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外研版高中英语必修第一册 Unit 5 Into the wild
单元写作任务专项训练
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于野生动物的观察日记或保护短文(nature journal / short passage)。要求文章包含以下部分:
观察(What I saw):交代时间、地点与观察对象,写出具体的外形、动作与习性;处境(What is happening):说明这一物种面临的威胁,如栖息地减少、非法捕猎;呼吁(What we can do):提出普通人可以采取的具体行动。
在动笔之前,教材为本单元的写作提供了充分的输入与铺垫。阅读输入:Understanding ideas 的 “The Monarch's Journey” 记录了黑脉金斑蝶跨越数千公里的迁徙,以及栖息地丧失带来的危机;Using language 部分还介绍了中国的大熊猫、朱鹮等珍稀动物的保护成果。教材引导学生区分“事实”与“感受”,学习用数据支撑说明。
语言输入:教材引导学生关注描写动物与迁徙的词汇(migrate / habitat / survive / endangered)、说明因果的句式(as a result / which leads to / thanks to...),以及提出建议的情态动词(we should / we can / it is important to...),并提示说明性文字多用一般现在时。
写作输出:教材设置了“写一则自然观察”的写作任务——学生记录一次真实的观察,或查阅资料介绍一种濒危动物,说明它的处境与保护措施。本单元的写作任务旨在培养学生运用观察—处境—行动的结构说明生态问题的能力,学会用事实说话,并树立人与自然和谐共处的意识。
★真题写作迁移(高考英语真题改编)
假定你是李华,你校英文报 “Nature” 专栏正在征稿。请你写一篇短文,介绍黑脉金斑蝶的迁徙及其面临的危机,内容包括:
(1)迁徙的时间与路线;
(2)它面临的威胁;
(3)我们可以做些什么。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The Journey of the Monarch
★单元写作强基(原创)
假定你上周末在湿地公园观鸟,收获很大。请你写一篇观察日记,内容包括:
(1)天气与环境;
(2)你观察到的鸟及其动作;
(3)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Sunday, 12 April Sunny
★写作主题提升(原创)
假定你校将举行以 “Let the Wild Stay Wild” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
(1)野生动物面临的危机;
(2)保护它们的意义;
(3)你的呼吁。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone,
Thank you!
★高考模拟演练(原创)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris 来信说他正在做一个关于中国珍稀动物的项目。请你回信,介绍一种中国珍稀动物,内容包括:
(1)它的外形与习性;
(2)它曾经的处境;
(3)保护措施与成效。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考范文
★真题写作迁移(高考英语真题改编)
One possible version:
范文词数 92
The Journey of the Monarch
Every autumn, millions of monarch butterflies fly thousands of kilometres south to escape the cold winter.
The journey is dangerous. Storms, dry weather and the loss of milkweed kill many of them. In some places, the number of monarchs has fallen by ninety percent, which worries scientists. Scientists are now working with farmers to protect the places where the butterflies rest on their way.
We can help by planting milkweed in our gardens and using fewer chemicals. Small gardens can become safe stops on a long journey.
★单元写作强基(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 82
Sunday, 12 April Sunny
This morning I went to the wetland park with my binoculars, and the air smelled of wet grass.
By the lake I saw a grey heron standing so still that I mistook it for a stone. Suddenly it moved—one quick step, then a fish in its beak. Two ducks paddled past, leaving a silver line on the water.
I stayed for two hours without saying a word. Watching them, I understood why this quiet place must be protected.
★写作主题提升(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 87
Let the Wild Stay Wild
Hello, everyone. Somewhere tonight, a tiger is walking through a forest that was once twice its size.
Wild animals are losing their homes to roads, farms and cities. When a species disappears, it never comes back. And we lose more than an animal—we lose part of the world that keeps us alive.
So let's refuse wildlife products, keep our rivers clean, and leave wild places alone. Let the wild stay wild, and teach the next generation to do the same. Thank you!
★高考模拟演练(原创)
One possible version:
范文词数 83
Dear Chris,
I'm glad to help with your project. I would like to introduce the crested ibis, a bird with pink wings and a red face.
It once lived across East Asia, but by the 1980s only seven were left in China. Scientists protected their nests, and farmers were asked to use less pesticide.
Today more than nine thousand birds live in the wild. It shows that careful protection really works. I can send you some photos if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
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