Unit 6 Nature in Words 单元写作作业设计-2026-2027学年高中英语外研版（2019）选择性必修第三册

外研版选择性必修三 Unit 6　Nature in Words 单元写作作业 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校英文报"Bookshelf"栏目正在征集英文读书推荐。请推荐一部以自然为主题的文学作品（如梭罗的《瓦尔登湖》Walden、约翰·缪尔的《夏日走过山间》My First Summer in the Sierra），内容包括： 1. 简要介绍这部作品及其作者； 2. 引用一两句原文并描述它带给你的画面或感受； 3. 说明推荐理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 读书推荐（英文报征稿）：引出作品—介绍作者—引原文谈感受—说推荐理由，标题已给。 人称 第一人称（I）谈阅读感受，第三人称（it/he）介绍作品与作者。 时态 介绍作品内容用一般现在时；作者生平用一般过去时；谈阅读感受用一般现在时或现在完成时。 结构 四段式。Para 1：一句话亮出要推荐的书；Para 2：作品与作者简介（写于何时、记录了什么）；Para 3：引用一两句原文 + 描述它带来的画面与感受；Para 4：推荐理由（远离喧嚣、学会观察、内心安静）收束。 要点 引用要"短而准"：一两句即可，译文/感受紧跟其后；不要复述整本书情节；推荐理由要落在"这本书能让读者做什么"，而不是"这本书很有名"。 语气 安静、有书卷气。多用描写性语言（湖水、松林、晨雾），少用 "very good" 类空泛评价。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（根据提示补全单词或词义） 话题词汇 1. literature n. ____________ 2. ____________ adj. 文学的 3. classic n. ____________ adj. ____________ 4. ____________ n. 作者；作家 5. essay n. ____________ 6. ____________ n. 描写；描述 7. describe vt. ____________ 8. ____________ adj. 生动的；鲜明的 9. detail n. ____________ 10. ____________ n. 风景；景色 11. landscape n. ____________ 12. ____________ n. 池塘 13. forest n. ____________ 14. ____________ n. 小溪；小河 15. simplicity n. ____________ 16. ____________ vt. 反射；反映；深思 17. appreciate vt. ____________ 18. ____________ vt. 推荐 n. 推荐 19. touch vt. ____________ 20. ____________ vt. 激励；启发 21. wander vi. ____________ 22. ____________ adj. 宁静的；平静的 23. chapter n. ____________ 24. ____________ n. 意义；含义 Ⅱ. 话题词块（根据汉语补全短语，或根据短语写出汉语） 话题词块 1. recommend...to sb ____________ 2. ____________ 必读之作 3. be set in ____________ 4. ____________ 提醒某人想起；使某人意识到 5. appeal to ____________ 6. ____________ 被……吸引 7. fall in love with ____________ 8. ____________ 在林中漫步 9. by the pond ____________ 10. ____________ 与自然和谐安宁地相处 11. away from ____________ 12. ____________ 逃离喧嚣 13. slow down ____________ 14. ____________ 欣赏……之美 15. a sense of peace ____________ 16. ____________ 栩栩如生地描绘 17. with great detail ____________ 18. ____________ （文字、场景）变得鲜活 19. be worth reading ____________ 20. ____________ 打开某人的眼界 21. deep thought ____________ 22. ____________ 捧起（书）阅读 23. page after page ____________ 24. ____________ 简单生活 25. more than just a book ____________ 26. ____________ 引用一句话 27. in the distance ____________ 28. ____________ 一股清新的空气 29. turn to nature ____________ 30. ____________ 文字中的自然 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. This book is very good. ____________________ 2. I like this book very much. ____________________ 3. The writer describes nature beautifully. ____________________ 4. Reading it, I felt relaxed. ____________________ 5. You should read this book. ____________________ 6. The book teaches us to love nature. ____________________ 7. I have read it many times. ____________________ 8. It is about living alone in the woods. ____________________ 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 梭罗独自住在瓦尔登湖畔的小木屋里，过了两年多简单的生活。 　　Thoreau lived alone in a small cabin by Walden Pond, ________ ________ simple life for more than two years. 2. 他在书中细致入微地描绘了湖水的四季变化。 　　In the book, he describes the seasons of the lake ________ ________ ________. 3. 寥寥数笔，清晨的雾就从纸页上升了起来。 　　With just a few strokes, the morning mist ________ ________ from the pages. 4. 我引用其中一句与大家共赏："我步入丛林，因为我希望活得从容。" 　　Let me quote a line from it: "I went to the woods because I wished to ________ deliberately." 5. 读着读着，城市的喧嚣仿佛从我身上一点点流走了。 　　Reading on, I felt the city noise ________ ________ of me, page after page. 6. 这本书提醒我们：一个人真正需要的东西其实很少。 　　The book reminds us that what a person truly needs is ________ ________ ________. 7. 正是这份宁静打动了我。 　　It is this ________ ________ ________ that touches me most. 8. 只有放慢脚步，我们才能欣赏身边被忽略的美。 　　Only when we slow down ________ ________ appreciate the beauty we have overlooked. 9. 对被日程表填满的学生来说，这本书就是一扇敞开的窗。 　　For students whose days are filled with schedules, the book is ________ ________ ________. 10. 我们越是亲近自然，内心就越安静。 　　The ________ we stay to nature, the ________ our hearts become. 11. 这本书值得你在某个安静的晚上捧起，一页一页读下去。 　　The book is ________ ________ on a quiet evening, page after page. 12. 文字中的自然，最终会把你带回真实的自然。 　　Nature in words will, in the end, ________ ________ ________ to nature itself. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. Thoreau wrote Walden by a lake. 要求：用过去分词短语作定语改写，并加细节 → ____________________________________________________________ 2. The writer describes the lake beautifully. 要求：用 with 复合结构 / with great detail 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 3. This book is interesting. 要求：用 more than just a book 句型扩展 → ____________________________________________________________ 4. I read the book and felt calm. 要求：用现在分词短语作状语改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 5. You should read this book when you are tired. 要求：用 if 条件句 + 比喻改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 6. The book tells us to live simply. 要求：用 not…but… 结构改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 7. Many students are busy with their phones. 要求：用 while 对比改写，突出反差 → ____________________________________________________________ 8. The sentences in the book are very beautiful. 要求：用 so…that… 倒装句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 9. I recommend this book to everyone. 要求：用 to whoever 引导的从句改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 10. Reading this book, you will love nature. 要求：用祈使句 + and 改写 → ____________________________________________________________ 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately. 我步入丛林，因为我希望活得从容。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（原文引用 · 不定式表目的） Simplify, simplify. 简化，再简化。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（重复祈使式格言） A lake is the landscape's most beautiful and expressive feature. 湖是风景中最美丽、最富于表现力的部分。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（名词短语 + 最高级） Time is but the stream I go a-fishing in. 时间只是我垂钓于其中的溪流。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（隐喻 + but 表"仅仅是"） The mountains are calling and I must go. 大山在呼唤，我必须启程。（约翰·缪尔）　（拟人 + 并列句） In every walk with nature one receives far more than he seeks. 每一次走进自然，收获都远超所求。（约翰·缪尔）　（比较级 + than 从句） What lies behind the best nature writing is not words, but patient eyes. 最好的自然文字背后，不是辞藻，而是耐心的眼睛。　（强调句 + not…but…） Reading such a book is like opening a window after a long winter. 读这样的书，就像熬过漫长冬天后推开一扇窗。　（动名词作主语 + 明喻） So quiet are these pages that you can almost hear the water lapping. 书页如此安静，你几乎能听见水波轻拍岸沿。　（so…that 倒装） The more slowly you read, the more the forest grows between the lines. 你读得越慢，字里行间的森林就越茂盛。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） Only when we stop rushing do words begin to smell of pine and rain. 只有当我们不再匆匆赶路，文字才开始散发松针与雨的气息。　（only + when 倒装） Nature in words is a bridge that leads the tired back to the real woods. 文字中的自然是一座桥，把疲惫的人引回真实的树林。　（隐喻 + 定语从句） With this book in your bag, even a bus ride becomes a country walk. 包里装着这本书，连一段公交旅程都成了一次乡间漫步。　（with 复合结构） A good nature book does not take you away from life; it gives life back to you. 好的自然文学不是带你逃离生活，而是把生活还给你。　（分号对比 + 拟物） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·读书分享投稿，情境已替换】 你校英文报"Bookworm"栏目邀请同学们推荐一本自己喜爱的书。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 简介这本书的主要内容； 2. 说明它吸引你的地方； 3. 表达你的推荐。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题根据高考英语应用文"读书分享/推荐"类真题改编，情境已替换为本单元话题。 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Nature in Words 　　If I could put just one book into every schoolbag, it would be Walden by Henry David Thoreau. 　　Written beside a quiet pond in the woods of Massachusetts, this little classic records the two years Thoreau spent living simply—growing beans, watching the ice melt, and listening to the loons at night. 　　"I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately," he writes. Those words always slow my breathing: with just a few strokes, the morning mist rises from the pages, and the city noise in my ears drains away. 　　I recommend Walden to whoever feels crowded by schedules and screens. It teaches, without preaching, how little we truly need—and how much a quiet lake can give back. 【学生习作】 Nature in Words 　　I want to recommend a book to you. The book is Walden. It was written by Thoreau, a famous American writer. 　　The book is about nature. Thoreau lived near a lake for two years. He wrote about the lake, the forest and the animals. The book is very beautiful and famous in the world. 　　I like this book because it is good. It can make people feel relaxed. Many people like it, so I think you will like it too. 　　I hope everyone can read this book. It is really worth reading. 【自我修改清单】（写完对照检查） □ 是否引用了一两句原文，并紧跟自己的感受或解读，而不是只说"书很好"？ □ 介绍作品时是否写出了画面（湖水、森林、晨雾），而不是复述"这本书讲什么"？ □ 推荐理由是否说清"它能带给读者什么"，避免了"很多人喜欢"式循环论证？ □ 是否用了比喻、倒装或强调句，让文字本身也有一点"自然文学"的味道？ □ 是否用上了本单元词块（live simply、a sense of peace、come alive、pick up 等）至少4个？ □ 结尾是否有余味（一句能被记住的话），而不是"I hope everyone can read it"？ 九、参考答案 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇 1. literature n. 文学；文学作品 2. literary adj. 文学的 3. classic n. 经典作品 adj. 经典的 4. author n. 作者；作家 5. essay n. 散文；文章 6. description n. 描写；描述 7. describe vt. 描写；描述 8. vivid adj. 生动的；鲜明的 9. detail n. 细节；详情 10. scenery n. 风景；景色 11. landscape n. 风景；山水画；风景 12. pond n. 池塘 13. forest n. 森林 14. stream n. 小溪；小河 15. simplicity n. 简单；质朴 16. reflect vt. 反射；反映 vi. 深思 17. appreciate vt. 欣赏；感激 18. recommend vt. 推荐 recommendation n. 推荐 19. touch vt. 感动；触动 20. inspire vt. 激励；启发 21. wander vi. 漫步；徘徊 22. peaceful adj. 宁静的；平静的 23. chapter n. 章；回 24. meaning n. 意义；含义 Ⅱ. 话题词块 1. recommend...to sb 向某人推荐…… 2. a must-read 必读之作 3. be set in 以……为背景；坐落于 4. remind sb of 提醒某人想起；使某人意识到 5. appeal to 吸引；使感兴趣 6. be attracted by 被……吸引 7. fall in love with 爱上 8. take a walk in the woods 在林中漫步 9. by the pond 在池塘边 10. be at peace with nature 与自然和谐安宁地相处 11. away from 远离 12. escape from the noise 逃离喧嚣 13. slow down 放慢脚步 14. appreciate the beauty of 欣赏……之美 15. a sense of peace 宁静感 16. paint a vivid picture of 栩栩如生地描绘 17. with great detail 细致入微地 18. come alive （文字、场景）变得鲜活 19. be worth reading 值得一读 20. open one's eyes to 打开某人的眼界 21. deep thought 深思 22. pick up 捧起（书）阅读 23. page after page 一页接一页 24. live simply 简单生活 25. more than just a book 不只是一本书 26. quote a line 引用一句话 27. in the distance 在远处 28. a breath of fresh air 一股清新的空气 29. turn to nature 走向自然；回归自然 30. nature in words 文字中的自然 Ⅲ. 词块升级 1. This book is a quiet lake—you keep seeing new things in it. 2. Few books have slowed my heart the way this one does. 3. With a few strokes, the writer turns morning mist into a living painting. 4. Reading it, I felt the city noise drain out of me, page after page. 5. If your days feel crowded, this book is the open window you need. 6. It does not preach; it simply lets the pond and the pines do the teaching. 7. I have gone back to it so many times that the pages have gone soft, and each rereading finds me a different reader. 8. It is about one man, one cabin, and two years of chosen solitude in the woods. 四、教材好句精选 1. Thoreau lived alone in a small cabin by Walden Pond, leading a simple life for more than two years. 2. In the book, he describes the seasons of the lake with great detail. 3. With just a few strokes, the morning mist comes alive from the pages. 4. Let me quote a line from it: "I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately." 5. Reading on, I felt the city noise drain out of me, page after page. 6. The book reminds us that what a person truly needs is far less than we think. 7. It is this sense of peace that touches me most. 8. Only when we slow down can we appreciate the beauty we have overlooked. 9. For students whose days are filled with schedules, the book is an open window. 10. The closer we stay to nature, the quieter our hearts become. 11. The book is worth picking up on a quiet evening, page after page. 12. Nature in words will, in the end, lead you back to nature itself. 五、句式升级与仿写 1. Walden, written beside a quiet pond in the woods, is Thoreau's two-year conversation with nature. 2. The writer describes the changing lake with such detail that you can almost hear the water. 3. This book is more than just a book—it is a door out of the noisy world. 4. Reading the book by lamplight, I felt my racing heart slow down with every page. 5. If the noise of life tires you, open this book and let the woods take over. 6. What the book really teaches is not how to escape life, but how to live it deliberately. 7. Many students are glued to their phones, while this book invites them to watch real clouds drift by. 8. So beautiful are its sentences that I found myself copying them into my notebook. 9. I warmly recommend this book to whoever longs for a quieter heart. 10. Read one chapter of Walden, and you will find yourself planning a walk in the woods. 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·读书分享投稿，情境已替换】 审体裁：读书推荐短文（栏目投稿），三段式，无称呼落款，标题可自拟。 审人称：第一人称谈感受，第三人称介绍书与作者。 审时态：介绍内容用一般现在时，阅读经历可用一般过去时或现在完成时。 审内容：Para 1 书目与内容（老人与海，老渔夫与大鱼搏斗）；Para 2 吸引点（"人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败"的力量感）；Para 3 推荐（送给正经历失败的人）。 审语气：热情而具体；引用原文一句并紧跟自己的解读，避免空洞赞美。 【参考范文】 A Book Worth Every Wave 　　The book I'd love to share is The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway, a story of an old fisherman's lonely battle with a giant marlin. 　　What draws me back to it again and again is one line: "A man can be destroyed but not defeated." The old man returns with only a skeleton, yet he never bows to the sea. Every time I fail an exam or lose a match, his silence gives me strength. 　　If you are going through a hard time, pick up this slim book. The old fisherman will row quietly into your heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 外研版选择性必修三 Unit 6　Nature in Words 单元写作作业（教师版） 一、单元写作任务 假定你是李华，你校英文报"Bookshelf"栏目正在征集英文读书推荐。请推荐一部以自然为主题的文学作品（如梭罗的《瓦尔登湖》Walden、约翰·缪尔的《夏日走过山间》My First Summer in the Sierra），内容包括： 1. 简要介绍这部作品及其作者； 2. 引用一两句原文并描述它带给你的画面或感受； 3. 说明推荐理由。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 二、审题建模（动笔前先想清楚这五件事） 项目 写作要点 体裁 读书推荐（英文报征稿）：引出作品—介绍作者—引原文谈感受—说推荐理由，标题已给。 人称 第一人称（I）谈阅读感受，第三人称（it/he）介绍作品与作者。 时态 介绍作品内容用一般现在时；作者生平用一般过去时；谈阅读感受用一般现在时或现在完成时。 结构 四段式。Para 1：一句话亮出要推荐的书；Para 2：作品与作者简介（写于何时、记录了什么）；Para 3：引用一两句原文 + 描述它带来的画面与感受；Para 4：推荐理由（远离喧嚣、学会观察、内心安静）收束。 要点 引用要"短而准"：一两句即可，译文/感受紧跟其后；不要复述整本书情节；推荐理由要落在"这本书能让读者做什么"，而不是"这本书很有名"。 语气 安静、有书卷气。多用描写性语言（湖水、松林、晨雾），少用 "very good" 类空泛评价。 三、话题词块梳理 Ⅰ. 话题词汇（中英对照，答案已填入） 话题词汇 1. literature n. 文学；文学作品 2. literary adj. 文学的 3. classic n. 经典作品 adj. 经典的 4. author n. 作者；作家 5. essay n. 散文；文章 6. description n. 描写；描述 7. describe vt. 描写；描述 8. vivid adj. 生动的；鲜明的 9. detail n. 细节；详情 10. scenery n. 风景；景色 11. landscape n. 风景；山水画；风景 12. pond n. 池塘 13. forest n. 森林 14. stream n. 小溪；小河 15. simplicity n. 简单；质朴 16. reflect vt. 反射；反映 vi. 深思 17. appreciate vt. 欣赏；感激 18. recommend vt. 推荐 recommendation n. 推荐 19. touch vt. 感动；触动 20. inspire vt. 激励；启发 21. wander vi. 漫步；徘徊 22. peaceful adj. 宁静的；平静的 23. chapter n. 章；回 24. meaning n. 意义；含义 Ⅱ. 话题词块（答案已填入） 话题词块 1. recommend...to sb 向某人推荐…… 2. a must-read 必读之作 3. be set in 以……为背景；坐落于 4. remind sb of 提醒某人想起；使某人意识到 5. appeal to 吸引；使感兴趣 6. be attracted by 被……吸引 7. fall in love with 爱上 8. take a walk in the woods 在林中漫步 9. by the pond 在池塘边 10. be at peace with nature 与自然和谐安宁地相处 11. away from 远离 12. escape from the noise 逃离喧嚣 13. slow down 放慢脚步 14. appreciate the beauty of 欣赏……之美 15. a sense of peace 宁静感 16. paint a vivid picture of 栩栩如生地描绘 17. with great detail 细致入微地 18. come alive （文字、场景）变得鲜活 19. be worth reading 值得一读 20. open one's eyes to 打开某人的眼界 21. deep thought 深思 22. pick up 捧起（书）阅读 23. page after page 一页接一页 24. live simply 简单生活 25. more than just a book 不只是一本书 26. quote a line 引用一句话 27. in the distance 在远处 28. a breath of fresh air 一股清新的空气 29. turn to nature 走向自然；回归自然 30. nature in words 文字中的自然 Ⅲ. 词块升级（把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法） 基础表达 升级表达 1. This book is very good. This book is a quiet lake—you keep seeing new things in it. 2. I like this book very much. Few books have slowed my heart the way this one does. 3. The writer describes nature beautifully. With a few strokes, the writer turns morning mist into a living painting. 4. Reading it, I felt relaxed. Reading it, I felt the city noise drain out of me, page after page. 5. You should read this book. If your days feel crowded, this book is the open window you need. 6. The book teaches us to love nature. It does not preach; it simply lets the pond and the pines do the teaching. 7. I have read it many times. I have gone back to it so many times that the pages have gone soft, and each rereading finds me a different reader. 8. It is about living alone in the woods. It is about one man, one cabin, and two years of chosen solitude in the woods. 四、教材好句精选（根据汉语补全句子，注意课文句式与词块的用法） 1. 梭罗独自住在瓦尔登湖畔的小木屋里，过了两年多简单的生活。 　　Thoreau lived alone in a small cabin by Walden Pond, leading a simple life for more than two years. 2. 他在书中细致入微地描绘了湖水的四季变化。 　　In the book, he describes the seasons of the lake with great detail. 3. 寥寥数笔，清晨的雾就从纸页上升了起来。 　　With just a few strokes, the morning mist comes alive from the pages. 4. 我引用其中一句与大家共赏："我步入丛林，因为我希望活得从容。" 　　Let me quote a line from it: "I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately." 5. 读着读着，城市的喧嚣仿佛从我身上一点点流走了。 　　Reading on, I felt the city noise drain out of me, page after page. 6. 这本书提醒我们：一个人真正需要的东西其实很少。 　　The book reminds us that what a person truly needs is far less than we think. 7. 正是这份宁静打动了我。 　　It is this sense of peace that touches me most. 8. 只有放慢脚步，我们才能欣赏身边被忽略的美。 　　Only when we slow down can we appreciate the beauty we have overlooked. 9. 对被日程表填满的学生来说，这本书就是一扇敞开的窗。 　　For students whose days are filled with schedules, the book is an open window. 10. 我们越是亲近自然，内心就越安静。 　　The closer we stay to nature, the quieter our hearts become. 11. 这本书值得你在某个安静的晚上捧起，一页一页读下去。 　　The book is worth picking up on a quiet evening, page after page. 12. 文字中的自然，最终会把你带回真实的自然。 　　Nature in words will, in the end, lead you back to nature itself. 五、句式升级与仿写（按要求改写下列句子，体会“高级感”从何而来） 1. Thoreau wrote Walden by a lake. 要求：用过去分词短语作定语改写，并加细节 → Walden, written beside a quiet pond in the woods, is Thoreau's two-year conversation with nature. 2. The writer describes the lake beautifully. 要求：用 with 复合结构 / with great detail 改写 → The writer describes the changing lake with such detail that you can almost hear the water. 3. This book is interesting. 要求：用 more than just a book 句型扩展 → This book is more than just a book—it is a door out of the noisy world. 4. I read the book and felt calm. 要求：用现在分词短语作状语改写 → Reading the book by lamplight, I felt my racing heart slow down with every page. 5. You should read this book when you are tired. 要求：用 if 条件句 + 比喻改写 → If the noise of life tires you, open this book and let the woods take over. 6. The book tells us to live simply. 要求：用 not…but… 结构改写 → What the book really teaches is not how to escape life, but how to live it deliberately. 7. Many students are busy with their phones. 要求：用 while 对比改写，突出反差 → Many students are glued to their phones, while this book invites them to watch real clouds drift by. 8. The sentences in the book are very beautiful. 要求：用 so…that… 倒装句改写 → So beautiful are its sentences that I found myself copying them into my notebook. 9. I recommend this book to everyone. 要求：用 to whoever 引导的从句改写 → I warmly recommend this book to whoever longs for a quieter heart. 10. Reading this book, you will love nature. 要求：用祈使句 + and 改写 → Read one chapter of Walden, and you will find yourself planning a walk in the woods. 六、课外材料精编（读一读，背一背，用一用） I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately. 我步入丛林，因为我希望活得从容。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（原文引用 · 不定式表目的） Simplify, simplify. 简化，再简化。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（重复祈使式格言） A lake is the landscape's most beautiful and expressive feature. 湖是风景中最美丽、最富于表现力的部分。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（名词短语 + 最高级） Time is but the stream I go a-fishing in. 时间只是我垂钓于其中的溪流。（梭罗《瓦尔登湖》）　（隐喻 + but 表"仅仅是"） The mountains are calling and I must go. 大山在呼唤，我必须启程。（约翰·缪尔）　（拟人 + 并列句） In every walk with nature one receives far more than he seeks. 每一次走进自然，收获都远超所求。（约翰·缪尔）　（比较级 + than 从句） What lies behind the best nature writing is not words, but patient eyes. 最好的自然文字背后，不是辞藻，而是耐心的眼睛。　（强调句 + not…but…） Reading such a book is like opening a window after a long winter. 读这样的书，就像熬过漫长冬天后推开一扇窗。　（动名词作主语 + 明喻） So quiet are these pages that you can almost hear the water lapping. 书页如此安静，你几乎能听见水波轻拍岸沿。　（so…that 倒装） The more slowly you read, the more the forest grows between the lines. 你读得越慢，字里行间的森林就越茂盛。　（the + 比较级, the + 比较级） Only when we stop rushing do words begin to smell of pine and rain. 只有当我们不再匆匆赶路，文字才开始散发松针与雨的气息。　（only + when 倒装） Nature in words is a bridge that leads the tired back to the real woods. 文字中的自然是一座桥，把疲惫的人引回真实的树林。　（隐喻 + 定语从句） With this book in your bag, even a bus ride becomes a country walk. 包里装着这本书，连一段公交旅程都成了一次乡间漫步。　（with 复合结构） A good nature book does not take you away from life; it gives life back to you. 好的自然文学不是带你逃离生活，而是把生活还给你。　（分号对比 + 拟物） 七、同话题高考真题【改编自高考应用文真题·读书分享投稿，情境已替换】 你校英文报"Bookworm"栏目邀请同学们推荐一本自己喜爱的书。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 简介这本书的主要内容； 2. 说明它吸引你的地方； 3. 表达你的推荐。