内容正文:
2027届安徽省高三英语
应用文梦想与奋斗主题
语料积累背诵清单
—— 一轮复习专用 ——
适用题型:演讲稿 / 倡议书 / 书信 / 议论文 / 报道
核心话题:Dreams · Striving · Persistence · Youth
一、开头开场
(一)演讲/倡议开场
1. A dream is not a star to be wished upon from a window; it is a lighthouse on a distant shore, whose only purpose is to give a small boat enough light to begin rowing.
意思:梦想不是在窗前许愿的星星;它是远处海岸上的灯塔,唯一的用途是给一艘小船足够的光开始划桨。
高级升级:普通:A dream is not a star to wish upon from a window; it is a lighthouse on a distant shore that gives a small boat enough light to begin rowing. → 高分:A dream is not a star to be wished upon from a window; it is a lighthouse on a distant shore, whose only purpose is to give a small boat enough light to begin rowing.
适用语境:梦想与奋斗主题演讲稿引入、议论文开篇
语法:not A; it is B 不是A而是B;a star to be wished upon 被许愿的星星(被动不定式);a lighthouse 灯塔;whose 引导定语从句;only purpose 唯一用途;give sb enough light to do 给某人足够的光做;begin rowing 开始划桨
2. What becomes of a dream that no one ever rises early to chase—does it wait patiently, like a train held at the station, or does it quietly leave with someone willing to board?
意思:没有人早起追逐的梦想会怎样——它会像停在站台的火车一样耐心等待,还是会悄悄跟愿意上车的人离开?
高级升级:普通:What happens to a dream that no one rises early to chase? Does it wait like a train at the station, or leave with someone willing to board? → 高分:What becomes of a dream that no one ever rises early to chase—does it wait patiently, like a train held at the station, or does it quietly leave with someone willing to board?
适用语境:演讲稿用反问引出奋斗的必要
语法:What becomes of... ……会怎样;that 引导定语从句;rise early to chase 早起追逐;破折号选择疑问;a train held at the station 停在站台的火车(过去分词作后置定语);willing to board 愿意上车的(形容词短语作后置定语)
3. Many young people carry their dreams the way they carry a folded letter in a pocket—precious, private, and almost never taken out and read aloud for fear of being laughed at.
意思:许多年轻人怀揣梦想的方式,就像口袋里揣着一封折好的信——珍贵、私密,几乎从不拿出来大声读,因为怕被嘲笑。
高级升级:普通:Many young people carry their dreams like a folded letter in a pocket: precious, private, and almost never read aloud for fear of being laughed at. → 高分:Many young people carry their dreams the way they carry a folded letter in a pocket—precious, private, and almost never taken out and read aloud for fear of being laughed at.
适用语境:议论文描述年轻人不敢说出梦想
语法:the way (that) 像……一样(引导方式状语);a folded letter 折好的信(过去分词作定语);破折号后三个形容词;take out and read aloud 拿出大声读;for fear of doing 生怕做;be laughed at 被嘲笑(被动)
4. When I was seven, I told my grandmother I would become a scientist; she did not laugh, and that one unlaughed-at sentence has quietly kept me moving toward a laboratory for more than ten years.
意思:七岁时我告诉奶奶我要当科学家;她没有笑,而那句没有被嘲笑的话,悄悄推着我走向实验室十多年了。
高级升级:普通:When I was seven, I told my grandmother I would become a scientist; she did not laugh, and that sentence has kept me moving toward a laboratory for over ten years. → 高分:When I was seven, I told my grandmother I would become a scientist; she did not laugh, and that one unlaughed-at sentence has quietly kept me moving toward a laboratory for more than ten years.
适用语境:演讲稿用童年梦想经历引入
语法:When I was seven 七岁时;told 后接宾语从句(that省略);would become 过去将来时;unlaughed-at 没有被嘲笑的(复合形容词);keep sb doing 让某人持续做;for more than ten years 十多年
5. The deepest value of a dream is not the shore we finally reach because of it, but the distance we become willing to row, and the kind of person the rowing turns us into.
意思:梦想最深的价值不是我们因它而最终抵达的海岸,而是我们愿意划的距离,以及划桨把我们变成的那种人。
高级升级:普通:The deepest value of a dream is not the shore we reach because of it, but the distance we are willing to row and the kind of person the rowing turns us into. → 高分:The deepest value of a dream is not the shore we finally reach because of it, but the distance we become willing to row, and the kind of person the rowing turns us into.
适用语境:演讲稿亮明梦想的意义在过程
语法:The deepest value of ……最深的价值;not A but B and C 不是A而是B和C;we finally reach / we become willing to row / the rowing turns us into 三个省略that的定语从句;become willing to do 变得愿意;turn sb into 把某人变成
(二)书信/报道开场
6. You wrote to me that your dream feels too small and too quiet to mention in a room full of loud, certain voices; I am writing back to tell you that small, quiet dreams are exactly the ones that get finished.
意思:你写信说,你的梦想在一个满是响亮、确定声音的房间里显得太小、太安静,不值得一提;我回信想告诉你,小而安静的梦想恰恰是被完成的那些。
高级升级:普通:You wrote that your dream feels too small and quiet to mention in a room full of loud, certain voices; I am writing back to tell you that small, quiet dreams are exactly the ones that get finished. → 高分:You wrote to me that your dream feels too small and too quiet to mention in a room full of loud, certain voices; I am writing back to tell you that small, quiet dreams are exactly the ones that get finished.
适用语境:给迷茫、觉得梦想太小的同学回信
语法:write to sb 给某人写信;too...to... 太……以至于不能;in a room full of 在满是……的房间里;I am writing back to tell you 我回信告诉你;the ones that get finished 被完成的那些(定语从句,get+过去分词表被动)
7. Our school's annual “Dream Chasers” speech contest closed last night, as twelve students stood under the spotlights and told the stories behind the goals they had quietly pursued for years.
意思:我校一年一度的“追梦人”演讲比赛昨晚落幕,十二名学生站在聚光灯下,讲述他们多年默默追求的目标背后的故事。
高级升级:普通:Our school's annual “Dream Chasers” speech contest ended last night, as twelve students stood under the spotlights and told the stories behind the goals they had quietly pursued for years. → 高分:Our school's annual “Dream Chasers” speech contest closed last night, as twelve students stood under the spotlights and told the stories behind the goals they had quietly pursued for years.
适用语境:校园追梦人演讲比赛报道
语法:annual 一年一度的;close 落幕;as 引导时间状语从句;stand under the spotlights 站在聚光灯下;the goals behind ……背后的目标;they had quietly pursued 他们默默追求的(过去完成时定语从句)
二、主体观点论据
(一)奋斗的价值
8. Without a dream, even the hardest work is only busy motion; with one, the same long hours become footsteps, because every tired step now points somewhere.
意思:没有梦想,即使最辛苦的工作也只是忙碌的动作;有了梦想,同样的漫长时间变成脚步,因为每一步疲惫的步伐现在都指向某处。
高级升级:普通:Without a dream, even the hardest work is only busy motion; with one, the same long hours become footsteps because every tired step points somewhere. → 高分:Without a dream, even the hardest work is only busy motion; with one, the same long hours become footsteps, because every tired step now points somewhere.
适用语境:论述梦想给奋斗以方向
语法:Without a dream 没有梦想(介词短语);even the hardest work 即使最辛苦的工作;busy motion 忙碌的动作;with one 有了梦想(one 指代 a dream);footsteps 脚步(比喻);point somewhere 指向某处
9. Great lives are not made of rare and shining days; they are made of ordinary Tuesdays in which an ordinary person simply refuses to put the dream back on the shelf.
意思:伟大的人生不是由罕见而闪亮的日子构成的;它们由普通的星期二构成,在那些日子里一个普通人只是拒绝把梦想放回架子。
高级升级:普通:Great lives are not made of rare and shining days; they are made of ordinary Tuesdays when an ordinary person simply refuses to put the dream back on the shelf. → 高分:Great lives are not made of rare and shining days; they are made of ordinary Tuesdays in which an ordinary person simply refuses to put the dream back on the shelf.
适用语境:论述奋斗让普通日子变得不凡
语法:be made of 由……构成(被动);rare and shining days 罕见而闪亮的日子;ordinary Tuesdays 普通的星期二;in which = when 介词+关系代词;refuse to do 拒绝做;put sth back on the shelf 把……放回架子(习语)
10. Talent may start the race, but it is persistence that decides who remains standing when the loud beginning has faded and the road stretches empty ahead.
意思:天赋也许能开启比赛,但决定谁仍站着的是坚持——当响亮的开端已经退去、前方道路空空地延伸。
高级升级:普通:Talent may start the race, but persistence decides who remains standing when the loud beginning has faded and the road stretches empty ahead. → 高分:Talent may start the race, but it is persistence that decides who remains standing when the loud beginning has faded and the road stretches empty ahead.
适用语境:论述坚持是奋斗中最关键的品质
语法:may start 也许能开启(may 表推测);it is persistence that 强调句型;who 引导宾语从句;remain standing 仍站着;when 引导时间状语从句;has faded 已经退去(现在完成时);stretch empty ahead 空空地向前延伸
11. The years spent chasing a dream are never lost years, even if the dream changes shape; the early mornings and the late nights leave something behind that no final result can take away.
