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高考英语
感谢信写作指导
真诚道谢 学会感恩
假定你是李华,外教 Smith 回国前曾帮你练习英语口语,还给你赠送英文书籍。请给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 说明他带给你的帮助;
3. 祝愿他一切顺利。
词数:80 词左右。
题干核心要求
1.人称
主要:第一人称 I(讲述自身感受与变化)
第二人称 you(指向外教 Smith)
2.时态
一般过去时:外教回国前帮助练习口语、赠书,过去发生的动作
现在完成时 / 一般现在时:描述自己现在的收获、改变、当下的感激
一般将来时 / 祈使祝愿:结尾祝福
⚠易错点:不要通篇使用一般现在时,帮助是过去发生,要用过去相关时态;虚拟语气 Without your help, I couldn’t have done… 情态动词 + have done,对过去虚拟。
3.语气
正式、真诚礼貌,书面语体;避免口语缩写、口语短句,写给外教,态度恳切。
感谢信篇章结构(四段式,高考标准)
第 1 段:开篇问候 + 写作目的 —— 开门见山表达感谢
问候,直接说明写信是为了向对方表达感谢,点明感谢事由。
第 2 段:主体段落(最重要)—— 叙述经过
写清楚发生了什么事,对方为你做了什么;描述对方的行为给自己带来的影响与感受。(不要写太多无关细节)
第 3 段:表达回报 / 再次致谢
表达对方帮助带来的收获;可写希望回报对方,或者期待未来相见。
第 4 段:结尾祝福 + 落款 送上祝愿,期待回信;
万能通用模板
Dear ________,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for ________(感谢的事情).
Without your generous help, I couldn’t have ____________(自己的收获 / 变化). I still remember the time when ____________(简述事件). It was your ________(patience/guidance/kindness) that helped me get through the difficulty. I benefited a great deal from your support.
Again, please accept my heartfelt thanks. I hope I can have a chance to repay your kindness. I also hope ________(祝愿).
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第一段:开头段(问候 + 写信目的,直接表明感谢)
高分短语
express sincere gratitude to sb 向某人表达诚挚的感激
convey my heartfelt thanks to sb 向某人致以衷心的感谢
be writing to do… 写信目的(书信标准表达)
高分句式
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help.
展信佳。我写信为你的善意帮助表达由衷谢意。
2. Words fail me when I attempt to show my thanks to you.
我难以用言语表达对你的感激。(高级开篇)
3. I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation for what you have done for me.
我写信,对你为我所做的一切致以诚挚谢意。
第二段:主体段(叙述事件 + 对方行为 + 给自己带来的影响,核心段落)
高分短语
patient guidance 耐心的指导
generous assistance 慷慨的帮助
devote one’s time to doing 投入时间做……
get through the difficulty 渡过困境
make rapid progress 取得快速进步
exert a positive influence on sb 对某人产生积极影响
benefit a great deal from… 从…… 受益匪浅
第二段:主体段(叙述事件 + 对方行为 + 给自己带来的影响,核心段落)
高分句型
1.Without your generous help, I couldn’t have achieved such progress.
如果没有你的慷慨相助,我不可能取得这样的进步。
(虚拟语气,对过去虚拟,感谢信王牌句型)
2.It was your patience and encouragement that helped me pull through the hard time.
正是你的耐心与鼓励帮我渡过难关。(强调句,加分)
3.I still remember the moment when you devoted your spare time to helping me.
我依然记得你抽出空余时间帮助我的时刻。
4.What you did has exerted a far-reaching influence on me.
你所做的一切对我产生了深远的影响。
5.Thanks to your support, I managed to overcome the trouble I was faced with.
多亏你的支持,我得以克服面临的困难。
第三段:升华段(再次致谢 + 表达回报意愿 + 美好祝愿)
高分短语
accept my sincere appreciation 接受我诚挚的谢意
repay one’s kindness 报答某人的善意
be blessed with 享有,拥有
wish sb all the best 祝愿某人万事如意
高分句型
1.Please accept my sincere appreciation once again for your selfless kindness.
请再次接受我对于你无私善意的诚挚谢意。
2.I sincerely hope that I can have an opportunity to repay your kindness one day.
我真心希望将来有机会报答你的好意。
3.May you be blessed with good health and pleasant life.
愿你身体健康,生活愉快。(书面祝福)
4.Wish you every success in your future life.
祝你今后一切顺遂。
第四段:结尾客套段(书信固定收尾)
高分短语
look forward to your early reply 期待你的早日回信
高分句型
Looking forward to your early reply.
期待你的早日回信。(标准)
Looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience.
期待在你方便之时收到你的来信。(更正式)
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
Hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to convey my heartfelt thanks to you.
I’m deeply grateful for your help with my oral English before you went home. Without your patient practice, I couldn’t have made such rapid progress. Besides, the English books you gave me have encouraged me to read more English materials. I have benefited a great deal from your kindness.
Please accept my sincere appreciation again. Wish you a pleasant journey and everything goes well.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$推荐信
选择推荐 陈述理由
假定你是李华,学校英语展需要志愿者,请写一封自荐信。要点:1. 写信目的;2 个人优势;3 期待得到机会。词数 80 左右。
一、人称要求
以第一人称 I 第三人称 he/she 介绍人物事迹、品质
或第三人称 he/she 介绍人物事迹、品质
二、时态要求(核心时态搭配,高二必用)
一般现在时(基础)
一般过去时(可选)
三、语气要求(征文投稿类书面语气)
正式温和,书面化,多用陈述句,少量感叹句收尾升华,不用疑问句。
四、结构:
首段
写作目的 + 直接点明推荐对象
主体
推荐对象特征
推荐理由
尾段
恳请采纳
通用背诵模板
Dear ________,
Hearing that you are interested in ________, I’m writing to recommend ________ to you.
There are several reasons for my recommendation. To start with, ________(理由1). Besides, ________(理由2). What makes it more attractive is that ________(理由3).
I hope it will bring you a good experience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高分句型 & 万能表达
(一)开篇介绍人物句型
The most impressive person around me is …
我身边最令人敬佩的人是……
I’d like to recommend … as the most beautiful person beside me.
我想推荐…… 作为我身边最美的人。
When it comes to .... who instantly comes to mind.
当提到...谁立即就出现在我脑海里。
(二)描写人物品质万能短语
devote oneself to … 致力于……
stick to tough work without complaint 任劳任怨,坚守艰苦工作
spare no effort to do sth 不遗余力做某事
hold on to one’s dream for decades 数十年坚守梦想
possess great perseverance and patience 拥有极强的毅力与耐心
be fully committed to traditional culture 全身心投身传统文化
(三)阐述推荐理由高分句式
What moves me most is that …
最打动我的是……
It’s her determination that makes her outstanding.
正是她的坚持让她格外闪光。
She sets a great example for us teenagers.
她为我们青少年树立了优秀榜样。
(四)结尾升华句型
I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
若你能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
I really hope my recommendation will be helpful/ of help to you.
我真心希望我的推荐能对你有所帮助。
I do hope you can take my recommendations into account.
我由衷期盼你能斟酌我的推荐。
It’s my sincere wish that my recommendation will meet your needs.
我衷心希望这份推荐符合你的需求。
(五)高级连接词(加分)
First and foremost 首先,最为重要的是
To begin with 首先
Above all 最重要的是
In the first place 首先
Besides 此外
What’s more 而且
Furthermore 此外(高级)
Moreover 再者(高分)
In addition 另外
Last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
Eventually 最后
Therefore 因此
As a result 因此
Consequently 因而
Thus 从而
However 然而
Nevertheless 尽管如此
Instead 相反
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
________(得知) volunteers are wanted for the school English show, I’m writing to ________(自荐) for the position.
I’m confident that I ________(胜任) it. To begin with, I ________(精通) English and I can communicate fluently with others. Besides, I possess strong teamwork spirit and ________(与同学相处融洽). What’s more, I have taken part in several similar activities, so I ________(积累相关经验).
If given the chance, I will ________(不遗余力) to do the work well. I would appreciate it if you could ________(考虑我的推荐). Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$高考英语
祝贺信写作指导
祝贺成功 表达祝愿
祝贺信
对对方取得成功、获奖、升学、考上大学、比赛夺冠、升职等表达热烈祝贺,同时可以表达赞美、回忆过往、表达祝愿。高频场景:祝贺获奖、考上大学、比赛取得佳绩、取得某项成就。
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tom 在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:表示祝贺;肯定他的付出与努力;表达祝愿。
注意:词数 80 左右,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
1.人称:第一人称 I(李华);描述对方用第二人称 you
2.时态
祝贺、现在感受:一般现在时
对方获奖、过去付出努力:一般过去时 / 现在完成时
表达对未来祝愿:一般将来时
3.语气:热情真诚、积极赞美;语气喜悦,不要过度客套。
4.结构:
第一段(开头) 开门见山祝贺 得知喜讯 直接表达热烈祝贺
第二段(主体) 肯定努力 回顾对方的付出 解释why他值得这份荣誉(得分重点)
第三段(拓展) 抒发感受 + 祝愿 表达为对方高兴 可以表达期待;送上未来美好祝愿
第四段(结尾) 再次祝福 再次祝贺,期待后续消息
Dear ________,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on ____________(对方取得的成就). I am extremely delighted to hear the good news.
As far as I know, you ____________(描述对方长期付出的努力). It is no wonder that you achieved such great success.
I feel really proud of you. Wish you further progress in the future. I hope ____________(可选:期待后续/期待交流).
Once again, congratulations on your achievement. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
第一段:得知喜讯,表达祝贺
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
offer my sincere congratulations to you on… 为…… 向你致以诚挚祝贺
congratulate you on your success 祝贺你的成功
be extremely delighted to hear the good news 听到好消息万分高兴
hear of your great achievement 听闻你的辉煌成就
高分句型
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on winning first prize in the speech contest.
我写信祝贺你在演讲比赛中获得一等奖。
Great news reaches me that you have won first prize in the competition, so I’m writing to convey my warm congratulations.
我收到喜讯,你赢得比赛一等奖,特此写信向你表达热烈祝贺。(同位语从句,高分句型)
第二段:肯定对方的努力(核心段落)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
devote much time and energy to… 在…… 投入大量时间精力
make constant efforts 坚持不懈努力
practise day in and day out 日复一日练习
It is no wonder that… 难怪……
spare no effort to do 不遗余力做某事
高分句型
As far as I know, you have devoted plenty of time to practising your speech day in and day out. It is no wonder that you have made such an achievement.
据我所知,你日复一日投入大量时间练习演讲,难怪你能取得这样的成绩。 Having spared no effort to polish your skills, you deserve this honor completely.
你一直不遗余力打磨能力,这份荣誉你完全当之无愧。(Having done 非谓语,高考高分)
第三段:抒发感受 + 未来祝愿
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
feel proud of you 为你感到骄傲
deserve the honor 配得上这份荣誉
wish you further progress 祝你取得更大进步
wish you greater achievements ahead 祝你未来斩获更多成就
高分句型
I feel so proud of you and sincerely hope that you will make greater progress in the days ahead.
我为你倍感骄傲,衷心希望你在未来取得更大进步。
May you achieve more glory in your future journey!
愿你在今后道路上收获更多荣光!(倒装祝愿句,书面高级)
第四段:再次祝贺,结尾
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
Once again, congratulations on… 再次祝贺……
look forward to your further good news 期待你更多好消息
高分句型
Once again, congratulations on your remarkable achievement. Looking forward to your further good news.
再次祝贺你取得非凡成就,期待你更多喜讯。
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
Dear Tom,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on winning first prize in the English speech contest. I am extremely delighted to hear the good news.
As far as I know, you have devoted much time to practising your speeches day in and day out. Having spared no effort to polish your skills, you totally deserve this honor. It is no wonder that you achieved such great success.
I feel really proud of you. Wish you further progress in the future.
Once again, congratulations on your remarkable achievement. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$征文投稿
抓住时机,直抒胸臆
征文投稿
定义:给英文报刊、校园杂志栏目投稿,围绕指定主题发表看法、讲述个人经历、抒发感悟。
高考高频场景:向校英文报、英文杂志投稿;主题:成长、感恩、运动、阅读、传统文化、克服困难、劳动、时间管理。
假定你是李华,校英文报正在开展主题为“Gratitude(感恩)”的征文活动,请你投稿。内容包括:
1. 投稿意图;
2. 一次让你心怀感恩的经历;
3. 你的感悟。
注意:
4. 词数 80‑100;
5. 行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
时态:一般现在时+一般过去时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
语气:客观委婉,抒发感悟
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 表明投稿意图 自我介绍 + 写作背景(说明得知征文活动) + 表明投稿,点明征文主题
第二段 叙述经历 + 结合主题谈感受 简述个人小故事 / 经历;结合主题谈体会;叙事简洁,不要长篇讲故事
第三段 感悟升华 + 投稿结束语 升华主题,表达思考;表明希望稿件被采纳;礼貌结束语
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a senior high student. Knowing that your newspaper is calling for contributions on _______征文主题---themed contest, I’m writing to submit my article for it.
Once I ________________(简述个人经历,过去时). It was this experience that made me realize the true meaning of ________主题. From my point of view, ________________(个人感受).
I hope my article will be accepted. I would appreciate it if you could consider my contribution.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
1.开头段
高分短语
1. hold a …‑themed essay contest 举办…… 主题征文比赛
2. submit one’s article for the contest 投稿参赛
3. contribute an article to your newspaper 向贵报投稿
4. learn about /knowing that 得知
5. call for contributions 征集稿件
高分句子
Knowing that your newspaper is holding a gratitude‑themed essay contest, I’m writing to submit my article for it.
得知贵报正在举办感恩主题征文比赛,我写信投稿参赛。
I’m Li Hua. Having learned your newspaper is calling for contributions on gratitude, I’m writing to contribute my article.
我是李华,了解到贵报正在征集感恩主题稿件,特此投稿。
2.主体段:高分短语 + 逻辑词 + 叙事 + 感悟句型
高分短语(叙事)
1. go through an experience 经历一段往事
2. turn to sb for help 向某人求助
3. offer me a helping hand 向我伸出援手
4. with one’s help 在某人帮助下
5. get through difficulties 渡过困境
逻辑衔接词
Thanks to;As a result;From then on;What impresses me most is that…
高分短语(感悟抒情,直抒胸臆)
1. realize the true meaning of… 意识到……的真正意义
2. strike me that… 让我深深意识到……
3. leave a deep impression on me 给我留下深刻印象
4. be of great significance 意义重大
叙事句型(写个人经历,二选一)
1. Once I met with great difficulty in my study. Luckily, my teacher offered me a helping hand.曾经我在学习上遇到很大困难,幸运的是老师向我伸出援手。
2. What impresses me most is an experience last term, when I was in trouble.给我印象最深的是上学期的一段经历,当时我身处困境。
感悟升华高分句型(征文核心,直抒胸臆)
1. It was this experience that made me realize the true value of gratitude.(强调句高分)正是这次经历,让我懂得感恩的真正价值。
2. From my perspective, gratitude is not only a feeling but also an attitude towards life.在我看来,感恩不只是一种情感,更是一种生活态度。
3. It strikes me that we should always be thankful for the kindness around us.我深深意识到我们应当对身边善意心怀感激。
3.结尾段:高分短语 + 结尾句型(升华 + 投稿请求)
高分短语
1. accept one’s article 采纳稿件
2. consider one’s contribution 考虑我的投稿
3. meet your requirements 符合你们的要求
4. would appreciate it if … 如果…… 将不胜感激
高分句子
I hope my article will be accepted. I would appreciate it if you could consider my contribution.希望我的稿件能够被采纳。如您能考虑我的投稿,我将不胜感激。
I sincerely hope my writing can meet your requirements. I am looking forward to your reply. 我真诚希望我的稿件能够符合要求,期待您的回复。
参考范文
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a senior high student. Knowing that your newspaper is calling for contributions on the theme of Gratitude, I’m writing to submit my article for it.
Once I fell behind in my English study and almost gave up. My English teacher spared her spare time to help me patiently. It was this experience that made me realize the true meaning of gratitude. From my point of view, gratitude means treasuring others’ kindness and passing warmth on to people around us.
I hope my article will be accepted. I would appreciate it if you could consider my contribution.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$倡议书
发现问题,呼吁行动
假定你是校英语社团主席李华,近期发现校园内存在诸多不文明现象(浪费粮食、随手乱扔垃圾、课间喧哗、沉迷手机等),严重影响校园风貌和学习氛围。请你以学生会名义,面向全校学生写一封英文倡议书。
内容要求:
1. 点明现状,指出校园现存不良问题;
2. 简要分析问题带来的负面影响与危害;
3. 提出具体整改倡议,呼吁全体同学积极行动、共同改善。
写作规范:词数80左右;可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
试题题干核心要求
时态:一般现在时+一般过去时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
语气:客观严谨,真诚呼吁
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 表明写作意图 自我介绍 + 写作背景(说明发现问题) + 表明倡议,点明主题
第二段 主体详述
阐述问题+分析危害+具体倡议+可行举措 并使用合适的过渡词
第三段 感悟升华 结尾呼吁+展望
Dear _______,
I’m Li Hua, the president of our School Union. Recently, having noticed that_________(问题), which greatly damages our campus image, we are launching this initiative to call on all of us to make a change.
To begin with, some students ________(列举问题), so that it has a terrible influence on_______(负面影响). In addition, other students_______(列举问题), which leads to_______(负面影响). Most importantly, in order to improve the situation, it would be better to ________(措施 1). Or, why not do______(措施 2)
Small actions can make a big difference. Let’s take action from now on and develop good civilized habits. Looking forward to your change.
The Student Union
Li Hua
万能通用模板
1.开头段
高分短语
recently observed 近期发现
various uncivilized behaviors 各类不文明行为
cast a negative influence on 对……造成负面影响
ruin the campus atmosphere 破坏校园氛围
launch an initiative 发起倡议
高分句子
Recently, having noticed that various uncivilized behaviors were frequently seen on our campus, which greatly damages our campus image and disturbs the pleasant learning atmosphere.
近期,校园内频繁出现各类不文明行为,严重损害校园形象、扰乱良好的学习氛围。
- To build a more harmonious and civilized campus, the Student Union is launching this initiative to call on all students to correct bad behaviors.
为打造更和谐、文明的校园,学生会特此发起倡议,号召全体同学改正不良行为。
2.主体段:逻辑词 + 列举问题+分析危害+具体整改倡议
高分短语(列举问题)
- litter rubbish randomly 随手乱扔垃圾
- make loud noise during breaks 课间大声喧哗
- be addicted to mobile phones 沉迷手机
- pollute the campus environment 污染校园环境
- interfere with others’ study 干扰他人学习
- affect personal self-improvement 影响个人自我提升
高分短语(具体整改倡议)
- cherish every grain of food 珍惜每一粒粮食
- keep the campus clean and tidy 保持校园干净整洁
- obey campus discipline 遵守校园纪律
- put mobile phones aside 放下手机
- devote ourselves to study 潜心学习
- take immediate action 立即采取行动
万能句(列举问题)
Some students tend to waste food in the canteen and litter rubbish everywhere, making our campus messy and unattractive.部分同学在食堂浪费粮食、随处乱扔垃圾,让校园变得脏乱不堪。
Additionally, loud noises during breaks disturb other students’ rest and study, while being addicted to mobile phones seriously affects our academic performance and daily self-discipline.此外,课间喧哗干扰他人休息与学习,而沉迷手机会严重影响学业成绩和日常自律。
万能句(具体整改倡议)
To solve these problems, we sincerely put forward the following suggestions.为解决以上问题,我们郑重提出以下倡议。
First, we should cherish food and refuse to waste any grain. Second, we are supposed to keep the campus clean by taking away our rubbish.第一,我们应珍惜粮食、杜绝浪费;第二,自觉带走垃圾,保持校园整洁。
Moreover, we need to keep quiet during breaks and stay away from excessive phone use to focus on our study and campus life.
同时,课间保持安静,杜绝过度使用手机,专注学习和校园生活。
3.结尾段:高分短语 + 结尾句型(升华 + 投稿请求)
高分短语
1. accept one’s article 采纳稿件
- make joint efforts 共同努力
- develop good habits 养成良好习惯
- contribute to a better campus 为美好校园贡献力量
- take responsibility for... 为……承担责任
高分句子
Small actions can make a big difference. Let’s take action from now on and develop good civilized habits.
微小行动,成就巨变。让我们从此刻做起,养成文明好习惯。
Let’s make joint efforts to create a clean, quiet and positive campus for everyone.
让我们携手努力,共建干净、安静、积极的美好校园。
参考范文
Dear fellow students,
I’m Li Hua, the president of our School Union. Recently, having noticed that many uncivilized behaviors exist on campus, which greatly damages our campus image, we are launching this initiative to call on all of us to make a change.
To begin with, some students waste food and throw rubbish everywhere, so that it has a terrible influence on our campus environment. In addition, other students make loud noises during breaks and are addicted to mobile phones, which leads to a bad learning atmosphere. Most importantly, in order to improve the situation, it would be better to save food and keep the campus clean. Or, why not keep quiet at breaks and use mobile phones properly?
Small actions can make a big difference. Let’s take action from now on and develop good civilized habits. Looking forward to your change.
The Student Union
Li Hua
$活动报道
所见所闻,客观陈述
定义
活动报道(新闻报道 Activity News Report)
属于高考应用文,用于客观记述已经举办完的某项活动,记录活动时间、地点、参与人员、活动内容(所见所闻),文末给出客观简要评价。
特点:事实为主,主观抒情少;叙事客观,条理清晰。
假定你是校英文报记者,请写一篇活动报道,报道你校举办的中国传统文化节(Chinese Culture Festival)。
内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点、参与对象;
2. 活动主要内容(所见所闻,如书法、剪纸、传统乐器表演等);
3. 活动意义。
注意:
4. 词数 80 词左右;
5. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
人称
第三人称为主(记者客观报道);少量可用第一人称(I 作为记者目睹现场,描述所见)
时态
活动发生的过程:一般过去时(核心!活动已经结束)
活动的意义、影响:一般现在时
易错提醒:不要通篇现在时!
语气
客观、正式、简洁,克制抒情,重在陈述事实,不用口语化感叹。
结构(三段式固定结构)
第一段:导语(概括,点明时间、地点、人物 + 活动名称,新闻总起)
第二段:主体段(所见所闻,活动具体内容,细节描写)
第三段:结尾(客观评价、活动意义、带来的影响)
通用背诵模板
A ________(活动名称) was held in our school on ________(时间). A large number of ________(人群) took part in it. As a reporter of our school English newspaper, I witnessed the whole event.
A variety of activities were organized. Some participants ________;others ________. What impressed me most was that ________. Everyone present was absorbed in the activity.
The activity turned out to be a great success. It not only ________ but also ________. Undoubtedly, it offered a precious chance for us to ________.
第一段(导语)
高分短语
1. be held 举办
2. take place 举行(无被动)
3. a large number of /a host of 许多
4. witness the event 见证这场活动
5. attract one’s attention 吸引某人目光
升级句式(替换简单句)
1. 基础:Our school held ...
升级:A ... activity was held in our school.(被动,新闻常用)
2. 基础:Many students joined in it.
升级:The activity drew the participation of dozens of students.
第二段(主体:所见所闻,核心得分段)
高分短语
1. a variety of /diverse kinds of 各种各样的
2. take an active part in 积极参与
3. be absorbed in 沉浸于
4. display /show their talents 展示才艺
5. put on performances 表演节目
6. get involved in 参与
7. firsthand experience 亲身见闻
升级句式
1. 基础:Some did ... and others did ...
升级:Some were occupied with ... while others devoted themselves to ...
2. 基础:I was most impressed by ...
升级:What impressed me most was that ...(名词性从句,高分)
3. 分词加分句:Participants sitting there enjoyed amazing performances.
第三段(结尾,客观评价 + 意义)
高分短语
turn out to be a great success 结果非常成功
2. broaden one’s horizons 拓宽视野
3. enrich one’s life 丰富生活
4. raise one’s awareness of 提升…… 意识
5. provide a precious opportunity for sb. 给某人提供宝贵机会
升级句式
not only...but also... 不但…… 而且……(必背)
2. Undoubtedly, ... 毫无疑问,……
3. It is the activity that helps us…(强调句,拔高)
参考范文
A Report on Chinese Culture Festival
A Chinese Culture Festival was held in our school last Friday. A host of students and teachers took part in it. As a reporter of our school English newspaper, I witnessed the whole event.
A variety of activities were organized. Some participants practiced Chinese calligraphy and paper-cutting, while others put on traditional musical performances. What impressed me most was the wonderful folk dance show. Everyone present was absorbed in the unique charm of traditional culture.
The activity turned out to be a great success. It not only enriched our school life but also helped us appreciate traditional Chinese culture. Undoubtedly, it offered a precious chance for us to get close to our cultural roots.
$高考英语
道歉信写作指导
真诚致歉 前嫌尽释
道歉信
道歉信:因爽约、损坏物品、做错事、未能按时完成任务等向对方表达歉意,解释原因,提出补救方案,希望得到对方谅解。高频场景:约会迟到、未能赴约、弄坏物品、延期交稿、活动失约。
假定你是李华,和外教 Mr. Smith 约好周六下午去参观中国剪纸展,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:表达歉意;说明不能赴约的原因;提出补救方案。
注意:词数 80 左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。。
试题题干核心要求
1.人称:第一人称 I
2.时态
道歉、现在的感受:一般现在时
描述已经发生的事情(失约、变故):一般过去时 / 现在完成时
提出补救、后续安排:一般将来时
3.语气:诚恳、礼貌,态度真挚;不要找借口推脱,主动提出弥补。
4.结构:
第一段(开头) 直接道歉 表明身份,开门见山,为某事真诚道歉
第二段(主体) 解释原因 客观说明事情缘由,不找过多借口(2 个原因足够)
第三段(主体) 补救措施 主动给出弥补方案,体现诚意(核心得分点)
第四段(结尾) 再次致歉 + 期盼谅解 恳请对方接受道歉,期待回复
Dear ________,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to make a sincere apology to you, for I am unable to ____________(做错/未能做到的事).
The reason is that I was occupied with(原因一)…, making me neglect our appointment. Besides, what accounted for my mistake was that I was caught up in ____________(原因二), leaving me no time to notify you beforehand.That is why I can’t keep my original promise.
To make up for it, I suggest that ____________(补救方案). Would it be convenient for you if we ____________(备选方案)?
Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
第一段:开门见山,表达道歉
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
make a sincere apology to you 向你真诚道歉
owe you an apology 该向你道歉
say sorry to you for… 因…… 向你致歉
be unable to keep my promise 无法信守承诺
高分句型
I am writing to make a sincere apology to you, for I can’t keep our appointment.我写信向你真诚道歉,因为我不能赴约。
I’m writing to owe you an apology for failing to turn up at the appointment.我写信向你致歉,我没能按时赴约。(failing to do非谓语高级表达)
第二段:客观解释原因
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
The reason is that… 原因是……
due to /because of 由于
unexpected emergency 突发紧急情况
have no choice but to do 别无选择不得不做
be occupied with 忙于……
高分句型
1.The reason is that I have to attend an important family emergency, which I can’t avoid.原因是我不得不处理一件无法回避的家庭急事。(which 定语从句)
2.Occupied with an unexpected urgent task, I have no choice but to break our appointment.忙于一件突发紧急任务,我别无选择只能取消约定。(Occupied with过去分词作状语,高考高分)
第三段:补救措施(道歉信最重要得分段)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
make up for it 弥补这件事
compensate for the loss 弥补损失
Would it be convenient for you… 你是否方便……
put off the appointment 推迟约会
reschedule our meeting 重新安排会面
高分句型
To make up for it, I suggest that we reschedule our appointment.
为了弥补,我建议我们重新安排约定。(suggest that …(should) do 虚拟语气) Would it be convenient for you if we meet this Sunday instead?
如果我们改到本周日见面,对你方便吗?
第四段:再次道歉,恳请谅解,期待回复
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
for any inconvenience caused 对于造成的不便
accept my apology 接受我的道歉
高分句型
Once again, I’m terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
对于造成的种种不便,我再次深表歉意。
I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. Looking forward to your reply.
如果你能接受我的道歉,我将不胜感激,期待你的回复。(必背结尾句)
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua. I’m writing to make a sincere apology to you, for I am unable to keep our appointment to visit the Chinese paper‑cutting exhibition this Saturday afternoon.
The reason is that I have to look after my sick grandma at home, which is an unexpected emergency. Much to my regret, I failed to arrive on time, because I suddenly fell ill last night and have to stay in bed for a rest.
To make up for it, would it be convenient for you if we go there next Saturday? Or I can bring some paper‑cutting works to your office.
Once again, I’m terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$高考英语
咨询信写作指导
咨询信
定义:向对方咨询获取相关信息的书信邮件
高考高频场景:夏令营、课程、比赛、志愿活动咨询
假定你是李华,看到国外某机构将举办暑期线上中国文化夏令营,你打算参加此活动,请写一封邮件咨询相关信息,内容包括:
1. 夏令营具体时间与课程内容;
2. 报名条件与费用;
3. 是否有需要特别注意的事项。
注意:词数 80 左右;可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
语气:礼貌期待
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 开篇点题 自我介绍 + 写作背景(说明信息来源) + 点明写信咨询目的
第二段 主体详述 展开核心细节:分点委婉提出 2-3 个咨询问题,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下
第三段 收尾升华 表达感谢 + 满怀期待等待回复
Dear ______,
I am Li Hua, a senior high student. Knowing that(+句子)/ Having learned about (+短语)______(写作背景) from _______(某时某地), I’m writing to inquire about some detailed information concerning ______(询问主题).
To begin with, could you please tell me ______(询问内容)? Besides, I wonder if you could inform me of_____(询问内容). In addition, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there are any special requirements I should pay attention to?
I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your time and kindness. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
1.开篇段(自我介绍+写作背景+咨询目的)高分句
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
inquire about/into 咨询;
seek further details about寻求...的更多信息
concerning /regarding 关于;
having learned about/knowing that… 获悉……
高分句型
1. I am writing to inquire about some detailed information concerning an online Chinese culture summer camp from your website
我写信咨询关于…… 的详细信息。
2. Having learned about some detailed information regarding an online Chinese culture summer camp from your website/Knowing that there is an online Chinese culture summer camp from your website, I’m eager to get further relevant information.
从网站获悉……,我渴望获取更多相关信息
2.主体段(委婉提问咨询相关内容)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
逻辑连接词:
To begin with/First of all 首先;
Besides / Additionally /in addition/ What’s more/ Moreover/Apart from that/ Except from此外
In the end/ Last but not least最后
高分委婉问句:
1. Could you please tell me+陈述句 …? 您能否告诉我……?
2. I’m really concerned about....., I wonder if you could inform me of +短语… 我想知道您能否告知我……
3. Would you be so kind as to tell me +陈述句…? 麻烦您可否告知我……?
4. What I am eager to know is that+陈述句....我急切地想知道的是....
3. 结尾段(感谢 + 满含期待)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
短语:at your earliest convenience 在您方便之时尽早
高分句:
1. I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
如您方便尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
2. Looking forward to receiving your reply. 期待收到您的回信。
⚠️重点提醒:look forward to receiving(to 是介词,后面接 doing)
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a senior high student. Having learned about the online‑summer Chinese‑culture camp from your website, I’m writing to inquire about some detailed information concerning it.
To begin with, could you please tell me its exact time and main courses? Besides, I wonder if you could inform me of its entry requirements and fees. In addition, would you be so kind as to tell me anything special I should notice?
I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your kindness. Looking forward to receiving your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
$投诉信
反映问题,期待答复
定义
就商品、服务、设施等存在的问题向对方客观反映情况,陈述事实,提出合理解决诉求,期待对方处理并回复。
高考高频场景
网购商品质量问题、图书馆 / 食堂设施服务、酒店服务、校外机构服务等,写给商店经理、学校负责人、服务机构。。
假定你是李华,上周你在网上商店购买了一个英文电子词典,收到货后发现存在一些问题。请给商店经理写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 反映产品存在的问题;
2. 说明对你造成的影响;
3. 提出你的诉求,期待解决并回复。
注意:
4. 词数 80 左右;
5. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
1. 人称:第一人称 I(Li Hua)
2. 时态:一般现在时为主,描述发生过的问题用一般过去时
3. 语气原则:客观理性、就事论事,陈述事实,不情绪化谩骂;写清:问题、带来的影响、你的诉求
❌禁止:激烈指责、辱骂句子:You are terrible / Your service is awful
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 开篇点题 自我介绍,交代背景(何时发生什么事),开门见山说明写信是为反映 / 投诉问题,
第二段 主体详述 客观描述具体问题;说明该问题给自己带来哪些不便、困扰;逻辑清晰,实事求是,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下
第三段 收尾升华 提出合理可行的解决要求(退款、换货、维修等);表达期待处理,盼望回复;礼貌结束语
通用背诵模板
Dear ______,
I'm Li Hua, consumer of our store. Hope this letter finds you well. Having bought ________(产品), I’m writing to make a complaint about its unsatisfactory quality.
To begin with, much to my disappointment, it doesn’t function as expected, so that________(影响). What’s worse/ Unfortunately, there is something wrong with______(带来的不便), which prevents me from________(影响). As a result, it causes great inconvenience to my daily life.
I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. I hope to ________(诉求:换货/退款). Looking forward to your timely reply and proper solution.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段:自我介绍 + 表明意图(开篇句)
1.高分短语
1. complain about 投诉;抱怨
2. make a complaint about 就…… 进行投诉
3. purchase /buy sth from… 从…… 购买某物
4. to one’s disappointment 令某人失望的是
5. on account of 由于
6. inform sb of sth 告知某人某事
2.高分升级句式
Having bought an English e‑dictionary in your store last week, I’m writing to make a complaint about its unsatisfactory quality.
上周在贵店购买了一台英文电子词典,我写信就其不尽如人意的质量进行投诉。
I’m Li Hua, who bought an English e‑dictionary from your shop last week. However, there are something wrong with it, so I’m writing to tell you about the problem.
我是李华,上周在贵店买了一台英文电子词典。但是它出了问题,因此写信向您反映
2.主体段:高分短语 + 逻辑词 + 描述问题 & 影响句型,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下)
1. work improperly /don’t function well 运转不正常
2. out of order 出故障
3. much to one’s annoyance 令某人十分烦恼
4. bring sb much trouble /inconvenience 给某人带来麻烦、不便
5. fail to do sth 无法做某事
6. what’s worse /worse still 更糟糕的是
描述客观问题句型
1. Much to my disappointment, it doesn’t function as expected.令我非常失望,它无法像预期那样正常工作。
2. Unfortunately, there is something wrong with…, which prevents me from…不幸的是…… 出故障,这使我无法……
3. To my regret, some parts of it fail to work.令我遗憾的是,它有些部件无法使用。说明邀请对方的理由
写 “造成影响、带来不便” 加分句型
1. As a consequence, it causes great inconvenience to my daily study.因此,它给我的日常学习带来很大不便。
2. This problem has greatly affected my normal use of it.这个问题极大影响了我的正常使用。
3.结尾段:高分短语 + 多套备选结尾句型(提诉求 + 期待答复
1. look into the matter 调查此事
2. give a full explanation 给出完整解释
3. a full refund 全额退款
4. replace it with a new one 更换一个新的
5. proper solution 妥善的解决方案
6. at one’s earliest convenience 在某人方便时尽早描述客观问题句型
2.高分升级句式
版本 1
I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. I hope to get it replaced. Looking forward to your timely reply and proper solution.
如果您能尽快调查此事我将不胜感激。我希望可以换货。期待您及时回复与妥善处理。
版本 2(温和委婉版,服务设施投诉)
I sincerely hope that you will take my complaint seriously. I am expecting your satisfactory solution at your earliest convenience.
我真诚希望您认真对待我的投诉,期待在您方便时得到令人满意的处理方案。
参考范文
Dear Manager,
I'm Li Hua, consumer of your store. Hope this letter finds you well. Having bought an English electronic dictionary online last week, I’m writing to make a complaint about its unsatisfactory quality.
To begin with, much to my disappointment, it doesn’t function as expected, so that I can’t look up new words normally. Unfortunately, there is something wrong with its screen, which prevents me from using it for my English study. As a result, it causes great inconvenience to my daily life.
I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. I hope to get a replacement. Looking forward to your timely reply and proper solution.
Yours,
Li Hua
$高考英语
建议信写作指导
建议信
定义:针对现存问题,客观分析现状,提出合理可行的改进建议;
高考高频场景:可写给个人、老师或学校机构
假定你是李华,你发现学校英文广播站存在收听率不高的问题,请给广播站负责人写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 简述现状,简单分析存在的问题;
2. 提出 2‑3 条改进建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:词数 80 左右,行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称、第二人称
语气:客观委婉,重在献计献策
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 开篇点题 自我介绍 + 写作背景(说明现存问题) + 点写信目的,简单分析原因
第二段 主体详述 展开核心细节:分点写建议,每条建议补充好处 / 预期效果,建议要具体可行,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下
第三段 收尾升华 表达希望对方考虑建议+美好祝愿 + 满怀期待等待回复
Dear ______,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our school. Having noticed/Knowing that _____(写作背景), I’m writing to put forward some constructive suggestions/______(写作目的). As far as I can see, the problem mainly results from ________(问题原因).
To begin with, it would be a good idea to _____(具体建议), which can ______(益处/结果). Additionally, you might as well _____(具体建议), so that _____(益处/结果). Most importantly, it is highly recommended that ________(具体建议+结果).
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Wish your radio station a better future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
1.开篇段(自我介绍+写作背景+写作目的)高分句
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
put forward constructive suggestions 提出建设性建议;
result from/arise from 由…… 造成;
as far as I can see 在我看来
come up with practical tips 提出实用的建议
from my point of view /from my perspective 在我看来
高分句型
1. Seeing/Noticing/Knowing/Having noticed that our school English radio station has low listenership, I’m writing to put forward some constructive suggestions.
注意到学校英文广播站存在收听率不高的问题,我写信提出一些建设性建议
2.I have noticed that there exists a problem with low listenership in our school English radio, so I’m writing to offer some advice.
我注意到…… 存在一个问题,因此我写信提供一些建议。
3.Observing the present situation, I’m writing to come up with several practical tips concerning this problem.
留意到现状,我写信就该问题提出几条实用建议。
2.主体段(分点写建议,每条建议补充好处 / 预期效果,建议要具体可行,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下)
用于写 “建议带来好处” 的高分短语(跟在 which /so that 后面)
arouse students’ interest 激发学生兴趣
draw more students’ attention 吸引更多学生的关注
meet students’ real needs 满足学生真实需求
create a better atmosphere 营造更好的氛围
bring about positive effects 带来积极效果
提建议的高分句子
1:It would be a good idea to do … 做…… 会是个好主意
2:It makes sense to do … 做…… 是合乎情理的
3:You might as well do … 你不妨做……
4(虚拟语气高分):It is highly recommended that (should) do … 强烈建议……
5(委婉反问):Why not do …? 何不……?
6(建议+好处):I suggest doing …, which is bound to bring about better results.
我建议做……,这定会带来更好的效果
3.结尾段高分句
高分短语
1. take … into consideration /take…into account 考虑……
2. be of great help /be of some value 有帮助、有价值
3. appreciate your time and consideration 感谢你的时间与考量
4. favorable consideration 善意考量提建议的高分句子
高分句子
1.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
2.I would be grateful if my advice could be taken into account.
如果我的建议能够得到考量,我将十分感激。
3.I hope my suggestions will be of some value to you.
希望我的建议对你有一定价值。
祝愿句
1.Wish your radio station a brighter future. 祝愿广播站拥有更加光明的未来。
2.May it enjoy greater popularity among students. 愿它在学生当中更受欢迎。
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from our school. Having noticed that our school English radio station has low listenership, I’m writing to put forward some constructive suggestions. As far as I can see, the problem mainly results from limited program types.
To begin with, it would be a good idea to add more student‑related topics, which can attract more listeners. Additionally, you might as well broadcast programs in proper time so that more students can tune in. Most importantly, it is highly recommended that students be invited to take part in program production.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Wish our radio station a better future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$申请信
毛遂自荐,心诚则成
写信人向组织 / 个人申请职位、志愿者、参赛机会等,力求展现个人长处,争取机会
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
写信目的;
个人优势;
能做的事情。
词数 80 左右。
人称:第一人称 I(李华)
时态:一般现在时为主;
语气:诚恳、礼貌、正式客气,不浮夸,用词得体。
基本结构
第一段(开头) 写信目的 自我介绍 + 得知招募信息 + 表明写信申请该机会
第二段(主体 1) 个人优势 性格、能力、语言、学习经历、特长、相关经验
第三段(主体 2) 可做的事情 如果得到机会,自己能够承担哪些具体工作
第四段(结尾) 期盼回复 表达渴望获得机会,恳请对方考虑申请,期待回复
通用模板
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Knowing that ____________________(得知招募信息), I am writing to apply to be ____________(申请的身份).
I’m confident that I’m quite fit for it. To begin with, ________________(优势1). Besides, ________________(优势2). What’s more, ________________(优势3).
If I am lucky enough to get the opportunity, I can ____________________(可以做的具体事情).
I sincerely hope to be granted this valuable opportunity. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第一段:写信目的(自我介绍 + 表明申请)
高分短语
apply to be … 申请成为
……win the chance 争取机会
learn that /know that 得知……
高分句型
Knowing that some volunteers are wanted, I am writing to win the chance.得知需要志愿者,我写信来争取这次机会。(非谓语开头,高分)
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student in London now. Having learned that …, I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.我是李华,一名现在在伦敦的中国学生。得知……,我写信申请成为一名志愿者。(Having done 非谓语,高考高频高分句式)
第二段:表达个人优势(性格、能力、经历)
高分短语
have a good command of English 精通英语
be quite fit for it 非常适合这份工作
teamwork spirit 团队精神
get on well with other people 和别人相处融洽
communicate with others 和他人交流
高分句型
I’m confident that I’m quite fit for it. At first, I have been learning English for 10 years, so I have a good command of English.我很自信我非常适合。首先,我学英语 10 年,精通英语。(现在完成时讲经历)
I have the following advantages. Firstly, I love to communicate with other people. Secondly, …我有如下优势。首先,我善于与人交流;其次……I have teamwork spirit and can get on well with other people.我具备团队精神,善于和他人相处。
第三段:能做的事情(得到机会之后可以完成的工作)
高分短语
be responsible for… 负责……
introduce Chinese paintings to visitors 向游客介绍中国画
offer help to visitors 给游客提供帮助
devote my energy to… 把精力投入到……
高分句型
If I am lucky enough to get the opportunity, I can offer help for visitors and introduce Chinese paintings to them.如果有幸得到机会,我可以给游客提供帮助,向他们介绍中国画。(条件状语从句)
Should I be accepted, I will spare no effort to do the work well.倘若我被录用,我会不遗余力做好工作。(倒装高级句型,可选)
第四段:恳请考虑申请 + 期待回复
高分短语
be granted this valuable opportunity 获得这次宝贵机会consider my application 考虑我的申请
would appreciate it if … 如果…… 我将不胜感激
look forward to your reply 期待你的回复
高分句型
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer. Please give me a chance.我认为我有资格做志愿者,请给我一次机会。
I sincerely hope to be granted this valuable opportunity. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.我真诚希望获得这次宝贵机会。如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。(申请信必背结尾句)
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London. Having learned that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held here, I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer.
I’m confident I’m fit for the job. For one thing, I have a good command of English. For another, I know much about Chinese paintings and I am good at communicating with others.
If I get the chance, I can introduce Chinese paintings to visitors and offer them necessary help.
I sincerely hope to be granted this valuable opportunity. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
$高考英语
求助信写作指导
阐述困境 委婉请求
求助信
求助信:写信人向老师、学校、朋友或相关机构寻求帮助,解决学习、生活或工作中遇到的困难。高频场景:请求老师指导学习方法、请求学校解决宿舍问题、请求朋友帮忙翻译文件、请求组织提供活动信息等。
假定你是李华,在学习英语写作方面遇到了困难。请给你的外教 Mr. Brown 写一封邮件,内容包括:说明你的困境;请求他提供具体帮助;表达感谢。
注意:词数 80 左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
1.人称:第一人称 I(李华);谈及对方用第二人称 you
2.时态 描述当前困境、请求帮助:一般现在时
回顾过去的努力或困难:一般过去时 / 现在完成时
描述未来期望:一般将来时
3.语气:诚恳、礼貌、谦逊;表达出自己已经尽力但仍需帮助的态度。
4.结构:
第一段(开头) 点明目的 自我介绍,直接说明写信目的 —— 寻求帮助
第二段(主体) 描述困境 详细说明遇到的具体困难,体现求助的必要性
第三段(主体) 具体请求 明确说明需要对方提供什么样的帮助(核心得分点)
第四段(结尾) 表达感谢 真诚感谢对方的时间和帮助,期待回复
Dear ________,
I am Li Hua, a student of ________. I am writing to ask for your help with ____________(遇到的困难).
I have been facing some difficulties. For one thing, ____________(困难一). For another, ____________(困难二). As a result, ____________(造成的后果).
I would be grateful if you could ____________(具体请求1). Besides, would you mind ____________(具体请求2)?
Thank you for your time and patience. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
第一段:开门见山,说明求助目的
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
ask for your help with… 在…… 方面寻求你的帮助
turn to you for help 向你求助
seek your advice 寻求你的建议
be in need of your assistance 需要你的帮助
高分句型
I am writing to ask for your help with my English writing, which has been troubling me for a long time.
我写信是想在英语写作方面寻求你的帮助,这个问题已经困扰我很久了。(which 定语从句)
Faced with great difficulty in English writing, I am writing to turn to you for help.
面对英语写作的巨大困难,我写信向你求助。(过去分词作状语,高分)
第二段:详细描述困境
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
face difficulties in… 在…… 方面遇到困难
have trouble (in) doing sth 做某事有困难
find it hard to do sth 发现做某事很难
make little progress 进步甚微
be confused about… 对…… 感到困惑
高分句型
I have been practicing writing for a long time, but I still find it hard to express my ideas clearly and correctly.我已经练习写作很长时间了,但仍然发现很难清晰准确地表达我的想法。(find it adj. to do)
What troubles me most is that I often make grammar mistakes and don’t know how to organize my articles logically.最困扰我的是我经常犯语法错误,并且不知道如何逻辑地组织文章。(What 引导的主语从句) )
第三段:具体请求帮助
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
give me some advice on… 给我一些关于…… 的建议
recommend some effective methods 推荐一些有效的方法
correct my mistakes 纠正我的错误
provide some useful materials 提供一些有用的材料
高分句型
I would be grateful if you could give me some specific advice on how to improve my writing skills.如果你能就如何提高我的写作技巧给我一些具体建议,我将不胜感激。(if 条件句)
Would you mind recommending some books or articles that can help me learn good writing techniques?你介意推荐一些能帮助我学习好的写作技巧的书籍或文章吗?(Would you mind doing…)
第四段:表达感谢,期待回复
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
thank you for your time and patience 感谢你的时间和耐心
I would appreciate it if… 如果…… 我将不胜感激
look forward to your reply 期待你的回复
高分句型
Thank you for your time and patience. I would appreciate it if you could give me some valuable advice.感谢你的时间和耐心。如果你能给我一些宝贵的建议,我将不胜感激。
I am looking forward to your reply and I hope to benefit greatly from your guidance.我期待你的回复,并希望能从你的指导中获益匪浅。
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, one of your students. I am writing to ask for your help with my English writing, which has been troubling me for a long time.
I have been practicing writing, but I still make many grammar mistakes and find it hard to organize my ideas logically. As a result, I have made little progress.
I would be grateful if you could give me some specific advice on how to improve. Besides, would you mind recommending some effective writing methods or materials?
Thank you for your time and patience. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
$发言稿/演讲稿/欢迎辞
激情洋溢、观点鲜明
定义
属于口头书面文体,面向听众当众讲话;
演讲稿:发表观点、发出呼吁;
欢迎辞:欢迎来宾,介绍活动
高考高频场景
1. 演讲稿:英语比赛、国旗下讲话、倡议读书、倡议运动、传统文化主题
2. 欢迎辞:欢迎外国交换生、欢迎外教来访、欢迎参观校园
假定你是李华,学校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以 “Reading Matters(阅读很重要)” 为题发表简短演讲。内容包括:
1. 问候,点明演讲主题;
2. 阅读的好处;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:词数 80‑100;开头已经给出:Good morning, everyone!
试题题干核心要求
1. 人称:第一人称 we/I;面向听众用 you
2. 时态:一般现在时为主,少量将来时
3. ✅ 语气原则:激情洋溢、观点鲜明,口语化但正式,有感染力;开头问候,结尾致谢 / 呼吁祝福
❌禁止长难句堆砌、书面化晦涩表达;不要书信落款 Yours sincerely!
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 开篇点题 向听众问好;自我介绍(按需);直接点明本次讲话主题 / 表达欢迎
第二段 主体详述 演讲稿:分点阐述理由、好处,亮出鲜明观点;
欢迎辞:介绍活动、校园、安排;可使用衔接词
第三段 收尾升华 演讲稿:发出倡议、呼吁大家行动;
欢迎辞:表达期待、美好祝愿;最后固定致谢:Thank you for listening!
标题
Good morning, everyone! It’s my great honor to give/deliver a short speech and share my opinions on the importance of _______(演讲主题)
To begin with, ______(演讲主题) plays an important role in our life. For one thing, it is a golden opportunity for sb. to do________(好处1). For another, not only can the activity do ________(好处2), but also it can ______(好处3). As a result, it is reading that opens our mind to the whole world.
Let’s take action from now on. Let’s form a good habit of reading every day. Thank you for listening!
万能通用模板
1.演讲稿开头(问候 + 引入主题)
高分短语
1. It’s one’s great honor to do sth 做某事是某人莫大的荣幸
2. give a speech /deliver a speech 发表演讲
3. Today my topic is… 今天我的主题是……
4. stand here to share my views on… 站在这里分享关于…… 的看法
高分句子
1. It’s my great honor to deliver a short speech here. Today my topic is Reading Matters.
很荣幸在此发表简短演讲,今天我的主题是阅读很重要。
2. I’m glad to stand here and share my opinions on the importance of reading.
我很高兴站在这里和大家分享关于阅读重要性的看法。
3. Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech is Reading Matters.
大家早上好!我演讲的题目是阅读很重要。
2.主体段:高分短语 + 逻辑词 + 观点 / 介绍句型
用于写 “活动带来好处” 的高分短语
arouse students’ interest 激发学生兴趣
draw more students’ attention 吸引更多学生的关注
meet students’ real needs 满足学生真实需求
bring about positive effects 带来积极效果
broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界
enrich one’s knowledge 丰富知识
shape our character 塑造品格
open our minds 启迪心智 boost self-confidence提升自信心
高分句子
1. Not only can reading enrich our knowledge but also it can broaden our horizons.
阅读不仅可以丰富知识,还能开阔眼界。
2. It is … that… 强调句:It is reading that helps us understand the world better.
正是阅读帮助我们更好认识世界。
3. The more we read, the more we will gain.我们读得越多,收获就越多。
3.结尾段:高分短语 + 备选句型(倡议呼吁 / 祝愿 + 致谢)
高分短语
1. take action 采取行动
2. form the habit of… 养成…… 习惯
3. make a difference 产生影响
高分句子
1. Let’s take action right now and make reading part of our daily life. Thank you for listening!
让我们立刻行动,让阅读成为日常生活的一部分。感谢聆听!
2. It is high time that we valued reading. Every small effort counts. Thank you for listening!
我们是时候重视阅读了,每一份小小的努力都很重要。感谢聆听!
⚠️固定结尾:演讲稿、欢迎辞必须以 Thank you for listening!收尾。
参考范文
Reading Matters
Good morning, everyone! It’s my great honor to give a short speech and share my opinions on the importance of reading .
To begin with, reading plays an important role in our life. For one thing, it is a golden opportunity for us to enrich our knowledge and improve our English. For another, not only can reading calm our mind when we feel stressed, but also it can help us understand different cultures. As a result, it is reading that opens our mind to the whole world.
Let’s take action from now on. Let’s form a good habit of reading every day. Thank you for listening!
假定你是李华,外国交换生即将来你校交流,请你代表学生会致欢迎辞,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 简单介绍校园活动;
3. 表达祝愿与期待。
Dear Friends/students, on behalf of our school / the Students’ Union, I’d like to extend a warm welcome to all of you.
To begin with, during your stay here, a wide range of activities will be held, including ________(活动). In addition, they will offer you a good chance to experience our culture and make new friends.
Wish you a pleasant and rewarding stay here. We are looking forward to your participation. Thank you for listening!
万能通用模板
1.欢迎辞开头(问候 + 引入主题)
高分短语
1. on behalf of 代表
2. extend a warm welcome to sb 向某人致以热烈欢迎
3. be delighted to do 很高兴做……
高分句子
1. On behalf of our Students’ Union, I’d like to extend a warm welcome to you all.
我代表学生会,向各位致以热烈的欢迎。
2. Welcome to our school! We are more than delighted to have you with us.
欢迎来到我们学校!非常高兴大家能够到来。
2.主体段:高分短语 + 逻辑词 + 观点 / 介绍句型
用于写 “活动带来好处” 的高分短语
a wide range of activities 丰富多彩的活动
provide sb with a chance to do 给某人提供做…… 的机会
experience local culture 体验本土文化
get involved in 参与
高分句子
1. A variety of activities are waiting for you, ranging from…to…
多种多样的活动等着大家,从…… 到……。
2. These activities will enable you to know more about our school and Chinese culture.
这些活动会让大家更多了解我们学校与中国文化。
3.结尾段:高分短语 + 备选句型(倡议呼吁 / 祝愿 + 致谢)
高分短语
1. a pleasant and rewarding stay 愉快而充实的时光
2. look forward to your active participation 期待你的积极参与
高分句子
1. Wish you a pleasant stay in our school. Thank you for listening!
祝愿大家在校期间过得愉快。感谢聆听!
2. We sincerely hope you will enjoy your time here and have great fun. Thank you for listening!
我们真诚希望大家在这里过得开心。感谢聆听!
⚠️固定结尾:演讲稿、欢迎辞必须以 Thank you for listening!收尾。
参考范文
Dear friends, on behalf of the Students’ Union, I’d like to extend a warm welcome to all of you.
To begin with, during your stay here, a wide range of activities will be held, including Chinese paper-cutting classes, traditional music shows and school sports meetings. In addition, they will offer you a good chance to experience our culture and make new friends.
Wish you a pleasant and rewarding stay here. We are looking forward to your participation. Thank you for listening!
$高考英语
活动报道写作指导
所见所闻 客观陈述
活动报道
要求客观记录学校/班级举办的各类活动,介绍活动时间、地点、过程、内容、意义和学生收获。
高频场景:文化活动、体育比赛、志愿服务、读书活动、英语竞赛、研学活动等。
核心特点:客观纪实、条理清晰、突出活动意义。
假定你是校英文报记者李华,你校上周举办了一场“传统文化进校园”主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇活动报道,内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点、参与人员;2. 活动主要内容;3. 活动意义与学生收获。
注意:词数80左右,行文连贯。
试题题干核心要求
1.人称:以第三人称为主(the students / participants / our school);作者介绍身份可用第一人称 I。
2. 时态:活动发生过程:一般过去时(全篇主体时态)/活动影响、意义、至今的收获:现在完成时/ 客观评价、事实介绍:一般现在时
3. 语气:正式、客观、积极、书面化,不口语、不抒情,侧重纪实与正向评价。
4、结构:
第一段:导语——总起全文,交代活动名称、时间、地点、主体
第二段:活动过程——详细介绍活动流程、具体内容、学生表现
第三段:活动成果——描述现场氛围、学生参与情况
第四段:活动意义——总结价值、学生收获、长远影响(必写得分点)
To enrich students’ campus life and foster their comprehensive abilities, our school hosted a wonderful activity themed “___” last week. A number of students actively engaged in the event.
The activity was well‑organized and featured various inspiring parts. First of all, ___. Moreover, ___. Through these sessions, students gained precious practical experience.
The atmosphere during the activity was lively and positive. All participants devoted themselves to the activity and benefited greatly.
In short, the activity achieved huge success. It not only brightened our school life, but also enabled students to acquire new knowledge and improve themselves.
万能通用模板
第一段:开篇导语(总述活动)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
launch a themed‑activity 发起主题活动
host a grand event 举办一场盛大活动
stage a meaningful activity 筹办 / 举办有意义的活动
conduct a campus‑wide activity 开展全校性活动
spark students’ interest in… 激发学生对…… 的兴趣
draw massive participation from… 吸引…… 大量参与
witness the launch of … 见证…… 的开展(无灵主语专用)
高分句型
1. Aimed at enriching students’ school life, our school held a meaningful activity last week.
旨在丰富学生校园生活,我校上周举办了一场有意义的活动。(过去分词作目的状语,高分)
2. The past week witnessed our school conducting a series of educational activities that attracted numerous student participants. 过去一周我校开展一系列教育类活动,吸引众多学生参与。
第二段:活动过程(核心主体)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
consist of 包括;由……组成
a series of activities 一系列活动
take an active part in 积极参与
devote oneself to the activity 全身心投入活动
carry out / conduct the activity 开展活动
高分句型
1. There were a series of well-organized activities, ranging from … to …
活动形式丰富多样,涵盖了……到……(现在分词作后置定语)
2. During the activity, students not only learned relevant knowledge but also practiced their practical skills.
活动中,学生不仅学到相关知识,还锻炼了实践能力。(not only…but also 并列高分结构)
第三段:现场氛围与学生表现
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
be filled with enthusiasm and laughter 充满热情与欢笑
immerse oneself in 沉浸于
gain much benefit 获益良多
高分句型
Every participant was fully immersed in the activity and gained huge inspiration.
每位参与者都全身心投入,收获满满、备受启发。
第四段:活动意义(结尾升华、必得分)
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
turn out to be a great success 取得圆满成功
enrich school life 丰富校园生活
broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界
improve comprehensive abilities 提升综合能力
leave a deep impression on sb 给某人留下深刻印象
高分句型
1. The activity was of great significance, which benefited all students greatly.
此次活动意义重大,让所有学生受益匪浅。(非限制性定语从句)
2. Not only did it enrich our after-school life, but it also broadened our horizons.
它不仅丰富了我们的课余生活,更开阔了我们的眼界。(部分倒装终极高分句型)
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
In an effort to inherit and promote traditional Chinese culture, our school launched a themed activity last Friday. Numerous students actively engaged in the event.
The activity featured a variety of wonderful programs. Students displayed excellent paper‑cutting and calligraphy works. In addition, teachers delivered vivid introductions to traditional folk customs.
The whole venue was filled with warmth and energy. All students devoted themselves to the activity and absorbed plenty of knowledge.
The activity proved to be highly rewarding. It not only enriched our campus life, but also deepened students’ understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
$高考英语
分享信/告知信写作指导
告知活动 分享感受
假定你是李华,暑假参加了“助农直播”志愿活动,助力乡村振兴。请给你的英国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件,分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.活动的目的与内容;
2.乡村的发展变化;
3.你的个人感悟。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
试题题干核心要求
时态:一般过去时/一般现在时
人称:一
语气:轻松真诚,亲切自然,禁止过于正式
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 开篇点题 问候 + 直接点明写信目的:告知事件 / 分享经历
第二段 主体详述 展开核心细节:活动背景 + 具体内容 + 关键变化 / 亮点
第三段 收尾升华 个人感受评价 + 发出邀请 / 表达后续期待
Dear ______,
I’m writing to share with you / inform you of ______ (点明分享/告知的核心事件).
Aimed at ______ (活动目的), ______ (具体内容1). What impressed me most is that ______ (核心细节/变化).
This experience not only broadened my horizons but also ______ (个人感受).I sincerely hope you can ______ (邀请/期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
万能通用模板
1.开篇段(点明分享目的)高分句
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
share with you 与你分享
inform you of 正式告知你
can’t wait to tell you 迫不及待告诉你
bring you the latest news 给你带来最新消息
a rewarding experience 一次有意义的经历
高分句型
I’m writing to share with you my unforgettable experience of taking part in the rural revitalization volunteer activity.
What I can’t wait to tell you is that I witnessed amazing changes in the Chinese countryside last week.
2. 主体段(详述事件与变化)高分句
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
乡村振兴主题专属短语
rural revitalization 乡村振兴
live-streaming sales 直播带货
characteristic farm produce 特色农产品
boost agritourism 发展乡村旅游
increase villagers’ income 增加村民收入
improve living standards 提升生活水平
take on a brand-new look 焕然一新
e-commerce boom 电商蓬勃发展
通用高分句型
The activity, designed to promote rural revitalization, offered us a precious chance to experience rural life.
What struck me most was that the once remote village now has access to fast Internet and wide concrete roads.
With the support of relevant policies, villagers have turned local specialties into a stable source of income.
3.结尾段(表达感受与期待)高分句
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
高分短语
broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界
gain a deeper insight into 对…… 有了更深的认识
unique charm 独特魅力
in person 亲自
look forward to your visit 期待你的到来
高分句型
This experience not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a deeper understanding of China’s rural development.
I sincerely invite you to come and experience the unique beauty of the Chinese countryside in person.
I’m convinced that you will be amazed by the tremendous changes here if you pay a visit.
参考范文
开头问候与背景引入段解析
开篇以“Dear Farmers”亲切问候,结合助农直播背景,快速建立共情,明确写作目的。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my rewarding volunteer experience of a live-streaming farm produce sale this summer vacation.
Aimed at helping villagers increase income and boost rural revitalization, the activity let me introduce local peaches online. What amazed me most was that the once backward village now has wide roads, nice homestays and booming e-commerce, greatly lifting villagers’ living standards.
This experience made me realize the vitality of China’s countryside. I do hope you can visit it someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
THE END
谢谢
$邀请信
热情相邀,以诚待人
假定你是校英文辩论队队长李华,你发现交换生Sherly不仅口语好,还能多角度思考问题,你想邀请她加入校辩论队。请给Sherly写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍校英文辩论队;
2.发出邀请
注意:
1.词数80左右;
试题题干核心要求
写信初衷、自我介绍:一般现在时
将要举办的活动、活动安排:一般将来时(will /be going to)
介绍活动常规特色、活动意义:一般现在时
❌ 避雷:描写未来活动不要乱用过去时!
人称:第一人称、第二人称
语气:正式礼貌、友好诚恳(写给外教 / 留学生)
结构:
段落 核心功能 写作逻辑
第一段 开篇点题 自我介绍 + 写作背景(表明被邀请人的信息) + 点写信目的,
第二段 主体详述 展开核心细节:分点写活动内容,每个活动补充好处 / 预期效果,最好再次表达被邀请者的能力+为该活动带来的好处,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下
第三段 收尾升华 表达希望对方考虑邀请+美好祝愿 + 满怀期待等待回复
写作模板(直接背诵)
Dear ______,
I'm Li Hua, captain/student/president of our school Debate Team/school union. Hope this letter finds you well. Knowing that/Having noticed that _______(写作背景), I'm writing to sincerely invite you to participate in/take part in/join/engage in ________(活动名称).
To begin with, our Debate Team comprises ____ (团队成员), which is well worth your attention(好处/结果). Additionally, we hold regular training activities, including______(各种活动), so that not only can we ______(好处/结果), but we will also ______(好处/结果). Most importantly, since you have a passion for oral English and a unique way of thinking, I highly/strongly believe that your participation will definitely bring new ideas and energy to our team.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一段:自我介绍 + 表明意图(开篇句)
1.高分短语
sincerely invite sb to do sth 诚挚邀请某人做某事
take part in /participate in/ engage in/join 参加
be keen on /be fascinated by 对…… 很感兴趣
knowing that… 了解到……
on behalf of… 代表……(多人发出邀请时使用)
have a talent for/ be proficient in/be adept at/be good at对...很擅长
2.高分升级句式
Knowing that you are proficient in oral English and your unique way of thinking from multiple perspecitives, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our English Debate Team.了解到你十分擅长英语口语并且能多角度思考问题,我写信诚挚邀请你参加……
2.主体段(分点写具体活动,每条活动补充好处 / 预期效果,要具体可行,并使用合适的过渡词承上启下)
be well worth your attention值得你的关注
be scheduled to be held 计划于…… 举办
a variety of /various kinds of activities 各种各样的活动
regular training activities 固定的训练活动
range from…to… 范围从…… 到…… including.....包括(分词做状语)
Take .... as examples / Such as/ For example/ For instance以...为例
a precious /valuable chance 宝贵的机会
not only can we ...., but we will also .....不仅...而且.....
活动内容高分句子
A wide range of activities will be included, such as…会包含丰富多彩的活动,例如……
Participants will do…, which will offer us a good experience.参与者将会……,这会带给我们很好的体验。
There will be…, enabling us to know more about…将会有……,使我们更多了解……
说明邀请对方的理由
Since you have a passion for oral English and unique way of thinking, your participation will definitely bring new ideas and energy to our team.
因为你热爱英语口语和多角度思考,你的到来会为我们团队注入新的想法和能量。
第二段:交代活动【时间 + 地点】
高分句型
1.The activity is scheduled to be held + 时间 at/in + 地点.
活动定于…… 在…… 举办。(首选!be scheduled to 高考加分)
2.It will last from … to … 活动持续时间……
3.The festival will start at … and end at …
核心短语:be scheduled to do 预定举行;take place 举办(不用于被动)
3.结尾段高分句
高分短语
1. accept one’s invitation 接受邀请
2. feel greatly honored 倍感荣幸
3. look forward to your reply 期待你的回复
4. let sb know whether… 告知某人是否……
高分句子
1.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
2.I would be grateful if my invitation could be taken into account.
如果我的建议能够得到考量,我将十分感激。
3.I hope my invitation will be of some value to you.希望我的建议对你有一定价值。
祝愿句+期待回复
1.Wish you have a brighter future. 祝愿你拥有更加光明的未来。
2.May you enjoy greater popularity among students. 愿你在学生当中更受欢迎。
3.Looking forward to your favourable reply.期待你的佳音。
参考范文
Dear Sherly,
I'm Li Hua, captain of our school Debate Team. Hope this letter finds you well. Having noticed that you have excellent oral English and can think from various angles, I'm writing to sincerely invite you to join our school English Debate Team.
To begin with, our Debate Team consists of students keen on English debates, which is well worth your attention. Additionally, we hold regular training activities, including topic discussions and mock debates, so that not only can we polish our oral English, but we will also improve our critical thinking skills. Most importantly, since you have a passion for oral English and a unique way of thinking, I strongly believe that your participation will definitely bring new ideas and energy to our team.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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