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Unit 5 Power of Ideas单元写作写作任务单
写作主题:我最喜欢的发明(My Favourite Invention)
本单元围绕“思想的力量”(Power of Ideas)这一主题展开,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“科学与技术”子主题,涉及发明创造及其对人类生活的影响。本单元的大问题“What changes can inventions bring to our lives?”引导学生从发明者、发明时间、发明动机、面临的挑战以及对生活的影响等维度理解一项发明的完整历程。Section A通过听力与阅读,让学生了解造纸术、无线电等发明的诞生背景与传播过程,感知被动语态在描述客观事实时的功能;Section B以3b—3c的写作任务为核心,要求学生选择一项感兴趣的伟大发明,按“What / Who / When / Why / Challenges / Effect”整理信息,并写成一篇连贯的说明文。
本单元的写作任务通常要求学生写一篇介绍一项发明的说明文,常见形式包括:①以“My Favourite Invention”为题,介绍一项自己最喜欢的发明;②以“The Invention That Changed the World”为题,论述某项发明对世界的改变;③介绍自己的小发明(My Creative Invention),说明设计初衷与功能。写作中应重点关注:被动语态的贯穿使用——一般现在时被动(is/are done)描述日常功能与用途,一般过去时被动(was/were done)描述发明时间与过程;“背景—过程—影响”的逻辑链条——避免只罗列事实,要用“before... / after...”或“without... / thanks to...”形成前后对比,突出发明的价值;句式层次的提升——在保证被动语态准确的基础上,适当融入强调句、非限制性定语从句或倒装结构,使文章具有高分辨识度。
一、重点词汇
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(一)发明与创造
1.
1. invention n. 发明;创造
2. invent v. 发明;创造
3. inventor n. 发明家
4. creation n. 创造;创作
5. create v. 创造
6. creative adj. 有创造力的
7. design v. & n. 设计
8. discover v. 发现
9. discovery n. 发现
(二)材料与物品
1.
2. material n. 材料
3. plastic n. 塑料
4. metal n. 金属
5. wood n. 木头
6. glass n. 玻璃
7. paper n. 纸
8. machine n. 机器
9. engine n. 发动机
10. wheel n. 车轮
11. tool n. 工具
(三)功能与影响
1.
2. convenient adj. 方便的
3. practical adj. 实用的
4. beneficial adj. 有益的
5. significant adj. 重要的;显著的
6. inexpensive adj. 不贵的
7. efficient adj. 高效的
8. rapidly adv. 迅速地
9. widely adv. 广泛地
10. gradually adv. 逐渐地
10. effect n. 影响;效果
(四)困难与解决
1.
2. difficulty n. 困难
3. challenge n. 挑战
4. problem n. 问题;难题
5. solve v. 解决
6. solution n. 解决方案
7. test v. & n. 测试;检验
8. improve v. 改进;提高
9. succeed v. 成功
(五)常用动词
1.
2. produce v. 生产;制造
3. spread v. 传播;散布
4. connect v. 连接
5. replace v. 取代
6. benefit v. 使受益
7. enable v. 使能够
8. develop v. 发展;研发
二、重点短语
1.
(一)介绍发明基本信息
1. be invented by 由……发明
2. be invented in 在……(时间/地点)被发明
3. be made of / from 由……制成(看得出 / 看不出原材料)
4. be used for (doing) sth. 被用于(做)某事
5. be designed for / to do 被设计用于……
6. come up with an idea 想出一个主意
7. turn an idea into reality 把想法变为现实
(二)描述发明过程与挑战
1.
2. meet many difficulties 遇到许多困难
3. solve the problem 解决难题
4. carry out tests 开展测试
5. try out 试用;检验
6. speed up 加速
7. after many failures 经历多次失败之后
8. never give up 从不放弃
(三)描述影响与评价
1. have a big effect on 对……产生巨大影响
2. make a difference 产生影响;起作用
3. lead to / result in 导致;带来
4. benefit people and society 造福人民和社会
5. spread knowledge widely 广泛传播知识
6. bring people closer 拉近人们的距离
7. be widely used 被广泛使用
8. thanks to 多亏了;由于
9. play an important role in 在……中发挥重要作用
10. one of the greatest inventions 最伟大的发明之一
三、重点句型
(一)开头引入与总体评价
1. Among all the inventions in history, the one that impresses me most is paper, which was invented in ancient China.
在历史上所有的发明中,给我印象最深的是纸,它发明于古代中国。
2. It is widely believed that the telephone is one of the most important inventions in history.
人们普遍认为电话是历史上最重要的发明之一。
3. There is no doubt that the Internet has completely changed the way we live and communicate.
毫无疑问,互联网彻底改变了我们生活和交流的方式。
4. My favourite invention is the high-speed train, a great creation that has made long-distance travel much easier.
我最喜欢的发明是高铁,这项伟大的创造让长途旅行变得容易得多。
(二)描述发明时间、发明者与背景
1. Paper was invented by Cai Lun around 2,000 years ago, and it was used for writing, printing and packing.
纸大约在2000年前由蔡伦发明,被用于书写、印刷和包装。
2. The plane was invented by the Wright brothers in 1903, and their first successful flight was finished after they studied how birds fly.
飞机由莱特兄弟于1903年发明,他们在研究鸟类飞行之后完成了第一次成功飞行。
3. Before paper was invented, people wrote on bamboo or silk, which was either heavy or expensive.
在纸被发明之前,人们在竹子或丝绸上写字,这些东西要么重要么贵。
4. It was not easy at first, and many difficult problems were met during the development of the invention.
起初并不容易,在发明的研发过程中遇到了许多难题。
(三)描述功能、原理或用途(被动语态核心)
1. The machine is used to cut plastic and make small wares.
这台机器被用来切割塑料、制作小型器皿。
2. Smartphones are widely used by people all over the world, and they are designed for communication and entertainment.
智能手机被全世界的人们广泛使用,它们被设计用于通信和娱乐。
3. Paper is made from wood and other plant materials, so it is inexpensive and easy to produce.
纸由木材和其他植物材料制成,因此成本低廉且易于生产。
4. In the first step, the materials are mixed and heated; then, the mixture is pressed into the required shape.
第一步,材料被混合并加热;然后,混合物被压制成所需的形状。
(四)描述影响与价值(对比与强调)
1. Thanks to this invention, books became much cheaper, and knowledge could be spread more widely than ever before.
多亏了这项发明,书籍变得便宜得多,知识能够比以往更广泛地传播。
2. It was paper that made it possible for knowledge to spread widely.
正是纸让知识的广泛传播成为可能。
3. Without the Internet, our life would be totally different, and we could not get information so quickly.
没有互联网,我们的生活将完全不同,我们也无法如此迅速地获取信息。
4. Not only does the high-speed train save us a lot of time, but it also brings people closer together.
高铁不仅为我们节省了大量时间,也拉近了人们之间的距离。
5. The invention of the telephone has had such a significant effect on our lives that the world has become a smaller place.
电话的发明对我们的生活产生了如此重大的影响,以至于世界变得更小了。
(五)总结评价与升华
1. In my opinion, the invention of paper was not only a technical success but also a great gift to human culture.
在我看来,纸的发明不仅是技术上的成功,也是送给人类文化的一份厚礼。
2. It reminds us that a simple idea can change the world, and that creativity is the power that drives human progress.
它提醒我们,一个简单的想法可以改变世界,而创造力正是推动人类进步的力量。
3. I believe that more creative ideas will be turned into useful inventions, and that they will continue to make our lives better.
我相信,更多有创意的想法将被转化为有用的发明,它们将继续让我们的生活变得更美好。
Passage A
随着中国免签政策的实施,许多外国友人来到你的家乡旅游,他们震惊于中国科技飞速发展对生活带来的巨大变化。请根据下图用英语向他们介绍科技如何改变我们的生活和学习。
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容须包括上图中的要点,省略号部分自拟,并适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实校名和姓名。
提示:发展 development;方便的 convenient
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in lifestyle and study.
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Passage B
某英语杂志社举办“A Great Invention”主题征文。请介绍一项对你生活影响最大的发明(如手机、互联网、纸、电灯等)。
提示:
1. 介绍该发明及大致发明时间/发明者;
2. 它解决了什么问题,遇到过什么困难(可合理想象);
3. 它对世界/你的生活的意义。
词数90左右,不得出现真实校名人名。
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Passage C
发明改变了世界,改变了我们的生活。比如,电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题,根据提示写一篇短文。
要求:1. 短文必须包括图片中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 90—100词 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
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Passage D
学校英文报刊“科技与生活”专栏正在征稿。请你根据下图所示要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一项发明。短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
注意:1. 词数80—100;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Inventions make our lives better. Among them, my favourite one is
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Passage E
假如你是李华,你校将举办以“AI (人工智能) in Our Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下提示信息写一篇英语演讲稿。
注意:1.演讲稿必须包括导图的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3.词数100左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
Good morning! Today I’m very glad to be here to give a speech on AI in Our Life.
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Thanks for listening!
Passage F
发明改变了世界,也改变了我们的生活。因为有了发明,我们的生活才变得更加丰富多彩。请你结合下面图示信息,以“My Favourite Invention”为题,用英文写一篇短文来谈谈你最喜欢的一项发明。
写作要求:
(1)层次清晰,语言流畅;
(2)词数在90~100之间,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)书写规范,卷面整洁;
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Invention
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Passage G
假如你是九年级一班的李华,你校正在举办科技节,你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。
写作要求:
1. 不少于80词 (所给部分不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s a great honour for me to speak here.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
8.AI(人工智能)的发展催生出了许多智能产品,陪护机器人(companion robot)就是其中之一。如果你的父母不在家,你是否会选择和陪护机器人待在一起呢?请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下观点中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你对陪护机器人的看法。
YES
NO
wise and knows a lot
can talk with me
will never get tired
★expensive
★can’t look after me like a real person
★needs to be charged (充电)
写作要求:1. 文中须包含所选观点的所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Unit 5 Power of Ideas单元写作写作任务单
写作主题:我最喜欢的发明(My Favourite Invention)
本单元围绕“思想的力量”(Power of Ideas)这一主题展开,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“科学与技术”子主题,涉及发明创造及其对人类生活的影响。本单元的大问题“What changes can inventions bring to our lives?”引导学生从发明者、发明时间、发明动机、面临的挑战以及对生活的影响等维度理解一项发明的完整历程。Section A通过听力与阅读,让学生了解造纸术、无线电等发明的诞生背景与传播过程,感知被动语态在描述客观事实时的功能;Section B以3b—3c的写作任务为核心,要求学生选择一项感兴趣的伟大发明,按“What / Who / When / Why / Challenges / Effect”整理信息,并写成一篇连贯的说明文。
本单元的写作任务通常要求学生写一篇介绍一项发明的说明文,常见形式包括:①以“My Favourite Invention”为题,介绍一项自己最喜欢的发明;②以“The Invention That Changed the World”为题,论述某项发明对世界的改变;③介绍自己的小发明(My Creative Invention),说明设计初衷与功能。写作中应重点关注:被动语态的贯穿使用——一般现在时被动(is/are done)描述日常功能与用途,一般过去时被动(was/were done)描述发明时间与过程;“背景—过程—影响”的逻辑链条——避免只罗列事实,要用“before... / after...”或“without... / thanks to...”形成前后对比,突出发明的价值;句式层次的提升——在保证被动语态准确的基础上,适当融入强调句、非限制性定语从句或倒装结构,使文章具有高分辨识度。
一、重点词汇
2
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
(一)发明与创造
1.
1. invention n. 发明;创造
2. invent v. 发明;创造
3. inventor n. 发明家
4. creation n. 创造;创作
5. create v. 创造
6. creative adj. 有创造力的
7. design v. & n. 设计
8. discover v. 发现
9. discovery n. 发现
(二)材料与物品
1.
2. material n. 材料
3. plastic n. 塑料
4. metal n. 金属
5. wood n. 木头
6. glass n. 玻璃
7. paper n. 纸
8. machine n. 机器
9. engine n. 发动机
10. wheel n. 车轮
11. tool n. 工具
(三)功能与影响
1.
2. convenient adj. 方便的
3. practical adj. 实用的
4. beneficial adj. 有益的
5. significant adj. 重要的;显著的
6. inexpensive adj. 不贵的
7. efficient adj. 高效的
8. rapidly adv. 迅速地
9. widely adv. 广泛地
10. gradually adv. 逐渐地
10. effect n. 影响;效果
(四)困难与解决
1.
2. difficulty n. 困难
3. challenge n. 挑战
4. problem n. 问题;难题
5. solve v. 解决
6. solution n. 解决方案
7. test v. & n. 测试;检验
8. improve v. 改进;提高
9. succeed v. 成功
(五)常用动词
1.
2. produce v. 生产;制造
3. spread v. 传播;散布
4. connect v. 连接
5. replace v. 取代
6. benefit v. 使受益
7. enable v. 使能够
8. develop v. 发展;研发
二、重点短语
1.
(一)介绍发明基本信息
1. be invented by 由……发明
2. be invented in 在……(时间/地点)被发明
3. be made of / from 由……制成(看得出 / 看不出原材料)
4. be used for (doing) sth. 被用于(做)某事
5. be designed for / to do 被设计用于……
6. come up with an idea 想出一个主意
7. turn an idea into reality 把想法变为现实
(二)描述发明过程与挑战
1.
2. meet many difficulties 遇到许多困难
3. solve the problem 解决难题
4. carry out tests 开展测试
5. try out 试用;检验
6. speed up 加速
7. after many failures 经历多次失败之后
8. never give up 从不放弃
(三)描述影响与评价
1. have a big effect on 对……产生巨大影响
2. make a difference 产生影响;起作用
3. lead to / result in 导致;带来
4. benefit people and society 造福人民和社会
5. spread knowledge widely 广泛传播知识
6. bring people closer 拉近人们的距离
7. be widely used 被广泛使用
8. thanks to 多亏了;由于
9. play an important role in 在……中发挥重要作用
10. one of the greatest inventions 最伟大的发明之一
三、重点句型
(一)开头引入与总体评价
1. Among all the inventions in history, the one that impresses me most is paper, which was invented in ancient China.
在历史上所有的发明中,给我印象最深的是纸,它发明于古代中国。
2. It is widely believed that the telephone is one of the most important inventions in history.
人们普遍认为电话是历史上最重要的发明之一。
3. There is no doubt that the Internet has completely changed the way we live and communicate.
毫无疑问,互联网彻底改变了我们生活和交流的方式。
4. My favourite invention is the high-speed train, a great creation that has made long-distance travel much easier.
我最喜欢的发明是高铁,这项伟大的创造让长途旅行变得容易得多。
(二)描述发明时间、发明者与背景
1. Paper was invented by Cai Lun around 2,000 years ago, and it was used for writing, printing and packing.
纸大约在2000年前由蔡伦发明,被用于书写、印刷和包装。
2. The plane was invented by the Wright brothers in 1903, and their first successful flight was finished after they studied how birds fly.
飞机由莱特兄弟于1903年发明,他们在研究鸟类飞行之后完成了第一次成功飞行。
3. Before paper was invented, people wrote on bamboo or silk, which was either heavy or expensive.
在纸被发明之前,人们在竹子或丝绸上写字,这些东西要么重要么贵。
4. It was not easy at first, and many difficult problems were met during the development of the invention.
起初并不容易,在发明的研发过程中遇到了许多难题。
(三)描述功能、原理或用途(被动语态核心)
1. The machine is used to cut plastic and make small wares.
这台机器被用来切割塑料、制作小型器皿。
2. Smartphones are widely used by people all over the world, and they are designed for communication and entertainment.
智能手机被全世界的人们广泛使用,它们被设计用于通信和娱乐。
3. Paper is made from wood and other plant materials, so it is inexpensive and easy to produce.
纸由木材和其他植物材料制成,因此成本低廉且易于生产。
4. In the first step, the materials are mixed and heated; then, the mixture is pressed into the required shape.
第一步,材料被混合并加热;然后,混合物被压制成所需的形状。
(四)描述影响与价值(对比与强调)
1. Thanks to this invention, books became much cheaper, and knowledge could be spread more widely than ever before.
多亏了这项发明,书籍变得便宜得多,知识能够比以往更广泛地传播。
2. It was paper that made it possible for knowledge to spread widely.
正是纸让知识的广泛传播成为可能。
3. Without the Internet, our life would be totally different, and we could not get information so quickly.
没有互联网,我们的生活将完全不同,我们也无法如此迅速地获取信息。
4. Not only does the high-speed train save us a lot of time, but it also brings people closer together.
高铁不仅为我们节省了大量时间,也拉近了人们之间的距离。
5. The invention of the telephone has had such a significant effect on our lives that the world has become a smaller place.
电话的发明对我们的生活产生了如此重大的影响,以至于世界变得更小了。
(五)总结评价与升华
1. In my opinion, the invention of paper was not only a technical success but also a great gift to human culture.
在我看来,纸的发明不仅是技术上的成功,也是送给人类文化的一份厚礼。
2. It reminds us that a simple idea can change the world, and that creativity is the power that drives human progress.
它提醒我们,一个简单的想法可以改变世界,而创造力正是推动人类进步的力量。
3. I believe that more creative ideas will be turned into useful inventions, and that they will continue to make our lives better.
我相信,更多有创意的想法将被转化为有用的发明,它们将继续让我们的生活变得更美好。
Passage A
随着中国免签政策的实施,许多外国友人来到你的家乡旅游,他们震惊于中国科技飞速发展对生活带来的巨大变化。请根据下图用英语向他们介绍科技如何改变我们的生活和学习。
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容须包括上图中的要点,省略号部分自拟,并适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实校名和姓名。
提示:发展 development;方便的 convenient
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in lifestyle and study.
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【答案】示例
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in lifestyle and study. In terms of lifestyle, transportation has become much more convenient. We used to ride bicycles or take buses, but now electric cars and even self-driving cars are becoming common.
When it comes to study, technology has also made a big difference. Traditional paper books are gradually being replaced by e-books, which are easier to carry. Besides, AI tools like DeepSeek help us solve problems and learn more efficiently.
In the past, we felt worried about keeping up with the fast pace of life. However, now we feel more confident and hopeful because technology makes everything possible. I believe our future will be even brighter with the help of technology.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,介绍科技带来的变化,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点:生活方式、学习方面、个人感受
确定人称:第一人称复数(We/Our)或第三人称泛指
注意事项:词数100左右;不得出现真实校名和姓名;需包含图表中所有要点并适当发挥
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:引用给出的开头句,引出话题
主体段:分别阐述生活方式和学习方式的具体变化
结尾段:表达个人感受,对比过去与现在,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:生活方式
交通变革:bicycles/bus rightarrow Electric car/Self-driving car等
具体描述:used to ride bicycles/take buses/now use electric cars/self-driving cars等
作用效果:more convenient/faster/greener/save energy等
要点二:学习方面
阅读方式:paper books/Paper rightarrow E-books等
AI工具:DeepSeek/Kimi等
具体说明:help us solve problems/help with homework/answer questions/improve learning efficiency等
要点三:个人感受
对比:In the past (worried/slow) /Now (happy/excited/confident)等
总结:hopeful/Technology makes life better/look forward to the future.等
Passage B
某英语杂志社举办“A Great Invention”主题征文。请介绍一项对你生活影响最大的发明(如手机、互联网、纸、电灯等)。
提示:
1. 介绍该发明及大致发明时间/发明者;
2. 它解决了什么问题,遇到过什么困难(可合理想象);
3. 它对世界/你的生活的意义。
词数90左右,不得出现真实校名人名。
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【答案】例文
A Great Invention
The invention I admire most is the smartphone. It was developed in the late 20th century and became popular in the 2000s. At first, engineers faced many difficulties: batteries died quickly and screens were too small.
The smartphone solves countless daily problems—we can call anyone, take photos, study online, and even translate languages instantly. For me, it helps me look up new English words anytime and keep in touch with my family.
Though some worry about overuse, its benefits are huge. It shows that a creative idea, with effort and improvement, can truly change the world and connect people everywhere.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般过去时、一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍一项伟大发明;发明的大致时间/发明者;它解决的问题、曾经遇到的困难;对个人生活与世界的意义
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:词数90左右,不得出现真实校名与人名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明介绍的发明,介绍发明时间以及研发时遇到的困难
主体段:介绍发明解决的问题,阐述这项发明在日常生活和学习中的用途
结尾段:辩证评价,点明这项发明对世界的意义,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍发明、发明时间与发明者,研发遇到的困难
发明选择:smartphone/the light bulb等
时间描述:in the late 20th century/became popular in the 2000s/in 1879等
遇到困难:batteries died quickly and screens were too small/expensive等
要点二:它解决的问题,在生活中的作用
功能:call anyone/take photos/study online/translate languages instantly/bright light to people at night等
要点三:它对世界和我的意义
评价:its benefits are huge/countless等
主旨:a creative idea/with effort and improvement/can truly change the world and connect people everywhere/helps us record knowledge and pass down culture等
Passage C
发明改变了世界,改变了我们的生活。比如,电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题,根据提示写一篇短文。
要求:1. 短文必须包括图片中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 90—100词 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
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【答案】例文
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
There’re famous inventions like the TV and the bicycle. The TV offers all kinds of information for us to know about the world. We can also watch shows to relax. The bicycle is very useful, too. We ride it to school or work. It’s cheap for most people to buy and causes no pollution. Besides, riding bikes is good exercise for our health.
Though there have been many great inventions, I hope to invent a special pen which can help us write faster and more neatly. If we have problems with homework, it can show us ways to work them out.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,一般现在时为主
明确要点:参照图片中所给提示,介绍两项著名发明(电视、自行车)及其作用;写出自己想发明的物品以及它的用途或发明的理由
确定人称:第一人称(I/we)和第三人称(it)
注意事项: 要点包括图片中所有内容;90—100词
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明主题——发明让生活更便利
主体段:参照所给提示,介绍两项著名发明:电视、自行车,分别说明它们的作用或优点
结尾段:介绍想要发明的物品以及用途或发明的理由
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:电视发明的优点
offer all kinds of information for us to know about the world/watch shows to relax/open our eyes/enrich our spare time/bring us much fun等
要点二:自行车发明的优点
ride it to school or work/cheap for most people to buy/cause no pollution/good exercise for our health/make our trips convenient/does no harm to the environment/easy to park/save energy in our daily life等
要点三:自己的发明
物品:a special pen/a magic schoolbag/a flying bike等
用途或理由:help us write faster and more neatly/show us ways to work out homework problems/lighten heavy schoolbags/tell us useful knowledge/avoid heavy traffic/run with clean energy等
Passage D
学校英文报刊“科技与生活”专栏正在征稿。请你根据下图所示要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一项发明。短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
注意:1. 词数80—100;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Inventions make our lives better. Among them, my favourite one is
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【答案】例文
Inventions make our lives better. Among them, my favourite one is the smartphone.
It is a recent invention but has greatly changed our life. It has many useful functions. It helps me look up new English words and take online courses. I can also keep in touch with distant friends through it. Besides, it works as a camera and a map. When travelling, it can guide us to the right place.
I love my smartphone. It makes learning easier and brings people closer. However, we shouldn’t spend too much time on it. If we use it properly, it is really an amazing invention bringing great convenience to our daily life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:点明最喜欢的发明是智能手机,介绍智能手机的多种用途和好处,提醒合理使用,不能花费过多时间。
确定人称:以第一人称、第三人称为主
注意事项:词数80—100,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:点明最喜欢的发明是智能手机。
主体段:介绍智能手机丰富的功能,举例说明它在学习、沟通、出行方面的用处。
结尾段:说明手机带来的便利,同时提醒要合理使用。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:智能手机的好处:look up new English words/take online courses/keep in touch with distant friends/guide us to the right place等
要点二:喜欢的原因:make learning much easier/bring people closer/bring lots of convenience to our daily life等
要点三:提醒要合理使用:shouldn’t spend too much time on it/must use...in a right way/use...properly等
Passage E
假如你是李华,你校将举办以“AI (人工智能) in Our Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下提示信息写一篇英语演讲稿。
注意:1.演讲稿必须包括导图的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3.词数100左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
Good morning! Today I’m very glad to be here to give a speech on AI in Our Life.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and students,
Good morning! Today I’m very glad to be here to give a speech on AI in Our Life.
AI is becoming more and more important in our daily life. It can help us with our study. For example, it can answer our questions and check our homework. It can also make pictures.
AI has many advantages. It makes our life easier and saves us a lot of time. However, it also has some disadvantages. Some people depend on AI too much and lose their own thinking ability.
In my opinion, we should use AI wisely. It is a great tool, but we should not let it control our life. Let’s enjoy the convenience it brings and think actively.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:演讲稿,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:AI能做什么(帮助学习、画图等)、AI的优点(让生活更轻松等)、AI的缺点(过度依赖等)以及个人观点。
确定人称:第三人称(It/its)和第一人称(We/our/I)
注意事项:文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,引出话题
主体段:分别介绍AI能做什么、AI的优点、AI的缺点。
结尾段:表达个人观点,升华主题
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:AI能做什么
become more and more important in our daily life/help us with our study/for example/answer our questions/check our homework/also/make pictures/create/besides/wonderful
要点二:AI的优点
advantage/make our life easier/save us a lot of time/than before/do more interesting things/
要点三:AI的缺点
however/disadvantage/depend on AI too much/lose their own thinking ability/become lazy/stop thinking independently/give us wrong information
要点四:个人观点
in my opinion/use AI wisely/a great tool/should not let it control our life/enjoy the convenience/think actively/properly/improve our life/instead of being controlled
Passage F
发明改变了世界,也改变了我们的生活。因为有了发明,我们的生活才变得更加丰富多彩。请你结合下面图示信息,以“My Favourite Invention”为题,用英文写一篇短文来谈谈你最喜欢的一项发明。
写作要求:
(1)层次清晰,语言流畅;
(2)词数在90~100之间,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)书写规范,卷面整洁;
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Invention
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【答案】Possible version:
My Favourite Invention
The world has changed a lot because of the inventions.
The robot is one of the most useful inventions. It’s also my favourite invention. It can help us do many things today. In hospitals robots can help to look after sick people. In factories they can help workers to do a lot of dangerous and difficult work. In people’s homes, they can help people to wash clothes, do the dishes, sweep the floors, cook food and so on.
Robots are important to us. I think they will still be used in the future. And I believe they will play an increasingly important role in our daily lives.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:最喜欢的发明是什么;喜欢这项发明的原因;这项发明未来是否还会被使用
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:总起句,概括发明改变世界
主体段:介绍最喜欢的发明是机器人,列举机器人在不同场所可以做的事情,说明喜爱理由
结尾段:表达对这项发明未来的看法,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:What is your favourite invention?
发明选择:robot/computer/telephone/camera等
要点二:Why do you like it best?
地点选择:in hospitals/in factories/in people’s homes等
活动内容:look after sick people/do a lot of dangerous and difficult work/wash clothes, do the dishes, sweep the floors, cook food and so on等
作用效果:It can help us do many things today/It saves our time/It makes our daily life easier等
要点三:Do you think it will still be used in the future?
观点选择:I think they will still be used in the future/I believe they will play an increasingly important role in our daily lives/Robots will not disappear等
Passage G
假如你是九年级一班的李华,你校正在举办科技节,你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。
写作要求:
1. 不少于80词 (所给部分不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含写作提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s a great honour for me to speak here.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s a great honour for me to speak here. Today, I want to talk about four great inventions.
They are mobile phones, robots, high‑speed trains and electric cars. Mobile phones make our life convenient. We can shop online, watch movies and make video calls with them. Robots can help us with housework and save us much time. Since the high‑speed train was invented, it has greatly improved our travel speed and made travelling easier. Electric cars have also changed our life. They can not only save energy but also protect the environment.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿(介绍性说明文),以一般现在时为主,穿插现在完成时
明确要点:①手机以及它给人们生活带来的便利;②机器人以及它为人们做家务的功能;③高铁以及它提升人们出行速度的优势;④电动汽车以及它节能环保的优点
确定人称:第一人称(I/we) ;第三人称(it/they)
注意事项:不得泄露个人信息,词数不少于80词;开头已给出不计入总词数;包含全部提示信息,可适当增加细节,保证行文连贯
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:题目已经给出开头,问候听众,承接开头引出“科技改变生活”这一演讲主题
主体段:依次介绍手机、机器人、高铁、电动汽车,完整写出每一项科技对应的优点要点
结尾段:使用演讲稿结束语收尾。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:手机
给人们生活带来的便利:make our life convenient/shop online, watch movies and make video calls with them/listen to music/pay for things online等
要点二:机器人
帮助人们工作:help people with housework and save them much time/do heavy work/save people plenty of time等
要点三:高铁
提升出行速度的优势:greatly improved people’s travel speed and made travelling easier/travel fast and their journey becomes more comfortable/offer safe trips等
要点四:电动汽车
节能环保的优点:changed our life/They can not only save energy but also protect the environment./cut down pollution/be green for daily life/produce little waste gas等
8.AI(人工智能)的发展催生出了许多智能产品,陪护机器人(companion robot)就是其中之一。如果你的父母不在家,你是否会选择和陪护机器人待在一起呢?请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下观点中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你对陪护机器人的看法。
YES
NO
wise and knows a lot
can talk with me
will never get tired
★expensive
★can’t look after me like a real person
★needs to be charged (充电)
写作要求:1. 文中须包含所选观点的所有要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Will you choose to stay with a companion robot if your parents are not at home? I would say yes if I had a chance to stay with a companion robot while my parents are away. It is a nice choice for me when I have to stay home alone.
The companion robot is wise and knows a lot. It can help me with different kinds of study problems. It can also talk with me when I feel lonely or upset. Another good point is that it will never get tired, so it can keep me company for as long as I need.
All in all, the companion robot offers me comfort. It is a helpful partner.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:观点陈述类议论文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:针对陪护机器人表明支持观点;必须包含全部提示要点:wise and knows a lot、can talk with me、will never get tired;可适当拓展
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;词数100左右,给出的开头不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:表明自己的立场,父母不在家时愿意和陪护机器人待在一起,简单引入话题
主体段:逐条阐述陪护机器人的三个优点,结合简单生活场景展开说明
结尾段:简短总结,重申陪护机器人对自己的帮助,升华观点
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:wise and knows a lot
表达:is wise and knows a lot/help me with different kinds of study problems/has plenty of knowledge/give answers to my questions/offer useful advice on my schoolwork等
具体说明:机器人知识渊博,可以帮忙解决各类学习难题
要点二:can talk with me
表达:can also talk with me/when I feel lonely or upset/have conversations with me/share interesting stories/cheer me up when I am in bad moods等
具体说明:当我孤独、心情不好的时候,机器人可以陪我聊天
要点三:will never get tired
表达:will never get tired/keep me company for as long as I need/won’t feel bored/can stay with me day and night/keep me accompanied all the time等
具体说明:机器人不会疲惫,可以长时间陪伴我
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