Unit 2 Making a Better World（建议信、环保、社会责任）（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材北师大版九年级下册

Unit 2 Making a Better World（建议信、环保、社会责任） 话题总览 写作任务 1.应用文・倡议书 / 建议信（给学校、同学写环保倡议） 细分场景：向全校同学发出环保倡议、给学校提保护环境的建议两类场景 2.中考写作大类归类 归属：应用文（书信 / 倡议书），隶属中考高频主题大类「环境保护、社会责任、校园文明」 3.中考命题切入点一句话点明 常以 “校园环境变差、浪费现象严重” 为背景，写倡议信，点明现存问题，给出具体、可落地的环保行动，呼吁大家共同行动，语气真诚有号召力。 本单元写作要求：先点明目前存在的环境问题，说明保护环境的重要性，提出几条简单可行的做法，最后发出号召，呼吁大家一起保护环境。 第一步：锁定本单元写作核心要素 1. 写作任务：写一封环保倡议书，号召同学们在校园和生活中保护环境、节约资源。 2. 对应文体：英文倡议书（书信类应用文），文体特点：格式清晰、语气恳切有号召力、建议具体易懂、逻辑清楚。 3. 写作对象：全校同学，语气友好、积极，带有呼吁感。 4. 核心写作要点：① 指出身边的环境问题；② 说明保护环境的意义；③ 列举具体环保行动；④ 发出号召，呼吁共同参与。 第二步：本单元三段式标准行文框架 1. 开头引入（1 段）：点明写信目的，指出我们身边存在不少浪费、污染环境的现象，引出环保主题。 2. 主体分层（3 段核心）：第一层，说明保护环境对我们每个人都很重要；第二层，给出几条具体环保做法；第三层，讲如果大家一起行动，环境会变得更好。 3. 结尾收尾（1 段）：发出号召，呼吁大家从小事做起，一起守护环境。 第三步：分层写作思路 + 英文范文示例 【基础保底思路】（适配基础薄弱学生） 写作逻辑：短句为主，要点齐全，时态简单，条理清晰，把问题、做法、号召写完整，保证基础得分。 【基础版范文】 Dear friends, Our environment is not as good as before. Some people waste water and throw rubbish everywhere. I’m writing to ask you to protect the environment. It’s important for us to protect the environment. Green places can make us healthy and happy. Small actions can make a big difference. First, we should save water and electricity. Second, don’t throw rubbish. We can sort rubbish. Third, we can plant more trees and choose to walk or ride bikes. Let’s start from small things. If everyone tries, our world will become more beautiful. Yours, Li Hua 亲爱的同学们： 我们的环境不如从前好了。有些人浪费水、随地扔垃圾。我写这封信呼吁大家保护环境。 保护环境对我们很重要。优美的环境能让我们健康、快乐。小小的行动也能带来巨大改变。 首先，我们要节约水电。其次，不要乱扔垃圾，做好垃圾分类。第三，我们可以多种树，尽量步行或者骑车出行。 让我们从小事做起。如果人人努力，我们的世界将会变得更加美丽。 李华 【进阶提升版】（句式丰富、衔接自然，冲高分） Dear schoolmates, Nowadays, waste and pollution are around us. To build a greener school and world, I’m writing to call on all of you to protect the environment. Protecting the environment is our duty. A good environment is good for our health. Every small action matters a lot. Here are some suggestions. To begin with, we should save water and power in our daily life. Besides, we are supposed to sort rubbish instead of throwing it away casually. What’s more, we can choose low-carbon ways to go out, such as riding bikes. I hope all of us can take action right now. Small efforts will make our earth cleaner and more beautiful. Yours, Li Hu 亲爱的同学们： 如今，浪费和污染就在我们身边。为了打造更绿色的校园和世界，我写信号召大家一起保护环境。 保护环境是我们的责任。良好的环境有益于我们的健康，每一个微小行动都十分重要。 这里有一些建议。首先，日常生活中我们要节约水电。此外，我们应当做好垃圾分类，不要随意丢弃垃圾。而且，我们可以选择低碳出行方式，比如骑自行车。 希望我们所有人立刻行动起来。点滴努力，会让我们的地球更干净、更美丽。 李华 【功能句型库】 重点词汇 1.environment 环境 2.pollution 污染 3.waste 浪费；废弃物 4.rubbish 垃圾 5.sort 分类 6.save 节约 7.electricity 电 8.low-carbon 低碳的 9.action 行动 10.duty 责任 11.protect 保护 12.pollute v. 污染 重点短语 protect the environment 保护环境 save water and electricity 节约水电 make a big difference /matter a lot 有很大影响 call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事 It’s our duty to do… 做…… 是我们的责任 重点句子 优秀开头句 1. Nowadays, waste and pollution are around us. I’m writing to call on all of you to protect the environment. 如今浪费和污染就在身边，我写信号召大家保护环境。 2. Our environment is facing some problems, so I hope we can do something to help.我们的环境正面临一些问题，我希望我们可以做点什么。 内容介绍句 1. It’s our duty to protect the environment and it is good for our health.保护环境是我们的责任，它有益于我们的健康。 2. We should save water and electricity whenever we can.我们应当随时节约水电。 3. We can sort rubbish and avoid throwing rubbish everywhere.我们可以做好垃圾分类，不要随地扔垃圾。 4. It’s a good choice for us to take low-carbon ways like riding bikes.选择骑车这类低碳方式出行是很好的选择。 5. Small actions can make a big difference to our environment.小小的行动会给环境带来巨大改变。 优秀结尾句 1. Let’s take action from small things. Our efforts will make the world more beautiful.让我们从小事行动起来，我们的努力会让世界更美好。 2. I hope everyone can join us and try to build a greener world.我希望每个人都加入我们，共建绿色世界。 【标准写作模板】 模板01 假如你是李华，你校将在世界环保日组织一场以Small Changes，Big Difference 为主题的英语演讲活动。请你结合以下提示准备一份演讲稿，分享你曾经为环保做过的小改变和日常生活中的环保小妙招，并呼吁大家一起加入环保行动。 要求:1.语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚，书写规范; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; 3.100词左右。 Small Changes, Big Difference 写作模板 优秀范文 Small Changes, Big Difference Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. It's my great honor to talk about environmental protection on World Environment Day. Small daily changes can make a big difference to the earth. I once wasted electricity and water a lot, but now I always turn off lights and taps in time. I also no longer use disposable plastic bags and take a reusable cloth bag when shopping. Here are some easy tips. Walk or ride bikes for short trips instead of taking cars. Sort waste and recycle paper, bottles and cans. Plant small trees with family to green our life. Protecting the earth needs everyone's effort. Let's start from small things around us. Every small change we make will build a better world. Let's work together for a greener future! Thank you! 模板02 根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 只要人人献出一点爱，世界就会变得美好。你校英语社团正在开展“关爱贫困地区儿童”的主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，号召大家帮助贫困地区的孩子。 提示词语:imbalanced development, be in great need of, give away, take action 提示内容: What problems do children in poor areas face? What causes these problems? What can we do to help them? 写作模板 优秀范文 Many children in poor areas suffer from poverty and are in great need of help. They lack enough school supplies and proper education because of imbalanced development, which may result in fewer chances to learn. 　　We need to take action to help them. First, we are supposed to donate money to improve their learning conditions. Second, we can give away school things like books and pens. More importantly, some people can go there to teach and share knowledge. Last but not least, the government should make rules and laws that make it easier and cheaper for the children in poor areas to go to school. These actions can really make a great difference in their lives. 　　I call on everyone to help. It's up to us, and every bit of effort counts. Let's take action now! 【典例1】 1．（2023·内蒙古·中考真题）“绿色”不仅仅是一种颜色，也意味着一种低碳环保的生活方式。请以“My Greener Life”为题，为学校的英语报刊写一篇征文。要点： 1. What do you usually do to live a greener life? （rubbish, bicycle. . .） 2. What have you learned from it? /What are the changes in your life? 3. What are you going to do in the future? 要求： 1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥； 2. 文章应句式多样，语句流畅，意思连贯； 3. 词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息； 2. 不许抄袭、套改。 【审题】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【谋篇】 第一步，阐述自己如何过绿色生活； 第二步，介绍从环保生活学到了什么； 第三步，介绍未来如何做等； 第四步，总结全文。 【遣词造句】 [亮点词汇] ①instead of代替 ②on one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面…… ③call on呼吁 [高分句型] ① I remember to turn off the lights when I leave rooms.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Only in these ways, can we build a greener and civilized society.（倒装句） 【组句成篇】 My Greener Life Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. It is necessary for us to have a greener life. As for me, I want to be a greener person. I often walk or ride bicycles to school every day instead of taking a bus or a taxi. I remember to turn off the lights when I leave rooms. I never throw away the rubbish everywhere. Thanks for the greener lifestyle, I have learned the importance of environment protection. it helps us save energy, reduce pollution and waste. Besides, I’ve also got a lot of knowledge about it such as how to sort rubbish, how to keep a greener diet and so on. My greener life makes me healthier and happier than before. As teenagers, we should have green living habits. On one hand, I will do little things from myself. On the other hand, I will call on more people around me to have a greener life. What’s more, I will make posters or give lectures even set up a greener club one day. Only in these ways, can we build a greener and civilized society. 一 （2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）  志愿者的工作是传递爱心、汇聚温暖的桥梁。假如你是中学生李平，你的外国笔友Peter也热爱志愿者工作，暑假即将来临，他想了解你所在的志愿者小组的暑假活动，请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。 写作要点： 1. 社区宣传环保; 2.帮助残疾邻居; 3.捐赠贫困儿童。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.100 词左右。 参考词汇： publicize  v.宣传，推广;    poster  n.海报;    donate  v.捐赠， donate (sth.) to sb. Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二 （25-26九年级上·福建三明·期中）勤俭节约是我国的传统美德，最近学校正在举行“三节”（节水，节电，节粮）的主题活动。所以我们应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。你是如何做的？请结合自己的生活日常，写一篇如何节约能源的小短文。 内容要点： 参考词汇： don’t take, turn off, cut down, electricity, instead of 写作要求：80词左右，文章开头已给（不计入词数）文章必须包括提示全部内容，并适当发挥，书写工整。 要求： How to save energy It is important to save energy in our daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三 （25-26九年级上·福建福州·期中）近年来，零浪费（zero-waste）作为一种环保生活方式，引起全球关注。假设你是李华，你校英语角将组织以“How to be a zero-waste citizen (公民)”为题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下导图写一篇英文演讲稿，号召大家积极参与环保行动。词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 内容包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，举例说明相关建议。 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 四 （25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期末）近年来，环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。假如你是某中学学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，为保护环境尽一份力。 提示：(1) 节约用电; (2) 少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾; (3) 绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等。 要求：(1) 短文须包括所给提示内容，可适当发挥; (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; (3) 词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。 Dear friends, The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 13 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Making a Better World（建议信、环保、社会责任） 话题总览 写作任务 1.应用文・倡议书 / 建议信（给学校、同学写环保倡议） 细分场景：向全校同学发出环保倡议、给学校提保护环境的建议两类场景 2.中考写作大类归类 归属：应用文（书信 / 倡议书），隶属中考高频主题大类「环境保护、社会责任、校园文明」 3.中考命题切入点一句话点明 常以 “校园环境变差、浪费现象严重” 为背景，写倡议信，点明现存问题，给出具体、可落地的环保行动，呼吁大家共同行动，语气真诚有号召力。 本单元写作要求：先点明目前存在的环境问题，说明保护环境的重要性，提出几条简单可行的做法，最后发出号召，呼吁大家一起保护环境。 第一步：锁定本单元写作核心要素 1. 写作任务：写一封环保倡议书，号召同学们在校园和生活中保护环境、节约资源。 2. 对应文体：英文倡议书（书信类应用文），文体特点：格式清晰、语气恳切有号召力、建议具体易懂、逻辑清楚。 3. 写作对象：全校同学，语气友好、积极，带有呼吁感。 4. 核心写作要点：① 指出身边的环境问题；② 说明保护环境的意义；③ 列举具体环保行动；④ 发出号召，呼吁共同参与。 第二步：本单元三段式标准行文框架 1. 开头引入（1 段）：点明写信目的，指出我们身边存在不少浪费、污染环境的现象，引出环保主题。 2. 主体分层（3 段核心）：第一层，说明保护环境对我们每个人都很重要；第二层，给出几条具体环保做法；第三层，讲如果大家一起行动，环境会变得更好。 3. 结尾收尾（1 段）：发出号召，呼吁大家从小事做起，一起守护环境。 第三步：分层写作思路 + 英文范文示例 【基础保底思路】（适配基础薄弱学生） 写作逻辑：短句为主，要点齐全，时态简单，条理清晰，把问题、做法、号召写完整，保证基础得分。 【基础版范文】 Dear friends, Our environment is not as good as before. Some people waste water and throw rubbish everywhere. I’m writing to ask you to protect the environment. It’s important for us to protect the environment. Green places can make us healthy and happy. Small actions can make a big difference. First, we should save water and electricity. Second, don’t throw rubbish. We can sort rubbish. Third, we can plant more trees and choose to walk or ride bikes. Let’s start from small things. If everyone tries, our world will become more beautiful. Yours, Li Hua 亲爱的同学们： 我们的环境不如从前好了。有些人浪费水、随地扔垃圾。我写这封信呼吁大家保护环境。 保护环境对我们很重要。优美的环境能让我们健康、快乐。小小的行动也能带来巨大改变。 首先，我们要节约水电。其次，不要乱扔垃圾，做好垃圾分类。第三，我们可以多种树，尽量步行或者骑车出行。 让我们从小事做起。如果人人努力，我们的世界将会变得更加美丽。 李华 【进阶提升版】（句式丰富、衔接自然，冲高分） Dear schoolmates, Nowadays, waste and pollution are around us. To build a greener school and world, I’m writing to call on all of you to protect the environment. Protecting the environment is our duty. A good environment is good for our health. Every small action matters a lot. Here are some suggestions. To begin with, we should save water and power in our daily life. Besides, we are supposed to sort rubbish instead of throwing it away casually. What’s more, we can choose low-carbon ways to go out, such as riding bikes. I hope all of us can take action right now. Small efforts will make our earth cleaner and more beautiful. Yours, Li Hu 亲爱的同学们： 如今，浪费和污染就在我们身边。为了打造更绿色的校园和世界，我写信号召大家一起保护环境。 保护环境是我们的责任。良好的环境有益于我们的健康，每一个微小行动都十分重要。 这里有一些建议。首先，日常生活中我们要节约水电。此外，我们应当做好垃圾分类，不要随意丢弃垃圾。而且，我们可以选择低碳出行方式，比如骑自行车。 希望我们所有人立刻行动起来。点滴努力，会让我们的地球更干净、更美丽。 李华 【功能句型库】 重点词汇 1.environment 环境 2.pollution 污染 3.waste 浪费；废弃物 4.rubbish 垃圾 5.sort 分类 6.save 节约 7.electricity 电 8.low-carbon 低碳的 9.action 行动 10.duty 责任 11.protect 保护 12.pollute v. 污染 重点短语 protect the environment 保护环境 save water and electricity 节约水电 make a big difference /matter a lot 有很大影响 call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事 It’s our duty to do… 做…… 是我们的责任 重点句子 优秀开头句 1. Nowadays, waste and pollution are around us. I’m writing to call on all of you to protect the environment. 如今浪费和污染就在身边，我写信号召大家保护环境。 2. Our environment is facing some problems, so I hope we can do something to help.我们的环境正面临一些问题，我希望我们可以做点什么。 内容介绍句 1. It’s our duty to protect the environment and it is good for our health.保护环境是我们的责任，它有益于我们的健康。 2. We should save water and electricity whenever we can.我们应当随时节约水电。 3. We can sort rubbish and avoid throwing rubbish everywhere.我们可以做好垃圾分类，不要随地扔垃圾。 4. It’s a good choice for us to take low-carbon ways like riding bikes.选择骑车这类低碳方式出行是很好的选择。 5. Small actions can make a big difference to our environment.小小的行动会给环境带来巨大改变。 优秀结尾句 1. Let’s take action from small things. Our efforts will make the world more beautiful.让我们从小事行动起来，我们的努力会让世界更美好。 2. I hope everyone can join us and try to build a greener world.我希望每个人都加入我们，共建绿色世界。 【标准写作模板】 模板01 假如你是李华，你校将在世界环保日组织一场以Small Changes，Big Difference 为主题的英语演讲活动。请你结合以下提示准备一份演讲稿，分享你曾经为环保做过的小改变和日常生活中的环保小妙招，并呼吁大家一起加入环保行动。 要求:1.语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚，书写规范; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; 3.100词左右。 Small Changes, Big Difference 写作模板 优秀范文 Small Changes, Big Difference Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. It's my great honor to talk about environmental protection on World Environment Day. Small daily changes can make a big difference to the earth. I once wasted electricity and water a lot, but now I always turn off lights and taps in time. I also no longer use disposable plastic bags and take a reusable cloth bag when shopping. Here are some easy tips. Walk or ride bikes for short trips instead of taking cars. Sort waste and recycle paper, bottles and cans. Plant small trees with family to green our life. Protecting the earth needs everyone's effort. Let's start from small things around us. Every small change we make will build a better world. Let's work together for a greener future! Thank you! 模板02 根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 只要人人献出一点爱，世界就会变得美好。你校英语社团正在开展“关爱贫困地区儿童”的主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，号召大家帮助贫困地区的孩子。 提示词语:imbalanced development, be in great need of, give away, take action 提示内容: What problems do children in poor areas face? What causes these problems? What can we do to help them? 写作模板 优秀范文 Many children in poor areas suffer from poverty and are in great need of help. They lack enough school supplies and proper education because of imbalanced development, which may result in fewer chances to learn. 　　We need to take action to help them. First, we are supposed to donate money to improve their learning conditions. Second, we can give away school things like books and pens. More importantly, some people can go there to teach and share knowledge. Last but not least, the government should make rules and laws that make it easier and cheaper for the children in poor areas to go to school. These actions can really make a great difference in their lives. 　　I call on everyone to help. It's up to us, and every bit of effort counts. Let's take action now! 【典例1】 1．（2023·内蒙古·中考真题）“绿色”不仅仅是一种颜色，也意味着一种低碳环保的生活方式。请以“My Greener Life”为题，为学校的英语报刊写一篇征文。要点： 1. What do you usually do to live a greener life? （rubbish, bicycle. . .） 2. What have you learned from it? /What are the changes in your life? 3. What are you going to do in the future? 要求： 1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥； 2. 文章应句式多样，语句流畅，意思连贯； 3. 词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息； 2. 不许抄袭、套改。 【审题】 ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【谋篇】 第一步，阐述自己如何过绿色生活； 第二步，介绍从环保生活学到了什么； 第三步，介绍未来如何做等； 第四步，总结全文。 【遣词造句】 [亮点词汇] ①instead of代替 ②on one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面…… ③call on呼吁 [高分句型] ① I remember to turn off the lights when I leave rooms.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Only in these ways, can we build a greener and civilized society.（倒装句） 【组句成篇】 My Greener Life Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. It is necessary for us to have a greener life. As for me, I want to be a greener person. I often walk or ride bicycles to school every day instead of taking a bus or a taxi. I remember to turn off the lights when I leave rooms. I never throw away the rubbish everywhere. Thanks for the greener lifestyle, I have learned the importance of environment protection. it helps us save energy, reduce pollution and waste. Besides, I’ve also got a lot of knowledge about it such as how to sort rubbish, how to keep a greener diet and so on. My greener life makes me healthier and happier than before. As teenagers, we should have green living habits. On one hand, I will do little things from myself. On the other hand, I will call on more people around me to have a greener life. What’s more, I will make posters or give lectures even set up a greener club one day. Only in these ways, can we build a greener and civilized society. 一 （2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）  志愿者的工作是传递爱心、汇聚温暖的桥梁。假如你是中学生李平，你的外国笔友Peter也热爱志愿者工作，暑假即将来临，他想了解你所在的志愿者小组的暑假活动，请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。 写作要点： 1. 社区宣传环保; 2.帮助残疾邻居; 3.捐赠贫困儿童。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.100 词左右。 参考词汇： publicize  v.宣传，推广;    poster  n.海报;    donate  v.捐赠， donate (sth.) to sb. Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Dear Peter, Summer vacation is coming soon, and our volunteer group will carry out a series of summer activities. Firstly, We will publicize environmental protection. We will create posters to call on people to develop a green lifestyle in their daily lives such as saving water and power, taking own bags instead of plastic bags when shopping and so on. Secondly, We will assist our disabled neighbors. We will try our best to help them solve some life problems. Also, we will also organize donation activities for children in poor areas. We will donate some daily necessities and study supplies such as clothes and books to them. Helping others is also helping ourselves. Let’s work together to have a pleasant and meaningful summer vacation. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信； ②时态：时态以 “一般将来时” 为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从社区宣传环保、帮助残疾邻居和捐赠贫困儿童等方面介绍你所在的志愿者小组的暑假活动。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out 进行②call on sb to do sth. 号召某人做某事③such as 例如④try one’s best to do sth 尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①Summer vacation is coming soon, and my volunteer group will carry out a series of summer activities. (并列句) ②Helping others is also helping ourselves.  (动名词结构作主语和表语) 二 （25-26九年级上·福建三明·期中）勤俭节约是我国的传统美德，最近学校正在举行“三节”（节水，节电，节粮）的主题活动。所以我们应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源。你是如何做的？请结合自己的生活日常，写一篇如何节约能源的小短文。 内容要点： 参考词汇： don’t take, turn off, cut down, electricity, instead of 写作要求：80词左右，文章开头已给（不计入词数）文章必须包括提示全部内容，并适当发挥，书写工整。 要求： How to save energy It is important to save energy in our daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to save energy It’s important to save energy in our daily life. I have some good ways to save energy. First, I ride a bike to school. I don’t take the bus often. Second, I remember to turn off the lights to save electricity when I leave the classroom. Third, I collect empty bottles and waste paper for recycling to cut down waste. When I am not using water, I turn off the tap. Besides, I never waste food and we should take care of trees. Also, I sort rubbish and use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. I will try my best to save energy. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：观点介绍类说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：节约能源的多项做法，用参考短语don’t take/turn off/cut down/electricity/instead of 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明日常生活节约能源十分重要 主体段：依次介绍自身节约能源的几项具体行动，嵌入全部参考短语 结尾段：表明节能决心，升华节约能源的主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：绿色出行 出行选择：ride a bike/take the bus/public transport 行动描述：ride a bike to school/don’t take the bus/avoid driving cars 要点二：节约用电 用电行动：turn off the lights/leave the classroom/turn off electrical appliances 作用效果：save electricity/reduce power waste 要点三：回收利用 回收物品：empty bottles/waste paper 行动描述：collect empty bottles/for recycling 作用效果：cut down waste/reuse waste materials/recycle rubbish 要点四：节约用水 用水行为：turn off the tap/turn off the water tap 作用效果：save plenty of water/prevent water waste 要点五：爱惜粮食与爱护树木 日常做法：waste food/take care of trees 行动描述：never waste food/take care of trees 作用效果：form good habits/protect our environment 要点六：垃圾分类，布袋代替塑料袋 行动描述：sort rubbish/use cloth bags instead of plastic bags 作用效果：cut down pollution/reduce plastic waste/protect the environment 三 （25-26九年级上·福建福州·期中）近年来，零浪费（zero-waste）作为一种环保生活方式，引起全球关注。假设你是李华，你校英语角将组织以“How to be a zero-waste citizen (公民)”为题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下导图写一篇英文演讲稿，号召大家积极参与环保行动。词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 内容包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，举例说明相关建议。 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As we know, zero-waste has become a popular green lifestyle. Today, we are facing serious problems of pollution and waste, so it is necessary to live a zero-waste life to protect our earth. Here is some advice on how to be a zero-waste citizen. First, we should choose environmentally friendly products, such as using cloth bags instead of plastic ones. Second, we can recycle or reuse old books and bottles. Besides, we’d better finish all our food every meal to avoid food waste. Small changes make a big difference. Let’s take action right now! Thank you for your listening! 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，主要使用一般现在时，辅以祈使句 明确要点：践行零浪费生活的重要性、成为零浪费公民的具体建议、发出积极行动的号召 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）为主 注意事项：必须包含导图中的所有提示信息，并适当举例拓展；词数80左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接给出的开头，阐述零浪费生活方式的背景与面临的环境挑战（重要性） 主体段：从选用环保产品、资源循环利用、避免食物浪费等方面提出具体建议 结尾段：发出号召，呼吁大家从小事做起，积极参与环保行动 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：零浪费生活的重要性 环境问题：face serious problems of pollution and waste/environmental challenges等 环保意义：protect our earth/make our living environment better/save resources等 要点二：践行零浪费的建议 环保产品：choose environmentally friendly products/use cloth bags instead of plastic ones等 回收利用：recycle or reuse old books and bottles/use both sides of paper等 自主拓展：finish all food every meal/avoid food waste/save water and electricity/take public transportation等 要点三：总结与号召 行动号召：small changes make a big difference/take action right now/be a zero-waste citizen/make contributions to the earth等 四 （25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期末）近年来，环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。假如你是某中学学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，为保护环境尽一份力。 提示：(1) 节约用电; (2) 少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾; (3) 绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等。 要求：(1) 短文须包括所给提示内容，可适当发挥; (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; (3) 词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。 Dear friends, The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】范文： Dear friends, The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment. First, it’s very important to save electricity. Don’t forget to turn off lights when we leave rooms. Second, we are supposed to reuse plastic bags and not to litter. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike or take a bus when we go out. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful. If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. The Students’ Union 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：倡议书（应用文），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：点明当下环境问题严峻，阐述学生可践行的各类环保举措，表达对环境改善的美好期许 确定人称：第一人称(we/our) 注意事项：语句简洁规范，贴合学生身份，条理清晰罗列做法，不得透露真实个人、学校信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起点明背景，指出环境问题日益严重，引出学生应主动保护环境的核心观点 主体段：分点罗列日常生活中可落实的具体环保行动，条理清晰、层层递进 结尾段：总结全文，坚持践行环保行为，升华主题，展望环境越来越好的美好未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：点明环保背景与主体责任 现状描述：environmental problems/more and more serious 主体身份：students 核心态度：do something to protect the environment/pollution/worse and worse/take action/protect our home 要点二：具体环保举措 节电举措：save electricity/turn off lights/leave rooms 塑品再利用：reuse plastic bags/go shopping 绿色出行：walk/ride a bike/take a bus/go out 绿化环境：plant more trees and flowers/make the environment beautiful/save energy/reduce waste/low-carbon travel/green plants 要点三：总结展望 坚持行动：keep doing these things 美好期许：the environment will be better and better/make a difference/improve our living conditions/a greener world 13 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $