Unit 3 The World Meets China单元写作作业设计（学生版+教师版）2026-2027学年高中英语外研版选择性必修第四册

外研版选择性必修四 Unit 3　The World Meets China 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校将举办以 "The World Meets China" 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以进博会（the China International Import Expo）为窗口写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 简要介绍这一窗口； 2. 讲述世界如何走近中国、中国如何走向世界（可举一两个例子）； 3. 表达你的展望。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Thank you for listening! 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 演讲稿（speech）：问候—亮出窗口—双向讲述—升华展望—致谢，口语化、有呼告。 人称 第一人称谈感受，第一人称复数 we 讲中国，第三人称举例（参展商、外国朋友）。 时态 介绍窗口与观点用一般现在时；举例用一般过去时或现在完成时；展望用将来时。 结构 四段式。Para 1：问候 + 点出窗口（进博会）；Para 2：世界如何走近中国（举例）；Para 3：中国如何走向世界；Para 4：展望 + 致谢。 要点 窗口要"小而具体"：一个展会、一次握手、一杯外国咖啡，都比"开放的中国"更有说服力。 语气 自信而谦和，避免喊口号；用一两个真实细节代替宏大叙述。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. expo n. ____________ 2. ____________ n./vt. 进口 3. export n./vt. ____________ 4. ____________ n. 平台 5. window n. ____________ 6. ____________ n. 门口；通道 7. bond n. ____________ 8. ____________ n./vt. 交流；交换 9. mutual adj. ____________ 10. ____________ n. 繁荣；昌盛 11. initiative n. ____________ 12. ____________ n. 论坛 13. delegate n. ____________ 14. ____________ n. 参展商；展览者 15. brand n. ____________ 16. ____________ n. 创新 17. civilization n. ____________ 18. ____________ vt. 拥抱；欣然接受 19. openness n. ____________ 20. ____________ vt. 使受益 n. 益处 21. deepen vt. ____________ 22. ____________ vt. 扩大；扩展 23. global adj. ____________ 24. ____________ vt. 连接；联结 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. serve as a window ____________ 2. ____________ 敞开大门 3. a bridge between...and... ____________ 4. ____________ 文化交流 5. mutual benefit ____________ 6. ____________ 合作共赢 7. reach out to ____________ 8. ____________ 使……更近 9. on the global stage ____________ 10. ____________ 共同繁荣 11. attract worldwide attention ____________ 12. ____________ 在……中发挥作用 13. thanks to ____________ 14. ____________ 从……到……不等 15. a growing number of ____________ 16. ____________ 跨越国界 17. share...with... ____________ 18. ____________ 相互学习 19. build a bridge of friendship ____________ 20. ____________ 亲身体验 21. trade volume ____________ 22. ____________ 向世界讲好中国故事 23. the door of opportunity ____________ 24. ____________ 加深相互理解 25. in the years ahead ____________ 26. ____________ 让自己的声音被听见 27. a community with a shared future ____________ 28. ____________ 齐聚；聚集 29. cross the ocean ____________ 30. ____________ 传递友谊 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. China is open to the world. ____________________ 2. Many foreign companies came to the expo. ____________________ 3. The expo is very important. ____________________ 4. We should communicate with other countries. ____________________ 5. China's high-speed rail is very fast. ____________________ 6. Foreigners are interested in China. ____________________ 7. Trade makes countries rich. ____________________ 8. I am proud of my country. ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 进博会是世界上第一个以进口为主题的国家级展会。 　　The CIIE is the world's first national-level expo ________ ________ import. 2. 每年十一月，数千家海外企业齐聚上海。 　　Every November, ________ ________ overseas companies gather in Shanghai. 3. 他们带来了来自世界各地的产品与技术。 　　They bring products and technologies ________ ________ the world. 4. 这扇窗口让世界看见开放的中国。 　　This window lets the world see ________ ________ ________. 5. 中国不再只是旁观者，更是组织者。 　　China is no longer a spectator but an ________. 6. 正是这种开放让世界走近中国。 　　It is this openness that brings the world ________ ________ China. 7. 越来越多的外国朋友开始了解真实的中国。 　　A ________ ________ ________ foreign friends are coming to know the real China. 8. 交流能消除误解。 　　Exchange ________ ________ misunderstanding. 9. 中国高铁把遥远的省份变成了近邻。 　　China's high-speed rail has turned distant provinces ________ ________ ________. 10. 无论你来自哪里，都能在这里找到机会。 　　________ ________ ________ you come from, you can find opportunities here. 11. 只有坚持开放，文明才能彼此照亮。（倒装） 　　Only ________ ________ openness can civilizations light up each other. 12. 我们期待未来会有更多这样的桥梁。 　　We look forward to ________ ________ ________ in the future. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. The CIIE is held in Shanghai every year. It has become a grand stage for global trade. 要求：用 which 引导非限制性定语从句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 2. Many foreigners visited the expo. They left with a new picture of China. 要求：用现在分词作状语合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 3. The world meets China. China meets the world. 要求：用强调句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. The high-speed train is very fast. It can reach 350 km/h. 要求：用 at speeds of up to 表达速度 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. Openness benefits China. Openness also benefits the world. 要求：用 not just...but 合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. If we keep our doors open, we will make more friends. 要求：改为祈使句 + and 的条件句 → ____________________________________________________________ 7. Foreign exhibitors sold their goods. They also made friends. 要求：用 more than 开头改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. I believe exchange is important. 要求：用 There is no doubt that 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. China develops quickly. The world is watching. 要求：用 as 引导时间状语从句合并 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. We welcome friends from all over the world. 要求：用 wherever 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） A nation's openness decides its altitude. 一个国家的开放程度，决定它的高度。　（判断句 + 比喻） The expo is a window; through it, the world reads China. 博览会是一扇窗；透过它，世界阅读中国。　（分号并列 + 比喻） Never has the distance between civilizations felt so short. 文明之间的距离从未显得如此之短。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） Where there is exchange, there is understanding. 哪里有交流，哪里就有理解。　（where 引导的状语从句） It is not the stage that matters, but the doors we keep open. 重要的不是舞台本身，而是我们一直敞开的门。　（强调句 + not...but...） High-speed rail shrinks distances; openness shrinks prejudice. 高铁缩短距离，开放缩短偏见。　（对称句） The world walks towards China, and China walks towards the world. 世界走向中国，中国也走向世界。　（对称句） Trade builds roads, but friendship builds bridges. 贸易修路，友谊架桥。　（对比句） What China offers the world is not just goods, but goodwill. 中国给世界的不仅是商品，更是善意。　（what 主语从句 + 双关） So vast is this land of opportunity that every dream finds a door. 这片机遇之地如此辽阔，每个梦想都能找到一扇门。　（so...that 的倒装） Every handshake at the expo echoes far beyond the exhibition hall. 博览会上的每一次握手，其回响都远远越过展馆。　（比喻） Only by opening wider can a country see further. 只有更加开放，一个国家才能看得更远。　（only 引导的倒装） Different civilizations are not walls but windows. 不同的文明不是墙，而是窗。　（not...but... 对称句） May more and more people meet the real China through this open door. 愿越来越多的人透过这扇敞开的门，遇见真实的中国。　（May 祝愿句） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·演讲稿，情境已替换】 你校举办 "One Window, One World" 英语演讲比赛，请你以一个具体窗口（如一次国际展会、一次接待外国学生的经历）为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 这个窗口是什么； 2. 它让你看到了什么； 3. 你的感想。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题改编自高考应用文真题（演讲稿），情境已替换为本单元话题。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 　　Every November, a special door opens in Shanghai. It is the China International Import Expo—the world's first national-level expo themed on import. 　　Through this door, the world walks towards China. Thousands of exhibitors cross oceans with their goods, from Ethiopian coffee to German machine tools. Through the same door, China walks towards the world: we buy what the world makes, and share what we have built—high-speed railways, mobile payment and, above all, friendship. 　　Some say the expo is about trade. I believe it is about trust. Goods can be counted, but when a Kenyan coffee farmer and a Chinese customer shake hands through one small order, something uncountable is born. 　　May this door open wider every year, and may more friends find their way to China through it. Thank you for listening! 【学生习作】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 　　Today I want to talk about the CIIE. The CIIE is held in Shanghai every year. It is very big and many people come to it. 　　At the expo, we can buy things from many countries. China is very strong now. Many foreign people like China. The expo shows China is great. 　　The world meets China and China helps the world. We should study hard and make our country stronger and stronger. 　　That's all. Thank you! 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 是否只选一个具体窗口（如进博会），而不是面面俱到地介绍中国？ □ "世界走近中国"与"中国走向世界"是否都写到，且各有具体例子？ □ 是否有一两个画面感强的细节（商品、对话、场景），而非只有概括？ □ 是否用了强调句、倒装或对称句等有演讲感染力的句式？ □ 是否用上本单元词块（serve as a window, a growing number of, win-win cooperation 等）至少 3 个？ □ 结尾是否有展望或祝愿，而不是重复口号或草草收场？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. expo n. 博览会 2. import n./vt. 进口 3. export n./vt. 出口；输出 4. platform n. 平台 5. window n. 窗口；视窗 6. gateway n. 门口；通道 7. bond n. 纽带；联系 8. exchange n./vt. 交流；交换 9. mutual adj. 相互的；彼此的 10. prosperity n. 繁荣；昌盛 11. initiative n. 倡议；新方案 12. forum n. 论坛 13. delegate n. 代表 14. exhibitor n. 参展商；展览者 15. brand n. 品牌 16. innovation n. 创新 17. civilization n. 文明 18. embrace vt. 拥抱；欣然接受 19. openness n. 开放；坦率 20. benefit vt. 使受益 n. 益处 21. deepen vt. 加深；深化 22. expand vt. 扩大；扩展 23. global adj. 全球的 24. connect vt. 连接；联结 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. serve as a window 作为一个窗口 2. open one's doors 敞开大门 3. a bridge between...and... ……与……之间的桥梁 4. cultural exchange 文化交流 5. mutual benefit 互利共赢 6. win-win cooperation 合作共赢 7. reach out to 向……伸出手；接触 8. bring...closer 使……更近 9. on the global stage 在全球舞台上 10. common prosperity 共同繁荣 11. attract worldwide attention 吸引全球目光 12. play a role in 在……中发挥作用 13. thanks to 多亏；由于 14. range from...to... 从……到……不等 15. a growing number of 越来越多的 16. beyond borders 跨越国界 17. share...with... 与……分享 18. learn from each other 相互学习 19. build a bridge of friendship 架起友谊之桥 20. first-hand experience 亲身体验 21. trade volume 贸易额 22. tell China's stories to the world 向世界讲好中国故事 23. the door of opportunity 机遇之门 24. deepen mutual understanding 加深相互理解 25. in the years ahead 在未来几年 26. make one's voice heard 让自己的声音被听见 27. a community with a shared future 人类命运共同体 28. gather together 齐聚；聚集 29. cross the ocean 漂洋过海 30. carry friendship 传递友谊 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. China keeps its doors open wider to the world. 2. Thousands of exhibitors crossed oceans to be there. 3. The expo has grown into a window through which the world reads China. 4. We should keep the conversation between civilizations alive. 5. China's high-speed rail turns distant provinces into next-door neighbours. 6. The world is leaning in to hear what China has to say. 7. Trade weaves countries into a web of shared prosperity. 8. Watching the world walk towards China, I feel a pride beyond words. 四、教材好句精选 1. The CIIE is the world's first national-level expo themed on import. 2. Every November, thousands of overseas companies gather in Shanghai. 3. They bring products and technologies from across the world. 4. This window lets the world see an open China. 5. China is no longer a spectator but an organizer. 6. It is this openness that brings the world closer to China. 7. A growing number of foreign friends are coming to know the real China. 8. Exchange melts away misunderstanding. 9. China's high-speed rail has turned distant provinces into next-door neighbours. 10. No matter where you come from, you can find opportunities here. 11. Only through openness can civilizations light up each other. 12. We look forward to more such bridges in the future. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. The CIIE, which is held in Shanghai every year, has become a grand stage for global trade. 2. Having visited the expo, many foreigners left with a new picture of China. 3. It is the world that meets China, and it is China that meets the world. 4. The high-speed train races along at speeds of up to 350 km/h. 5. Openness benefits not just China but the whole world. 6. Keep our doors open, and more friends will walk in. 7. More than selling their goods, the foreign exhibitors made lasting friends. 8. There is no doubt that exchange is important. 9. As China develops at remarkable speed, the world is watching closely. 10. Wherever our friends come from, China welcomes them with open arms. 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·演讲稿，情境已替换】 审体裁：演讲稿，开头问候、结尾致谢已给出，中间三段为主体。 审人称：第一人称讲故事，第三人称写"窗口"里的人和事。 审时态：讲故事用过去时；感想与展望用现在时和将来时。 审内容：Para 1 亮出窗口；Para 2 窗口中的具体场景；Para 3 感想升华。 审语气：真诚自然，借细节说话，避免空喊"中国了不起"。 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua. 　　My window is one week last summer, when our school hosted exchange students from Kenya. My partner Amara had never seen a high-speed train. When ours glided past at 350 km/h, she whispered, "This is like flying on the ground." 　　That week, she taught me Swahili songs; I showed her paper-cutting. We argued about music, laughed over dumplings, and exchanged contact details at the station. 　　One week, one friend, one train ride—that is how the world meets China: not through headlines, but through people. Thank you! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 外研版选择性必修四 Unit 3　The World Meets China 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校将举办以 "The World Meets China" 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以进博会（the China International Import Expo）为窗口写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 简要介绍这一窗口； 2. 讲述世界如何走近中国、中国如何走向世界（可举一两个例子）； 3. 表达你的展望。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　____________________________________________________________________ 　　Thank you for listening! 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 演讲稿（speech）：问候—亮出窗口—双向讲述—升华展望—致谢，口语化、有呼告。 人称 第一人称谈感受，第一人称复数 we 讲中国，第三人称举例（参展商、外国朋友）。 时态 介绍窗口与观点用一般现在时；举例用一般过去时或现在完成时；展望用将来时。 结构 四段式。Para 1：问候 + 点出窗口（进博会）；Para 2：世界如何走近中国（举例）；Para 3：中国如何走向世界；Para 4：展望 + 致谢。 要点 窗口要"小而具体"：一个展会、一次握手、一杯外国咖啡，都比"开放的中国"更有说服力。 语气 自信而谦和，避免喊口号；用一两个真实细节代替宏大叙述。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. expo n. 博览会 2. import n./vt. 进口 3. export n./vt. 出口；输出 4. platform n. 平台 5. window n. 窗口；视窗 6. gateway n. 门口；通道 7. bond n. 纽带；联系 8. exchange n./vt. 交流；交换 9. mutual adj. 相互的；彼此的 10. prosperity n. 繁荣；昌盛 11. initiative n. 倡议；新方案 12. forum n. 论坛 13. delegate n. 代表 14. exhibitor n. 参展商；展览者 15. brand n. 品牌 16. innovation n. 创新 17. civilization n. 文明 18. embrace vt. 拥抱；欣然接受 19. openness n. 开放；坦率 20. benefit vt. 使受益 n. 益处 21. deepen vt. 加深；深化 22. expand vt. 扩大；扩展 23. global adj. 全球的 24. connect vt. 连接；联结 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. serve as a window 作为一个窗口 2. open one's doors 敞开大门 3. a bridge between...and... ……与……之间的桥梁 4. cultural exchange 文化交流 5. mutual benefit 互利共赢 6. win-win cooperation 合作共赢 7. reach out to 向……伸出手；接触 8. bring...closer 使……更近 9. on the global stage 在全球舞台上 10. common prosperity 共同繁荣 11. attract worldwide attention 吸引全球目光 12. play a role in 在……中发挥作用 13. thanks to 多亏；由于 14. range from...to... 从……到……不等 15. a growing number of 越来越多的 16. beyond borders 跨越国界 17. share...with... 与……分享 18. learn from each other 相互学习 19. build a bridge of friendship 架起友谊之桥 20. first-hand experience 亲身体验 21. trade volume 贸易额 22. tell China's stories to the world 向世界讲好中国故事 23. the door of opportunity 机遇之门 24. deepen mutual understanding 加深相互理解 25. in the years ahead 在未来几年 26. make one's voice heard 让自己的声音被听见 27. a community with a shared future 人类命运共同体 28. gather together 齐聚；聚集 29. cross the ocean 漂洋过海 30. carry friendship 传递友谊 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. China is open to the world. China keeps its doors open wider to the world. 2. Many foreign companies came to the expo. Thousands of exhibitors crossed oceans to be there. 3. The expo is very important. The expo has grown into a window through which the world reads China. 4. We should communicate with other countries. We should keep the conversation between civilizations alive. 5. China's high-speed rail is very fast. China's high-speed rail turns distant provinces into next-door neighbours. 6. Foreigners are interested in China. The world is leaning in to hear what China has to say. 7. Trade makes countries rich. Trade weaves countries into a web of shared prosperity. 8. I am proud of my country. Watching the world walk towards China, I feel a pride beyond words. 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 进博会是世界上第一个以进口为主题的国家级展会。 　　The CIIE is the world's first national-level expo themed on import. 2. 每年十一月，数千家海外企业齐聚上海。 　　Every November, thousands of overseas companies gather in Shanghai. 3. 他们带来了来自世界各地的产品与技术。 　　They bring products and technologies from across the world. 4. 这扇窗口让世界看见开放的中国。 　　This window lets the world see an open China. 5. 中国不再只是旁观者，更是组织者。 　　China is no longer a spectator but an organizer. 6. 正是这种开放让世界走近中国。 　　It is this openness that brings the world closer to China. 7. 越来越多的外国朋友开始了解真实的中国。 　　A growing number of foreign friends are coming to know the real China. 8. 交流能消除误解。 　　Exchange melts away misunderstanding. 9. 中国高铁把遥远的省份变成了近邻。 　　China's high-speed rail has turned distant provinces into next-door neighbours. 10. 无论你来自哪里，都能在这里找到机会。 　　No matter where you come from, you can find opportunities here. 11. 只有坚持开放，文明才能彼此照亮。（倒装） 　　Only through openness can civilizations light up each other. 12. 我们期待未来会有更多这样的桥梁。 　　We look forward to more such bridges in the future. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. The CIIE is held in Shanghai every year. It has become a grand stage for global trade. 要求：用 which 引导非限制性定语从句合并 → The CIIE, which is held in Shanghai every year, has become a grand stage for global trade. 2. Many foreigners visited the expo. They left with a new picture of China. 要求：用现在分词作状语合并 → Having visited the expo, many foreigners left with a new picture of China. 3. The world meets China. China meets the world. 要求：用强调句合并 → It is the world that meets China, and it is China that meets the world. 4. The high-speed train is very fast. It can reach 350 km/h. 要求：用 at speeds of up to 表达速度 → The high-speed train races along at speeds of up to 350 km/h. 5. Openness benefits China. Openness also benefits the world. 要求：用 not just...but 合并 → Openness benefits not just China but the whole world. 6. If we keep our doors open, we will make more friends. 要求：改为祈使句 + and 的条件句 → Keep our doors open, and more friends will walk in. 7. Foreign exhibitors sold their goods. They also made friends. 要求：用 more than 开头改写 → More than selling their goods, the foreign exhibitors made lasting friends. 8. I believe exchange is important. 要求：用 There is no doubt that 改写 → There is no doubt that exchange is important. 9. China develops quickly. The world is watching. 要求：用 as 引导时间状语从句合并 → As China develops at remarkable speed, the world is watching closely. 10. We welcome friends from all over the world. 要求：用 wherever 改写 → Wherever our friends come from, China welcomes them with open arms. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） A nation's openness decides its altitude. 一个国家的开放程度，决定它的高度。　（判断句 + 比喻） The expo is a window; through it, the world reads China. 博览会是一扇窗；透过它，世界阅读中国。　（分号并列 + 比喻） Never has the distance between civilizations felt so short. 文明之间的距离从未显得如此之短。　（否定词置于句首的倒装） Where there is exchange, there is understanding. 哪里有交流，哪里就有理解。　（where 引导的状语从句） It is not the stage that matters, but the doors we keep open. 重要的不是舞台本身，而是我们一直敞开的门。　（强调句 + not...but...） High-speed rail shrinks distances; openness shrinks prejudice. 高铁缩短距离，开放缩短偏见。　（对称句） The world walks towards China, and China walks towards the world. 世界走向中国，中国也走向世界。　（对称句） Trade builds roads, but friendship builds bridges. 贸易修路，友谊架桥。　（对比句） What China offers the world is not just goods, but goodwill. 中国给世界的不仅是商品，更是善意。　（what 主语从句 + 双关） So vast is this land of opportunity that every dream finds a door. 这片机遇之地如此辽阔，每个梦想都能找到一扇门。　（so...that 的倒装） Every handshake at the expo echoes far beyond the exhibition hall. 博览会上的每一次握手，其回响都远远越过展馆。　（比喻） Only by opening wider can a country see further. 只有更加开放，一个国家才能看得更远。　（only 引导的倒装） Different civilizations are not walls but windows. 不同的文明不是墙，而是窗。　（not...but... 对称句） May more and more people meet the real China through this open door. 愿越来越多的人透过这扇敞开的门，遇见真实的中国。　（May 祝愿句） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·演讲稿，情境已替换】 你校举办 "One Window, One World" 英语演讲比赛，请你以一个具体窗口（如一次国际展会、一次接待外国学生的经历）为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 这个窗口是什么； 2. 它让你看到了什么； 3. 你的感想。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题改编自高考应用文真题（演讲稿），情境已替换为本单元话题。 【审题建模】 审体裁：演讲稿，开头问候、结尾致谢已给出，中间三段为主体。 审人称：第一人称讲故事，第三人称写"窗口"里的人和事。 审时态：讲故事用过去时；感想与展望用现在时和将来时。 审内容：Para 1 亮出窗口；Para 2 窗口中的具体场景；Para 3 感想升华。 审语气：真诚自然，借细节说话，避免空喊"中国了不起"。 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua. 　　My window is one week last summer, when our school hosted exchange students from Kenya. My partner Amara had never seen a high-speed train. When ours glided past at 350 km/h, she whispered, "This is like flying on the ground." 　　That week, she taught me Swahili songs; I showed her paper-cutting. We argued about music, laughed over dumplings, and exchanged contact details at the station. 　　One week, one friend, one train ride—that is how the world meets China: not through headlines, but through people. Thank you! 【亮点句式】 ① "This is like flying on the ground."（借外国朋友之口夸高铁，比自夸更可信） ② she taught me Swahili songs; I showed her paper-cutting（对称句，体现双向交流） ③ One week, one friend, one train ride（三个 one 排比，节奏轻快） ④ not through headlines, but through people（not...but 收束，观点鲜明） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 　　Every November, a special door opens in Shanghai. It is the China International Import Expo—the world's first national-level expo themed on import. 　　Through this door, the world walks towards China. Thousands of exhibitors cross oceans with their goods, from Ethiopian coffee to German machine tools. Through the same door, China walks towards the world: we buy what the world makes, and share what we have built—high-speed railways, mobile payment and, above all, friendship. 　　Some say the expo is about trade. I believe it is about trust. Goods can be counted, but when a Kenyan coffee farmer and a Chinese customer shake hands through one small order, something uncountable is born. 　　May this door open wider every year, and may more friends find their way to China through it. Thank you for listening! 【学生习作】 Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 　　Today I want to talk about the CIIE. The CIIE is held in Shanghai every year. It is very big and many people come to it. 　　At the expo, we can buy things from many countries. China is very strong now. Many foreign people like China. The expo shows China is great. 　　The world meets China and China helps the world. We should study hard and make our country stronger and stronger. 　　That's all. Thank you! 【习作点评】 优点：格式正确，有问候与致谢，语句基本通顺，能点出"世界走近中国、中国帮助世界"的双向关系。 问题一：没有一个具体窗口的细节。"held in Shanghai every year"只是事实陈述，应选一件小事写活，如一位埃塞俄比亚参展商的咖啡摊。 问题二："China is very strong"等句子空泛直白，容易变成口号；应让事实说话，例如"一杯咖啡的订单让太平洋两岸的两个人成了朋友"。 问题三：句式单调，全是简单句；可用强调句、倒装句或对称句提升感染力。 问题四：结尾"study hard and make our country stronger"偏离演讲主题，应回到"这扇窗"本身，给出展望或祝愿。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：窗口要小，立意要大。以进博会为"窗"，透过它看世界与中国的相遇；写一笔"埃塞俄比亚的咖啡""德国的机床"，比空谈"开放的中国"更打动评委。 得分点二：写出"双向奔赴"。既要写世界走近中国，也要写中国走向世界，用对称句"The world walks towards China, and China walks towards the world."一举两得。 得分点三：让句式"有声音"。演讲稿要用设问、排比、强调句制造节奏，如"Some say the expo is about trade. I believe it is about trust."先抑后扬，观点立现。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $