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人教版高中英语 选择性必修一·单元语法写作范文(修改完善版)
颜色图例:红色=本单元单词 蓝色=本单元重点语法 绿色=其他语法现象
每篇均完整覆盖本单元全部单词(含词形变化),并综合体现限制性/非限制性定语从句、名词性从句(主语/宾语/表语/同位语)、虚拟语气、独立主格、非谓语动词(不定式/动名词/过去分词)、倒装、强调句型等语法现象。
Unit 1 People of Achievement A Devoted Life: From Wormwood to the Nobel Prize
写作题材:Write a profile of a person of achievement(杰出人物介绍)
语法点:非限制性定语从句(which/who/whose/介词+which,whom/as 引导)
Speaking of achievement, we recall Albert Einstein, Isaac Newton or Alexander Fleming; yet Tu Youyou, committed scientist of physiology whose name the world honours, impresses me. She graduated from university, committed herself to fighting against malaria, with the objective of finding one.
She joined the Academy of Traditional Chinese Medicine, which later became an institute, as an academic; she drew a flow chart of botanical recipes and evaluated their properties; boiling wormwood to obtain a cold liquid kept the active substance, mostly water. Apparently hopeless, the extract made colleagues insist on quitting — she refused to acknowledge defeat. Analysing samples with scientific patience, she gradually proved it distinct; her crucial, vital, remarkable conclusion: artemisinin, which earned the Nobel Prize and managed to save millions.
Einstein parallels her: this gentle genius, known for his moustache and his peculiarity for sailing, took up a position at the Swiss patent office, Switzerland, earning his doctorate; his passion was the theory of relativity; his formula explained the photoelectric effect, which brought the Nobel Prize. When Hitler came to power, the Jewish professor had to flee; as a consequence, Princeton's institution welcomed him.
Alexander Fleming, penicillin's discoverer, and Florence Nightingale, who founded modern nursing, encountered every circumstance's wear and tear — we mourn; from Elon Musk's rockets to a novelist's novel idea, from politicians to professors drafting papers, testing devices, numerous paths, I infer, repeat one truth — devotion, from SARS to malaria labs.
It is devotion that makes life extraordinary. What these stories prove is simple: greatness grows from ordinary days. She admitted she did her duty. The fact that she never quit says everything. To sum up, honour those who refuse to quit. Had she obeyed despair, millions would have died. With artemisinin spread, hope grew, guided by ancient wisdom; only through devotion can a name endure.
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说起成就,我们会想到阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦、艾萨克·牛顿或亚历山大·弗莱明;然而最令我敬佩的,是屠呦呦——一位全世界都敬仰其名的、专注执着的生理学家。她大学毕业后投身于抗击疟疾的事业,目标是找到一味特效药。
她进入中医研究院——它后来成为一所研究机构——成为一名学者;她绘制植物药方的流程图,评估各种特性,又通过煮沸黄花蒿获得一种冷浸液,把有效成分留存其中,那主要是水。提取物起初似乎毫无希望,同事们坚持要放弃——她却拒绝承认失败。她以科学的耐心分析样品,渐渐证明这种提取物与众不同;她关键、重要而非凡的结论是:青蒿素——它赢得了诺贝尔奖,并成功挽救数百万人的生命。
爱因斯坦与她是同道:这位以胡须和爱帆船的癖好闻名的温和天才,在瑞士的专利局任职,并在那里取得博士学位;他真正的热情是相对论;他的公式解释了光电效应,为他赢得诺贝尔奖。希特勒上台后,这位犹太教授不得不逃离;结果,普林斯顿的学府向他敞开了大门。
青霉素的发现者亚历山大·弗莱明、开创现代护理学的弗洛伦斯·南丁格尔,都经历过各种境遇下的磨损——我们缅怀他们;从埃隆·马斯克的火箭到小说家的新颖构想,从政治家到起草论文、测试装置的教授——无数条道路,我可以推断,都在重复同一个真理:执着,从非典到疟疾实验室,处处可见。
正是执着造就非凡人生。这些故事证明的道理很简单:伟大孕育于平凡的日子。她曾说自己尽了本分。她从未放弃——这一事实说明了一切。总之,请致敬那些拒绝放弃的人。倘若她当年向绝望低头,数百万人早已死去。随着青蒿素的推广,随着古老智慧的指引,希望生长起来;唯有执着,才能让一个名字长存。
Unit 2 Looking into the Future A Letter to My Future Self
写作题材:Write a letter to your future self about life with smart technology(写给未来自己的信)
语法点:将来进行时(The Future Continuous)
Dear future me,
Reading this paragraph, I predict you will be living in a smart house: every appliance obeys one command phrase; a remote control switches on the air conditioner or switches off the lights; sensors keep constant watch on wires, knobs; you will be sleeping, mode adjusting — secure, instant, efficient.
Artificial intelligence will integrate kitchen and study into one integrated structure; doctors promise nanobots will detect abnormal cells before cancer develops, potentially saving lives. In this sense it provides us with security; in addition, we keep in touch with distant relatives, keep track of the daily routine, combining work with pleasure.
Nevertheless, to stay accurate, question everything: electrical wiring may leak, houses may catch fire, crime may follow. Early on, automatic warnings saved lives, yet not every innovation is relevant to safety; each has potential risk. The Amish, a Christian rural group, live in the absence of machines, advocating simplicity, an emphasis on work, not luxury; some are opposed to this future, resisting it — resistance I persuade myself to respect.
My prediction matches all forecasts: by 2050 such homes will be available to most families; occupations change — the Melbourne librarian may manage drones; clones stay fantasy. Never should we cease asking what is critical — hence, have a preference for what serves people. The career prospect brightens as income rises; keep judgment. My deceased grandfather would marvel.
What I ask is simple: the truth is that machines should serve, not rule. My hope that machines stay humane keeps me writing. Had I refused all change, I would have regretted it. Evening deepening, one signpost ends my essay: guard against the day machines think for us. Trusting technology blindly is a mistake; written with hope, it reaches the house which I can only imagine. It is you who decides.
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读着这段文字,我预测:你将正住在一栋智能房子里——每台电器都听从一个指令短语;遥控器打开空调或关掉灯;传感器对电线和旋钮保持不间断的监视;你将正在酣睡,模式会自行调节——安全、即时、高效。
人工智能将把厨房和书房整合成一个整体结构;医生们承诺,纳米机器人能在癌变之前发现异常细胞,可能挽救生命。从这个意义上说,科技为我们提供安全保障;此外,我们与远方的亲人保持联系,记录日常生活事务,把工作与乐趣结合起来。
不过,为了保持清醒,请对一切提出质疑:电线可能漏电,房子可能起火,犯罪可能随之而来。早些年,自动警报救过人命,但并非每项创新都与安全相关;每一项都有潜在风险。阿米什人——美国乡下的一个基督教群体——在没有机器的环境里生活,倡导简朴,重视劳作而非奢华;有些人反对这样的未来并抵制它——我说服自己尊重这种抵制。
我的预测与所有预报一致:到2050年,这样的住宅将为大多数家庭所拥有;职业在变——墨尔本的图书管理员或许要管理无人机;克隆人仍是幻想。我们永远不应停止追问什么是关键的——因此,请优先选择真正服务于人的东西。事业前景光明,收入也将随之上升;请守住判断。我已故的祖父若看到这一切定会惊叹。
我的请求很简单:事实是,机器应当服务人,而不是统治人。希望机器保持人性温度的信念,支撑着我写下这封信。假如当初我拒绝一切改变,我会后悔的。夜色渐深,这篇短文以一个路标作结:当心机器替我们思考的那一天。盲目相信技术是个错误;这封信满怀希望,抵达那栋我只能想象的房子。做决定的正是你。
Unit 3 Fascinating Parks A Journal: From Sarek to Dollywood
写作题材:Write a travel journal about a park visit(公园游记)
语法点:动词-ing 形式作主语
Looking for a trip to lift your spirit? Few places appeal to travellers like Sarek National Park, beyond Sweden's boundary near the Rapa valley, just below the Arctic Circle. The Sami still live off the land, accompanying their reindeer across a vast territory of glacier and forest. Cycling up that valley tested every lung; waking up to total silence was the greatest reward.
Setting out at dawn, we were on the move all day — the route stretching ahead past bush, rock and unfenced edge. A strict hunting ban was adopted, a prohibition all respect; hunting stays prohibited. Glaciers stayed visible; a cottage, cloth drying by the stove, offered shelter. A cold wind made me sneeze, yet sour tea in the teapot blessed us; as a journalist I filled my column.
We wandered into Dollywood, a superb amusement theme park, its enormous entertainment amusing everyone: a buffet of sweets, cream, fruit feeds the appetite; a steam train, giant swing, incredible roller coaster roar; up to twenty riders scream on the upside-down pirate ship. It displays iron works in old fashion, labels shops, lets you pedal past a dancing fountain; a polar aquarium, rare birds and an adorable baby Siberian leopard delight children picking up corridor souvenirs, staff looking after them.
Parks need not be wild to be splendid. It is nature that heals. What both parks taught me is simple: wonder needs no screen. The Sami believe the land feeds the soul. The fact that children laughed says enough. To plan your visit, choose a park that matches your mood. If I returned tomorrow, I would cycle again. The sun setting, we left, tired but happy; Sarek, which forbids everything modern, freed me most. Never has a journey felt so rewarding — leave behind every worry.
