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高一上⑧满分作文满分作文·结构与模板 第一模块：结构化系统知识梳理 一、应用文写作·三段十句黄金结构 段落 功能 句数 核心任务 ①自我介绍/背景②点明写 第一段 开门见山点明目的 2句 信目的 ①首先②具体细节③进 第二段 主体展开·分层陈述 5-6句 步说明④举例/补充⑤过 渡 ①总结/祝愿②期待回复/ 第三段 总结收尾表达期望 2句 感谢 ★口诀：两句话点题，五六句展开，两句话收尾。 二、各段万能模板句型 第一段开头模板（点明目的） 信件类型 模板句型 I'm writing to offer some suggestions on 建议信 申请信 I'm writing to apply for the position of 邀请信 I'm writing to invite you to I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for 感谢信 道款信 I'm writing to apologize to you for 求助信 I'm writing to ask for your help with 通知 We are glad to inform you that 介绍信 I'm writing to introduce to you. ★高分替换： I'm writing to->I am writing with the intention of I'm writing to->The purpose of my writing is to 第二段·主体模板（分层展开） 逻辑功能 模板句型 首先 To begin with,/First and foremost,/In the first place, 其次 In addition,/What's more,/Furthermore,/ Moreover, 最后 Last but not least,/Finally,More importantly, For instance,/Take as an example, 举例 /A case in point is that It would be advisable for you to ./1 建议 strongly recommend that you(should) 让步 Although it is still worth What matters most is that ./It is 强调 that 因果 As a result,/Therefore,/Consequently,/ Owing to 第三段·结尾模板（总结期待） 功能 模板句型 期待回复 I'm looking forward to your early reply. I would appreciate it if you could reply at 期待回复（高分） your earliest convenience. I wish you every success.Best wishes to 表达祝愿 you. Thank you for your time and 感谢 consideration. 希望有帮助 I hope you find these suggestions helpful. 再次道歉 Please accept my apology once again. 三、高分升级替换表（低分→高分） 低分表达 高分替换 提分点 I think From my perspective,/As 高级短语 far as I'm concerned, very important of vital importance /crucial 高级形容词 低分表达 高分替换 提分点 more and more an increasing number of 高级表达 I hope I sincerely hope that 情感强化 be supposed to /be should 句式升级 expected to be capable of doing /be can 词汇升级 able to beneficial /rewarding good 精准形容 fruitful a considerable number of/ many 书面化 numerous I am eager to /I am longing I want to 情感升级 to In conclusion,To sum up,/ In a word 高级过渡 All in all, 四、高级句式模板（必背5大句式) 句式名称 结构公式 示例 Itis/was+被强调部分+ It is your generous help that 强调句 that/who+其余 makes me confident. Not only does it broaden our Not only+助动词+主语+谓 倒装句 horizons,but it also enriches 语，but also+主语+谓语 our life. We had a heated discussion, 定语从句 ,which+谓语 which benefited us a lot Considering your situation, 非谓语作状语 Doing/Done,+主句 I'd like to offer some advice. If I were you,I would If I were you,I would take 虚拟语气 /It is high time action immediately. that 五、常见扣分点对照表 扣分点 具体表现 正确做法 称呼Dear 落款Yours,. 格式错误 书信缺称呼/落款 Li Hua 扣分点 具体表现 正确做法 时态混乱 过去与现在混用 全文统一，建议信一般现在时 人称不一致 I/you/we随意切换 保持一致，建议信以you为主 逻辑词缺失 句子间无过渡 每段至少1个逻辑连接词 句式单一 全为主谓宾简单句 至少2个高级句式 字数不足 少于80词 控制在80-120词 跑题 未覆盖要点 逐条核对题目要点 六、考场写作时间分配 阶段 时间 任务 审题 2分钟 定文体、定人称、定时态、列要点 列提纲 2分钟 三段各写关键词 写作 12分钟 套模板、加高级句式 检查 4分钟 查时态、人称、拼写、字数 ★总控：20分钟以内完成。 第二模块：溯源真题训练 1. 你们班计划举办一次以“中国传统文化”为主题的班会，请你给外教Chis写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包 括： 1.时间与地点； 2.活动内容； 3.期待回复。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 Dear Chris, I'm writing to invite you to attend a class meeting themed "Chinese Traditional Culture"which will be held in our classroom at 3:0 p.m.next Friday. To begin with,we will watch a short video about traditional Chinese festivals.What's more,some students will perform Chinese folk dances and recite ancient poems.Last but not least,we have prepared some traditional food for you to taste. I would appreciate it if you could join us.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 2. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Petr来信说他最近学习中文遇到困难，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1.表示理解； 2.提出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 Dear Peter, I'm sorry to hear that you are having difficulty learning Chinese.I fully understand your situation, and I'd like to offer some suggestions. To begin with,it would be advisable for you to watch Chinese movies with subtitles,which can help you improve your listening.In addition,why not make some Chinese friends online?They can practice speaking with you regularly.Last but not least,keeping a diary in Chinese is also a good way to improve your writing. I sincerely hope these suggestions are helpful.Best wishes to you. Yours, Li Hua 3. 假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举办一场关于环境保护的讲座，请你给外教Caroline:写一封邮件，邀请 她参加。内容包括： 1.讲座时间和地点； 2.讲座内容； 3.邀请理由。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 Dear Caroline, I'm writing to invite you to a lecture on environmental protection,which will be held in the school hall from 2:0 to 4:0 p.m.next Wednesday. The lecture will cover topics such as climate change and recycling.Not only does it broaden our horizons,but it also raises our awareness of protecting the environment.Considering your expertise in this field,we believe your presence would greatly benefit us. I would appreciate it if you could attend.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 4. 假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛。请你写一则通知，内容包括： 1.比赛时间和地点； 2.比赛主题； 3.报名方式。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 NOTICE We are glad to inform you that an English speech contest will be held in the school auditorium at 2:0 p.m.on June 15th. The theme of the contest is "Youth and Dream".Those who are interested are supposed to sign up at the Student Union office before June 10th.Please prepare a five-minute speech and submit your topic in advance. Everyone is welcome to participate.I hope you find this notice helpful. The Student Union 5. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (材料略) Paragraph 1:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their father up. Paragraph 2:The father was deeply moved by what he saw. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 【标准答案】 Paragraph 1: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their father up."Happy Father's Day!they shouted in chorus,their faces beaming with pride.Their father opened his eyes and was surprised to see the tray of food before him.Not only did the twins prepare the breakfast by themselves,but they also decorated the tray with a handwritten card.What touched him most was that the toast was slightly burnt,which showed their sincere effort. Paragraph 2: The father was deeply moved by what he saw.Tears welled up in his eyes as he pulled his children into a warm embrace."This is the best breakfast I've ever had,"he said in a choked voice. It was at that moment that he realized how much his children had grown.The burnt toast,the messy kitchen,and the bright smiles-all of these reminded him that love could be expressed in the simplest ways. 6. 假定你是李华，你上周参加了学校举办的英语演讲比赛并获得了一等奖。请你给外教Mr.Sith写一封感谢 信，内容包括： 1.表示感谢； 2.回顾他的帮助； 3.表达祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 Dear Mr.Smith, I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help with my English speech contest. Without your guidance,I couldn't have won first prize.You not only helped me polish my speech but also encouraged me to overcome my nervousness.What matters most is that you taught me how to deliver a speech with confidence and passion. Thank you for your time and consideration.I wish you every success in your future work. Yours, Li Hua 7. 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Tery将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内 容包括： 1.到达时间 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 Dear Terry, I'm writing to introduce some Chinese customs to you,which will be helpful for your visit. To begin with,it would be advisable for you to arrive on time.In addition,bringing a small gift such as fruit or flowers is considered polite.As for table manners,you are supposed to wait until the host invites you to start eating.What matters most is that you should never stick your chopsticks upright in the rice. I hope you find these suggestions helpful.Best wishes to you. Yours, LiHua 8. 假定你是李华，你和同学约好周末去敬老院做志愿者，但你因故不能赴约。请你给同学写一封邮件，内容包 括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.提出补救方案。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【标准答案】 Dear Tom, I'm writing to apologize to you for not being able to go to the nursing home with you this weekend. The reason is that i have to accompany my grandmother to the hospital,as she is not feeling well these days.Please accept my apology once again.To make up for it,I would like to visit the nursing home with you next weekend if it is convenient for you.I am eager to make it up to you. I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua