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专题06 书面表达
考点1 演讲稿
【答案】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Dear classmates,
Recently, some of us have been filming short videos on campus. In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks. Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response.
I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. Let’s focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
Thank you!
考点2 投稿征文
(一)
【答案】参考范文
Treasure Our Library Books: A Shared Responsibility
Recently, I’ve noticed a disappointing phenomenon in our school library: many books are marked with pens or even scribbled on. Some key sentences are underlined randomly, and a few pages have messy notes or doodles. These damages not only ruin the beauty of the books but also make it hard for other students to read and use them.
Library books are shared wealth for all of us. They bring us knowledge and joy. Let’s take action to protect them: never write or draw on books, turn pages gently and keep them clean. Only by cherishing these books together can we keep the library a nice place for everyone to learn.
(二)
【答案】范文
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody
Most of us keep sitting all through breaks, which makes our bodies stiff and minds tired. Here I strongly recommend stretching as an ideal sport for breaks.
It is easy to learn and needs no special equipment. We can do it right in our classrooms in a short time. Stretching helps relax tight muscles, improve blood circulation and reduce study pressure. It can also refresh our mind and help us focus better in the next class. Let’s move our bodies and keep healthy every day.
考点3 其他应用文
【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
考点4 开放性作文
【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
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专题06 书面表达
考点1 演讲稿
(2025年1月·浙江·高考)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法;
(2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1) 写作词数应为80左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
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【答案】
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Dear classmates,
Recently, some of us have been filming short videos on campus. In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks. Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response.
I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. Let’s focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
Thank you!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并提出建议。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
记录:record → document
缺点:drawback → disadvantage
分散注意力:distract → divert
建议:suggest → propose
2. 句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks.
拓展句:In my opinion, it can be a fun way that we can use to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response. (运用了not only...but also...并列结构和从属连词when 引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型 2] I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
考点2 投稿征文
(一)
(2026年1月·浙江·高考)你发现你校图书馆藏书存在被勾画涂改的现象。为此,请你向校英文报投稿,写一篇文章,内容包括:(1) 具体情况;(2) 呼吁爱护书籍。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Treasure Our Library Books: A Shared Responsibility
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【答案】参考范文
Treasure Our Library Books: A Shared Responsibility
Recently, I’ve noticed a disappointing phenomenon in our school library: many books are marked with pens or even scribbled on. Some key sentences are underlined randomly, and a few pages have messy notes or doodles. These damages not only ruin the beauty of the books but also make it hard for other students to read and use them.
Library books are shared wealth for all of us. They bring us knowledge and joy. Let’s take action to protect them: never write or draw on books, turn pages gently and keep them clean. Only by cherishing these books together can we keep the library a nice place for everyone to learn.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就校图书馆藏书存在被勾画涂改的现象写一篇文章向校英文报投稿。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
注意到:notice→spot/take notice of
财富:wealth→fortune
乱画:scribble→scrawl
珍惜:cherish→treasure
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Library books are shared wealth for all of us. They bring us knowledge and joy.
拓展句:Library books are shared wealth for all of us, which bring us knowledge and joy.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】These damages not only ruin the beauty of the books but also make it hard for other students to read and use them.(运用了it作形式宾语,不定式作真正的宾语以及not only...but also结构)
【高分句型2】 Only by cherishing these books together can we keep the library a nice place for everyone to learn.(运用了部分倒装)
(二)
(2024年1月·浙江·高考)请你写一篇短文向校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
(1)介绍这项活动;
(2)说明推荐理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)题目已给出
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody
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【答案】范文
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody
Most of us keep sitting all through breaks, which makes our bodies stiff and minds tired. Here I strongly recommend stretching as an ideal sport for breaks.
It is easy to learn and needs no special equipment. We can do it right in our classrooms in a short time. Stretching helps relax tight muscles, improve blood circulation and reduce study pressure. It can also refresh our mind and help us focus better in the next class. Let’s move our bodies and keep healthy every day.
【导语】
题目要求考生写一篇短文向校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
装备:equipment→device
强烈:strongly→firmly
疲惫:tired→fatigued
集中:focus→concentrate
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Stretching helps relax tight muscles, improve blood circulation and reduce study pressure. It can also refresh our mind and help us focus better in the next class.
拓展句:Not only does stretching help relax tight muscles, improve blood circulation and reduce study pressure, but it also refreshes our mind and enables us to focus better in the next class.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Most of us keep sitting all through breaks, which makes our bodies stiff and minds tired.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It is easy to learn and needs no special equipment.(运用了it作形式主语和不定式作主语的句型)
考点3 其他应用文
(2022年1月·浙江·高考)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。
注意:
1 . 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
返回:come back to → return to
思念:miss→ yearn
分享:share → exchange
玩得开心:enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的:pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活:lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句: It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句: It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.(运用了定语从句)
【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.(运用了强调句型和定语从句)
【高分句型3】What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.(运用了主语从句和表语从句)
考点4 开放性作文
(2023年1月·浙江·高考)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动的过程;
2. 收获与感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道,介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
参与:participate in → attend
开始:begin → start
观察,调查:observe → survey
震惊:strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句: Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.(运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句)
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专题06书面表达
考点1演讲稿
(2025年1月·浙江·高考)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机
拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1)陈述看法;
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
考点2投稿征文
(一)
(2026年1月·浙江·高考)你发现你校图书馆藏书存在被勾画涂改的现象。为此,请你向校英文报投稿,
写一篇文章,内容包括:(1)具体情况;(②)呼吁爱护书籍。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Treasure Our Library Books:A Shared Responsibility
(二)
(2024年1月·浙江·高考)请你写一篇短文向校英语报“Sports and Health'栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适
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合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
(1)介绍这项活动:
(2)说明推荐理由。
注意:1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)题目已给出
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody
考点3其他应用文
(2022年1月·浙江·高考)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Cis,现
在他已回国,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.回忆活动经历;2.分享个人收获;3.希望保持联系。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
考点4开放性作文
(2023年1月·浙江·高考)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报
写篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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