【中文翻译】
想找一次振奋精神的旅行吗?很少有地方像萨勒克国家公园一样吸引游客——它位于瑞典边界之外、拉帕河谷附近,就在北极圈下方。萨米人依然靠土地生活,赶着驯鹿穿越冰川与森林构成的辽阔疆域。骑车翻越那条山谷考验了每个人的肺;在万籁俱寂中醒来,则是一切之中最大的犒赏。
黎明出发,我们一整天都在赶路——小路在灌木、岩石与没有围栏的崖边之间向前延伸。严格的禁猎令已经实行,那是人人遵守的禁令;狩猎始终被禁止。冰川清晰可见;一座小木屋——炉边晾着布——为我们提供栖身之处。寒风让我打了个喷嚏,可茶壶里的酸浆果茶温暖祝福了我们;作为记者,我在专栏里记下了这一切。
我们漫步走进多莱坞——一座精彩的主题游乐园,其庞大的娱乐设施让每个人开心:糖果、奶油、水果组成的自助餐满足着胃口;蒸汽火车、巨型秋千、难以置信的过山车轰鸣作响;倒转的海盗船上有二十来名乘客同时尖叫。乐园以老式风格展示铁艺,给店铺贴上标签,让你蹬着船驶过舞动的喷泉;极地水族馆、珍稀禽鸟和一只可爱的西伯利亚豹宝宝让孩子们欣喜,他们在走廊挑选纪念品,工作人员在一旁照料。
公园不必荒野才称得上壮丽。治愈我们的正是自然。两座公园教会我的道理很简单:惊叹不需要屏幕。萨米人相信土地滋养灵魂。孩子们笑了——这一事实已经说明一切。想规划旅程,就选一座合你心意的公园。如果我明天重返,我会再骑一次车。夕阳西下,我们离去,疲惫却快乐;几乎禁止一切现代之物的萨勒克,最让我感到自由。从未有一次旅程如此值得——把一切烦恼抛在身后吧。
Unit 4 Body Language Reading Bodies, Bridging Cultures
写作题材:Write a short passage on body language across cultures(体态语文化差异短文)
语法点:动词-ing 形式作状语(含被动式与完成式)
As an educator I know nonverbal language matters: interactions vary across cultures. Having watched students, I trust gestures over words. When I demonstrate a point, a slight frown implies anxiety; a fake smile on one cheek — anger; crossed arms — a barrier.
One incident: calling on a boy, I witness something odd — his identical twin, who copied nothing he did, differed. One straightens up, approving of ideas; the other, with a tendency to slump, lowers his chin, barely hearing a word, staring at the ceiling, one eye ticking. Waist bends, poses slightly overdone — bodies gave them away; every assessment is a trial.
Interpreting each sign, I assess the whole picture before making inferences. Some are merely distracted; by contrast, a weeping girl may be embarrassed, ashamed of home conflict, anxiety occupying her chest; by comparison, a frown means concentration. In other words, the body reveals internal feelings: reliable educators inquire before intervening, perceiving what words conceal — pressure bothers children.
Visitors from Brazil, Bulgaria, Albania greet differently: bow, hug, handshake — what is appropriate here differs elsewhere. To break down such barriers, distinguish habit from character, clarify gestures, adjust tone. I favour warmth, employing questions, not pressure; being watched by a patient teacher, children relax, react — ultimately I enjoy it at work.
What the body says is honest: posture speaks first. Remember a gesture can lie. The fact that twins differ proves it. Gestures, components of trust; students who feel seen learn fast. Were I to judge by words, I would misread half my class. The lesson over, I adjust notes; to read a class, watch hands, eyes — judging fast is risky. Guided by patience, teachers see truly; only then can we understand — it is the body that speaks truth.
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作为教师,我知道非语言交流至关重要:每一次互动都因文化而异。观察学生多年之后,我更相信肢体动作而非语言。当我讲解要点时,一丝轻微的皱眉暗示焦虑;脸颊上虚假的微笑藏着怒气;交叉的双臂是一道屏障。
就说一件事:叫起一个男孩时,我目睹了奇怪的一幕——他的同卵双胞胎兄弟——什么都不模仿他——与之截然不同。一个赞成某个想法时会挺直腰板;另一个习惯瘫坐,低下下巴,几乎听不进一个字,盯着天花板,一只眼睛还有神经性抽动。腰部一扭、姿态略显夸张——身体出卖了他们;对每个孩子的评估都是一场考验。
仔细解读每个信号之后,我才会做出推断,评估全局。有些人只是分心;相比之下,一个哭泣的女孩可能是难为情,或正为家里的矛盾羞愧,焦虑占据着她的胸口;对比来看,皱眉意味着专注。换句话说,身体透露着内心的感受:可靠的教育者会先询问再介入,感知言语掩盖的东西——施压只会让孩子困扰。
来自巴西、保加利亚、阿尔巴尼亚的访客问候方式各异:鞠躬、拥抱、握手——在一国得体的举止到了别处可能不同。要打破这些隔阂,就要区分习惯与性格,弄清手势含义,调整语气。我偏爱温暖,采用提问而非施压;被一位有耐心的老师注视时,孩子们会放松下来、坦然回应——说到底,我喜欢看到这一切在工作中生效。
身体说的是真话:姿态最先开口。记住,手势也可能说谎。双胞胎竟如此不同——这一事实证明了这一点。肢体动作是信任的组成部分;感到被关注的学生学得快。倘若只凭言语判断,我会误读半个班。下课之后,我调整自己的笔记;想读懂一个班,就要观察手和眼睛——仓促下判断风险很大。在耐心指引下,教师才能真正看清;唯有如此我们才能彼此理解——说出真相的,正是身体。
Unit 5 Working the Land Working the Land: A Report on a Farming Pioneer
写作题材:Write a report on a farming pioneer and food security(农业先驱与粮食安全报道)
语法点:主语从句(Subject Clauses)
What Yuan Longping achieved with hybrid rice changed history; that one scientist could tackle a global food shortage entirely alone seemed impossible. He devoted his life to boosting yields, overcoming every crisis — vision became reality.
Conventional fields, dependent on chemical fertilizers and pesticides, kill harmful bacteria and useful insects; they stay in soil, entering the grain we digest. Experts estimate such crops lack nutritional balance — less nutritious, nutrition remaining. DDT is banned; in fact, some food even tastes salty. Intense pressure to expand output strains the land: depth shrinks, roots weaken.
Organic farming is the alternative: fields kept free from chemicals grow wheat, sorghum, rice. Bees pollinate the flowers; harvests rich in minerals give each meal essential, natural flavor. Urban shoppers buy it at grocery stores. For instance, in Vietnam, small farms comprised of families — characteristic there — generate enough without poison, attaining stable yields. The assumption that organic output must be low is wrong.
Yuan, a world celebrity, enjoyed simple leisure, broom in hand. Hunger was a bomb waiting to explode; he envisioned grain on salty fields in LED-lit tunnels. His work's extension abroad raised domestic consumption; his seeds alleviated widespread poverty, in turn feeding millions. He made donations to schools, fulfilled his dream; deep down, we are convinced of every aspect of his faith.
Experts warn chemical shortcuts, far from ideal, never last. Our conclusion is that food security begins in soil. If we wasted less, hunger would shrink. The harvest gathered, farmers rest. To honour him, support organic farming: choosing nutritious food votes for the land. Inspired by him, we turn to the soil. The pioneer who fed a nation left rice which grows across Asia. Only then can we secure the future — it is the land that feeds us.
【中文翻译】
袁隆平以杂交水稻取得的成就改写了历史;一位科学家能完全独自应对全球粮食短缺,这似乎不可能。他把一生奉献给提高产量的事业,克服了每一次危机——设想变成了现实。
传统农田依赖化肥和农药,既杀死有害细菌,也杀死益虫;它们留在土壤里,进入我们消化的谷物。专家估计这类作物营养失衡——营养较少,养分仍在。滴滴涕已被禁用;事实上,有些食物甚至发咸。扩大产量的巨大压力使土地不堪重负:土层变浅,根系衰弱。
有机农业是另一条路:远离化学品的地块自然地生长小麦、高粱和水稻。蜜蜂为花朵授粉;富含矿物质的收成让每一餐都拥有必需的天然风味。城市购物者在食品杂货店购买。例如在越南,当地典型的由家庭组成的小农场,不靠毒药也能产出足够的粮食,获得稳定收成。有机产量必然低的假设是错的。
袁隆平虽是世界名人,却享受简朴的闲暇,手握扫帚。饥饿是一颗等待引爆的炸弹;他在点满LED灯的隧道里设想盐碱地上也能长出粮食。他的事业向国外的延伸提高了国内消费;他的种子缓解了普遍的贫困,反过来又养活数百万人。他向学校捐款,实现了梦想;内心深处,他在土地上的每一个信念都让我们信服。
专家们警告,远非理想的化学捷径从来长久不了。我们的结论是:粮食安全始于土壤。如果我们少浪费一些,饥饿就会缩减。收仓之后,农民得以休息。向他致敬,就支持有机农业——选择有营养的食物,就是为土地投票。在他的感召下,我们回归土壤。养活了一个国家的先驱,留下了遍布亚洲生长的稻米。唯有如此我们才能保障未来——养活我们所有人的,正是土地。
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