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选择性必修三 Unit 3 Environmental Protection 单元写作作业(教师版)
一、单元写作任务
假定你是李华,6月5日世界环境日,你校将举办以“Green Campus, Green Future”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 描述校园中存在的两三个环境问题;
2. 提出两条具体可行的行动建议;
3. 呼吁全校同学从今天做起,共同守护校园。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
二、审题建模(动笔前先想清楚这五件事)
项目
写作要点
体裁
演讲稿(speech):问候—提出问题—给出方案—发出呼吁—致谢。口语化,多用短句、设问和呼告,让听众“听得见”。
人称
第一人称复数(we)贯穿全文,把自己放进听众里;批评现象时用 we 而不是 you,避免指责感。
时态
描述校园现状用一般现在时;讲一次亲历用一般过去时;提建议、作呼吁用祈使句或 must/should。
结构
四段式。Para 1:问候 + 一个亲眼所见的具体场景(食堂后的垃圾桶、没关的水龙头);Para 2:指出问题背后的浪费(食物、塑料、电);Para 3:两条建议(光盘、自带水杯);Para 4:呼吁 + 落回标题。
要点
“现状”要有画面和数字(一天扔掉两百公斤食物),建议要能“明天就做”,呼吁要落在具体动作上,而不是“保护地球,人人有责”。
语气
诚恳、有感染力,可以用反问(Is that the school we want?)和排比,但不要喊空洞口号。
三、话题词块梳理
Ⅰ. 话题词汇(中英对照,答案已填入)
话题词汇
1. ecology n. 生态;生态学
2. ecosystem n. 生态系统
3. greenhouse n. 温室;暖房
4. emission n. 排放;排放物
5. carbon n. 碳
6. renewable adj. 可再生的
7. sustainable adj. 可持续的
8. conserve vt. 保护;保存
9. conservation n. 保护;保存
10. recycle vt. 回收利用
11. reusable adj. 可重复使用的
12. plastic n. 塑料 adj. 塑料的
13. litter n. 垃圾;废弃物
14. waste n. 废物;浪费 vt. 浪费
15. pollute vt. 污染
16. pollutant n. 污染物
17. glacier n. 冰川
18. melt vi. 融化 vt. 使融化
19. habitat n. 栖息地
20. endangered adj. 濒危的
21. extinction n. 灭绝;消亡
22. awareness n. 意识;认识
23. drought n. 干旱;旱灾
24. flood n. 洪水;水灾
Ⅱ. 话题词块(答案已填入)
话题词块
1. global warming 全球变暖
2. greenhouse gas 温室气体
3. carbon footprint 碳足迹
4. renewable energy 可再生能源
5. take action 采取行动
6. play a part in 在……中起作用
7. be responsible for 对……负责
8. cut down on 减少;削减
9. sort the rubbish 垃圾分类
10. single-use plastic 一次性塑料
11. lead a green life 过绿色生活
12. raise awareness of 提高……的意识
13. be aware of 意识到
14. in the face of 面对
15. at the cost of 以……为代价
16. make a difference 起作用;有影响
17. do harm to 对……有害
18. take its toll on 对……造成破坏
19. turn off 关掉(电器、水龙头)
20. save energy 节约能源
21. be on the decline 在减少;在衰退
22. adapt to 适应
23. come up with 想出;提出
24. carry out 执行;实施
25. join hands 携手;联手
26. for the sake of future generations 为了子孙后代
27. every bit counts 每一点都重要
28. start small 从小事做起
29. in the long term 从长远来看
30. run out 用完;耗尽
Ⅲ. 词块升级(把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法)
基础表达
升级表达
1. The environment is getting worse.
The environment is deteriorating faster than we can repair it.
2. We should protect the earth.
We owe the earth a debt we can only repay by changing how we live.
3. There is a lot of rubbish on campus.
Rubbish has become part of the campus landscape.
4. We waste a lot of food.
Nearly a third of what leaves our canteen goes straight into the bin.
5. Everyone should do something.
Change begins with one person, one habit, one lunch.
6. We must act now.
There is no time like the present to act.
7. Small actions are useful.
Small actions, repeated daily, add up to something enormous.
8. I hope we can work together.
I hope we can join hands to leave this place better than we found it.
