Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm 作文素材整理2026-2027学年人教版九年级英语上册

Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm 作文素材整理 一、首段：引入话题 + 写作主题 话题引入 Music plays an important part in our daily life. Different people like different kinds of music. Music can bring us different feelings. What kind of music do you enjoy listening to? Music is everywhere around us. Music is a special language that carries our feelings and thoughts. Whenever we feel tired or upset, music can cheer us up. There are many kinds of music around the world, such as folk, classical, pop and jazz. Have you ever been deeply touched by a piece of music? Music has great power. 核心写作要点 kinds of music 音乐类型（folk, classical, pop, jazz, rock, rap, Beijing Opera 等） musical instruments 乐器（guqin, pipa, violin, erhu, electric guitar…） qualities of music 音乐特点：energetic, full of joy, beautiful lyrics, touch one’s heart musicians 音乐家：gifted, creative, write their own songs the power of music 音乐的力量：express feelings, cheer people up, build friendship, encourage people my music story 我的音乐故事（学习乐器、乐队经历、影响自己的一首歌 / 音乐家） 套用句型 I like music that ________________. My favourite kind of music is ________. I prefer musicians who ________________. Music means a lot to me. What attracts me most is the music that touches my heart. Among all kinds of music, I like … best. There is a piece of music that has greatly influenced me. I would like to share my own music story with you. 目标句 To talk about my taste in music, I will describe what kind of music I love and why. Music has changed my life in many ways, so I want to share my story. I will introduce my favourite musician and tell you how his music influences me. 二、中间段：核心要点 ① Point：Kinds of music & features 音乐种类与特点 folk music 民间音乐；classical music 古典音乐；pop music 流行音乐 rock 摇滚；rap 说唱；jazz 爵士乐；Beijing Opera 京剧 energetic adj. 充满活力的；full of joy 充满欢乐 has beautiful lyrics 有着优美歌词；touch one’s heart 触动人心 old‑fashioned adj. 老式的；romantic adj. 浪漫的；sad adj. 悲伤的 sing along to 跟着唱；dance to 跟着跳舞 示范句 I like music that is energetic. It makes me excited when I feel tired. 我喜欢充满活力的音乐。当我疲惫时它让我精神振奋。 I prefer music that has beautiful lyrics. I can sing along to it. 我更喜欢歌词优美的音乐，我可以跟着一起唱。 I enjoy traditional folk music which tells real‑life stories. 我喜欢讲述真实故事的传统民间音乐。 ② Point：Musical instruments 乐器 guqin 古琴；pipa 琵琶；erhu 二胡；violin 小提琴 electric guitar 电吉他；trumpet 小号；keyboard 键盘 play an instrument 演奏乐器 示范句： Butterfly Lovers is a piece of music that uses both erhu and violin. 《梁祝》是一首同时使用二胡和小提琴演奏的乐曲。 The guqin is a traditional Chinese instrument that has a long history. 古琴是拥有悠久历史的中国传统乐器。 ③ Point：Musicians 音乐家的品质 gifted adj. 有天赋的；creative adj. 有创造力的 write one’s own songs 自己写歌；put one’s soul into music 全身心投入音乐 perform in public 公开表演 示范句： I like musicians who can write their own songs. 我喜欢可以自己创作歌曲的音乐家。 I admire musicians who put their whole soul into their works. 我敬佩那些把全部灵魂投入作品中的音乐家。 ④ Point：The power of music 音乐的力量 express feelings 表达情感；cheer sb up 使某人振作 relax one’s mind 放松身心；inspire people 鼓舞人们 build friendship 建立友谊；communicate without words 无言地交流 示范句： Music that touches our hearts can cheer us up when we are sad. 触动心灵的音乐可以在我们悲伤时使我们振作。 Music is a special way that people use to communicate their feelings. 音乐是人们用来抒发情感的特殊方式。 ⑤ Point：My music story 我的音乐故事 practise playing the guitar 练习弹吉他；join a band 加入乐队 take part in performances 参加演出；make friends 交朋友 music becomes part of my life 音乐成为我生活的一部分 示范句： The guitar that my father bought me changed my life. 爸爸给我买的那把吉他改变了我的生活。 At first I had trouble playing it, but I kept practising and made great progress. 一开始我演奏遇到困难，但我坚持练习，取得很大进步。 衔接模板 One reason is that ________. Another reason is that ________. Finally, I want to share my music story. First, … Then, … Finally, … First of all, … Besides, … Finally, … To begin with, … Furthermore, … Most importantly, … First of all, … In addition, … What matters most is that… For one thing, … For another, … What’s more, … The first reason is … Apart from that, … More importantly, … 三、尾段：结果句 + 升华句 结果句 Thanks to music, my life has become much more colourful. With the help of music, I can relax myself when I feel stressed. By enjoying different kinds of music, I learn more about different cultures. Little by little, music has become an important part of my everyday life. Music not only brings me joy but also helps me make more friends. It brings me courage whenever I meet difficulties in my daily life. 谚语、升华句 As the saying goes, “Music is the medicine of the soul.” It can warm our hearts whenever we are in trouble. 俗话说：音乐是心灵的良药。无论何时身处困境，它都可以温暖我们的内心。 Music is like a bridge. It connects people who have different backgrounds. 音乐如同桥梁，它把背景不同的人们联系在一起。 Good music will never die. It can pass on feelings and culture from generation to generation. 好的音乐永不消逝，它代代传递情感与文化。 Where there is music, there is warmth and hope. 有音乐的地方，就有温暖与希望。 四、参考范文 范文 1 My Favourite Music Music is a special language that brings us different feelings. Of all kinds of music, I like folk music best. First of all, I love music that tells real‑life stories. Folk music shows the life and culture of ordinary people. Besides, I prefer music which has simple but beautiful lyrics. When I listen to it, I can relax myself after long hours of study. Last but not least, I admire musicians who create folk music. They collect stories from daily life and turn them into wonderful songs. Music makes my life more colourful. As the saying goes, “Music is the medicine of the soul.” Whenever I feel upset, folk music cheers me up. It is something that I will enjoy all my life. 范文 2 My Music Story There is a guitar that has become very important in my life. It was a birthday gift from my father. To begin with, my father taught me basic skills. At first, I had lots of trouble playing it and my fingers hurt from practising. Gradually, I became better. Besides, I joined a school band that was set up by my classmates. I was shy at first, but I enjoyed sharing music with others. We took part in many performances and made close friends. Music brings me joy and courage. It calms me down when I feel stressed. I believe music is a treasure that everyone should enjoy. I will keep playing the guitar in the future. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $