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专题02 期中考作文考前速成必刷|写作专项提升练习(新教材译林版)
七年级上册(Units 1-4) 写作专项提升练习
班级:____________ 姓名:____________ 学号:____________
1.假如你是Helen,一名外国交换生Tom将来你家里做客。请根据下面提示向他介绍一下你自己、你的家人和你的房间。
你自己
名叫Helen Smith,今年12岁,就读于七年级5班;
你的家人
家里有四口人:爸爸、妈妈、弟弟和你。弟弟有3个棒球和5个网球。他喜欢运动。妈妈很漂亮,她喜欢远足。爸爸很有趣,他最喜欢的运动是打乒乓球。
你的房间
漂亮、整洁;书桌上有一本英语书和两顶帽子;椅子挨着书桌。
要求:
(1)将所给信息用完;
(2)书写工整;
(3)80词左右。
Hello, Tom. My name is Helen Smith.
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2.新的学期,作为初中生的你,一定又认识了更多的同学,有的更是成了好朋友。请你根据要求,写一篇以“My Good Friend”为题的作文,介绍你的好朋友吧。
要点:(1)他/她的家庭成员;
(2)他/她的长相、性格、爱好等;
(3)你为什么喜欢和他/她交朋友。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数80左右。
My Good Friend
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3.学校是我们学习、成长的乐园,有明亮的教室,安静的图书馆,宽阔的操场等。请你结合下图,以“My School”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的学校。
写作要求:1. 短文须包含图表内容,不得出现真实姓名和校名;2. 语言流畅,卷面整洁;3. 词数80左右,文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School
This is a map of my school. The first thing I see is the school gate.
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4.亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生新的旅程,这个学期,大家一定有一个精彩的校园生活。假如你是李华,请结合图片和要点提示,以“My wonderful School Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校生活。
注意:1.包含所给信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文规范;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.词数80左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Wonderful School Life
I’m Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
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5.请以“My Colorful Weekdays”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你从周一到周五的校园与家庭生活。要求:
1. 包含至少3项校园活动(如学科课堂、社团、课间互动等)和2项家庭日常(如和家人吃饭、共同做事等);
2. 词数80词左右,语言连贯自然。
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6.假如你是Emma Miller,是一名七年级新生。今天,英语老师给大家介绍了“Friends from different cities”的主题征友活动。请根据以下要点写一篇自我介绍。
要求:
1.短文内容应包含图示所给要点,可适当发挥。
2.短文中不得出现真实信息(人名和地名)。
3.语句正确,句子通顺、连贯,书写规范。
4.不少于80词。
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7.假设你是Simon,你的表弟Peter即将升入初中,他想了解你的新学校Sunshine Middle School。请你根据下图中的提示词,用英语写一段短文向Peter介绍你的学校生活。
提示词:
• Name: Sunshine Middle School
• Favourite place: library / playground / art room (任选或都写)
• Favourite lesson: English / PE / Art (任选)
• Favourite activity: reading club / football match / school trip
• How to go to school: on foot / by bike
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯,词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 必须包括所有提示要点,结构合理,可适当发挥;
3. 不要出现学校真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about my new school—Sunshine Middle School.
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Best wishes,
Simon
8.为了营造温馨和谐的校园环境,帮助新生们更快融入集体,增进彼此之间的友谊,你校英语广播站正在举办“广播里的友谊之声”活动,邀请所有新生通过校园广播向全校师生介绍自己和班级的教室设计。假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,为自己准备一篇广播发言稿,并发出交友邀请。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 60-80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Hello, everyone!
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$考前速成必刷
专题02 期中考作文考前速成必刷|写作专项提升练习(新教材译林版)
七年级上册(Units 1-4) 写作专项提升练习
班级:____________ 姓名:____________ 学号:____________
1.假如你是Helen,一名外国交换生Tom将来你家里做客。请根据下面提示向他介绍一下你自己、你的家人和你的房间。
你自己
名叫Helen Smith,今年12岁,就读于七年级5班;
你的家人
家里有四口人:爸爸、妈妈、弟弟和你。弟弟有3个棒球和5个网球。他喜欢运动。妈妈很漂亮,她喜欢远足。爸爸很有趣,他最喜欢的运动是打乒乓球。
你的房间
漂亮、整洁;书桌上有一本英语书和两顶帽子;椅子挨着书桌。
要求:
(1)将所给信息用完;
(2)书写工整;
(3)80词左右。
Hello, Tom. My name is Helen Smith.
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(1)审题目:
主题:向来访的外国交换生 Tom 介绍自己、家人和房间(姓名年龄班级、四口人的运动与爱好、房间的整洁布置,将所给信息用完,按表格提示)
文体:应用文
人称:第一人称(I/my)、第三人称(they/he/she/it)
时态:使用一般现在时
注意:将所给信息用完、80词左右
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:打招呼和自我介绍,引出话题
具体介绍:依次介绍家庭成员,再介绍自己的房间
结尾总结:欢迎Tom来家里做客
(3)参考范文:
例文:
Hello, Tom. My name is Helen Smith. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 5, Grade 7. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and me. My brother has three baseballs and five tennis balls. He likes sports. My mother is very beautiful. She likes hiking. My father is fun. His favourite sport is playing ping-pong. My room is nice and tidy. An English book and two hats are on the desk. The chair is next to the desk. Welcome to my home!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文,使用一般现在时
明确要点:自我介绍、介绍家人、介绍房间
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)、第三人称(they/he/she/it)
注意事项:将所给信息用完、80词左右
[第二步:构思布局]
开头句:打招呼和自我介绍,引出话题
主体句:依次介绍家庭成员,再介绍自己的房间
结尾句:欢迎Tom来家里做客
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自我介绍
My name is Helen Smith. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 5, Grade 7./You can call me Helen Smith. I’m twelve. I study in Class 5, Grade 7./I’m Helen Smith. I’m a 12-year-old girl from Class 5, Grade 7.等
要点二:介绍家人
四口人:There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and me./Four people are in my family: my parents, my brother and I.等
弟弟有3个棒球5个网球、热爱运动:My brother has three baseballs and five tennis balls. He likes sports./My brother owns three baseballs and five tennis balls. He loves doing sports.等
妈妈漂亮、喜欢远足:My mother is very beautiful. She likes hiking./My mother looks beautiful and she enjoys going hiking.等
爸爸有趣、最爱乒乓球:My father is fun. His favourite sport is playing ping-pong./My dad is great fun. He likes playing ping-pong best.
要点三:介绍房间
My room is nice and tidy. An English book and two hats are on the desk. The chair is next to the desk./Look at my room. It’s beautiful and tidy. On the desk lie an English book and two hats. The chair is beside the desk.等
2.新的学期,作为初中生的你,一定又认识了更多的同学,有的更是成了好朋友。请你根据要求,写一篇以“My Good Friend”为题的作文,介绍你的好朋友吧。
要点:(1)他/她的家庭成员;
(2)他/她的长相、性格、爱好等;
(3)你为什么喜欢和他/她交朋友。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数80左右。
My Good Friend
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(1)审题目:
主题:以"My Good Friend"为题介绍好朋友(他/她的家庭成员、长相性格爱好、喜欢和他/她交朋友的原因)
文体:记叙文(写人)
人称:第一人称(I/my/we)和第三人称(he/his)
时态:以一般现在时为主
注意:词数80左右;不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:引出好朋友,介绍其家庭成员。
具体介绍:描述外貌、性格和爱好;说明喜欢与他交朋友的原因;点明其优秀品质
结尾总结:表达对友谊长存的希望
(3)参考范文:
My Good Friend
I have a good friend named Li Hua. There are three people in his family.
He is tall and has short black hair. He is outgoing and kind. He likes playing basketball and reading books. We often play together after school. I like to make friends with him because he always helps me with my study. He is a boy who never gives up.
I hope our friendship will last forever.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文(写人),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:好朋友的家庭成员;外貌、性格、爱好;喜欢和他/她交朋友的原因
确定人称:第一人称(I/my/we)和第三人称(he/his)
注意事项:词数80左右;不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:引出好朋友,介绍其家庭成员。
主体段:描述外貌、性格和爱好;说明喜欢与他交朋友的原因;点明其优秀品质
结尾段:表达对友谊长存的希望
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:朋友信息
称呼:a good friend named Li Hua/a good friend of mine/my best friend/one of my best friends等
家庭成员:three people in his family/four people in his family/a family of three/a big family等
要点二:外貌
身高:tall/short/of medium height/not very tall等
发型:short black hair/long brown hair/curly hair/straight hair等
要点三:性格
性格:outgoing and kind/friendly and helpful/brave and honest/warm and patient等
要点四:爱好
爱好:playing basketball and reading books/playing football/listening to music/drawing pictures等
要点五:相处
相处:play together after school/study together/go home together/chat online等
要点六:喜欢原因
原因:helps me with my study/always ready to help/cares about others/understands me等
要点七:品质
品质:never gives up/hard-working/brave/strong-willed等
要点八:愿望
愿望:friendship will last forever/be friends forever/friendship lasts long/always be together等
3.学校是我们学习、成长的乐园,有明亮的教室,安静的图书馆,宽阔的操场等。请你结合下图,以“My School”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的学校。
写作要求:1. 短文须包含图表内容,不得出现真实姓名和校名;2. 语言流畅,卷面整洁;3. 词数80左右,文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School
This is a map of my school. The first thing I see is the school gate.
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(1)审题目:
主题:结合图示以"My School"为题介绍学校(按空间顺序介绍操场、音乐厅、图书馆、教学楼、科学楼、餐厅等场所及功能)
文体:介绍类说明文
人称:第一人称(I/My/We)
时态:以一般现在时为主
注意:词数80左右,不得出现真实姓名和校名
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:承接已给出的开头,点出学校的中心位置(操场)及其功能
具体介绍:按照空间顺序,详细介绍操场左右两侧的音乐厅和图书馆,以及操场后面的教学楼、科学楼和餐厅,并简述在这些地方进行的活动
结尾总结:总结全文,表达自己对学校的喜爱与赞美之情
(3)参考范文:
例文:
My School This is a map of my school. The first thing I see is the school gate. In the middle of the school is a large playground. We often do sports and play games there.
On the left of the playground is the music hall, and on the right is the library. We can read all kinds of books in it. Behind the playground stands the classroom building. The science building is on the left of the classroom building, while the dining hall is on its right. We usually have delicious lunch in the dining hall.
I love my school because it is a great place.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍类说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:按照一定的空间方位顺序(如由近及远、从中间到四周)逐一介绍学校的建筑物及其相对位置,并适当补充这些场所的功能
确定人称:第一人称(I/My/We)
注意事项:词数80左右,不得出现真实姓名和校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接已给出的开头,点出学校的中心位置(操场)及其功能
主体段:按照空间顺序,详细介绍操场左右两侧的音乐厅和图书馆,以及操场后面的教学楼、科学楼和餐厅,并简述在这些地方进行的活动
结尾段:总结全文,表达自己对学校的喜爱与赞美之情
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:校园场所
校园场所:a large playground/music hall/library/classroom building/dining hall/science building/office building等
要点二:场所功能
功能:do sports and play games/read all kinds of books/have delicious lunch/have science lessons/use computers等
4.亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生新的旅程,这个学期,大家一定有一个精彩的校园生活。假如你是李华,请结合图片和要点提示,以“My wonderful School Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校生活。
注意:1.包含所给信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文规范;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.词数80左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Wonderful School Life
I’m Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
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(1)审题目:
主题:结合图片以"My Wonderful School Life"为题介绍精彩校园生活(美丽校园、快乐社团与精彩活动、学科学习与老师)
文体:记叙文
人称:第一人称(I/my)
时态:以一般现在时为主
注意:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:总起句,概括校园生活整体感受(题目已给出开头句)
具体介绍:美丽校园、快乐社团/精彩活动、学科学习
结尾总结:总结感受,升华主题
(3)参考范文:
My Wonderful School Life
I’m Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
Our school is beautiful. Behind the teaching building is a large playground. I often play sports there. The library is next to my classroom. I read books there after class. My favourite subject is English. It’s interesting and useful. Ms Wang makes the class lively with games. After school, I join the science club. We do fun experiments. We also have a sports meet and an art festival every year.
I love my school life because I learn and grow with my friends.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:美丽校园、精彩活动与快乐社团、学科学习与老师
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,概括校园生活整体感受(题目已给出开头句)
主体段:美丽校园、快乐社团/精彩活动、学科学习
结尾段:总结感受,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:美丽校园
地点选择:library/playground/garden/classroom/teaching building等
位置描述:next to the teaching building/behind the classroom/in front of the library/near the sports center等
活动内容:read books/do morning exercises/play sports/enjoy the flowers/study with classmates等
作用效果:It helps me relax./It makes me feel happy./It improves my knowledge./It keeps me healthy.
要点二:快乐社团与精彩活动
社团选择:science club/art club/music club/sports club等
活动内容:do experiments/draw pictures/sing songs/play basketball/learn new skills等
学校活动:sports meet/art festival/English party/school trip等
参与感受:have great fun/learn teamwork/make new friends/feel excited等
要点三:学科学习及老师
学科选择:English/Math/Chinese/Science/History等
喜欢原因:interesting/helpful/useful/fun/easy to learn/practical等
具体说明:teacher is kind and patient/teacher makes the class lively/learn useful knowledge/practice speaking/writing/do experiments in class等
学习收获:improve my skills/get good grades/become more confident/find learning enjoyable等
5.请以“My Colorful Weekdays”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你从周一到周五的校园与家庭生活。要求:
1. 包含至少3项校园活动(如学科课堂、社团、课间互动等)和2项家庭日常(如和家人吃饭、共同做事等);
2. 词数80词左右,语言连贯自然。
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(1)审题目:
主题:以"My Colorful Weekdays"为题介绍周一到周五的校园与家庭生活(至少3项校园活动+2项家庭日常)
文体:记叙文/说明文
人称:第一人称(I, my, we)。
时态:以一般现在时为主。
注意:题目要求必须包含两个核心部分——至少3项校园活动(学科课堂、社团、课间互动等);至少2项家庭日常(和家人吃饭、共同做事等)。
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:总起,直接点明主题。
具体介绍:学校活动。家庭活动。
结尾总结:总结感受。
(3)参考范文:
My Colorful Weekdays
I have colorful weekdays every week.
At school, I love English classes because our teacher always tells funny stories. On Tuesdays, I join the music club and sing with my classmates. During breaks, I often play games with my friends on the playground. At home, I usually have dinner with my family. We talk about our days happily. Sometimes, my little sister and I draw pictures together after finishing homework.
My weekdays are full of fun. I love my weekdays!
【详解】一、审题立意
确定文体:记叙文/说明文,以一般现在时为主。
确定要点:题目要求必须包含两个核心部分——
至少3项校园活动(学科课堂、社团、课间互动等);
至少2项家庭日常(和家人吃饭、共同做事等)。
确定人称:第一人称(I, my, we)。
二、构思布局
例文采用三段式结构:
开头段:总起,直接点明主题。
主体段:学校活动。家庭活动。
结尾段:总结感受。
三、要点对照
要点一:校园活动
I love English classes;I join the music club and sing with my classmates;I often play games with my friends on the playground
拓展:
We have a reading corner in our classroom and I often read storybooks there.
要点二:家庭日常
I usually have dinner with my family;Sometimes, my little sister and I draw pictures together after finishing homework
拓展:
My father helps me with my math homework after supper.
6.假如你是Emma Miller,是一名七年级新生。今天,英语老师给大家介绍了“Friends from different cities”的主题征友活动。请根据以下要点写一篇自我介绍。
要求:
1.短文内容应包含图示所给要点,可适当发挥。
2.短文中不得出现真实信息(人名和地名)。
3.语句正确,句子通顺、连贯,书写规范。
4.不少于80词。
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(1)审题目:
主题:参加"Friends from different cities"主题征友活动做自我介绍(姓名年龄城市等基本信息、爱好、喜爱的食物与颜色等,按图示提示)
文体:自我介绍应用文
人称:第一人称(I/my)
时态:以一般现在时为主
注意:不得透露真实信息(人名和地名),应包含图示所给要点, 不少于80词
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:问候并介绍个人基本信息
具体介绍:介绍个人爱好;介绍个人喜好
结尾总结:表达交友愿望,发出交友邀请
(3)参考范文:
例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Emma Miller. I am a 12-year-old girl who comes from Zhengzhou. I am a new student in Grade Seven.
I have many hobbies. In my free time, I like playing the guitar. It makes me feel relaxed. I also enjoy reading books because I can learn a lot from them. Besides, I like playing sports with my friends.
As for my preferences, my favorite food is chicken. It is healthy and delicious. My favorite color is blue. I also like dogs very much.
I want to make friends with you. Please write to me!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:自我介绍应用文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:基本信息(姓名,年龄,城市),爱好,喜好(食物,颜色)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实信息(人名和地名),应包含图示所给要点, 不少于80词
[第二步:构思布局]
四段式结构:
开头段:问候并介绍个人基本信息
主体第一段:介绍个人爱好
主体第二段:介绍个人喜好
结尾段:表达交友愿望,发出交友邀请
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:基本信息
姓名年龄城市:Emma Miller/twelve/12-year-old girl/Green City等
身份介绍:new student/Grade Seven等
要点二:爱好
爱好内容:play the guitar/read books/play sports/sing/draw等
感受收获:relaxed/learn a lot/happy/excited等
要点三:喜好
喜爱食物:chicken/rice/noodles/fruit等
喜爱颜色:blue/red/green/purple等
其他喜好:like dogs/like cats等
理由描述:healthy/delicious/nice/beautiful等
7.假设你是Simon,你的表弟Peter即将升入初中,他想了解你的新学校Sunshine Middle School。请你根据下图中的提示词,用英语写一段短文向Peter介绍你的学校生活。
提示词:
• Name: Sunshine Middle School
• Favourite place: library / playground / art room (任选或都写)
• Favourite lesson: English / PE / Art (任选)
• Favourite activity: reading club / football match / school trip
• How to go to school: on foot / by bike
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯,词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 必须包括所有提示要点,结构合理,可适当发挥;
3. 不要出现学校真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about my new school—Sunshine Middle School.
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Best wishes,
Simon
(1)审题目:
主题:给表弟 Peter 写短文介绍新学校 Sunshine Middle School(学校名称与概况、最爱场所、最爱课程、最爱活动、上学交通方式,按提示词)
文体:应用文(书信介绍短文)
人称:第一人称I,第二人称you
时态:以一般现在时为主
注意:包含全部提示要点,词数80词左右;题目给出开头不计入总词数;禁止出现真实校名、学生姓名。
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:沿用题目固定开篇句,引出要介绍的新学校Sunshine Middle School。
具体介绍:先简单评价校园规模与环境;依次介绍最爱场所图书馆、最爱科目英语并补充老师细节;再说明课后踢足球是最喜欢的活动;交代每日骑车上学,通勤时长十分钟,逐条覆盖全部提示要点。
结尾总结:抒发对校园生活的喜爱,反问对方校园生活,自然收束信件。
(3)参考范文:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about my new school — Sunshine Middle School. It is not very big but very modern. My favourite place is the library because I love reading. There are thousands of books in it. My favourite lesson is English. Our English teacher is kind and makes lessons fun. I often play football with my classmates on the playground after school—that’s my favourite activity. I go to school by bike every day. It takes me about ten minutes.
I really enjoy my school life here. What about yours?
Best wishes,
Simon
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(书信介绍短文),时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点: 1.点明学校名称 Sunshine Middle School; 2.介绍最喜欢的校园场所(library); 3.介绍最喜欢的课程(English); 4.介绍最喜欢的校园活动(play football); 5.说明自己的上学交通方式(by bike);
确定人称:第一人称I,第二人称you
注意事项:包含全部提示要点,词数80词左右;题目给出开头不计入总词数;禁止出现真实校名、学生姓名。
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:沿用题目固定开篇句,引出要介绍的新学校Sunshine Middle School。
主体:先简单评价校园规模与环境;依次介绍最爱场所图书馆、最爱科目英语并补充老师细节;再说明课后踢足球是最喜欢的活动;交代每日骑车上学,通勤时长十分钟,逐条覆盖全部提示要点。
结尾:抒发对校园生活的喜爱,反问对方校园生活,自然收束信件。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:学校名称与校园概况
核心短语:Sunshine Middle School/not very big but very modern/my new school called Sunshine Middle School/small yet well-equipped
要点二:最喜欢的校园地点
核心短语:favourite place is the library/thousands of books/like the library best/plenty of different books to read
要点三:最喜欢的课程
核心短语:favourite lesson is English/kind and makes lessons fun/English is my favourite subject/nice teacher with lively classes
要点四:最喜欢的活动
核心短语:play football with classmates/favourite activity/have football games with schoolmates/my favorite after-school hobby
要点五:上学交通方式
核心短语:go to school by bike/takes about ten minutes/ride a bike to school every day/ten-minute bike ride
8.为了营造温馨和谐的校园环境,帮助新生们更快融入集体,增进彼此之间的友谊,你校英语广播站正在举办“广播里的友谊之声”活动,邀请所有新生通过校园广播向全校师生介绍自己和班级的教室设计。假如你是李华,请根据以下提示,为自己准备一篇广播发言稿,并发出交友邀请。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 60-80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Hello, everyone!
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(1)审题目:
主题:通过校园广播"广播里的友谊之声"活动介绍自己和班级(自我介绍基本信息与爱好、教室的环境与布置设计、发出交友邀请)
文体:广播发言稿
人称:第一人称I
时态:以一般现在时为主
注意:开头已给出,不计入总词数;词数60-80词;不能出现真实人名、校名、地名
(2)搭框架:
引出话题:承接给出的开头,进行自我介绍,介绍个人基本信息与爱好
具体介绍:介绍教室,描述教室的环境与布置设计
结尾总结:发出交友邀请,表达期待,致谢
(3)参考范文:
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite color is blue. My hobbies are reading and playing basketball.
Let me introduce my classroom. It is big and bright. We put some green plants in it to make the room beautiful. There are also some wonderful pictures on the wall. I love my classroom very much.
I want to make friends with you all. Let's share our school life together. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:广播发言稿,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:①自我介绍(姓名、年龄、班级、最喜欢的颜色、爱好);②介绍班级教室设计;③发出交友邀请
确定人称:第一人称I
注意事项:开头已给出,不计入总词数;词数60-80词;不能出现真实人名、校名、地名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接给出的开头,进行自我介绍,介绍个人基本信息与爱好
主体段:介绍教室,描述教室的环境与布置设计
结尾段:发出交友邀请,表达期待,致谢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自我介绍
介绍表达:I am Li Hua /13-year-old student /from Class 1, Grade 7 /my favourite color is blue /my hobbies are reading and playing basketball /like doing sports /enjoy reading books等
要点二:介绍教室
教室表达:big and bright /green plants /wonderful pictures on the wall /tidy classroom /comfortable to study in等
要点三:交友邀请
要求表达:make friends with you /share school life /hope we can be good friends等
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