四、教材好句精选(根据汉语补全句子,注意课文句式与词块的用法)
1. 毫无疑问,地球正变得越来越暖。
There is little doubt that Earth is getting warmer and warmer.
2. 2013年,一张北极熊的照片让许多人感到震惊。
In 2013, a lot of people were shocked by a photo of a polar bear.
3. 气温上升导致了冰川融化与海平面上升。
The rise in temperature has led to the melting of glaciers and the rise of sea levels.
4. 气候变化是一个需要全球解决方案的全球性问题。
Climate change is a global problem that requires global solutions.
5. 如果我们要拯救地球,就必须减少温室气体的排放。
If we are to save the earth, we must reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
6. 各国政府已承诺采取行动应对气候变化。
Governments around the world have committed to taking action on climate change.
7. 我们每个人都可以通过少用能源来做出改变。
Each of us can make a difference by using less energy.
8. 我们不是从祖先那里继承地球,而是从子孙后代那里借用它。
We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we borrow it from our children.
9. 面对全球变暖,没有人能袖手旁观。
In the face of global warming, no one can afford to stand by.
10. 现在采取行动还为时不晚。
It is not too late to take action now.
11. 小事积累起来,也能产生巨大的影响。
Small things add up to a big difference.
12. 正是我们的日常选择决定了地球的未来。
It is our daily choices that decide the future of the planet.
五、句式升级与仿写(按要求改写下列句子,体会“高级感”从何而来)
1. The campus is dirty. Students throw rubbish everywhere.
要求:用 where 引导的定语从句合并
→ The campus has become a place where rubbish is thrown everywhere.
2. We waste food. We also waste water.
要求:用 not only...but also... 的倒装句
→ Not only do we waste food, but we also waste water.
3. If we don't act, the problem will get worse.
要求:用 unless 引导条件状语从句
→ Unless we act now, the problem will only get worse.
4. The tap was running. Nobody turned it off.
要求:用现在分词短语作状语
→ The tap was running, with nobody bothering to turn it off.
5. We should use less plastic. This is important.
要求:用 it 作形式主语改写
→ It is important that we should use less plastic.
6. Many students know the problem. They still do nothing.
要求:用 while 表对比
→ Many students know the problem, while few of them do anything about it.
7. The earth gives us everything. We should take care of it.
要求:用定语从句 + 祈使句
→ The earth, which gives us everything, deserves to be taken care of.
8. We planted 200 trees last spring. The campus looks greener now.
要求:用 since 引导的原因状语从句
→ Since we planted 200 trees last spring, the campus looks much greener now.
9. One person cannot save the planet. Everyone's effort matters.
要求:用 even if 引导让步状语从句
→ Even if one person cannot save the planet, everyone's effort still matters.
10. The future depends on what we do today.
要求:用强调句强调 what we do today
→ It is what we do today that shapes the future.
六、课外材料精编(读一读,背一背,用一用)
We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we borrow it from our children.
我们不是从祖先那里继承地球,而是从子孙后代那里借用它。 (分号连接两个并列句,形成对照)
There is little doubt that the planet is sending us a bill.
毫无疑问,地球正在向我们寄来账单。 (there is little doubt that... + 隐喻)
Never before have our daily choices mattered so much to so many.
我们的日常选择从未像今天这样,牵动如此多人的命运。 (never before 置于句首的倒装)
A plastic bottle lasts five hundred years; the decision to refuse it lasts a second.
一个塑料瓶存在五百年,而拒绝它的决定只需一秒。 (分号对比 + 数字)
It is not the size of the action but the number of people taking it that counts.
重要的不是行动的大小,而是参与的人数。 (强调句 + not...but...)
So much waste is produced daily that the bins are never empty.
每天产生的垃圾如此之多,垃圾桶从未空过。 (so...that 的倒装)
What we throw away today will be dug up by someone in a hundred years.
我们今天扔掉的东西,一百年后会被别人挖出来。 (what 主语从句 + 被动语态)
The greener the campus, the cooler the summer and the calmer the mind.
校园越绿,夏天越凉,心也越静。 (the + 比较级, the + 比较级)
Standing at the tap, I understood that a drop is a decision.
站在水龙头前,我明白了每一滴水都是一次选择。 (现在分词作状语 + 宾语从句)
Only when the last tree is gone do we realize that money cannot be eaten.
只有最后一棵树消失时,我们才明白钱不能当饭吃。 (only when 的倒装)
It takes a village to raise a child, and a campus to raise a habit.
养育一个孩子需要整个村庄,养成一个习惯需要整个校园。 (对称结构,化用谚语)
Nature does not hurry, yet everything is accomplished.
自然从不匆忙,却万事皆成。 (yet 表转折的并列句)
Every bottle you refill is a small vote for the future you want.
每重复使用一次水瓶,都是为你想要的未来投下的一票。 (定语从句省略 + 隐喻)
The earth is not dying; it is being killed, one convenient choice at a time.
地球不是在死去,而是在被杀死,一次一个“图方便”的选择。 (被动语态 + 破折号补充)
七、同话题高考真题【改编自2022年全国甲卷·“世界海洋日”英语演讲稿,情境已替换】
假定你是李华,你校将以“世界环境日”为主题举办英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 环境的重要性;
2. 我们身边存在的环境问题;
3. 你的保护倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 本题根据2022年全国甲卷“世界海洋日”演讲稿一题改编,情境已替换为校园环境保护。
【审题建模】
审体裁:演讲稿,问候开头、致谢结尾,中间用设问与呼告推动。
审人称:we 为主,把听众拉进同一阵营;举个人观察时用 I。
审时态:现状与重要性用一般现在时,倡议用祈使句。
审内容:Para 1 问候 + 环境与我们的关系;Para 2 身边问题(塑料杯、长明灯、剩饭);Para 3 倡议(自带水杯、光盘、随手关灯);Para 4 呼吁 + 致谢。
审语气:真诚而不夸张,用具体数字和场景代替“the earth is in danger”这类套话。
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
The environment is not a topic far away from us. It is the air we breathe at seven in the morning and the water we boil for noodles at noon.
Yet look around: plastic cups pile up beside the water dispenser, lights burn in empty classrooms, and half-finished rice slides into the bin. None of it feels like much—until you multiply it by two thousand students and three hundred days.
So let us start with three small habits: carry a bottle, finish your plate, and switch off what nobody is using. None of them costs money; all of them cost attention.
The earth does not need a few heroes. It needs two thousand ordinary people doing small things. Thank you.
【亮点句式】
① It is the air we breathe at seven in the morning…(把“环境”落到可感的日常细节)
② None of it feels like much—until you multiply it by two thousand students.(数学式论证,一句顶十句空话)
③ None of them costs money; all of them cost attention.(对称句 + 分号,节奏鲜明)
④ The earth does not need a few heroes. It needs two thousand ordinary people doing small things.(短句收尾,回扣演讲场合)
八、范文赏析
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Last Monday I walked past the bins behind the canteen: three bags of untouched rice, still warm, and a tap running unattended.
A green campus is not built on slogans but on small decisions. Finish what is on your plate, carry a bottle, and be the last to switch off the light.
Our school throws away 200 kilograms of food a day. Ten grams less from each of us would save twenty kilos—every day.
The earth does not need a few people doing everything perfectly. It needs all of us doing small things. So tomorrow: bring your bottle, clean your plate, turn off the tap. Green campus, green future—it starts now.
Thank you!
【学生习作】
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Today my topic is green campus. The environment is very important for us. But there are many problems in our school. Some students waste food. Some students use plastic bags. Some students forget to turn off the lights.
Firstly, we should save food. Secondly, we should use fewer plastic bags. Last but not least, we should turn off the lights when we leave.
Let's take action together. If everyone does something, our school will be better and better.
Thank you!
【习作点评】
优点:结构完整,问候与致谢齐全;三个要点都有涉及,提出的三条建议方向正确,结尾有呼吁,语法错误很少,作为基础稿是合格的。
问题一:开头“The environment is very important for us”是万能句,任何题目都能用,等于没有扣题。应换成校园里的一个具体场景,如“食堂后三个装满剩饭的袋子还冒着热气”。
问题二:问题与建议一一对应成“Firstly / Secondly / Last but not least”的清单,没有一句展开,读者不知道浪费有多严重。应补一个数字(一天两百公斤)或一个细节(水龙头没人关)。
问题三:句式全部是“Some students... / We should...”的主谓宾短句,节奏平板。可加入分词状语(Walking past the bins, I saw...)、强调句或 not...but... 结构。
问题四:结尾“our school will be better and better”空洞,且与前文的“具体建议”脱节。应回到动作:“明天早上,带上你的水杯,吃干净盘里的饭,关掉那个还在流的水龙头。”
【评分标准】(满分15分,按高考应用文评分细则)
档次
分数
评分描述
第五档
13—15分
覆盖全部要点,应用了较多语法结构和词汇,句式有变化,衔接自然,语法和拼写错误极少,完全达到交际目的。
第四档
10—12分
覆盖全部要点,语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求,衔接基本连贯,有少量错误但不影响理解。
第三档
7—9分
基本覆盖要点,语法结构单调,词汇有限,有一些错误,部分内容表达不清。
第二档
4—6分
遗漏较多要点,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限,错误较多,影响理解。
第一档
1—3分
只能写出个别单词,内容太少,无法传达信息。
【写作指导:本单元写作的三个得分点】
得分点一:把“环境”缩小到“校园的一平方米”。阅卷老师看了一百篇“the earth is in danger”,你写“食堂后的三个垃圾桶”,立刻就有了辨识度。
得分点二:用一个数字代替十个形容词。“200 kilograms a day”比“a serious waste”有力,“ten grams less each”又让听众知道自己能做什么,一进一出,论证就闭环了。
得分点三:演讲稿要有“声音”。用设问开头(Is this the campus we want?),用祈使句推进(Bring your bottle. Clean your plate.),用短句收尾,让文字一读出来就有节奏。
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选择性必修三 Unit 3 Environmental Protection 单元写作作业
一、单元写作任务
假定你是李华,6月5日世界环境日,你校将举办以“Green Campus, Green Future”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 描述校园中存在的两三个环境问题;
2. 提出两条具体可行的行动建议;
3. 呼吁全校同学从今天做起,共同守护校园。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
二、审题建模(动笔前先想清楚这五件事)
项目
写作要点
体裁
演讲稿(speech):问候—提出问题—给出方案—发出呼吁—致谢。口语化,多用短句、设问和呼告,让听众“听得见”。
人称
第一人称复数(we)贯穿全文,把自己放进听众里;批评现象时用 we 而不是 you,避免指责感。
时态
描述校园现状用一般现在时;讲一次亲历用一般过去时;提建议、作呼吁用祈使句或 must/should。
结构
四段式。Para 1:问候 + 一个亲眼所见的具体场景(食堂后的垃圾桶、没关的水龙头);Para 2:指出问题背后的浪费(食物、塑料、电);Para 3:两条建议(光盘、自带水杯);Para 4:呼吁 + 落回标题。
要点
“现状”要有画面和数字(一天扔掉两百公斤食物),建议要能“明天就做”,呼吁要落在具体动作上,而不是“保护地球,人人有责”。
语气
诚恳、有感染力,可以用反问(Is that the school we want?)和排比,但不要喊空洞口号。
三、话题词块梳理
Ⅰ. 话题词汇(根据提示补全单词或词义)
话题词汇
1. ecology n. ____________
2. ____________ n. 生态系统
3. greenhouse n. ____________
4. ____________ n. 排放;排放物
5. carbon n. ____________
6. ____________ adj. 可再生的
7. sustainable adj. ____________
8. ____________ vt. 保护;保存
9. conservation n. ____________
10. ____________ vt. 回收利用
11. reusable adj. ____________
12. ____________ n. 塑料 adj. 塑料的
13. litter n. ____________
14. ____________ n. 废物;浪费 vt. 浪费
15. pollute vt. ____________
16. ____________ n. 污染物
17. glacier n. ____________
18. ____________ vi. 融化 vt. 使融化
19. habitat n. ____________
20. ____________ adj. 濒危的
21. extinction n. ____________
22. ____________ n. 意识;认识
23. drought n. ____________
24. ____________ n. 洪水;水灾
Ⅱ. 话题词块(根据汉语补全短语,或根据短语写出汉语)
话题词块
1. global warming ____________
2. ____________ 温室气体
3. carbon footprint ____________
4. ____________ 可再生能源
5. take action ____________
6. ____________ 在……中起作用
7. be responsible for ____________
8. ____________ 减少;削减
9. sort the rubbish ____________
10. ____________ 一次性塑料
11. lead a green life ____________
12. ____________ 提高……的意识
13. be aware of ____________
14. ____________ 面对
15. at the cost of ____________
16. ____________ 起作用;有影响
17. do harm to ____________
18. ____________ 对……造成破坏
19. turn off ____________
20. ____________ 节约能源
21. be on the decline ____________
22. ____________ 适应
23. come up with ____________
24. ____________ 执行;实施
25. join hands ____________
26. ____________ 为了子孙后代
27. every bit counts ____________
28. ____________ 从小事做起
29. in the long term ____________
30. ____________ 枯竭;用完
Ⅲ. 词块升级(把左边的“基础表达”换成右边更高级的说法)
基础表达
升级表达
1. The environment is getting worse.
____________________
2. We should protect the earth.
____________________
3. There is a lot of rubbish on campus.
____________________
4. We waste a lot of food.
____________________
5. Everyone should do something.
____________________
6. We must act now.
____________________
7. Small actions are useful.
____________________
8. I hope we can work together.
____________________
四、教材好句精选(根据汉语补全句子,注意课文句式与词块的用法)
1. 毫无疑问,地球正变得越来越暖。
There is ________ ________ that Earth is getting warmer and warmer.
2. 2013年,一张北极熊的照片让许多人感到震惊。
In 2013, a lot of people ________ ________ by a photo of a polar bear.
3. 气温上升导致了冰川融化与海平面上升。
The rise in temperature has ________ ________ the melting of glaciers and the rise of sea levels.
4. 气候变化是一个需要全球解决方案的全球性问题。
Climate change is a global problem ________ ________ global solutions.
5. 如果我们要拯救地球,就必须减少温室气体的排放。
If we ________ ________ save the earth, we must reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
6. 各国政府已承诺采取行动应对气候变化。
Governments around the world have ________ ________ taking action on climate change.
7. 我们每个人都可以通过少用能源来做出改变。
Each of us can ________ ________ ________ by using less energy.
8. 我们不是从祖先那里继承地球,而是从子孙后代那里借用它。
We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we ________ it ________ our children.
9. 面对全球变暖,没有人能袖手旁观。
________ ________ ________ of global warming, no one can afford to stand by.
10. 现在采取行动还为时不晚。
It is not ________ ________ to take action now.
11. 小事积累起来,也能产生巨大的影响。
Small things ________ ________ ________ a big difference.
12. 正是我们的日常选择决定了地球的未来。
________ ________ our daily choices ________ decide the future of the planet.
五、句式升级与仿写(按要求改写下列句子,体会“高级感”从何而来)
1. The campus is dirty. Students throw rubbish everywhere.
要求:用 where 引导的定语从句合并
→ ____________________________________________________________
2. We waste food. We also waste water.
要求:用 not only...but also... 的倒装句
→ ____________________________________________________________
3. If we don't act, the problem will get worse.
要求:用 unless 引导条件状语从句
→ ____________________________________________________________
4. The tap was running. Nobody turned it off.
要求:用现在分词短语作状语
→ ____________________________________________________________
5. We should use less plastic. This is important.
要求:用 it 作形式主语改写
→ ____________________________________________________________
6. Many students know the problem. They still do nothing.
要求:用 while 表对比
→ ____________________________________________________________
7. The earth gives us everything. We should take care of it.
要求:用定语从句 + 祈使句
→ ____________________________________________________________
8. We planted 200 trees last spring. The campus looks greener now.
要求:用 since 引导的原因状语从句
→ ____________________________________________________________
9. One person cannot save the planet. Everyone's effort matters.
要求:用 even if 引导让步状语从句
→ ____________________________________________________________
10. The future depends on what we do today.
要求:用强调句强调 what we do today
→ ____________________________________________________________
六、课外材料精编(读一读,背一背,用一用)
We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we borrow it from our children.
我们不是从祖先那里继承地球,而是从子孙后代那里借用它。 (分号连接两个并列句,形成对照)
There is little doubt that the planet is sending us a bill.
毫无疑问,地球正在向我们寄来账单。 (there is little doubt that... + 隐喻)
Never before have our daily choices mattered so much to so many.
我们的日常选择从未像今天这样,牵动如此多人的命运。 (never before 置于句首的倒装)
A plastic bottle lasts five hundred years; the decision to refuse it lasts a second.
一个塑料瓶存在五百年,而拒绝它的决定只需一秒。 (分号对比 + 数字)
It is not the size of the action but the number of people taking it that counts.
重要的不是行动的大小,而是参与的人数。 (强调句 + not...but...)
So much waste is produced daily that the bins are never empty.
每天产生的垃圾如此之多,垃圾桶从未空过。 (so...that 的倒装)
What we throw away today will be dug up by someone in a hundred years.
我们今天扔掉的东西,一百年后会被别人挖出来。 (what 主语从句 + 被动语态)
The greener the campus, the cooler the summer and the calmer the mind.
校园越绿,夏天越凉,心也越静。 (the + 比较级, the + 比较级)
Standing at the tap, I understood that a drop is a decision.
站在水龙头前,我明白了每一滴水都是一次选择。 (现在分词作状语 + 宾语从句)
Only when the last tree is gone do we realize that money cannot be eaten.
只有最后一棵树消失时,我们才明白钱不能当饭吃。 (only when 的倒装)
It takes a village to raise a child, and a campus to raise a habit.
养育一个孩子需要整个村庄,养成一个习惯需要整个校园。 (对称结构,化用谚语)
Nature does not hurry, yet everything is accomplished.
自然从不匆忙,却万事皆成。 (yet 表转折的并列句)
Every bottle you refill is a small vote for the future you want.
每重复使用一次水瓶,都是为你想要的未来投下的一票。 (定语从句省略 + 隐喻)
The earth is not dying; it is being killed, one convenient choice at a time.
地球不是在死去,而是在被杀死,一次一个“图方便”的选择。 (被动语态 + 破折号补充)
七、同话题高考真题【改编自2022年全国甲卷·“世界海洋日”英语演讲稿,情境已替换】
假定你是李华,你校将以“世界环境日”为主题举办英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 环境的重要性;
2. 我们身边存在的环境问题;
3. 你的保护倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 本题根据2022年全国甲卷“世界海洋日”演讲稿一题改编,情境已替换为校园环境保护。
八、范文赏析
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Last Monday I walked past the bins behind the canteen: three bags of untouched rice, still warm, and a tap running unattended.
A green campus is not built on slogans but on small decisions. Finish what is on your plate, carry a bottle, and be the last to switch off the light.
Our school throws away 200 kilograms of food a day. Ten grams less from each of us would save twenty kilos—every day.
The earth does not need a few people doing everything perfectly. It needs all of us doing small things. So tomorrow: bring your bottle, clean your plate, turn off the tap. Green campus, green future—it starts now.
Thank you!
【学生习作】
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Today my topic is green campus. The environment is very important for us. But there are many problems in our school. Some students waste food. Some students use plastic bags. Some students forget to turn off the lights.
Firstly, we should save food. Secondly, we should use fewer plastic bags. Last but not least, we should turn off the lights when we leave.
Let's take action together. If everyone does something, our school will be better and better.
Thank you!
【自我修改清单】(写完对照检查)
□ 开头是否有问候语,结尾是否有致谢,符合演讲稿的格式?
□ 是否用了一个亲眼所见的场景来引出问题,而不是“环境很重要”的套话?
□ 是否至少有一个具体数字或细节支撑“浪费严重”这一判断?
□ 两条建议是否都具体到动作(带水杯、光盘、关灯),而不是“保护环境”?
□ 是否用了 we 而不是 you 来谈问题,避免指责听众?
□ 结尾是否回到标题“Green Campus, Green Future”,并落在一个当下可做的动作上?
九、参考答案
三、话题词块梳理
Ⅰ. 话题词汇
1. ecology n. 生态;生态学
2. ecosystem n. 生态系统
3. greenhouse n. 温室;暖房
4. emission n. 排放;排放物
5. carbon n. 碳
6. renewable adj. 可再生的
7. sustainable adj. 可持续的
8. conserve vt. 保护;保存
9. conservation n. 保护;保存
10. recycle vt. 回收利用
11. reusable adj. 可重复使用的
12. plastic n. 塑料 adj. 塑料的
13. litter n. 垃圾;废弃物
14. waste n. 废物;浪费 vt. 浪费
15. pollute vt. 污染
16. pollutant n. 污染物
17. glacier n. 冰川
18. melt vi. 融化 vt. 使融化
19. habitat n. 栖息地
20. endangered adj. 濒危的
21. extinction n. 灭绝;消亡
22. awareness n. 意识;认识
23. drought n. 干旱;旱灾
24. flood n. 洪水;水灾
Ⅱ. 话题词块
1. global warming 全球变暖
2. greenhouse gas 温室气体
3. carbon footprint 碳足迹
4. renewable energy 可再生能源
5. take action 采取行动
6. play a part in 在……中起作用
7. be responsible for 对……负责
8. cut down on 减少;削减
9. sort the rubbish 垃圾分类
10. single-use plastic 一次性塑料
11. lead a green life 过绿色生活
12. raise awareness of 提高……的意识
13. be aware of 意识到
14. in the face of 面对
15. at the cost of 以……为代价
16. make a difference 起作用;有影响
17. do harm to 对……有害
18. take its toll on 对……造成破坏
19. turn off 关掉(电器、水龙头)
20. save energy 节约能源
21. be on the decline 在减少;在衰退
22. adapt to 适应
23. come up with 想出;提出
24. carry out 执行;实施
25. join hands 携手;联手
26. for the sake of future generations 为了子孙后代
27. every bit counts 每一点都重要
28. start small 从小事做起
29. in the long term 从长远来看
30. run out 用完;耗尽
Ⅲ. 词块升级
1. The environment is deteriorating faster than we can repair it.
2. We owe the earth a debt we can only repay by changing how we live.
3. Rubbish has become part of the campus landscape.
4. Nearly a third of what leaves our canteen goes straight into the bin.
5. Change begins with one person, one habit, one lunch.
6. There is no time like the present to act.
7. Small actions, repeated daily, add up to something enormous.
8. I hope we can join hands to leave this place better than we found it.
四、教材好句精选
1. There is little doubt that Earth is getting warmer and warmer.
2. In 2013, a lot of people were shocked by a photo of a polar bear.
3. The rise in temperature has led to the melting of glaciers and the rise of sea levels.
4. Climate change is a global problem that requires global solutions.
5. If we are to save the earth, we must reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
6. Governments around the world have committed to taking action on climate change.
7. Each of us can make a difference by using less energy.
8. We do not inherit the earth from our ancestors; we borrow it from our children.
9. In the face of global warming, no one can afford to stand by.
10. It is not too late to take action now.
11. Small things add up to a big difference.
12. It is our daily choices that decide the future of the planet.
五、句式升级与仿写
1. The campus has become a place where rubbish is thrown everywhere.
2. Not only do we waste food, but we also waste water.
3. Unless we act now, the problem will only get worse.
4. The tap was running, with nobody bothering to turn it off.
5. It is important that we should use less plastic.
6. Many students know the problem, while few of them do anything about it.
7. The earth, which gives us everything, deserves to be taken care of.
8. Since we planted 200 trees last spring, the campus looks much greener now.
9. Even if one person cannot save the planet, everyone's effort still matters.
10. It is what we do today that shapes the future.
七、同话题高考真题【改编自2022年全国甲卷·“世界海洋日”英语演讲稿,情境已替换】
审体裁:演讲稿,问候开头、致谢结尾,中间用设问与呼告推动。
审人称:we 为主,把听众拉进同一阵营;举个人观察时用 I。
审时态:现状与重要性用一般现在时,倡议用祈使句。
审内容:Para 1 问候 + 环境与我们的关系;Para 2 身边问题(塑料杯、长明灯、剩饭);Para 3 倡议(自带水杯、光盘、随手关灯);Para 4 呼吁 + 致谢。
审语气:真诚而不夸张,用具体数字和场景代替“the earth is in danger”这类套话。
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
The environment is not a topic far away from us. It is the air we breathe at seven in the morning and the water we boil for noodles at noon.
Yet look around: plastic cups pile up beside the water dispenser, lights burn in empty classrooms, and half-finished rice slides into the bin. None of it feels like much—until you multiply it by two thousand students and three hundred days.
So let us start with three small habits: carry a bottle, finish your plate, and switch off what nobody is using. None of them costs money; all of them cost attention.
The earth does not need a few heroes. It needs two thousand ordinary people doing small things. Thank you.
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