意思:追逐梦想的岁月从来不是虚度的岁月,即使梦想改变了形状;清晨和深夜留下了某种东西,那是任何最终结果都无法带走的。
高级升级:普通:The years spent chasing a dream are never lost, even if the dream changes shape; the early mornings and late nights leave something behind that no final result can take away. → 高分:The years spent chasing a dream are never lost years, even if the dream changes shape; the early mornings and the late nights leave something behind that no final result can take away.
适用语境:论述奋斗的过程本身有意义
语法:spent chasing a dream 追逐梦想的(过去分词作后置定语);lost years 虚度的岁月;even if 即使(引导让步状语从句);changes shape 改变形状;early mornings and late nights 清晨与深夜;leave behind 留下;that 引导定语从句;take away 带走
(二)梦想的误区
12. A dream without a plan is a wish; a plan without daily work is a chart on a wall; and the gap between a wish and a chart is crossed only by the feet.
意思:没有计划的梦想是愿望;没有每日行动的计划是墙上的图表;而愿望与图表之间的鸿沟只能用双脚跨越。
高级升级:普通:A dream without a plan is a wish; a plan without daily work is a chart on a wall; and only the feet can cross the gap between a wish and a chart. → 高分:A dream without a plan is a wish; a plan without daily work is a chart on a wall; and the gap between a wish and a chart is crossed only by the feet.
适用语境:论述梦想不等于空想
语法:三个并列分句;without 没有(介词);a wish 愿望;a chart on a wall 墙上的图表;the gap between A and B A与B之间的鸿沟;be crossed only by the feet 只能被双脚跨越(被动)
13. The world has no right to grade the size of a dream, for the child who dreams of running a small bakery is chasing just as fiercely as the one who dreams of reaching the stars.
意思:世界没有资格给梦想的大小评级,因为梦想开一家小面包店的孩子和梦想摘星的孩子追逐得一样热烈。
高级升级:普通:The world has no right to grade the size of a dream, because the child who dreams of a small bakery is chasing just as fiercely as the one who dreams of reaching the stars. → 高分:The world has no right to grade the size of a dream, for the child who dreams of running a small bakery is chasing just as fiercely as the one who dreams of reaching the stars.
适用语境:论述梦想不必宏大
语法:have no right to do 没有资格做;grade the size of 给……的大小评级;for 因为;who 引导定语从句(两处);dream of doing 梦想做;just as fiercely as 同样热烈地(同级比较);the one who ……的那个
14. To judge the struggle only by the final result is to miss the richest part of the story, in the same way that judging a mountain only by its summit misses the climb that actually changed the climber.
意思:只用最终结果评判奋斗,就错过了故事最丰厚的部分,正如只用山顶评判一座山会错过真正改变登山者的攀登过程。
高级升级:普通:To judge the struggle only by the final result is to miss the richest part of the story, just as judging a mountain only by its summit misses the climb that changed the climber. → 高分:To judge the struggle only by the final result is to miss the richest part of the story, in the same way that judging a mountain only by its summit misses the climb that actually changed the climber.
适用语境:论述奋斗不只是为了结果
语法:To judge...is to miss... 不定式作主语和表语;judge A by B 用B评判A;in the same way that 正如(方式状语);judging...misses... 动名词作主语;the summit 山顶;that actually changed the climber 真正改变登山者的(定语从句)
三、主题价值
(一)对个人成长的意义
15. A dream asks of us more than we first believe we have, and in reaching toward that higher shelf, we discover strength in our arms that we never knew was there.
意思:梦想向我们要求的比我们最初相信自己拥有的更多,而在伸向更高的架子时,我们在手臂里发现了从不知道存在的力量。
高级升级:普通:A dream asks of us more than we first believe we have, and in reaching toward that higher shelf, we discover strength in our arms that we never knew was there. → 高分:A dream asks of us more than we first believe we have, and in reaching toward that higher shelf, we discover strength in our arms that we never knew was there.
适用语境:论述梦想激发潜在能力
语法:ask of sb 向某人要求;more than 比……更多;we first believe we have 我们最初相信自己拥有的(宾语从句);in reaching toward 在伸向……时(动名词);that we never knew was there 我们从不知道存在的(定语从句)
16. The road toward a dream does more than carry a person to a destination; it slowly rebuilds them along the way, forging patience in the waiting and courage in the repeated refusals.
意思:通往梦想的路不只是把一个人带到目的地;它沿路慢慢重建这个人,在等待中锻造耐心,在一次次拒绝中锻造勇气。
高级升级:普通:The road toward a dream does more than carry a person to a destination; it slowly rebuilds them along the way, forging patience in the waiting and courage in the repeated refusals. → 高分:The road toward a dream does more than carry a person to a destination; it slowly rebuilds them along the way, forging patience in the waiting and courage in the repeated refusals.
适用语境:论述奋斗塑造品格
语法:do more than do 不只是做;carry a person to a destination 把人带到目的地;rebuild 重建;along the way 沿路;forging 锻造(现在分词作伴随状语);patience in the waiting 等待中的耐心;the repeated refusals 一次次拒绝
17. We rarely learn what we truly want from a comfortable day; it is on the hard road toward a dream that a person finally meets the honest version of themselves.
意思:我们很少在舒适的日子里学到自己真正想要什么;正是在通往梦想的艰难路上,一个人终于遇见了诚实的自己。
高级升级:普通:We rarely learn what we truly want from a comfortable day; it is on the hard road toward a dream that a person finally meets the honest version of themselves. → 高分:We rarely learn what we truly want from a comfortable day; it is on the hard road toward a dream that a person finally meets the honest version of themselves.
适用语境:论述追梦让人认识自己
语法:rarely learn 很少学到;what we truly want 我们真正想要什么(宾语从句);it is...that 强调句型(强调地点状语);on the hard road toward a dream;the honest version of themselves 诚实的自己
18. The only regret that ages a young heart is the regret of the road never taken; the tired legs of a chased dream ache today and smile twenty years later.
意思:唯一让年轻心灵变老的遗憾,是从未踏上的路的遗憾;追梦的疲惫双腿今天酸痛,二十年后却会微笑。
高级升级:普通:The only regret that ages a young heart is the regret of the road never taken; the tired legs of a chased dream ache today and smile twenty years later. → 高分:The only regret that ages a young heart is the regret of the road never taken; the tired legs of a chased dream ache today and smile twenty years later.
适用语境:论述奋斗的青春无悔
语法:the only regret that 唯一的遗憾(定语从句);age a young heart 使年轻心灵变老(age 作动词);the road never taken 从未踏上的路(过去分词作后置定语);a chased dream 被追逐的梦想;ache today and smile 今天酸痛却微笑(对比)
(二)对社会的意义
19. A great age is not built by the plans of a few giants; it is built by millions of small, stubborn dreams rowing in the same direction, until their scattered oars become the sound of a new era.
意思:伟大的时代不是由少数巨人的计划建成的;它由数百万个小而倔强、朝同一方向划桨的梦想建成,直到它们散落的桨声汇成一个新时代的声音。
高级升级:普通:A great age is not built by the plans of a few giants; it is built by millions of small, stubborn dreams rowing in the same direction, until their scattered oars become the sound of a new era. → 高分:A great age is not built by the plans of a few giants; it is built by millions of small, stubborn dreams rowing in the same direction, until their scattered oars become the sound of a new era.
适用语境:论述个人梦想汇成时代
语法:be built by 由……建成(被动);a few giants 少数巨人;millions of 数百万;small, stubborn dreams 小而倔强的梦想;rowing in the same direction 朝同一方向划桨(现在分词作后置定语);until 引导时间状语;scattered oars 散落的桨;the sound of a new era 新时代的声音
20. Every generation hands the next not only roads and buildings, but also a quieter inheritance—the belief that ordinary people who refuse to stop rowing can still reach farther shores.
意思:每一代传给下一代的不仅是道路和建筑,还有一份更安静的遗产——相信拒绝停止划桨的普通人仍能抵达更远的海岸。
高级升级:普通:Every generation hands the next not only roads and buildings, but also a quieter inheritance: the belief that ordinary people who refuse to stop rowing can still reach farther shores. → 高分:Every generation hands the next not only roads and buildings, but also a quieter inheritance—the belief that ordinary people who refuse to stop rowing can still reach farther shores.
适用语境:论述奋斗精神的代际传承
语法:hand sb sth 把某物传给某人;not only...but also 不仅……而且;a quieter inheritance 更安静的遗产;破折号后 the belief that 引导同位语从句;who refuse to stop rowing 拒绝停止划桨的(定语从句);farther shores 更远的海岸
四、建议措施
(一)个人层面
21. Take your dream out of the fog and write it down in one plain sentence, then cut that sentence into monthly steps, for a goal written on paper is already halfway to becoming a plan.
意思:把你的梦想从雾里拿出来,用一句朴素的话写下来,再把那句话切成每月的步骤,因为写在纸上的目标已经走完了成为计划的一半。
高级升级:普通:Take your dream out of the fog and write it down in one plain sentence, then cut that sentence into monthly steps, because a goal written on paper is already halfway to becoming a plan. → 高分:Take your dream out of the fog and write it down in one plain sentence, then cut that sentence into monthly steps, for a goal written on paper is already halfway to becoming a plan.
适用语境:建议信中提倡写下梦想并拆成目标
语法:Take...out of 把……拿出(祈使句);in the fog 雾中(比喻);write down 写下;cut...into 把……切成;monthly steps 每月的步骤;for 因为;written on paper 写在纸上的(过去分词作后置定语);be halfway to doing 完成一半
22. Do not promise yourself a heroic sprint every day; promise only one honest push, no matter how small, for a hundred small pushes quietly move a life farther than one great burst.
意思:不要承诺自己每天都有英雄式的冲刺;只承诺一次诚实的推进,无论多小,因为一百次小推进悄悄把人生推得比一次大爆发更远。
高级升级:普通:Do not promise yourself a heroic sprint every day; promise only one honest push, no matter how small, because a hundred small pushes move a life farther than one great burst. → 高分:Do not promise yourself a heroic sprint every day; promise only one honest push, no matter how small, for a hundred small pushes quietly move a life farther than one great burst.
适用语境:建议信中提倡每天进步一点
语法:promise sb sth 向某人承诺(祈使句);a heroic sprint 英雄式的冲刺;one honest push 一次诚实的推进;no matter how small 无论多小(让步);for 因为;a hundred small pushes 一百次小推进;farther than 比……更远(比较级);one great burst 一次大爆发
23. The moment you hear yourself beginning a sentence with “if only I had” or “someday I will”, stop and rewrite it into “today I can”, because dreams are killed by the adverbs that keep postponing them.
意思:当你听到自己用“要是我有”或“总有一天我会”开始一句话时,停下来把它改写成“今天我可以”,因为梦想死于那些不断推迟它的副词。
高级升级:普通:The moment you hear yourself beginning with “if only I had” or “someday I will”, stop and rewrite it into “today I can”, because dreams are killed by the adverbs that keep postponing them. → 高分:The moment you hear yourself beginning a sentence with “if only I had” or “someday I will”, stop and rewrite it into “today I can”, because dreams are killed by the adverbs that keep postponing them.
适用语境:建议信中提倡拒绝拖延借口
语法:The moment 一……就(引导时间状语从句);hear yourself doing 听到自己做;begin a sentence with 用……开始一句话;stop and rewrite 停下来改写;be killed by 被……杀死(被动);the adverbs that 副词(定语从句);keep doing 不断做;postpone 推迟
24. Walk for a while with people who are also rowing toward something, for their steady breath in the dark keeps your own rhythm when your arms grow tired.
意思:与同样在朝某个目标划桨的人同行一段,因为当你手臂疲惫时,他们在黑暗中平稳的呼吸会维持你自己的节奏。
高级升级:普通:Walk for a while with people who are also rowing toward something, because their steady breath in the dark keeps your own rhythm when your arms grow tired. → 高分:Walk for a while with people who are also rowing toward something, for their steady breath in the dark keeps your own rhythm when your arms grow tired.
适用语境:建议信中提倡与志同道合者同行
语法:Walk for a while with 与……同行一段(祈使句);who 引导定语从句;row toward something 朝某个目标划桨;for 因为;steady breath 平稳的呼吸;in the dark 在黑暗中;keep your own rhythm 维持你的节奏;when 引导时间状语
(二)学校/社会层面
25. A school that truly serves its students does not merely hand them a map of the world; it opens a harbor where small boats can be repaired, launched, and watched until they find their own wind.
意思:真正服务学生的学校不仅递给他们一张世界地图;它开放一个港湾,小船可以在那里被修理、被启航、被目送,直到它们找到自己的风。
高级升级:普通:A school that truly serves its students does not merely hand them a map of the world; it opens a harbor where small boats can be repaired, launched, and watched until they find their own wind. → 高分:A school that truly serves its students does not merely hand them a map of the world; it opens a harbor where small boats can be repaired, launched, and watched until they find their own wind.
适用语境:论述学校应为追梦提供平台
语法:that 引导定语从句;truly serve 真正服务;does not merely hand 不仅递给;a harbor 港湾(比喻);where 引导定语从句;can be repaired, launched, and watched 三个被动并列;until 引导时间状语;find their own wind 找到自己的风
26. A society that only cheers the loudest dreams soon goes quiet, for all the smaller, steadier dreams have been shamed into silence, and with them goes most of the real work.
意思:只为最响亮的梦想欢呼的社会很快会安静下来,因为所有更小、更坚定的梦想都被羞得沉默,而大部分真正的工作也随之而去。
高级升级:普通:A society that only cheers the loudest dreams soon goes quiet, because all the smaller, steadier dreams have been shamed into silence, and most of the real work goes with them. → 高分:A society that only cheers the loudest dreams soon goes quiet, for all the smaller, steadier dreams have been shamed into silence, and with them goes most of the real work.
适用语境:论述社会应尊重每个梦想
语法:that 引导定语从句;cheer 欢呼;the loudest 最响亮的(最高级);go quiet 安静下来;for 因为;have been shamed into silence 被羞得沉默(被动);with them goes... 随它们而去(介词短语置首引起完全倒装)
五、结尾呼吁
27. Let us be the generation that does not merely dream with our eyes closed at night, but works with our eyes open at dawn, turning every small morning into one more stroke toward the shore.
意思:让我们成为这样的一代——不仅在夜晚闭眼做梦,还在黎明睁眼行动,把每一个清晨都变成朝海岸的又一次划桨。
高级升级:普通:Let us be the generation that does not merely dream with our eyes closed at night, but works with our eyes open at dawn, turning every small morning into one more stroke toward the shore. → 高分:Let us be the generation that does not merely dream with our eyes closed at night, but works with our eyes open at dawn, turning every small morning into one more stroke toward the shore.
适用语境:倡议书结尾号召行动圆梦
语法:Let us be 让我们成为;that 引导定语从句;does not merely dream...but works 不仅做梦还行动;with our eyes closed/open 闭着眼/睁着眼(复合结构);turning...into 把……变成(现在分词);one more stroke 又一次划桨;toward the shore 朝海岸
28. Here is a wish for you: that your dream may outlive every reason to give it up, and that you may one day look back and understand the years of rowing were never just about the shore.
意思:送你一个祝愿:愿你的梦想比每一个放弃它的理由活得更久,愿你有一天回首时明白那些划桨的岁月从来不只是为了海岸。
高级升级:普通:May your dream outlive every reason to give it up, and may you one day look back and understand the years of rowing were never just about the shore. → 高分:Here is a wish for you: that your dream may outlive every reason to give it up, and that you may one day look back and understand the years of rowing were never just about the shore.
适用语境:演讲稿结尾的美好祝愿
语法:Here is a wish for you 送你一个祝愿;冒号后两个that引导同位语从句;may outlive 愿活得比……久(may表祝愿);every reason to give it up 每个放弃它的理由;one day 有一天;look back 回首;the years of rowing 划桨的岁月;be just about 只是为了
29. Dreams do not come true by accident; they come true on purpose, one chosen morning at a time, until the life we once only imagined slowly becomes the life we are actually living.
意思:梦想不会偶然成真;它是有意成真的,每次一个选择的清晨,直到我们曾经只敢想象的生活慢慢变成我们真正在过的生活。
高级升级:普通:Dreams do not come true by accident; they come true on purpose, one chosen morning at a time, until the life we once imagined slowly becomes the life we are actually living. → 高分:Dreams do not come true by accident; they come true on purpose, one chosen morning at a time, until the life we once only imagined slowly becomes the life we are actually living.
适用语境:结尾强调梦想靠刻意奋斗成真
语法:come true 实现;by accident 偶然;on purpose 有意(对比);one chosen morning at a time 每次一个选择的清晨;until 引导时间状语;we once only imagined 曾经只敢想象的;we are actually living 真正在过的(定语从句)
30. So before the night is over, write the first sentence of the plan you have been postponing; tomorrow's dawn will have enough light for one honest stroke, and one stroke is all a beginning requires.
意思:所以在今夜结束前,写下你一直推迟的计划的第一句;明天的黎明会有足够的光支持一次诚实的划桨,而一次划桨就是一个开始所需的全部。
高级升级:普通:So before the night is over, write the first sentence of the plan you have been postponing; tomorrow's dawn will have enough light for one honest stroke, and one stroke is all a beginning needs. → 高分:So before the night is over, write the first sentence of the plan you have been postponing; tomorrow's dawn will have enough light for one honest stroke, and one stroke is all a beginning requires.
适用语境:倡议书结尾发出今晚行动号召
语法:before the night is over 在今夜结束前;write the first sentence 写下第一句;you have been postponing 你一直推迟的(现在完成进行时定语从句);tomorrow's dawn 明天的黎明;one honest stroke 一次诚实的划桨;all a beginning requires 一个开始所需的全部(定语从句)
六、连接词
(一)转折/对比
31. The world will hand you ten good reasons to turn back for every one reason to keep going; the dream belongs to the person who rows on through the ten rather than turning the boat around.
意思:世界会给你十个折返的好理由,对每一个继续的理由;梦想属于划着穿过那十个理由而不是掉头的人。
高级升级:普通:The world will hand you ten good reasons to turn back for every one reason to keep going; the dream belongs to the person who rows on through the ten instead of turning the boat around. → 高分:The world will hand you ten good reasons to turn back for every one reason to keep going; the dream belongs to the person who rows on through the ten rather than turning the boat around.
适用语境:从困难劝退转入坚持前行
语法:hand sb sth 给某人;ten good reasons for every one 十个对一个(对比);turn back 折返;keep going 继续;belong to 属于;who 引导定语从句;row on 继续划;through the ten 穿过那十个;rather than doing 而不是;turn the boat around 掉头
32. A dream can be spoken in a single breath, but the living of it cannot be spoken at all; it must be measured in the wordless currency of days, weeks, and repeated early mornings.
意思:梦想可以一口气说出,但践行它根本无法用言语说出;它必须用日子、星期和重复的清晨这种无言的货币来衡量。
高级升级:普通:A dream can be spoken in a single breath, but the living of it cannot be spoken at all; it must be measured in the wordless currency of days, weeks, and repeated early mornings. → 高分:A dream can be spoken in a single breath, but the living of it cannot be spoken at all; it must be measured in the wordless currency of days, weeks, and repeated early mornings.
适用语境:从说梦想转入践行梦想
语法:in a single breath 一口气;the living of it 践行它(动名词);cannot be spoken / must be measured 被动;not...at all 根本不;wordless currency 无言的货币(比喻);repeated early mornings 重复的清晨
33. Some people spend their whole lives preparing the boat, checking the map, and waiting for perfect weather; the ones who reach the shore are simply those who eventually sail in weather that is merely good enough.
意思:有些人花一生准备船、检查地图、等待完美天气;抵达海岸的人只是那些最终在仅仅够好的天气里启航的人。
高级升级:普通:Some people spend their whole lives preparing the boat, checking the map, and waiting for perfect weather; the ones who reach the shore are those who eventually sail in weather that is merely good enough. → 高分:Some people spend their whole lives preparing the boat, checking the map, and waiting for perfect weather; the ones who reach the shore are simply those who eventually sail in weather that is merely good enough.
适用语境:从过度准备转入及时行动
语法:spend...doing 花时间做;preparing, checking, waiting 三个动名词并列;the ones who...are those who ……的人是……的人;eventually sail 最终启航;that 引导定语从句;merely good enough 仅仅够好
(二)递进/因果
34. Every hard-fought step not only shortens the distance to the dream but also deepens the kind of person we become, so that the journey reshapes us long before we reach the end.
意思:每一步艰难的奋斗不仅缩短了到梦想的距离,也深化了我们成为的那种人,于是旅程早在我们抵达终点之前就重塑了我们。
高级升级:普通:Every hard-fought step not only shortens the distance to the dream but also deepens the kind of person we become, so that the journey reshapes us long before we reach the end. → 高分:Every hard-fought step not only shortens the distance to the dream but also deepens the kind of person we become, so that the journey reshapes us long before we reach the end.
适用语境:递进论述奋斗同时缩短距离、塑造自己
语法:hard-fought 艰难奋斗的(复合形容词);not only...but also 不仅……而且;shorten/deepen 缩短/深化;the kind of person we become 我们成为的人;so that 结果状语;reshape 重塑;long before 早在……之前
35. A dream carried only in the heart and never put onto the page or into the schedule grows heavier with every passing week, until the unwritten dream becomes the heaviest burden of all.
意思:只在心里揣着、从不落到纸上或日程里的梦想,每过一周都变得更重,直到未写下来的梦想变成最重的负担。
高级升级:普通:A dream carried only in the heart and never put onto the page or into the schedule grows heavier with every passing week, until the unwritten dream becomes the heaviest burden of all. → 高分:A dream carried only in the heart and never put onto the page or into the schedule grows heavier with every passing week, until the unwritten dream becomes the heaviest burden of all.
适用语境:因果论证梦想必须落到计划
语法:carried only in the heart 只在心里揣着的(过去分词作后置定语);never put onto the page or into the schedule 从不落到纸上或日程里;grow heavier 变得更重;with every passing week 每过一周;until 引导时间状语;the heaviest burden of all 最重的负担
36. Since every large achievement is, in the end, a long line of small achievements added together, the student who refuses to despise today's small step is the one most likely to arrive.
意思:既然每一项大成就归根结底都是一长串小成就的相加,那么拒绝鄙视今天这一小步的学生,就是最有可能抵达的人。
高级升级:普通:Since every large achievement is in the end a long line of small achievements added together, the student who refuses to despise today's small step is the one most likely to arrive. → 高分:Since every large achievement is, in the end, a long line of small achievements added together, the student who refuses to despise today's small step is the one most likely to arrive.
适用语境:因果论证小步积累成就大梦想
语法:Since 既然(引导原因状语从句);in the end 归根结底(插入语);a long line of 一长串;added together 相加的(过去分词作后置定语);who 引导定语从句;refuse to despise 拒绝鄙视;the one most likely to arrive 最有可能抵达的人
七、高级句型
(一)倒装/强调句型
37. Never does a dream die at the first refusal; it dies slowly, after the tenth and the twentieth, when the dreamer at last stops knocking on doors that were never permanently locked.
意思:梦想从不在第一次拒绝时死去;它在第十次、第二十次之后慢慢死去,那时追梦人终于停止了敲那些从未永久锁上的门。
高级升级:普通:A dream never dies at the first refusal; it dies slowly, after the tenth and the twentieth, when the dreamer at last stops knocking on doors that were never permanently locked. → 高分:Never does a dream die at the first refusal; it dies slowly, after the tenth and the twentieth, when the dreamer at last stops knocking on doors that were never permanently locked.
适用语境:用Never倒装强调梦想死于放弃
语法:Never does... 从不(否定副词置首引起部分倒装);die at the first refusal 在第一次拒绝时死去;the tenth and the twentieth 第十次、第二十次(省略名词);when 引导时间状语从句;at last 终于;stop doing 停止做;knock on doors 敲门;that were never permanently locked 从未永久锁上的(定语从句)
38. It is not the size of the dream in the beginning that determines the ending; it is the size of the daily effort repeated through days when the dream felt furthest away.
意思:决定结局的不是开始时梦想的大小,而是在梦想感觉最遥远的日子里重复的每日努力的大小。
高级升级:普通:The size of the dream in the beginning does not determine the ending; the size of the daily effort repeated through days when the dream felt furthest away does. → 高分:It is not the size of the dream in the beginning that determines the ending; it is the size of the daily effort repeated through days when the dream felt furthest away.
适用语境:用强调句型突出每日努力
语法:It is not A...; it is B... 两个强调句型(分号并列);that determines the ending 决定结局的;repeated through days 在日子里重复的(过去分词作后置定语);when 引导定语从句;feel furthest away 感觉最遥远
39. By no means does a dream become a life after one dramatic night; it becomes a life only after months of ordinary, unglamorous work have been survived.
意思:梦想绝不可能在一个戏剧性的夜晚之后变成生活;它只有在数月普通、不光彩的工作被熬过后才变成生活。
高级升级:普通:A dream by no means becomes a life after one dramatic night; it becomes a life only after months of ordinary, unglamorous work have been survived. → 高分:By no means does a dream become a life after one dramatic night; it becomes a life only after months of ordinary, unglamorous work have been survived.
适用语境:用By no means倒装强调长期平凡奋斗
语法:By no means 绝不(否定短语置首引起部分倒装);become a life 变成生活;dramatic night 戏剧性的夜晚;only after 只有在……之后;ordinary, unglamorous work 普通、不光彩的工作;have been survived 被熬过(现在完成时被动)
(二)虚拟/非谓语句型
40. Had that first small dream been abandoned at the first cold morning, none of the warmer mornings that followed would ever have arrived.
意思:如果最初那个小梦想在第一个寒冷的清晨被放弃,随后到来的更温暖的清晨就没有一个会到来。
高级升级:普通:If that first small dream had been abandoned at the first cold morning, none of the warmer mornings that followed would ever have arrived. → 高分:Had that first small dream been abandoned at the first cold morning, none of the warmer mornings that followed would ever have arrived.
适用语境:用Had虚拟倒装强调坚持的意义
语法:Had...been abandoned, ...would have arrived 与过去事实相反的虚拟语气(Had 置首省略 if);at the first cold morning 在第一个寒冷的清晨;none of 没有一个;that followed 随后到来的(定语从句);would ever have arrived 会到来
41. Seen from the far shore, the long struggle will finally reveal its secret: the treasure was never the arrival itself, but the strength built into the rower's arms by the years of water.
意思:从遥远的海岸看,漫长的奋斗终会揭示它的秘密:宝藏从来不是抵达本身,而是岁月的水在划桨者手臂里铸入的力量。
高级升级:普通:Seen from the far shore, the long struggle will finally reveal its secret: the treasure was never the arrival itself, but the strength built into the rower's arms by the years of water. → 高分:Seen from the far shore, the long struggle will finally reveal its secret: the treasure was never the arrival itself, but the strength built into the rower's arms by the years of water.
适用语境:用过去分词作状语回望奋斗
语法:Seen from the far shore 从遥远的海岸看(过去分词作状语,逻辑主语是struggle);reveal its secret 揭示秘密;the arrival itself 抵达本身;not A but B 不是A而是B;built into 被铸入的(过去分词作后置定语);the rower's arms 划桨者的手臂;by the years of water 被岁月的水
42. What we call a fulfilled life is, in the end, a dream that was stubborn enough to outlive its own doubts, and a pair of hands willing to row for it every day.
意思:我们称之为充实人生的,归根结底是一个倔强到熬过自己所有怀疑的梦想,加上一双愿意每天为之划桨的手。
高级升级:普通:What we call a fulfilled life is in the end a dream that was stubborn enough to outlive its own doubts, and a pair of hands willing to row for it every day. → 高分:What we call a fulfilled life is, in the end, a dream that was stubborn enough to outlive its own doubts, and a pair of hands willing to row for it every day.
适用语境:深入论述充实人生的构成
语法:What we call a fulfilled life 我们称之为充实人生的东西(what 引导主语从句);in the end 归根结底(插入语);that was stubborn enough to do 倔强到做的(定语从句);outlive its own doubts 熬过自己的怀疑;willing to row for it 愿意为之划桨的(形容词短语作后置定语)
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