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 本题根据高考英语应用文"读书分享/推荐"类真题改编，情境已替换为本单元话题。 【审题建模】 审体裁：读书推荐短文（栏目投稿），三段式，无称呼落款，标题可自拟。 审人称：第一人称谈感受，第三人称介绍书与作者。 审时态：介绍内容用一般现在时，阅读经历可用一般过去时或现在完成时。 审内容：Para 1 书目与内容（老人与海，老渔夫与大鱼搏斗）；Para 2 吸引点（"人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败"的力量感）；Para 3 推荐（送给正经历失败的人）。 审语气：热情而具体；引用原文一句并紧跟自己的解读，避免空洞赞美。 【参考范文】 A Book Worth Every Wave 　　The book I'd love to share is The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway, a story of an old fisherman's lonely battle with a giant marlin. 　　What draws me back to it again and again is one line: "A man can be destroyed but not defeated." The old man returns with only a skeleton, yet he never bows to the sea. Every time I fail an exam or lose a match, his silence gives me strength. 　　If you are going through a hard time, pick up this slim book. The old fisherman will row quietly into your heart. 【亮点句式】 ① …a story of an old fisherman's lonely battle…（同位语一句话概括全书，干净利落） ② What draws me back to it again and again is…（what 主语从句点出吸引点） ③ The old man returns with only a skeleton, yet he never bows to the sea.（yet 转折 + bow 拟物，克制有力） ④ …row quietly into your heart.（以"划入你心里"收尾，呼应大海意象） 八、范文赏析 【参考范文】 Nature in Words 　　If I could put just one book into every schoolbag, it would be Walden by Henry David Thoreau. 　　Written beside a quiet pond in the woods of Massachusetts, this little classic records the two years Thoreau spent living simply—growing beans, watching the ice melt, and listening to the loons at night. 　　"I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately," he writes. Those words always slow my breathing: with just a few strokes, the morning mist rises from the pages, and the city noise in my ears drains away. 　　I recommend Walden to whoever feels crowded by schedules and screens. It teaches, without preaching, how little we truly need—and how much a quiet lake can give back. 【学生习作】 Nature in Words 　　I want to recommend a book to you. The book is Walden. It was written by Thoreau, a famous American writer. 　　The book is about nature. Thoreau lived near a lake for two years. He wrote about the lake, the forest and the animals. The book is very beautiful and famous in the world. 　　I like this book because it is good. It can make people feel relaxed. Many people like it, so I think you will like it too. 　　I hope everyone can read this book. It is really worth reading. 【习作点评】 优点：书目选择恰当，信息要素齐全（书名、作者、内容），结构完整，语言基本无误。 问题一：没有引用原文。读书推荐最能打动人的正是"那一句话"；应引用如 "I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately." 并紧跟感受。 问题二：全是评价、没有画面。"The book is very beautiful"空泛无力，应写"寥寥数笔，晨雾从纸页间升起"这类具体的阅读体验。 问题三：推荐理由站不住。"It can make people feel relaxed. Many people like it"是循环论证，应说清这本书"能带给读者什么"（学会观察、内心安静、重新看待简单生活）。 问题四：句式与本单元词块双缺：没有倒装、强调句或比喻，live simply、a sense of peace、paint a vivid picture of、come alive 等词块均未使用；结尾平淡，缺少余味。 【评分标准】（满分15分，按高考应用文评分细则） 档次 分数 评分描述 第五档 13—15分 覆盖全部要点，应用了较多语法结构和词汇，句式有变化，衔接自然，语法和拼写错误极少，完全达到交际目的。 第四档 10—12分 覆盖全部要点，语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求，衔接基本连贯，有少量错误但不影响理解。 第三档 7—9分 基本覆盖要点，语法结构单调，词汇有限，有一些错误，部分内容表达不清。 第二档 4—6分 遗漏较多要点，语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响理解。 第一档 1—3分 只能写出个别单词，内容太少，无法传达信息。 【写作指导：本单元写作的三个得分点】 得分点一：引文是推荐文的"心脏"。选一句短而有力的原文，引用后立刻接自己的感受（Those words always slow my breathing…），让"书的话"与"你的话"形成对话感。 得分点二：用画面代替形容词。不要写 beautiful，要写"寥寥数笔，晨雾从纸页间升起"；读书推荐的高下，全看你能否让没读过的人"看见"这本书。 得分点三：推荐理由要落在"读者身上"。写清这本书能让疲惫的学生获得什么——放慢脚步、内心安静、重新审视简单生活，并嵌入 live simply、a sense of peace、come alive 等本单元词块，推荐才有说服力。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $