practicing in the following days. Summary 1. Words & phrases：实习相关单词、短语（工作内容、收获感受） 2. Sentences：开篇日期、实习事件、感悟句型 3. Structure：four‑point writing structure（日期天气 — 实习内容 — 所学内容 — 个人感受） 4. Rules：Simple Past；日记格式；区分名词与形容词 Homework 1.Basic：Recite the template and key sentences, copy the model essay. 2.Advanced：Write another diary about your internship. Thank you Lavf58.20.100 $